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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 5, 2008 19:16:32 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Love it Keep going ![/glow]
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Post by Izzy on Aug 9, 2008 1:46:57 GMT 10
You're doing a great job!
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Post by Izzy on Aug 9, 2008 23:10:49 GMT 10
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Post by Izzy on Aug 11, 2008 3:49:05 GMT 10
Very nice!!! Luka is the perfect man!! ;D Wow... thank you for such a long and good update!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 11, 2008 21:47:35 GMT 10
Ohhh I LOVE it It was a perfect date ! Can't wait to next chapter
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Post by Izzy on Aug 12, 2008 17:58:06 GMT 10
Awww.... Abby her daughter is very sweet!! Good update!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 12, 2008 19:22:00 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]woowww I love it
Hurryyyy up I can't wait to next chapter[/glow]
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maya
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Post by maya on Aug 13, 2008 2:07:35 GMT 10
thanx
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 13, 2008 19:10:35 GMT 10
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Post by lovinluby on Aug 16, 2008 11:15:29 GMT 10
such a cute story...and WTG abby for stealing the first kiss
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Post by Izzy on Aug 16, 2008 18:30:32 GMT 10
Very good, again!! I like that in your story is OOC so that Abby her "dark side" and all the negative is in the background or not even there... She is making jokes and enjoying her life!! Something the ER writers don't show very often!!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 17, 2008 6:07:28 GMT 10
[glow=green,2,300]Hhhh I love it
Can't wait for Luka to get them. [/glow]
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Post by abbysinthe on Aug 18, 2008 13:03:46 GMT 10
Just a suggestion - you might want to type your posts on a word processor before posting to the site, so that you can run a spelling/grammar check. The lack of punctuation makes it very difficult to read.
Additionally, I'm assuming you're from the UK as you've used the word "telly," but would Luka really be using that word? Try to imagine how he would speak in his own voice, rather than your narration thereof.
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Post by loopyallie on Aug 18, 2008 15:34:24 GMT 10
No she is Irish if you look where she is from... Mmmm Maura's roots... Ireland (Which is not part of UK)
Is this fic really typed up on here and not on WORD?
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Post by abbysinthe on Aug 19, 2008 12:38:58 GMT 10
Yup its typed in word, then copied and paste!! In that case, there's really no excuse for improper punctuation and grammar. If you're going to take the time to write, invest the energy to go over it once or twice to catch any mistakes, even after you've run a S/G check. I'm not clear on why people other than authors are responding to critical reviews, to be honest.
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