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Post by hollygirl on Nov 8, 2006 13:43:06 GMT 10
only had time for one fic tonight, so tomorrow an update for this one will deffinately be up.
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Post by hollygirl on Nov 9, 2006 13:36:02 GMT 10
4 pizzas, and 2 hours later, the house was clean, the boys were asleep on the couch, and the girls were outside in the gardens. Abby and Luka walked into the living room, and turned off the TV. Abby looked at the clock and sighed in dissapointment when it read 9. The girls had school tomorrow, and it was time for them to get going. “Tonight was fun Luka.”
“Yeah, through all the madness, I had a good time.”
“Me too… and I know the kids did.”
“Yeah.. The boys are wiped out… do you want me to take him to the car for you?”
“What? You aren’t dropping us off.”
“No, you can use it until yours is out of the shop… I mean with out it how will you get the kids to school?”
“What about you?”
“I have another.”
“Right….”
“So do you want me to take him out for you?”
“Yeah thanks…. But um first can you tell me which way the gardens are?”
“Just go out those doors… and when you find them, could you tell mine to come inside, they have to get to bed… or I’ll never get them up.”
“Sure.” Luka started to carefully pick Tyler up, and Abby turned around and smiled. “You don’t have to be so careful… a bomb could go off and he wouldn’t wake up.”
“Oh..ok.” Luka laughed. He lifted him and walked toward the front door.
Out in the gardens the girls were all laying in the grass staring up into the sky. The night was peaceful, the sky a deep blue, with no clouds in the sky, so every star was visible. When Abby got closer, she noticed Ella, Gabby, Jayla and Grace had fallen asleep, leaving Jasna and Danielle. She noticed tears in their eyes, but Danielle quickly wiped them away when she saw Abby. “We gotta get going…. And Jasna, your dad wants you and Gabby to get ready for bed…” they both sat up quickly, and Jasna shook Gabby until she was awake. Abby and Danielle woke the rest up, and they all stood up and walked half asleep inside.
Luka was holding Marko when they walked inside, and noticed Danielle and Jasna were upset. He looked at Abby and she just shrugged and shook her head. “Jasna, Gabby why don’t you two go on up stairs and get ready for bed…Gab, I’ll be right up.” without saying a word, the two girls left the room, and Abby’s girls walked to the car. Luka adjusted Marko and then wrapped one arm around Abby, and kissed the top of her head. “Do you know what went on out there?”
“Nope…” She said with her face lingering in front of his. She lunged forward and pressed her lips forcefully to his. When Marko stirred they broke apart, and Abby looked down biting her lip. “I gotta go.”
“Yeah… I’ll uh, talk to you soon…”
“Are you working tomorrow?”
“Yup…”
“Talk to whoever about the job, if I can do it…. I want to.”
“Really?”
“Yeah…”
“That’s great!” Luka said before kissing her again. “That reminds me… keep that dry.”
“I will..”
“I’ll call you tomorrow.”
“Ok.” Luka watched her walk out and then , took Marko upstairs tucked him in, and then walked toward Gabby’s room. He stopped outside Jasna’s door, and hesitated before pushing it open. She was sitting on her bed, with her knees pulled to her chest. Luka sat on the edge of the bed, and she looked up. “You ok?”
“yeah.. I’m fine.”
“You’re sure?”
“Yeah… dad, I’m fine… and I’m going to go to sleep now so… um, maybe you could… go tuck Gabby in.”
“Ok..” He put his hand on her head and kissed her forehead before getting up and walking toward the door. “Volim Te.”
“Volim te tata.”
He closed her door, and took in a deep breath. She was upset over something… why couldn’t she just talk to me. He thought to himself. Jasna never told Luka anything… if she was upset, she would just tell him she was fine… he wished she would open up to him.
Abby looked in the rearview mirror and noticed all the girls had fallen back asleep… she then looked at Danielle.. “You wanna tell me whats wrong?”
“Nothings wrong.”
“Really?”
“Yeah.. I’m fine.” She said looking away to the window.
“What went on outside?”
“Nothing.”
“Why were you and Jasna upset when I came out.”
“Because… we were talking about… very emotional… subjects.”
“Like what?”
“Like….daddy…. And everything he went through..” She said getting choked up. “And… she told me about her mom… and how she was killed in the war…. The story she told was so horrible.. It was so sad.”
“Yeah… uh.. Were your sisters awake when you were talking about dad?”
“No… I didn’t want to talk about him with them…”
“You… know, you don’t hear this as much as you should…but… you’re a great kid DanI.. You’re a great sister… and the best daughter I could ask for…. You do everything your told… when your told…. You get good grades… your dad.. Would be so proud of you.” Danielle looked over at Abby with a slight smile on her face.. Her cheeks glistened with tears and she wiped them away. “Its not that I want to be as responsible and as perfect… as you say I am… its that I have to be….”
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Nov 9, 2006 14:14:52 GMT 10
Great update!!
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Post by megan on Nov 9, 2006 14:18:31 GMT 10
oohh yay good update
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 9, 2006 18:22:13 GMT 10
Great Update !
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Post by erfan228 on Nov 10, 2006 5:20:21 GMT 10
Great update!!
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Post by strizzy on Nov 10, 2006 6:32:08 GMT 10
Nice update!
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 10, 2006 6:51:47 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Nov 10, 2006 7:17:40 GMT 10
Great update! Loving the emotional ending... really touching natalie x
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Nov 10, 2006 7:34:35 GMT 10
Love the update!
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Post by nandafm on Nov 12, 2006 18:33:22 GMT 10
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Post by hollygirl on Nov 13, 2006 2:31:44 GMT 10
I am sorry for the lack of updates… but things are sort of hectic around here.. There’s school… and soccer… and this week I had solo and ensemble for orchestra.. A soccer game that was out of town.. And a Math midterm… I have more than one fic, so I try to update as often as I can.
Abby slowly started waking up, but when she realized it was Monday, she shot up and looked at the clock. It was 7. Danielle’s school starts at 7:30, Graces starts at 8, and Ella and Jayla’s starts at 7.. So they’re already late. Abby jumped out of bed and ran into there room. “Get up! Get up! Get up! We’re late!” The girls all stirred, but no one got up. Abby switched on the late and started shaking each of them. “Jayla, Ella, you two need to get up now! Its 7!” They slowly started getting out of bed, and Abby picked Ella up and brought her into the bathroom. “You took a shower last night right?”
“Yeah.”
“Ok good, brush your teeth, brush your hair, go in your room get dressed.. I’ll make you lunch, and get your things together..” Abby rushed back into the bedroom, and pulled Jayla out from under her covers and stood her up, pushing her into the bathroom. “Brush your teeth… get ready… hurry up! We don’t have time to waste.” Abby walked back into the room, and sat on Danielle’s bed. “Hey! Get up! We’re late!”
“What time is it?” she asked sleepily.
“7:10, now get up! And make sure the girls are brushing there teeth for me.”
“Ok..”
“Thanks.” the phone started ringing and Abby ran into the living room and picked it up. “Hello?”
“Oh good! Your home!” Abby sighed and sat on the couch. It was Beth.
“Hi Beth.”
“Hi.. I’m so glad you answered! I have been trying to reach you for the past few days.”
“I know… I’ve been busy… and right now isn’t a good time either… we are getting a late start this morning… the girls are late for school .. I have to go.. I’ll call you back later ok?”
“Abby, I really need to talk to you.”
“I know, I’m sorry.. But I have to go.”
“Abby..”
“Beth, I have to go!” She hung up the phone, and walked into the kitchen.. She opened the pantry to get bread out, but there was none. “Damn it!” She got her wallet out and had just enough for the 4 of them to buy. When she walked back into the girls’ room, Grace was already in there getting dressed. “Oh good, your up.”
“Yeah..”
“Here, put this in your bag, don’t lose it.” she said handing her a few dollars.
“Ok.”
Abby walked into the bathroom, where Danielle was putting Ella’s hair into two braids. “you guys almost ready?”
“Yeah… we’re all ready.” She said putting, in the hair tie. “Ok, good. Lets go then…. Oh wait let me get Tyler… there’s money on the counter.. Each of you get 3... And Grace already got hers, so don’t give her anymore.” Abby walked over to Tyler, picked him up, and then walked into the kitchen where all 4 girls were standing. She grabbed her keys, and opened the door.
Abby walked back inside, with a sleeping Tyler in her arms. She set him down on the couch, and then sat next to him, laying her head back. She looked at the machine, and saw that she had a message. “Hey, Abby its Luka.. And I was just calling to let you know, that I talked to Dr. Weaver about getting you a job, and she said you have an interview at 12. So just call me back, if there’s a problem with the time… I’ll talk to you later. Bye.” Abby smiled to herself, and stroked Tyler’s soft brown hair, as he slowly opened his eyes. Abby never realized how green they really were.. They were like an emerald color. They were brighter then Richard’s, and bigger. Since he was a little baby, people had always told Abby he had amazing eyes… but she just thought they were like everyone else’s… a Green color.. Maybe hazel at times.. But now as she studied them… they were amazing… big and bright… they remind her of Luka’s. His were dark.. But bright at the same time.. They were a deep blue color, like the ocean.. And she loved them.
“Morning mommy.”
“Morning baby.” He crawled into her lap, and snuggled close to her. “Am I still in twouble?” Abby looked into those eyes, and didn’t have the heart to punish him… “No… but. You know what you did was wrong right?”
“Wight.”
“And you’ll never do it again right?”
“Wight.. I be a good boy.”
“Especially when we are at someone else’s house.”
“Yeah.. I sowwy.”
“Its ok…”
“I hungwy.”
“Well, we don’t have anything to eat really… so me and you are going to have to go to the store… so, lets get you dressed… and then we can go to the store…and then I’ll make you something to eat.. And then we are going to have to go to a job interview.”
“Why?”
“So mommy, can have a different job.”
“Why?”
“Because, I hate my job.. And at this new job I will work with Luka.”
“I like Luka.”
“You do?” Abby asked, almost surprised.
“Yeah.. He is nice.”
“He is pretty nice..” and extremely gorgeous.. Abby thought to herself.
“But.. I no like those doggies... They licked me.”
“They were just being friendly.. They liked you.”
“I no like doggie spit on my face.” Abby laughed, as they walked into the bedroom, and Tyler just looked at her. “Not funny mommy! You had no spit on your face!”
“I’m sorry… you’re right.. It wasn’t funny..”
“The doggy chased me on the table!”
“I know buddy…” Abby said, trying not to laugh.
“No laughing!”
“I’m not laughing.”
“Yeth you are!”
“No…. I’m not.. I’m done laughing… now lets get dressed.”
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 13, 2006 3:17:55 GMT 10
Great Update
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Post by charlieluby on Nov 13, 2006 4:18:33 GMT 10
brill update! x
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Post by luby4eva06 on Nov 13, 2006 4:45:38 GMT 10
great update
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