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Post by rorygilmore on Dec 23, 2006 16:26:54 GMT 10
BUAHHHHHHHH!!! *sniffles* OMG!!! This was one of the most touching updates... (since Charley's death, of course) and since Beth took the kids away from Abby. Wow! you're really good at writting drama. Abby and Richard's conversation totally broke my heart...poor Richie ....well, the good thing is that Abby has found that someone else...
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 23, 2006 20:30:05 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 24, 2006 1:18:18 GMT 10
Amazing update So touching... i like Richard being nice in this fic natalie x
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Post by Noora on Dec 24, 2006 8:33:42 GMT 10
That's what I wrote on Christmas..and dammit! It did come true! MORE KIDS???!! YES!!! I think this fic has more kids than any other that I have read earlier..and it's not a bad thing. Uh, loved the chapters.
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Post by Noora on Dec 24, 2006 8:41:09 GMT 10
Oh yeah, and I'm SO happy that you and your guy friend are friends again!! It's so great to see people happy! But now I'm going to sleep.. If I'm able to, after this kind of emotional shock of Lubyness.. But hey, Santa is coming tomorrow! ..Or today, how you wanna put it..
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Post by erfan228 on Dec 24, 2006 8:50:05 GMT 10
Great update! It was sooo sad!!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 24, 2006 8:57:31 GMT 10
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Post by <3 Luby II 2 <3 on Dec 24, 2006 9:26:51 GMT 10
That was an awesome update!!! I really can't wait for the next one now. Update ASAP, Please!!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Dec 24, 2006 12:33:23 GMT 10
I love the update!
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 25, 2006 16:21:46 GMT 10
soooo glad you guys liked it! I was kind of worried... like I knew I wanted to write a flashback, but I wasn't sure how it would turn out... every time I go to write an update for anyone of my fics.. I think of something... and I can picture it in my head... I can picture everything! Like a scene playing out in my mind... every conversation, every move, every facial expression, and every hand gesture.. every kiss.. every hug... every tear... and if that makes me weird... thats ok. I know I'm weird.
buttt.. then I go to write it down.. or type it up.. and it just never turns out how I want it! but this last one... it did! it turned out just like I imagined! that rarely happens for me...
and I just want to thank you guys for your lovely comments. noorajulia: I am soooo glad you have read the whole thing, and like it. When I started this storyline, I didn't know how I would play it out.... I don't plan ahead when I write.. or think ahead.. when its time for and update, I think of it as I write.... and I don't think I'm amazing.. but if you really do. Thank you!! it makes me feel so much better as a writer!!!!
again, thank you everyone, for all the comments you leave. not only on this fic, but my others too.
now for the Christmas update! enjoy!
"Promise what?" Luka asks in a whisper. Abby opens her eyes again, and looks at him. His eyes are open now too, and he looks at her a little confused. "Nothing.. I was just thinking out loud." His confused look, turns to concerned when he sees the tears. He brings his hand to her face, and rubs her cheek with his thumb. "Whats wrong?"
"Nothing really. I was just thinking about things.... and then I was thinking about how happy you have made me... and how lucky I am to have found you... and I won't ever let you go." Luka wipes away a falling tear, and then leans forward kissing her lips softly. "I love you Abby... and just know.. I will never let you go either."
"I love you too..." She says before kissing him. They are both on there sides, facing each other. Arms around each other, legs tangled.. covered by the warm blanket. Luka's head gently rests on Abby's, and both their eyes are closed, as sleep takes them once more.
AROUND 5 AM
Ella's eyes pop open and she looks around the dark room. she sees another bed.. and then recognizes Gabby who is sitting up, looking over at her. And then she remembers.. shes at Luka's! "Gabby?"
"ITS CHRISTMAS!" Gabby yells, jumping off her bed. Ella smiles and then throws her covers off, jumping out of her bed too. Gabby pulls on her robe, and slips on a pair of slippers, and then looks back at Ella. "You have a robe too... its hanging right there.. and your slippers are over here.. your mom bought them."
Ella puts on the warm fleece, pink robe, and then walks over to Gabby, slips on slippers, and then the two of them slowly open the door. They peek their heads out, and then run across the hall, into Jayla and Grace's room.
"ITS CHRISTMAS!!! WAKE UP!!" Gabby and Ella start yelling. The girls get out of bed, put on robes and slippers, and run out of the room, and all four of them run down the hallway, past Luka and Abby's room, and down another hallway and run into the boys' room. Grace walks over to Tyler's bed, and jostles him gently.
"Tyler... wake up sleepy head, its Christmas!" he turns his head, and Solly opens his eyes. "Gwacie what you doing?"
"Waking you up silly! don't you want to see what Santa brought you?"
"Santa!? he come? he come hewe Gwace?!"
"Yeah! come on, we have to wake mommy and Luka!"
"Otay!" He jumps up, and takes her hand following Jayla and Marko.. Both boys are in feetie pajamas... Tyler's has Thomas the Train on it, and Marko's has dinosaurs. "Okkk.. now the two of you have a very important job... you have to wake up Jasna and Danielle."
"Why us?" Marko asks.
"Because you guys are the youngest."
"Ohh.."
"Yeah.. now go." Marko leads Tyler into Jasna's room and they both walk over to her bed. The girls all stand in the doorway watching. "Jasna?" Marko says, as he starts poking her. She moves and they both jump back. Tyler climbs up on her bed, and starts jumping. "JASNAAAAA WAKE UP!!! SANTA COME HEWE!" seeing that Tyler is waking her up, Marko runs across the hall into Danielle's room, and starts jumping on her bed. Both girls walk into the hallway... well technically they are being pulled by the boys... "You guys its 5 in the morning."
"Yeah! and its Christmas Jasna!" Gabby says.
"Yeahh.. so you should let us sleep."
"Don't you want to open presents?" Danielle and Jasna look at each other and shrug... "He is loaded.... we probably got some nice stuff..." Danielle thinks to herself..
All 8, kids walk to Abby and Luka's room, and slowly open the door. "On the count of 3.." Jasna starts. "we run, and jump." the kids all nod.
"Ok... 1.....2......3!" they all run, and then hop onto the king sized bed, jumping all around. "MOMMMMMYYYY!!!" Tyler yells. "SANTA COME HEWE!!!"
"ITS CHRISTMAS!!! GET UP!"
"GET UP GET UP!!!"
All the kids are yelling, and Luka and Abby quickly wake up. Luka grabs the closest near him, which is Jayla, and starts tickling her like crazy... she escapes, and he grabs Marko, and does the same. now all the kids are lying on the bed except Jasna and Danielle, laughing hysterically, as Abby and Luka get some payback, by tickling them.
"STOOOOOP!"
"MOM!"
"DAD!"
"LUKA!"
"ABBY!" they are all yelling something different.
"Stopppp!!! please stop!"
Tyler wiggles free from Luka's grasp, and hops of the bed, running over to Danielle and Jasna. "Help!!! help sissers!" he yells over the laughter. Abby and Luka stop, and look over at him. Danielle smiles, and picks him up, hugging him tight..."I'll save you Tyler! don't worry!" He looks at Jasna, and she takes him, also, squeezing him. "Yeah, don't worry Ty! your 'sissers' will protect you!"
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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Post by rorygilmore on Dec 25, 2006 18:35:58 GMT 10
This was soooooooooo sweet Holly!!! Loved everything in your update!!!; how the kids began to wake up each other...at 5:00am ...how Marko & Tyler woke up the older girls, and how all the 8 kids went to wake up Luka & Abby (I actually pictured them in my head, I had the fun of my life!!! ...and little Tyler is soooooo cute!!! You know what I love the most about him?...his "Otay!" ... LOVE IT!!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 25, 2006 19:47:01 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 25, 2006 19:48:36 GMT 10
That was really sweet!!! I enjoy to read this fic ^^
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Post by Noora on Dec 25, 2006 22:54:48 GMT 10
ITA with Rory with everything she said. I pictured them too, Luka and Abby tickling all of them, Jasna grabbing Little Ty, the smaller ones waking up the olders... What a family! And I can see all that you write like a movie in my head.. And it's good! Every motion, every word.. And don't say you're not amazing, bc you are! One of the best writers ever. Hih, and I'm gonna do more catch up with your other fics also, later on though.
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 26, 2006 5:18:09 GMT 10
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