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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 21, 2006 21:50:33 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 22, 2006 0:28:24 GMT 10
Brill update Really loving this natalie x
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 22, 2006 0:45:37 GMT 10
really sweet update please do it again soon
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 22, 2006 3:12:47 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 22, 2006 4:38:49 GMT 10
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Post by xbostonxbabyx on Oct 22, 2006 5:54:56 GMT 10
Just read your whole fic...and WOW! Awesome update! More soon!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 22, 2006 7:20:53 GMT 10
Great update!
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Lady_K
Marquise of Luby
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Post by Lady_K on Oct 22, 2006 7:23:58 GMT 10
Ooh I can't believe I haven't read this fanfic earlier! Rlly great, excellent job
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Post by Melimelo on Oct 22, 2006 13:45:57 GMT 10
Okay I am all caught up now too ...so c'mon update
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Post by lubylover08 on Oct 22, 2006 14:15:24 GMT 10
love this fic!
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Post by strizzy on Oct 23, 2006 0:27:50 GMT 10
Nice update!
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 25, 2006 11:56:21 GMT 10
I am mad I had a nice long update all typed up and it was pretty good, if I do say so myself. But, jusy my luck , the computer shuts off. I turned it back on, and of course, its gone! Update will most likely be up tomorrow. And I doubt it will be as good as my original.
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 26, 2006 11:35:12 GMT 10
Kind of a short update. And definitely not anything like the one I wrote yesterday….
Light peered through the curtains, and all 5 Lockhart kids sat on Abby’s bed, looking at her. Just waiting for her to wake up. Tyler went to go jump on her, and Danielle grabbed him, causing him to bounce on the bed. Abby stirred, and then slowly opened her eyes, stretching. She sat up, and looked at the kids, blinking a few times. Tyler pulled back the covers, and slipped under, cuddling close to Abby. “good morning mommy.” he said into her chest. “Morning baby.” She kissed his head, and stroked his soft brown head, looking at the girls. They all were waiting to hear all about her date. “Sooo..” Grace started.
“So what?”
“mom!” they all said in unison.
“What?” Abby asked playing dumb, just to bug them.
“Tell us about your date!” Jayla said, laying on her stomach.
“Yeah, tell us!”
“Everything!”
“Yeah mom everything! Don’t leave out any details!”
“Ok… Ok..”
“Was it fun?!”
“Yes.”
“Will you see him again?”
“Yeah.. Probably.”
“Shut up Jay, I want to hear about it..”
“Ok, well, he picked me up in a porsh.”
“Oh wow..” Danielle said.
“Whats that?”
“A really nice car.”
“Ohh.”
“Yeah, and then we started driving… he didn’t know if he was going the right way… but we ended up at the right place.”
“Well, what did you guys do in the car? Just sit there?”
“No.. we talked.”
“About what?”
“About us, I told him about…. Daddy.. And you guys… and he told me about his wife and his kids.”
“Hes divorced?”
“Nope… his wife died in Croatia.. During the war.”
“Oh man… how many kids does he have?”
“3... Two girls, Jasna and Gabby.. And then one boy, Marko….that reminds me! They live in the most amazing house! I swear his room is bigger than our whole apartment!”
“Are you serious?!”
“Yeah… it was huge…”
“Where did you guys eat?”
“At this really nice restraunt… I don’t remember what it was called… some weird name… but the food was sooooo good! And expensive… our bill was like over $200.”
“Woahhh…”
The 6 of them spent a few more minutes talking, and then it was time for Abby to get ready for work. She climbed out of bed, and made her way into the shower. As the hot water poured down, and washed over her body, she couldn’t stop thinking about Luka. About his smile. About his eyes. About his hair. About his scent. About his kiss. About the way her hand fit in his. About his past. Everything.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 26, 2006 12:26:20 GMT 10
Great update!!!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 26, 2006 12:45:22 GMT 10
Great Update!
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