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Post by Bah on Jul 16, 2007 4:25:39 GMT 10
update soon please!
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Post by karo on Jul 16, 2007 9:38:20 GMT 10
glas that Noa is ok!!! update soon!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 21, 2007 22:01:18 GMT 10
Great update Glad little Noa is going to be ok natalie x
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Post by hollygirl on Aug 3, 2007 15:01:33 GMT 10
updates aren't going to be back up and running just yet. My computer is really dead and can't be fixed. Luckily I know nice people with working computers, so here I am with a quick update. -----------------------------------
about 6 six months later.
The large family of eleven sits around the dining room, all focused on one person. The bright eyed, smiling little monster with jet black hair who is standing on Abby's thighs, not paying any attention to the people around him, but to the large cake before him. Leaning forward, Abby kisses his chubby cheek, finally getting his attention. He turns his head toward her and giggled as she leaves another kiss on his cheek. Feeling a hand on his head he turns around and watches his dad light the large, number one shaped candle. Listening to everyone around him singing, he takes his eyes off the cake and looks around the table. "Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear Noa, happy birthday to youuu."
"Blow out the candle baby." Abby says into his ear.
"but first make a wish!" Ella shouts from across the table. He looks at Abby, then at Luka, and then he just looks at the cake. "Like this." Abby says, lightly blowing on the candle. Noa glances at her again and then copies her, blowing a few times until the flame goes out. "Yaaay." everyone says as they clap. He smiles and then also starts to clap. Just as Luka takes the candle out, Noa's face lands right in the middle of the cake. Abby gasps, and the kids all start laughing. Lifting his head he turns around to Abby, his face and hands covered in cake and frosting.
"Is that good?" She asks. He simply nods, licking his hands. She sits him on top of the table, keeping her hands on his waist as he brings his hands back to the cake. After shoving more into his mouth, he reaches some out to Abby with a smile on his face. "Cake." He says. Laughing, she lifts her hand. after dropping the cake into her hand he motions for her to put him down. Holding onto his cake covered hands, he slowly makes wobbly steps toward the kitchen.
With plates and forks in hand, Luka stops in his tracks looking down at his son. He sets them down and walks over to him, picking him up. "Is that cake yummy?"
"Yeah! Nummy!"
Back in the dining room, Abby watches Noa as he attempts to feed cake to his dad. It was hard to believe on year ago today she almost lost him. Just in case, she wouldn't let anyone go out today. No one would be in a car. Luka thought she was being ridiculous, but respected her wishes and didn't go to work that morning. Six months after the TVC, and Noa was still shunt free. The once sweet little baby is now a monster. He is into everything, and loves to climb the stairs, with no way to get back down. Abby hates that there isn't a fence long enough for their staircase, and can't take her eye off him for a second. He hasn't mastered walking on his own, but he is one speedy crawler. when he isn't being a little terror he is the same sweet Noa he was before.
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Post by crazylubyfan on Aug 3, 2007 17:05:22 GMT 10
Awww! Great Update! Noa is soo cute...that little monster!
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Post by smile90 on Aug 3, 2007 21:41:05 GMT 10
hmm. cake everywhere.. yummy!! great update holly!!
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Post by Tails on Aug 4, 2007 4:47:03 GMT 10
Great Update Holly! Noa is such a cutie I can just imagine cake all over the place
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Post by erfan228 on Aug 4, 2007 7:26:50 GMT 10
Great update!! Can't wait for more!!
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Post by lubbylover1 on Aug 4, 2007 10:34:49 GMT 10
Great update
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Post by karo on Aug 4, 2007 15:30:28 GMT 10
great update!!!! love little Noa!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Aug 4, 2007 22:53:24 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 4, 2007 23:57:46 GMT 10
Great update Glad Noa's doing well natalie x
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Post by hollygirl on Aug 12, 2007 14:10:02 GMT 10
Ok, so I started this fic on October 2, 2006. I actually had forgotten and just looked it up. That is a very long time. I've been trying to find a way to wrap this one up and I think I came up with the solution. Sooooo, in the upcoming updates I will be bringing this fic to a close. ---------------------------------------------
Standing at the bottom of the stairs, Abby goes from pacing to tapping her toes, to checking her watch, back to pacing, and so on. Marko, Tyler, and Noa sit on the last step watching her, with a look of confusion on their faces. "Want me to get the girls Abby?" Marko asks. Smiling, she looks down at him and the two boys on either side of him. "No thank you sweetie.. we'll give them one more minute." Just a few seconds later she checks her watch once more and then walks up a few of the steps. "GIRLS!" She screams, causing the boys to all jump. Before she yells again the girls finally make an appearance, and make their way down the stairs. "If we're late, you're all in trouble.."
"But-" Jayla starts.
"No buts.. from any of you. All week I have been telling you that on Saturday we are going for the fittings.. last night I told you we were leaving at ten o'clock sharp. You all said ok, we'll be ready. I got you up at seven thirty.. that is more than enough time for all of us to be ready. It is now ten seventeen.. meaning we have less than fifteen minutes to get there, before we are officially late!"
"Sorry.." They all mumble at the same time.
"I was ready!" Marko shouts.
"Me too!" Tyler adds, followed by Noa, "me ready!"
"I know you guys were ready.." She says, picking Noa up. Holding him on her hip she ruffles Marko's hair, then Tyler's. "You're my good boys... Now lets go."
"Wait!" Ella yells. "I have to pee!"
"Me too!" Gabby says.
"Ugh!" Abby groans. "Make it fast! As in run!"
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"Hi Kim, sorry we're late.."
"Oh, it's ok.. I know how it is... I have a hard time getting anywhere on time and I only have three kids."
"Did Luka talk to you about the tuxes?"
"Yes, he did... and they're all ready.. I think they are going to fit just fine now.. And his fits too.. He looks quite hansom in it, may I add."
"Luka?"
"Yup."
"Did he pick it up, or is it still here?"
"He picked it up yesterday afternoon... The boys' were ready then too, be he didn't have them with him and I know you said you wanted them to put them back on in case they need more tayloring..."
"Ohhh!! Abby! You're here! I am soooo excited!" Another woman squeals, running over."
"Hi Kristen."
"Your dress is so beautiful.. the work we did on it.. ohh.. it's just so gorgeous.. you are going to look fabulous in it!"
"Ok, Kristen.. why don't you go in the back and bring out the rack with all of the bridesmaid dresses.. and the flower girl dresses.. and make sure the tuxes are there too.. and Abby, you come with me. We are going to go get you into that dress!"
"Ok.." She says, setting Noa down. "You guys just stay here.. and keep and eye on the boys.."
Kim zips up the back of the dress and steps back to look at Abby. "Oh my.. you look beautiful.. Luka is going to love you in this! his mouth is going to drop, and his eyes are going to pop out of his head.. and he is just going to love it!" Giggling, Abby walks out of the dressing room and steps in front of the mirror. Her mouth drops a little.. She can't believe she's in a wedding dress again.. and she didn't expect it to look like this.. or.. feel like this. "Do you like it?" Kim asks.
Abby nods. "I love it." She says, admiring the strapless white dress. It was fitted, showing her curves, and the was wider and flowing from the waist down. The beaded design on the bodice was simple yet elegant. The dress was perfect in every way. It wasn't too much.. but.. just enough. It was more formal then her first wedding dress.. which was just a simple white dress.. Probably wasn't even classified as a wedding dress, but it was all could afford then. Seeing the kids' reflections in the mirror she turned around, staring in awe at her bridesmaids, her flower girls, her ring boys.. and her one extra. He wouldn't get to hold a ring, but he would get to walk with his brothers down the isle. Abby had this feeling he would end up running.. and probably fall. She smiled just thinking about it.
"You look amazing mom!" Danielle says.
"Yeahh, Abby, you look beautiful."
"Look at my dressy mommy!" Ella says. "Look what it does when I spin in a circle!"
"Thats very nice sweetie.. please don't ruin that dress."
"I won't." She says as she continues twirling round and round.
"You all look so beautiful! I love these dresses.. I'm so glad we went with these ones.. instead of those dark purple ones your dad liked on you guys.."
"Yeah, I like these ones so much better!"
"Me too.. blue is better than purple."
"Yeah.. Luka doesn't know anything about fashion." Grace says.
"And don't you two look handsome." Abby says looking at the boys walking toward her. "Where is Noa?" But before anyone answers her, she sees him making his way toward her with a big smile across his face. "Hi mommy!"
"Aww.. look at you. You look so cute.. turn around let mommy see you in your tux." He makes a wobbly turn and then looks back up at her. "Very handsome.... All of you.. you all look so good."
"You do too." Jasna says. "Dad is going to love you in that dress."
"You really think so?"
"Yes, I really do."
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 13, 2007 1:07:33 GMT 10
Great update Hope for more soon natalie x
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Post by smile90 on Aug 13, 2007 2:09:52 GMT 10
hahaha... that would look hilarious! you really want to end this?? I loved this fic.. (well okay.. it's not finished yeT! )
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