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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Nov 1, 2006 22:51:52 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by hollygirl on Nov 2, 2006 12:58:44 GMT 10
I know... I know... its been a few days... and you all probably saw the new next to the title... and saw the latest post was from me and thought.. oh yay! I get to read about the dinner... well... I hate to dissapoint you but.... you will have to wait until tomorrow.. It would be written tonight.. but no. I had to re-write my update for my other fic, because my comp and microsoft word is STUPID.
so, you can all blame those two things for not having an update.
be patient.. I promise... I'll make the update good.
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Post by luby2534 on Nov 3, 2006 6:24:10 GMT 10
Ahhh, your such a tease !!!
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Post by hollygirl on Nov 3, 2006 13:31:34 GMT 10
“What time do you think you will be picking us up?” Abby asks as they walk to Luka’s car.
“Actually… I have been thinking.. And I’m going to be doing a lot of things getting ready.. And cooking..”
“Cooking?”
“Yeah.. You are coming over for dinner, you know..”
“Yeah.. I know.. I just thought you would have a personal chef or something.” She says jokingly.
“No… just a butler.. And a few maids that come over a couple times a week..”
“Ohh.. I would kill for maids… but anyways.. What were you saying before?”
“Uhh.. You could come back to my place with me now.. And then just take the car..”
“No… Luka.. You can’t give me a car… "
“I’m not giving it to you… I’m lending it to you, so you can drive your kids… and I can get ready for our lovely dinner.”
“I don’t know how lovely it will be..”
“Abby…come on.. Your kids can’t be that bad..”
“They aren’t.. only sometimes…”
“Well.. that’s understandable..”
Luka and Abby talk the whole way to his house.. And she is just as amazed as she was the first time.. Maybe a little more this time. The sun is setting.. And the house looks beautiful. He pulls around to a big garage, and parks the car. Him and Abby get out, and he walks over, puts a code in and the door opens, revealing not just one more car.. But 4.
“You have 5 cars?”
“Yeah..”
“And.. Which one will I be driving?”
“umm.. This one over here.. The escalade.”
“Yeah… big… but nice..”
“Ok, heres the keys.. And I’ll see you around 7?”
“7 sounds good.” Abby climbs into the car, and starts it. She backs out and waves to Luka, before turning around, and going down the long drive way. She pulls up to her apartment building and goes up stairs. The kids are all watching TV when she walks in. Tyler gets up and runs over to her. She strokes his head, and the picks him up, kissing his head. “Hey buddy..”
“hi mommy.”
“Hey mom.” The girls all say, without looking away from the TV.
“Hey.. What did you guys do today?”
“Nothing.” They say.
“Oh.. What are you watching?”
“50 First Dates..”
“What do you want for dinner?”
“Don’t care.”
“Ok… well.. Get ready, because we are going to Luka’s.”
“What?”
“Luka, invited us over for dinner..”
“Really? To his big house mommy?” Ella asks, running over to her.
“Yeah, to his big house.... so the rest of you, get off your butts, and get ready to go.”
“You have a boo-boo.” Tyler says looking at the dressing on Abby;s hand.
“Yeah.. I cut my hand at work..”
“I make it better.” He picks it up and kisses it a few times. “All better?”
“Yeah.. Thank you... Now lets get you dressed…. You are still in your jamies…” Abby looks around.. “You all are… get dressed.”
“its almost over..”
“Well, we are leaving here around 7.. So I suggest, getting dressed during commercial.” They all just nod, and Ella runs back over to the couch. Abby shakes her head and walks down the hall holding Tyler. “Why are your sisters so difficult?”
“I don’t know mommy… why?”
“I don’t know either bud… but thank god I have you.”
“Yeah! I am the bestest!”
“Yeah, you are! .. But don’t tell your sisters that… they might get jealous…. What do you want to wear?”
“I don’t want to change… I wike my jammies.”
“You can’t wear your jammies Ty…”
“Why?”
“Because they are for bed time…”
“Why?”
“Because I said so…. How about we wear this shirt?”
“No.”
“Why?”
“I like jammies.”
“Too bad… take them off.”
Abby walks over to the dresser to get a pair of pants and Tyler sighs, and starts pulling off his shirt. “Help!” Abby turns around and sees Tyler’s head stuck in his shirt. She laughs and walks over to him, pulling it off. “Tank you mommy..”
“Your welcome bud, now lets get your clothes on.” When he is dressed they walk into the living room where the girls are still sitting on the couch. “I know there has been a commercial… now get up, and get dressed… It will take a few minutes, then you can come back out here, and sit on your butts until its time to go.. I promise.”
Short update.. And I MEAN IT THIS TIME.
Next update will include the dinner.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Nov 3, 2006 14:15:00 GMT 10
Great update! Can't wait for the next one.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Nov 3, 2006 14:20:28 GMT 10
Love the update!
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Mitsi1819
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 3, 2006 19:30:26 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by luby2534 on Nov 3, 2006 19:35:23 GMT 10
Great update !!!
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Post by strizzy on Nov 3, 2006 22:08:10 GMT 10
Nice update!
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 4, 2006 3:20:49 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by erfan228 on Nov 4, 2006 5:32:54 GMT 10
Can't wait for the dinner!!
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Post by hollygirl on Nov 4, 2006 18:41:20 GMT 10
Earlier on in this fic, when I introduced Luka’s kids, I wrote that Marko was older than Gabby… but I am changing that. Marko is the youngest…
“Jay, Ella, lets go!”
“I can’t find my shoe!”
“Jay, come get your coat on!”
“I’m helping Ella find her shoe!”
“Just wear a different pair!”
“I’ll help them find it.” Danielle said getting up. Abby sat on the couch, next to Tyler, who was winging his feet back and forth. Grace walked around and sat next to Abby on her other side. “Beth called again..”
“Ohh man… I forgot to call her back..”
“Yeah… she said to call her back.. Since you didn’t..”
“What did she want?”
“She didn’t say.. Just said it was important.”
“What could be so important.. That she has to keep calling me?”
“I don’t know….”
“She is so annoying!”
“Why does she hate you?”
“You know what? I don’t really know.. She didn’t like me the minute she met me..”
“I like you.”
“Thanks kiddo… your not too bad yourself.”
“I found my shoe!” Ella said walking toward Abby with her shoe in her hand.
“Oh good… now lets put it on.”
When they walked outside, Danielle stopped in her tracks..”Woahhh.. When did we get a new car?”
“We didn’t… It’s Luka’s.”
“Too bad.. This is way nicer than our car...”
“Get in.” Abby said opening the back door. Danielle opened her door and got in while Abby got all the kids situated. She opened her door got in and started the car. As they drove Danielle continuously changed the channel on the radio. “Pick a station Danielle!” Jayla yelled.
“Shut up.”
“You shut up..”
“Both of you shut up.” Abby said. “And… just a pick a station Danielle..”
By the time she settled on a station, Abby had turned into the drive way. She could see the house, and started to slow down. When she pulled in front, the girls mouths dropped. Abby looked at all their faces and smiled.. that’s exactly what she looked like the first time she saw it. Danielle opened her door and got out, still gaping at the house. Abby got the kids out of the back, and they all stood by Danielle, staring at the house. Abby walked over to them holding Tyler, and they started walking. “Holy.. Shit..” Danielle mumbled under her breath.
“What did you just say?!” Abby yelled, stopping to look at her.
“..I love you mommy?”
“Watch your mouth..”
“Sorry…”
Abby rang the doorbell, and when the door opened, the kids mouths dropped even more. James welcomed them inside, and shut the door. “May I take your coats?”
“Sure.” The girls said. He took al their coats and hung them up. Abby put Tyler down, and started walking toward Luka, who was coming down the stairs. “MOM!” Tyler screamed. Abby spun around on her heal, and ran back toward him. “What?”
“Dis man, isth stheeling my coat!” Abby sort of rolled her eyes, and Luka walked over to them, holding his laughter. “Baby… why would he want to steel your coat?”
“I don’t know! Ask him!”
“Sweetie.. You are being silly… he doesn’t want your coat.. he just wants to hang it up for you.. Now let him have it.”
“Isth he going to give it back?”
“Yes… now let it go.”
“Awight…”
“And say your sorry.”
“Sowwy.”
“Its ok.” James said.
“Let me see if I can get this right…. Your Danielle..”
“Yup..”
“Your Grace..”
“yup.”
“Your…. Jayla.”
“yep..”
“your Ella..” “Yup.”
“And I know Tyler.”
“I like your house.” Jayla said.
“Me too.. Its big.”
“My mom said you have kids.”
“I do… they’re right in here.” Luka led them to the living room, where 3 kids sat around watching TV. Much like Abby’s kids did when she got home. They saw there dad walk in, and stood up. “This is Jasna, Marko and Gabby…. Guys this is Danielle, Grace, Jayla, Ella and Tyler.”
“Nice to meet you.” Jasna said.
“You too.”
“You guys.. Could hang out in here… get to know each other… I’m going to just finish dinner up..”
“I’ll help.” Abby said, walking next to Luka. He took her hand, and the kids all smiled watching them walk away together.
THE DINNER!
Everyone walked into a large dining room, and they all took their seats. Jasna sat next to Danielle, Gabby sat in between Grace and Jayla.. And then next to her was Ella then Marko then Tyler next to Abby.. Who was next to Luka. They both looked around at all the kids. Danielle and Jasna have not stopped talking…. None of them really have. Luka and Abby both were a little nervous about them not getting along.. But to there surprise every one was getting along just fine.
“Oooh puppy’s.” Ella said looking over at the glass door. Gabby turned and saw there 4 dogs at the door and got up. “Gabby no!” Luka said. But it was too late, she opened the door and they ran inside. One started chasing a cat, who hopped onto the table. Another dog, saw the cat and jumped on the table, knocking over every cup, and splattering food everywhere.
All the kids started screaming. And Luka stood up and started chasing the dogs around the dining room. One of them started licking Tyler and he stood up and stepped on to the table. “Tyler get down from there.”
“No… the doggy isth licking me.”
“Its ok.. Its not going to hurt you.”
“I don’t like it.”
“Tyler! You come here now.”
“No.” He started walking down the table, and then the dog that was licking him, jumped on his chair and then onto the table. Tyler saw the dog coming toward him and screamed. “AHHHHHHHHHH!” He started running down the table, and the girls started laughing. Abby put her hand to her face in embarrassment. Luka turned around just in time to catch Tyler who jumped off the table, followed by the dog. Luka landed on his back, and held Tyler up, so the dog wouldn’t lick him. “Tanks.”
Abby got up and took Tyler from Luka. “Go. Sit. Down.” He nodded and walked back to his seat. The dog still following him. “I’m sorry.” Abby said, helping Luka up. He looked at Gabby who was still standing by the door, and then at Abby. “Its ok.. Its not your fault.”
After a good 20 minutes, Luka had managed to get all the dogs back outside. The dining room was a mess, food everywhere. Spilt milk all over the table.. And of course, there was hair.. And drool. “Gabby.” Luka said, trying to stay calm. “Yeah?”
“Why did you do that?”
“They wanted to come inside.”
“Daddy.. I’m hungry.” Marko said licking the food off his hand. “I know bud.. I’ll think of something…Jasna.. Danielle.. Maybe you guys could help get the younger ones cleaned up.”
“Yeah… of course.” All the kids pushed their chairs back, stood up, looked around the dining room and left the room. Luka plopped into his chair, and picked some lettuce from his shoulder. “Luka.. I am so sorry.”
“Again.. It wasn’t your fault.. And I do have to admit.. It was pretty funny.”
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Post by rorygilmore on Nov 4, 2006 19:09:54 GMT 10
OH MY GOD!!! THIS WAS PERFECT! A complete chaos and a Kovac started it. Good job, Gabby!. Aww! and little Tyler was so cute running down the table!!! I laughed so much, it was a great chapter You must get them together soon...hmm...I don't like Beth, she's gonna do something to bother Abby's family, right? Can't wait to read next update... BTW: Just in case: Don't you even dare to think on killing Tyler or Marko or any of the kids...
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 4, 2006 19:49:05 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Mitsi1819
Marquise of Luby
Somewhere, Somehow, I'll Find You..
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 4, 2006 22:04:26 GMT 10
Great Update!
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