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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Sept 25, 2006 10:31:34 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by lubyfan on Sept 26, 2006 23:46:02 GMT 10
Great updates
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Post by hollygirl on Sept 27, 2006 9:26:33 GMT 10
update will be up tomorrow, or tonight.
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Post by Little Amy on Sept 28, 2006 8:40:11 GMT 10
great update!
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Post by ERFanRach on Sept 28, 2006 8:59:37 GMT 10
Please update soon
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Post by jadestar on Sept 29, 2006 2:07:34 GMT 10
cute
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 2, 2006 3:10:34 GMT 10
Later that night, at the reception.
Luka looked around, and Abby was no where. He saw his sister dancing with Jason. His head was on her shoulder, and he was falling asleep. He walked around, and only saw all their friends....their co-workers...their family...He walked out of the big room, and down a hallway. A door was slightly open, and he opened it to see Abby sitting on a small stool.
Tears were rolling down her cheeks, and she had tissues in her hands, on her lap..and a few on the floor. Her eyes were red and puffy...her make up running. She didn't look up when he came in...she just continued to sit there, staring at nothing in particular...just staring.
"Abby?" She looked up at the sound of his voice..and forced a smile.
"Hey.." She said wiping her eyes. Luka walked over to her and sat down, wrapping his arms around her. "You want to tell me whats wrong?"
"Its nothing..I'm fine."
"You don't seem fine."
"Its just...I.."
"What?"
"I can't stop thinking about Charley...and how much...he loved you....and how happy he would be...right now...because you would be his dad...and he would have a brother....he would have been....a great big brother.." Abby said getting all choked up again. "I miss my son Luka."
"I know...Abby...I know."
"I mean..next month it will be a year......one year...can you believe that? For me, it still feels like it happened yesterday...do you think hes jealous?"
"Who?"
"Charley...do you think he's jealous of Jason...being here with us...being our son...and hes all alone up there...he never liked being alone.." Abby was crying hysterically and all Luka could do for her was hold her.
"Hes not alone....I bet he is with Danielja and Marko and Jasna....and she is taking good care of him...."
"You think?"
"Yeah....because they are always watching...and I know Danielja...she would never want a child to be alone."
"You know...sometimes...I swear I hear him laughing....or I'll blink and see his face....and then sometimes..I can't remember anything about him....his voice..or his smile....when I'm with Jason sometimes..Its like I forget I ever had Charley..and then I remember...and feel terrible for ever forgetting."
"You will never forget him Abby...and its ok to love Jason...Charley would want you to be happy....he wouldn't want you to be alone either...I'm sure he is glad you have Jason...and all 4 of them, are probably glad we are together..and we have a family. They would want us to move on Abby...me and Danielja talked about it one time..and we both agreed, that if anything ever happened to either of us, we would want the other to move on...and get married again...and be happy...."
"So...you think they are all together...and they're happy that we are together..and have Jason?"
"Yes..I do."
When they heard the door open, Abby quickly wiped her eyes, and they both looked over. Isabella was standing in the door way, holding a sleepy Jason.
"Is this a bad time?"
"No..its fine."
"Ok, well...he is pretty tired..and pretty cranky..and said he wanted his mommy." She said passing him to Abby. She took him in her arms and he nestled his head into her chest.
Abby put her hand on the back of is head, and stroked his soft hair. "Thanks for looking after him."
"Thats what family is for." She said before she left. Luka put his hand on the back of Abby's head, and pressed his lips to her forehead..."Do you want to go home?"
"We can't just leave Luka.."
"Sure we can..Its our wedding night..and we can do whatever we want to do..besides..Jason need to go to bed...you want to go home...I want to go home."
"I never said I wanted to leave."
"You don't have to say it..I know you do."
"I'm fine..really...I just needed a minute."
"I have been looking for you, for an hour...no one will even notice...they are all having fun..and getting wasted....come on..the limos out front.." He took her hand, and they walked out side.
After Abby put Jason in his crib, she walked into the bedroom, to find Luka already laying there, looking at her smiling. She smiled back, and crawled under the covers, sliding into Luka's arms. He held her tight, and she lay her head on his chest. Listening to the steady beating of his heart. He kissed the top of her head, and stroked her hair. "So...you really think Danielja is taking care of Charley?"
"No...I know she is."
THE END. this was not the same ending I first came up with...the first one was really good...but I didn't write it down...or type it...so I forgot it...but anyways..I hope you guys liked my fic.
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Post by erfan228 on Oct 2, 2006 3:58:09 GMT 10
I'm so sad this was the last chapter but this fic was great! You are a really talented writer and I love your other storys!
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Post by Little Amy on Oct 2, 2006 4:01:51 GMT 10
WoW!!! This was a great fic!!!!
Lovely ending!!!!!!!
CoNgRaTs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 2, 2006 8:42:42 GMT 10
Awesome ending!! So sad.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 2, 2006 9:24:04 GMT 10
Great Ending!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 2, 2006 11:11:38 GMT 10
this was a wonderful and lovely ending - thanks, I really appreciated your story
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Post by rorygilmore on Oct 3, 2006 5:47:05 GMT 10
quot;Hes not alone....I bet he is with Danielja and Marko and Jasna....and she is taking good care of him...." Awww, you've made me cry...thinking about Jasna, Marko and Charley!!! All together in heaven, looking after little Jason...so beautiful, so perfect! *sniffs* This is the most touching fic ever!!!! *claps & bows* Worderful fic, wonderful ending
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 3, 2006 6:27:14 GMT 10
That was a perfect ending! Seeing Luka, Abby and Jason as a family... and Luka assuring abby that charley was being looked after natalie x
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Post by josefine on Oct 3, 2006 6:40:01 GMT 10
Loved this story, it was great Loved the ending also
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