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Post by luby2534 on Mar 9, 2007 17:35:43 GMT 10
Again brilliant writing...well worth waiting for !!
Hope your feeling better !
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Post by Maryna on Mar 9, 2007 17:43:38 GMT 10
great update! but I hope Carter will disappear soon
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Post by Cornflake Girl on Mar 9, 2007 17:58:45 GMT 10
Maggie as I was reading this all I could think was how good your writting has gotten. You described everything so well, very detailed and eloquent...and the conlusions you had Abby finally reach in the end were so in character, I could see the thought process she was going through from the moment she miscarried to the moment she blamed herself, your writing lead there perfectly. Brilliant...deserves Karma, and I don't give those out lightly
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Post by rorygilmore on Mar 9, 2007 19:28:24 GMT 10
Oh, I hate Carter...why did he had to appear in that moment? It was a touching update, maggie. I had tears in my eyes when she blamed herself *sniffles* You captured Abby's character, BRILLIANTLY; it made me feel as if the real Abby had suffer that terrible episode...and gosh, poor Luka...my hotshot needed to be comforted (I offer myself to do it on next chapter, if Abby still feels bad...)
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Post by Ali (lubylover912) on Mar 9, 2007 23:14:53 GMT 10
amazing job. You really are one of the most amazing writters i have ever read! You should write a book really you should i know i would most definitly read it. Can't wait for the next update and i hope you are feelin better! Though if you are then i blame you for me bein sick because that could mean your getting better magically made me sick!
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Post by smile90 on Mar 10, 2007 0:04:13 GMT 10
wow loved it as always!! that was so touching...
you're such a brilliant writer!!
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Post by lubbylover1 on Mar 10, 2007 1:10:31 GMT 10
F A N T A S T I C Hope you is better, now
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Post by manu on Mar 10, 2007 1:42:05 GMT 10
Amazing update!!!!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Mar 10, 2007 3:24:02 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Mar 10, 2007 8:34:14 GMT 10
Amazing update Maggie natalie x
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Post by larue on Mar 10, 2007 11:30:30 GMT 10
Wow.....
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Post by Real Dream on Mar 11, 2007 12:57:26 GMT 10
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Post by zelda on Mar 12, 2007 8:51:56 GMT 10
Maggie, I don't know why I couldn't post before tonight. I have read the story several times, the whole story! And there is something which is more and more OBVIOUS to me, it's FASCINATING and A BIT DISTURBING: Your physical and emotional description of Abby is so intense and true, that I have the feeling you know her by heart! Every small gesture, every movement, every word, are so true-to-life to MY personal interpretation of Abby, that I think YOU ARE ABBY. My english sucks to explain my feelings. Sorry, but I had such a strong emotion reading this, all this...several times! WHAT IS BETTER THAN A KARMA? ?
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Post by rorygilmore on Mar 13, 2007 18:05:15 GMT 10
Hey! Where are you?! We need you...i need you (ok, that sounded weird Hope you've taken aaaall your iron pills....well, not all (I dunnoh what's wrong with me )...just the ones you needed to feel better . Hoping for an update soon, (and a dreamy, naked Luka soon...) -Rory.
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Post by hannaviola on Mar 16, 2007 5:44:53 GMT 10
Really great update! Your writing is just fantastic!
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