Post by suzanne on Aug 19, 2008 22:37:57 GMT 10
This is something different, that I thought I would try. the idea just came into my head. All reviews good or bad are appreciated. Anyway here goes.
Abby Lockhart is a 16 year old girl from Cook County, Chicago has a new neighbour and is totally intoxicated by him... little did she know he would change her world.
It was you average summer day and I had decided to sleep in, or so I thought. Beep Beep Beep "Okay... a little to the left... that’s good... stop!" yelled someone outside my window.
"I can't even sleep in during the summer." I said irritated. I climbed out of bed and walked over to my window to see what was going on. "New neighbours great... they probably have like ten kids." now angry from my early awakening went to the bathroom proceeding with my normal routine.
After eating a bowl of cereal I decided to walk down the street pass the new neighbours to my best friend Susan's house. I walked out the house wearing a pair of white shorts, a pink t- shirt, and my favourite flip flops. As I walked downed the street I glared at the new neighbours... then I saw him... a 6 foot 2, dark brown hair, shirtless boy coming out the house. I was so busy staring at him I almost ran into a parked car.
Bang Bang Bang Bang. I knocked rapidly on Susan's door. "Okay... I'm coming!" she yelled. As soon as Susan opened the door I ran in. "Susan I think I’m in love." I said sitting on the sofa.
"What... wait... you're what?" Susan said confused.
"I'm in love... though we've never met." I smiled and wondered off into my mind.
"Exactly who are we talking about?" she asked.
"My new neighbour... I just saw him on my way over here... and believe me when I say he's hot." I stood up and walked to the window.
"So what are we sitting here for... lets walk down the street and be neighbourly and introduce ourselves." Susan said walking to the door.
"Okay." I said walking to the door. We walked down the street to meet our new neighbours.
"Is that him?" Susan said pointing to the shirtless neighbour boy.
"Yep... that’s him... isn't he gorgeous." I said.
"Yeah." she said.
"Hello" me and Susan both jumped back when a strange woman popped up.
"Oh I’m sorry... did I startle you?" she asked.
"Yeah just a little... hi I’m your next door neighbour... Abby Lockhart." I said pointing to my house.
"And I’m Susan Lewis... I live down the street."
"Well hello Susan Lewis and Abby Lockhart... I'm Mrs. Kovac and I’m your new neighbour nice to meet you." she said shaking our hands.
"Luka...Josip... come meet our new neighbours!" she yelled. I could see a man walking our way. He looked like an older version of the boy we were gawking at.
"Josip this is Susan Lewis and Abby Lockhart." she said.
"Hello... Aren't you to pretty." he said shaking our hands.
"This is my husband Josip Kovac and this is my son Luka." she said pointing to the shirtless boy walking over.
"Luka this is Susan Lewis and Abby Lockhart our neighbours."
"Hey... I'm Luka." he said shaking our hands.
"Abby"
"Susan" we both smiled at him.
"Aren't they cute?" Mrs. Kovac said.
"Mom please." he said.
"Okay then... We'll leave you alone... So you can get to know each other better." she said walking away.
"I gotta get back home before my mom calls to check in on me... See ya later Abs." Susan ran down the street leaving me there with Luka.
"So... Abby how old are you?" he asked.
"I'm sixteen... You?"
"I’ll be seventeen in a month... What school do you go to?" he asked.
"Cook County High School."
"Really... That’s the school I’ll be going to."
"That’s cool... I should be getting home... Maybe we could hangout... You know I could show you around or something." I said walking to my house.
"Yeah we can do that... Tomorrow okay?" he yelled.
"Yeah... Tomorrow's fine!" I said closing the front door... I had to hurry and call Susan and tell her.
I knew then that Luka wouldn't be just any old neighbour boy. He had looks and didn't seem to be a momma’s boy loser like other neighbour boys I know. I know he is something special
Chapter 1
Abby Lockhart is a 16 year old girl from Cook County, Chicago has a new neighbour and is totally intoxicated by him... little did she know he would change her world.
It was you average summer day and I had decided to sleep in, or so I thought. Beep Beep Beep "Okay... a little to the left... that’s good... stop!" yelled someone outside my window.
"I can't even sleep in during the summer." I said irritated. I climbed out of bed and walked over to my window to see what was going on. "New neighbours great... they probably have like ten kids." now angry from my early awakening went to the bathroom proceeding with my normal routine.
After eating a bowl of cereal I decided to walk down the street pass the new neighbours to my best friend Susan's house. I walked out the house wearing a pair of white shorts, a pink t- shirt, and my favourite flip flops. As I walked downed the street I glared at the new neighbours... then I saw him... a 6 foot 2, dark brown hair, shirtless boy coming out the house. I was so busy staring at him I almost ran into a parked car.
Bang Bang Bang Bang. I knocked rapidly on Susan's door. "Okay... I'm coming!" she yelled. As soon as Susan opened the door I ran in. "Susan I think I’m in love." I said sitting on the sofa.
"What... wait... you're what?" Susan said confused.
"I'm in love... though we've never met." I smiled and wondered off into my mind.
"Exactly who are we talking about?" she asked.
"My new neighbour... I just saw him on my way over here... and believe me when I say he's hot." I stood up and walked to the window.
"So what are we sitting here for... lets walk down the street and be neighbourly and introduce ourselves." Susan said walking to the door.
"Okay." I said walking to the door. We walked down the street to meet our new neighbours.
"Is that him?" Susan said pointing to the shirtless neighbour boy.
"Yep... that’s him... isn't he gorgeous." I said.
"Yeah." she said.
"Hello" me and Susan both jumped back when a strange woman popped up.
"Oh I’m sorry... did I startle you?" she asked.
"Yeah just a little... hi I’m your next door neighbour... Abby Lockhart." I said pointing to my house.
"And I’m Susan Lewis... I live down the street."
"Well hello Susan Lewis and Abby Lockhart... I'm Mrs. Kovac and I’m your new neighbour nice to meet you." she said shaking our hands.
"Luka...Josip... come meet our new neighbours!" she yelled. I could see a man walking our way. He looked like an older version of the boy we were gawking at.
"Josip this is Susan Lewis and Abby Lockhart." she said.
"Hello... Aren't you to pretty." he said shaking our hands.
"This is my husband Josip Kovac and this is my son Luka." she said pointing to the shirtless boy walking over.
"Luka this is Susan Lewis and Abby Lockhart our neighbours."
"Hey... I'm Luka." he said shaking our hands.
"Abby"
"Susan" we both smiled at him.
"Aren't they cute?" Mrs. Kovac said.
"Mom please." he said.
"Okay then... We'll leave you alone... So you can get to know each other better." she said walking away.
"I gotta get back home before my mom calls to check in on me... See ya later Abs." Susan ran down the street leaving me there with Luka.
"So... Abby how old are you?" he asked.
"I'm sixteen... You?"
"I’ll be seventeen in a month... What school do you go to?" he asked.
"Cook County High School."
"Really... That’s the school I’ll be going to."
"That’s cool... I should be getting home... Maybe we could hangout... You know I could show you around or something." I said walking to my house.
"Yeah we can do that... Tomorrow okay?" he yelled.
"Yeah... Tomorrow's fine!" I said closing the front door... I had to hurry and call Susan and tell her.
I knew then that Luka wouldn't be just any old neighbour boy. He had looks and didn't seem to be a momma’s boy loser like other neighbour boys I know. I know he is something special