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Post by larue on Jan 2, 2007 9:56:54 GMT 10
Ykes....sorry. This was the last update for this fic. Just didn't want to put 'The End' at the bottom.
Kind of mulling over a 'Semester Abroad' story with Susie, Natasya and Susie's best friend, Heather.
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Post by ladylockhart on Jan 2, 2007 10:04:01 GMT 10
That was great! Lovely ending to it.
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Post by Cornflake Girl on Jan 2, 2007 10:37:15 GMT 10
Awww that was really sweet, loved that Susan was there
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Post by zelda on Jan 2, 2007 10:43:12 GMT 10
Lyn, Waouw, you are over creative today. 2 updates in One day. You are a lucky girl, being able to write while us, stupid ones, are still hangovered after last night 's wild party. And like I am ready for a sleepless night, I read with great amusement, the passage with lauren playing soccer! hey,Larue, honey, as a soccer mom, you didn't have to make a huge effort to describe perfectly Lauren's first soccer match!!! I was smiling at the image of your little girl playing soccer! AND YOU KNOW SOCCER IS PART OF MY LIFE!!!!! Remember HOW MUCH I CRIED when FRANCE LOST THE WORLD CUP...and you wre the nice friend to comfort me! And now, CONGRATS to give me what I expected: Susan and Susie coming to the wedding! Very nice connection with the Kovacs and Martins from their holiday together in a camping! You know, I have read lots of Luby weddings here, but a PERFECT wedding NEEDS Susan. Period. Thanks for this lovely celebration. And I understand Abby being a bit overwhelmed by these enthuastic numerous Kovac family, and feeling a bit lonely.... And BINGO....Here comes Susan! P.S:I am so happy Susie was so excited to have been in PARIS! You are right, baby, I live in Paris and everyday, when it's not raining or muddy, or full of nutty drivers.... PARIS is one of the most beautiful places in the world!!! And now I shut up! thx sweetie for reading my rambling! (seems to be aggravated in 2007, don't you think?? )
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 2, 2007 10:45:39 GMT 10
wow, this was really a great end so sweet and incredible please write more of this
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Post by rorygilmore on Jan 2, 2007 17:51:28 GMT 10
This was absolutely beautiful, Lyn!!! So many new updates, so many surprises...ok, here we go: -After I read about Valerija i thought she was going to be the wicked witch of the story but she turned out to be a good person and an interesting character, one of the bests I've read. I like her very much. (the little part when she talked about the killings in Vukobar was shocking, it inmediatly caught my attention and I thought, it was a good thing that you put it in your story, it reminded me how terrible and serious was the situation a few years ago, devastating but we have to face it and learn from the past...) - Then; Little Lauren playing soccer, it was so cute and fun to read! Go! Lauren, go! -...and then you surprised me with Susan's arrival!!! It was so nice bringing her to be with her best friend...(ah, best friends together. just like in Camper's Guide..) -and finally, the wedding, It's the most perfect wedding ceremony I've read had tears in my eyes, so emotional... but what I liked the most is that, before the wedding; you remembered that 'tiny' detail about Abby being divorced and not able to get married by church... Brilliant Lyn! *takes out her hat & bows*
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Post by Noora on Jan 2, 2007 21:11:48 GMT 10
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kia
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Post by kia on Jan 2, 2007 21:53:41 GMT 10
wow, this story was great! i'm a little sad it's finished, it was really a pleasure reading it! great job. I especially loved the way everyone welcomed abby and lauren, and the way the kovac family loved them immediately. (valerija too) kia
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Post by strizzy on Jan 3, 2007 11:10:00 GMT 10
Oh wow!!!!!!! Really loved reading this, it was so beautiful...
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Post by lubbylover1 on Jan 4, 2007 7:59:13 GMT 10
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Post by jadestar on Jan 8, 2007 3:38:54 GMT 10
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