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Post by baboune51 on Oct 17, 2008 19:44:18 GMT 10
please , do not let Luka die !!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Oct 17, 2008 23:18:36 GMT 10
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Countess of Luby
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Post by Taylor on Oct 18, 2008 5:22:25 GMT 10
cant wait to read more!!!
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Post by lylee on Oct 18, 2008 7:37:08 GMT 10
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Post by suzanne on Oct 19, 2008 5:25:09 GMT 10
Thanks guys for all the comments!! Actually got the idea when I went camping a few weeks ago!! So I decided to give it a go!! Will update in a while, writing at the min!! Suz!!xoxo
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Post by suzanne on Oct 19, 2008 7:42:58 GMT 10
Chapter 18 She turned to walk away, but the older one grabbed her hand. "He was shot when he surprised a bank robber who held a little girl hostage. He managed to fire off a couple rounds before collapsing killing the robber." "Where are they taking him?" one of the officers asked nodding towards Carter and a medical crew wheeling the stretcher out of the room to the elevator. Haleh walked up. "They are taking him up to surgery. The bullet did some damage to his heart. Dr. Carter is going to do his best to fix it. He’s lost a lot of blood so if you want to help, I recommend going down to the lab and donating some blood for Luka." The cops nodded and all took off for the lab. "Abby, what happened in there?" "I know him. He’s my friend." That was putting it mildly. "I need to get some fresh air." She started for the exit. "It’s raining!" Haleh called after her but Abby kept walking. It was as if all Abby’s senses had shut down because she just stood out in the pouring rain unaware of the things around her. She didn’t even see Jake walk up. "Ab’s! Ab’s!" he yelled but no response. He stood in front of her, placed his hands on her face, and forced her to look at him. She began crying hysterically, which was definitely out of character for her. He held her close as she cried.
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Post by shelby on Oct 19, 2008 9:58:38 GMT 10
ohh Abby,,,don't cry!! Luka's going to be okay!! (I hope!!) Love this fic!! update soon!!
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Post by Taylor on Oct 19, 2008 12:04:28 GMT 10
oh i hope Luka is ok lol.....i could totally picture that last part in my head with abby out in the rain...loved it! KEEP GOING CANT WAIT 4 AN UPDATE!
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 20, 2008 6:23:12 GMT 10
it's so sad , poor Abby
Luka going to be ok
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Post by suzanne on Oct 20, 2008 18:57:16 GMT 10
Chapter 19 Abby sat beside Luka’s bed in the ICU after all his visitors had left. He had made it through surgery but now they had to wait to see if he would wake up. She held his hand. "Luka, I hate seeing you like this." She looked around at all the machines he was hooked up to. The heart monitor beeped slow and steady. She got up and checked his oxygen levels and his blood pressure. "How’s he doing?" an older lady asked standing in the door way with her husband. Abby recognized them from earlier. They were Luka’s parents. "He’s improving but not as quickly as we’d like. His blood pressure is good but low which is to be expected considering the amount of blood he lost. His breathing is normal so that is good." "When will he wake up?" Mr. Kovac asked. "I don’t know." Abby started out the door, but Mrs. Kovac stopped her. "Did he tell you he use to ride bulls?" she asked. It hit Abby that she knew who she was. "Yes, ma’am." "Well when he was 16, he was riding and got bucked off. All I remember is seeing that bull step on him over and over again. The paramedics rushed him to the hospital. The bull had ruptured his appendix, one of his kidneys and broke several bones. I always thought that was the scariest day of my life until now. But my son is a fighter, and if he could fight his way through that then I know he is fighting his way through this." Mrs. Kovac reassured her. "Thank you, Mrs. Kovac." She decided to leave them alone with their son. She walked out and joined the ICU nurses and a few other doctors behind the desk. "You know there is talk going around the hospital about you and the police officer," a blonde doctor said. "There is always talk in this hospital about someone. It’s like high school all over again," Abby said looking over Luka’s chart. The doctor laughed. "True, but we all can see that you know this patient. The question is how?" "He is my best friend’s boss. We became friends on the camping trip." The blonde doctor raised her eyebrows at Abby as if to suggest that there was more to the story. But Abby was never the one to bring her personal life to work like everyone else. "I’m gonna run downstairs and grab a cup of coffee. Page me if his condition changes."
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Oct 20, 2008 19:31:30 GMT 10
Luka needs to wake up soon Love it , can't wait to see waht happens
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Post by manu on Oct 21, 2008 0:40:57 GMT 10
Really like the update!! Keep going!
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Post by Taylor on Oct 21, 2008 11:34:34 GMT 10
cant wait for more, love this story
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Post by baboune51 on Oct 21, 2008 18:23:52 GMT 10
wake up Luka please !!
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Post by suzanne on Oct 21, 2008 19:59:57 GMT 10
Chapter 20 She heard the group whispering about her and Luka as she got on the elevator but gossip never fazed her. Besides, it was true. Luka was more than a friend. She grabbed Jake from the waiting room and dragged him downstairs to the cafeteria. "So he is improving? That’s good, right?" he asked over coffee and a muffin. "Yes, it’s good, but his vitals are still below normal. And if he doesn’t wake up soon, then we have to worry about possible brain damage." "How are you holding up? You look like crap," he said. "Thanks," she said sarcastically. She could always count on Jake to tell her the truth. She hadn’t slept in two days. She wore scrubs; they were clean but very unflattering. Her hair was pulled into a ponytail and she wore her glasses, which she never usually wore. "Well, well, maybe we should start calling you Dr. Love," a nurse joked as she walked past them. "What’s that about?" Jake asked. "Haven’t you heard? I am the latest topic of hospital gossip. Apparently, I do not hide my emotions as well as I thought because everyone knows about Luka. So I guess that means Carter knows too." "Is that such a bad thing? Ab’s, you can’t honestly tell me that you are excited to be marrying Carter." Abby was shocked. It was the first time he had not called Carter Dr. Whats his name. "I have to be. I made a promise to him and it wouldn’t be fair to him if I went back on that promise." She finished off the muffin and coffee. "Is it really fair to marry him if you don’t love him?" "Must you ask so many questions?" She got up to throw her cup and paper in the trash. "Ye—" he was interrupted by Abby’s pager going off. "Is it Luka?" She nodded and they ran upstairs to see what was going on.
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