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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jul 19, 2006 10:22:44 GMT 10
Great updates!
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Post by crazyday on Jul 19, 2006 12:11:12 GMT 10
Aww, I love this fic!!! Keep going!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jul 19, 2006 15:10:55 GMT 10
Thanks for your feedback people!!! : _________________________________________ “You did it” Luka said. He was sitting on the floor, opening a box. “I did not” Abby sat on one of the stools next to the counter. “Yes, you did” “Why would I do that?” She rolled her eyes “To drive me crazy?” He shrugged “Luka, I know many ways to drive you crazy and none of them include putting a baby inside a box” He raised his head to look at her .She looked up into the space, avoiding his gaze, with a naughty smile spreaded on her face.
“Why do you have so many Pop-Tarts boxes in here?” He frowned looking inside a box “Are you selling them?” “Oh, you've found them!!.” She stood up and leaned to grab a box “ You know?..you have not lived, if you haven’t tried a ‘Mint Chocolate Chip’ Pop-Tart, they are Heaven” Abby opened the big box to take out one bar. “That’s not healthy for the baby” he told her.
Danna’s cries started to fill the apartment. “I’ll go...” Abby said “…because later…I wouldn’t like to open a cupboard and find her inside” “I didn’t put her in that box!!!” He yelled, taking out all the Pop Tarts boxes and putting them into a cupboard “…or maybe I did ?..” he mumbled to himself
An hour later.. “Nice” Abby stepped into her new room. Danna was in her arms, her little eyes were wide open. “You can rest, if you want” he said pointing at the bed. “Maybe later…got to finish with some boxes outside” Abby looked at the baby “…She’s got your eyes” She said, tickling the baby’s tiny chin. Luka walked next to Abby and smiled, caressing Danna’s little forehead. She yawned. “AWW!…” Abby smiled “She yawns just like you” Luka rolled his eyes “What else she does like me?” “Well…she frowns, eats and… sleeps like you” He smiled taking Danna in his arms and she began to fuss a little. “…and she complains just like you” Abby walked out of the room.
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Post by jaana on Jul 19, 2006 16:15:23 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Maryna on Jul 19, 2006 22:13:30 GMT 10
keep going! update soon!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 19, 2006 22:23:04 GMT 10
Great update!!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jul 20, 2006 5:44:40 GMT 10
Next day at work, Abby was cornered by Susan and Neela against the Admit Desk.
“So…you moved in with him?” Susan asked with a wicked smile on her face. “Huh?...Oh, yeah” she replied. Neela gave her a naughty smile. “What?!...we’re just trying to help each other!!!” Abby said. “Yeah, sure” Susan laughed."I moved in with Chuck because we wanted to help each other..." “Okay, you know what?... think whatever you want to think, my conscience is clean !” Abby walked away. “Oh, Abby don’t get mad!” Neela smiled.
Suddenly Abby stopped placing one of her hands on her back, the same sharp pain that hit her yesterday had came back but this time was stronger. Worried, Susan walked quickly next to her “Are you alright?” Abby didn’t answer and leaned forward, feeling another stroke of pain. She placed her hands on her belly and started to feel a litle dizzy. Susan held her “Abby?!” Neela ran to help them.
Abby began to walk with some difficulty and frowned “I think...I’m...” She took a deep breath and gritted her teeth until the pain was over. “Abby, have you been feeling any pains before?” Neela asked. “Uh?...I think… yesterday…I thought …they were cramps… blamed Luka’s hot chocolate..Ouch!” Abby closed her eyes and leaned again. Susan and Neela were still holding her.
“We need a wheelchair here...NOW!!!!” Susan yelled, and Chuny, who was the closest to them run to get one.
What’s going on? Luka asked Frank. He had just came out from one of the hallways and watched Susan, Neela, Chuny and a bunch of people, all together around someone on a wheelchair. “Kovac! Your woman is in labour” Morris yelled, coming out from the bunch of people that were surrounding Abby. _______________________________________________ I'll try to update later, hope you like it =)
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Post by Maryna on Jul 20, 2006 6:21:57 GMT 10
sure, we like it! it's great! update soon!
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Post by lubyfan on Jul 20, 2006 6:38:55 GMT 10
Can't wait for the next part! Update soon
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 20, 2006 7:50:22 GMT 10
Ohh come on you cant do this to us !!!!
Please update NOW!!!!!!!! Great story by the way !!
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Post by sammiejm on Jul 20, 2006 8:29:57 GMT 10
I'll try to update later, hope you like it =)I love it!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 20, 2006 11:51:15 GMT 10
Nice!
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Post by jaana on Jul 20, 2006 16:05:05 GMT 10
Great!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jul 20, 2006 16:49:24 GMT 10
Okay everyone, here's the next part. ________________________________________________
Abby was lying in a bed. It had been 9 hours and pain was now, unbearable. Neela and Susan were with her. Their shifts had been over an hour ago and they decided to stay with her friend ‘till everything was over.
“Just take a deep breath” Susan took her hand. Abby took a deep breath and blew. She was so tired. Neela had brought her some more ice chips “Here take it” she said. “No, please no more ice…I’ll turn into a snowman if you keep giving me ice…I just want this to be over soon” ” It’ll be over soon” Susan calmed her. “Dr Coburn said you’ll probably be done in an hour” Neela smiled. “ In an hour?!! I think I’ll kill myself in less than an hour” Abby retorted, throwing her head back. Susan’s pager started to beep “Wow, he really cares!” Susan smiled. “Who?” Abby sighted, brushing away a strand of hair of her face. “Luka.” Susan replied. “He’s been paging us since he went back to the ER, with this one, It’ll be the 104th time he beeps us…” Susan checked her beeping pager “…he says he’ll be here in 5 minutes” “Here comes another contraction” Neela warned, looking at the monitor next to Abby’s bed. “Ready?” Susan asked, taking Abby’s hand once again. “Oh yeah, sure” She took a deep breath and blew “I’m getting used to this, It’s like…riding a bike..” Abby took another deep breath and suddenly a contraction hit her again, this time it was stronger. Abby closed her eyes and gritted her teeth, trying to hold back a cry of pain.
Luka walked into the room along with Morris and… his camera. They both had just finish their shifts. “Take a deep breath…” Susan told her. “..and blow…” Abby leaned her body forward to try to diminish the pain, unsuccessfully. Not been able to hold back her cry anymore, she moaned. Luka sat next to her and rubbed her back. “Shhh..it’ll be over, soon” He said looking at the monitors. When pain was over Abby opened her eyes to see Luka by her side. She smiled weakly. How are you feeling? He asked brushing the strands of her hair away of her face. “Tired, sweaty…” she nodded and turned to look at Morris “Damnit Morris!!! Turn off that stupid camera!!!” she yelled. “Calm down Abs, Don’t you want to keep this ‘Kodak Moment’ forever?” he told her, taking close-ups of Susan, Neela and Luka. “Morris…” Neela warned him. “DO YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT ‘KODAK MOMENT’ I’M GOING TO KEEP FOREVER???!!!” Abby yelled, grabbing a flower pot from the night table and threatening to throw it directly on his head. Luka stood up, took away the flower pot from Abby’s hand and help her to lay back again.
Neela and Susan stared at Morris, mad. “Morris...why don’t you go outside to play with your toy?” Susan frowned. “Stop it, Morris, stop it " Luka warned him. "...Or I won’t be resposible of my acts” He walked close to Morris making him step backwards "Next time, I'll throw the flower pot myself and God knows what else I'll do..." Luka said.
Looking up at Luka, completely terrified but trying to show himself cool, Morris spoke: “Okay, okay.... I’ll stay here and won’t say a single word” He walked towards a corner and leaned on the wall...his camera was still on. ______________________________________________ I'll try to write a little more today...
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Post by maggie on Jul 20, 2006 17:29:27 GMT 10
ok, i have to admit i was skeptical when i started reading his story (it's hard to get past the carby baby and samka baby). but good god, i am HOOKED! please, please update soon!
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