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Post by zelda on Jul 20, 2006 22:06:58 GMT 10
Hi,Rory Gilmore, This is such a great idea to have Morris playing the perfect idiot in these scenes. Even when it's a bit dramatic like here for the childbirth, here he comes, always doing something crazy, and people can't help laughing. Love, love the camera thing, and Luka being mad at Morris. Very good update.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 20, 2006 23:11:44 GMT 10
Nice update.
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Post by crazylubyfan on Jul 21, 2006 10:44:16 GMT 10
awesome story! i read the first couple of updates and now this! this is so awsome! i love this fic! update soon! i cant waiat to see what happens! hurry please, i'll be breaking down in curiosity very soon!
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Post by maggie on Jul 21, 2006 17:14:44 GMT 10
i'm officially loving this! please update soon, i'm on the edge of my seat (ok, on the edge of my spinning desk chair )
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Post by lubyfan on Jul 21, 2006 17:44:14 GMT 10
Update soon
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Post by rorygilmore on Jul 21, 2006 18:28:44 GMT 10
Hi everyone! Thanks for taking your time to write feedbacks, I really appreciate it. ...okay...2 things to tell you : 1st: I made a huge mistake at the beginning of the story. In the first 2 couple of lines of the fic, I wrote that the story takes place before Luby broke up, but it's not before, it's AFTER they broke up...on the next lines I wrote it correctly. Made the mistake just in the 1st line. sorry hope I haven't confused you.(I've already corrected it..in capital words) 2nd: Here's a new update. Hope you like... ________________________________________________ Everyone stayed with Abby, until the time came, then they were invited to leave, by Doctor Coburn. “Good luck, Abs” Morris walked out of the room. “Everything will be fine” Neela gave her friend a quick squeeze on the hand and walked out of the room. “We'll be outside” Susan told her. Abby just nodded.
Luka stood up, smiled at her and turned to leave. Her eyes were filling with tears of pain, fear; and a strong feeling of loneliness was starting to take possession of her. “Luka…” she gasped, “Luka, please… don't go...stay” she managed to say, tears rolling down her face. “Don’t leave me alone….I’m so scared”. He frozed for a second and without a doubt, walked back to her side. He kissed her on the top of the head. “It’s okay Abby, I’ll be here with you… all the time”. Dr Coburn was ready and a couple of nurses were there with her. “All right Abby, I need you to take a deep breath and push” she said. Luka showed his hand to Abby “You can squeeze it, crush it and twist it as much as you need” he smiled at her. She smiled back at him, taking his hand. She took a deep breath and... the delivery started.
“MORRIS!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!!!” Susan yelled. Morris was standing infront of the window of Abby’s room, the one that opened onto the hallway, he was trying to film between the blinds. “Making my ‘Kodak Moment’...later, Abs will thank me for shooting the most important day in her life” he replied "...she's gonna kill you" Susan shook her head.
“Hey, did we miss something?” Chuny asked, walking down the hallway, she had just arrived along with Haleh. “Nop, nothing yet… Abby is inside with Luka” Susan nodded towards the door. “So Luka stayed with her?” Chuny pointed out, smiling. “I think it’s very sweet” Neela said “If someday I have a baby I would like the father to be by my side, encouraging me, you know…”She smiled. “Except…” Morris added “…that he’s not the father…" “Morris what are you doing?” Haleh asked “…A ‘Kodak Moment” he smiled. Neela rolled her eyes and walked next to Morris to try to take the camera away from him. “How could Carter do this to her? Susan asked “He was such a good person, I still can’t get why he left her with his baby” “He dumped her” Chuny shrugged “Men…” . “…so sad” Neela added.
_____________________________________________ I promise the baby will be born in the next update...What do you think it'll be, a boy...or a girl?
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Post by maggie on Jul 21, 2006 18:38:35 GMT 10
girl! i think the two girls would be cute...but poor luby. they are going to have to explain the situation to people so often!
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linda
Marquise of Luby
Hope for the future
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Post by linda on Jul 21, 2006 20:40:39 GMT 10
you HAVE to update before 6pm!!!! I need this story! its so amazing, and although none of us want to believe the storyline, you've really made it believable. Well done xx
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Post by lubyfan on Jul 21, 2006 21:34:16 GMT 10
A girl! Great update
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jul 21, 2006 22:24:38 GMT 10
A boy, so that way they would have one of each! Great update!
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 22, 2006 5:28:53 GMT 10
Aww, please update soon !!
Don't keep us waiting to long!
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linda
Marquise of Luby
Hope for the future
Posts: 221
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Post by linda on Jul 22, 2006 8:28:52 GMT 10
Girl so there can be that friction/sisterly love thing, as well as them both playing Abby off against Luka and vice versa.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jul 22, 2006 9:20:13 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by strizzy on Jul 22, 2006 12:31:29 GMT 10
Great story
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Post by rorygilmore on Jul 22, 2006 17:42:27 GMT 10
Okay...as promised..here's the baby's birth... ______________________________________________ “Abby, come on “ Dr. Coburn encouraged her . “One more push and the baby will be out” “I can’t” Abby mumbled still crushing Luka’s hand, who was now sitting behind her, holding her in his arms. “Yes, you can” Coburn said “Just one more time and it’ll be over”. “I can’t… I’m so… tired..I…just…Owwww” Abby’s last words melted into a cry and not been able to handle the pain anymore, she rested back on Luka. He held her, leaned his head to kiss her on the top of the head. He was so worried about her, wanted to ease her pain but couldn’t. “Come on Abby, you can do anything” he whispered into her ear. Abby was still, her eyes were closed. “I won’t let you and this baby alone, never…I’ll always be with you…Please, try , just one more time” Abby heard Luka’s words. She had to be strong, she thought... She wasn’t going to be alone. She rested for a few seconds, then took a deep breath and with all the strenght that lasted in her, she pushed, letting out a long cry of pain, crushing Luka’s hands. “Aaaaaahhhhh!!!!….” “Good Job, Abby!!” Doctor Coburn smiled “Keep pushing, keep pushing..” “Owwww…” Abby last scream, melted into sobs. A second later, Dr Coburn was holding the little baby in her hands. “Here she is ….you’ve got a beautiful baby girl” She placed the squirming baby on Abby. Little whimpers began to fill the room.
“It’s here!!!” Morris exclaimed. Everyone outside stopped their chat so they could listen the little baby’s cries.
Feeling weak and dizzy and never letting go Luka’s hand , Abby caressed her little baby. “You did it, Abby” Luka whispered, running his hand along Abby’s loosed hair, looking amazed at the baby. Exhausted she only managed to say: "Thanks to you..."
Luka walked out of the room, a smile spreaded on his face. Everyone waited for the news; “It’s a girl” he announced. “Aww” Susan was on the phone talking with Chuck “It’s a girl” She told him. “Nice…” Morris walked next to Luka “…Do we have to congratulate you… or something like that??” Luka ignored him….for Morris’ own good. “How is Abby?” Neela asked. Everyone gathered around Luka. “She had a hard time but she’s fine now, though exhausted. She’s resting” “And the baby?” “7 pounds, 4 ounces; 47 centimeters and... yells like her mom” Everyone chuckled. “So, everything it’s fine, then?” Neela smiled. Luka nodded.
“Good….are you staying the night?” Susan asked him “..because, if you’re not then I could…” “No, it’s okay Susan, I’ll stay.” Luka assured her “AHHH...GOOD STEPDADDY...AWWW!!!...a few words please…”Morris smiled….yes, he was holding his stupid camera. “Okay, I’ve got ENOUGH with you!!!” Suddenly Neela snatched Morris’ camera and walked away with it into the Ladies room. “Hey! wait!" Morris ran behind her into the Ladies room "Be careful...please no!..NO!... NOT INTO THE TOILET!!!! Luka approached Susan “I just need you to do me a big favor…" he asked her "...would you look after Danna for the night?she’s in the nursery and I…” “Don’t say anything else…I’ll put her to sleep in Cosmo’s crib, he’ll be thrilled to wake up and find a baby friend to babble with” Susan smiled. “Thanks Susan” Luka smiled.
Luka walked into Abby’s room again. Everything was dark now and the only light was coming from the moon outside, through the window. Abby was fast asleep. He sat back onto the couch, realizing how tired he was. He turned his face to look at Abby, resting in her bed. He was going to keep his promise, he was going to be there for her and the baby, always._____________________________________________ Yep, it's a girl, you got it! Sorry if it took me so long, I'll try to update next one sooner.=)
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