CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
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Post by CharmedOne on Feb 7, 2009 4:16:03 GMT 10
Life after Chicago
Chapter 1:
Abby: We left Chicago and now we start living in Boston. Today Luka starts working at the Massachusetts General Hospital as the new chief of the ER. I took some time off to spend time with Joe. I make walks with him and show him the city, I play with him and be just with him. We bought a small house with a small garden for Joe. I already started to look for a nanny, who looks after Joe when Luka and I’m working. Well, I still have two weeks till I start working. I’ll work at the same hospital as Luka but nobody will know that we are married. We gonna fool the staff as long as possible.
Now Luka is leaving. He gets his coat and the stuff for his office and locker. I still can’t believe he’s going to have his own office. County doesn’t have this luxury. Before he leaves the house, he kisses me gentle and tender on my mouth and Joe on his forehead and says:”See you tonight! Have fun! I love you.”
Luka: Now I’m at the MGH and get introduced to the staff by the Chief of Staff, Dr. Miller:”Listen to me! This is the new Chief of the ER, Dr. Kovac. But he is just the beginning of some changes. In two weeks we are going to get an new attending.” While I hear that I can’t hold back a smile when I think of Abby. I don’t wear my wedding ring and I can hear the nurses whisper:”Oh man, what a handsome guy! And he isn’t married look at his hands, no ring! I try to get a shot.”
I say hello to the staff and then Dr. Miller guides me through the ER. He shows me the traumas, the suture rooms and the exams. Wow, this ER is even bigger than County’s! I get lost in here! While Dr. Miller shows me everything he asks me:”How do you like it?” “It’s nice but it’s bigger than the ER I worked before and the staff seems nice. That’s a important point for a good working climate.” Dr.Miller laughs:”Don’t get irritated! The nurses are horrible gossipers, don’t listen to them! And don’t be shocked, they try to land on every new, goodlooking doctor.” “They don’t have any chance on me, trust me!” “Well, work calls, see you some time.” he says while he walks away. Strange guy, he reminds me of Kerry Weaver! And he is not very sympatic.
This is my first fic and I think it's terrible! Tell me what you think about it and please be honest!
Continue??
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smkbrad
Marquise of Luby
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Post by smkbrad on Feb 7, 2009 4:25:55 GMT 10
Life after ChicagoChapter 1:Abby:We left Chicago and now we start living in Boston. Today Luka starts working at the Massachusetts General Hospital as the new chief of the ER. I took some time off to spend time with Joe. I make walks with him and show him the city, I play with him and be just with him. We bought a small house with a small garden for Joe. I already started to look for a nanny, who looks after Joe when Luka and I’m working. Well, I still have two weeks till I start working. I’ll work at the same hospital as Luka but nobody will know that we are married. We gonna fool the staff as long as possible. Now Luka is leaving. He gets his coat and the stuff for his office and locker. I still can’t believe he’s going to have his own office. County doesn’t have this luxury. Before he leaves the house, he kisses me gentle and tender on my mouth and Joe on his forehead and says:”See you tonight! Have fun! I love you.” Luka:Now I’m at the MGH and get introduced to the staff by the Chief of Staff, Dr. Miller:”Listen to me! This is the new Chief of the ER, Dr. Kovac. But he is just the beginning of some changes. In two weeks we are going to get an new attending.” While I hear that I can’t hold back a smile when I think of Abby. I don’t wear my wedding ring and I can hear the nurses whisper:”Oh man, what a handsome guy! And he isn’t married look at his hands, no ring! I try to get a shot.” I say hello to the staff and then Dr. Miller guides me through the ER. He shows me the traumas, the suture rooms and the exams. Wow, this ER is even bigger than County’s! I get lost in here! While Dr. Miller shows me everything he asks me:”How do you like it?” “It’s nice but it’s bigger than the ER I worked before and the staff seems nice. That’s a important point for a good working climate.” Dr.Miller laughs:”Don’t get irritated! The nurses are horrible gossipers, don’t listen to them! And don’t be shocked, they try to land on every new, goodlooking doctor.” “They don’t have any chance on me, trust me!” “Well, work calls, see you some time.” he says while he walks away. Strange guy, he reminds me of Kerry Weaver! And he is not very sympatic.This is my first fic and I think it's terrible! Tell me what you think about it and please be honest!Continue??
i give credit to anyone who at least tries i wrote one fanfic but never posted cause i was afraid people would think it was dumb i may one day decide to post but now i dont believe i will. i think it sounds fine.
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Post by suzanne on Feb 7, 2009 4:57:06 GMT 10
I felt the same when I wrote my first fic!! I think you are doing fine with it!! Interesting start so far and I'm looking forward to what happens!!
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Post by sissa on Feb 7, 2009 5:23:44 GMT 10
Yeah, don´t stop. Now all we have are fanfics to "see" what´s going on with our pair in Boston.
Seems things are different in Boston, Luka was so clueless about his looks affecting co-workers in Chicago... Better Abby get back to work soon.
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Post by littlegirl on Feb 7, 2009 5:29:30 GMT 10
You just have to continue!!! I really like your fic. I guess it will be interesting to see how long Luka and Abby can keep their secret at work.
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Post by shelby on Feb 7, 2009 7:17:14 GMT 10
I felt the same, just like you and Suzanne! Except, my first was actually terrible....one chapter was like, 5 tiny lines! lol. And I actually posted it here! But now that I'm on my first real fic, I always think whenever I post a chapter, is this stupid? But I guess that's just how some writers think! I really love it so far! Keep going! I can't wait to find out how long they can keep the secret for!
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
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Post by CharmedOne on Feb 7, 2009 19:28:59 GMT 10
Thank you for being so confident. Here is the next chapter. Hope you like it. There are more Luby parts than in the first. And I forgot something to tell you: My English is not so good.
The first chapters are not that long but maybe it's better to keep it exciting.
Chapter 2:
Abby: I enjoyed my day with Joe because it was the first for months and now I’m sitting on our couch in our living room and watch him sleep. He looks like an angel. I could never live without him, without him and Luka. I’m happy for the first time since Luka came back from Croatia and since we came together after that disastrous month without him close to me.
I hear the door open and get up from the couch. Luka is home and heads towards me. “Hey, how was your first day?” I ask before I kiss him on his lips. “Well, it was okay. The staff is nice but the nurses are gossiping like the ones in County and the ER is so big. I swear you it’s like a huge labyrinth.” he says after we part.
“Are you hungry? I bought a cooking book when I was out with Joe and I tried something and I don’t think it’s that bad.” “Well, I try but don’t be angry if I don’t like it.” he says with a smile on his lips. I say that I don’t mind while we go to the kitchen and hand him a plate with spaghetti and salmon sauce.
He takes a fork and tastes a bit. I can see that he is thinking how it is and then he says:”Not that bad. It could be worse but it needs a bit salt and pepper. You are talented if you want to.” What? He thinks it’s good?
Now I’m tasting it and I have to agree with him. “Yeah, you’re right. Thank you.” I lean forward to him and kiss him passionatly on his lips. He deepens the kiss and I can feel his tongue exploring my mouth. My arms move to his neck while his move to my waist. Finally we part and I say:”You must be tired, let’s go to bed.”
We walk to our bedroom and change clothes. Luka comes from behind and embraces me. He kisses my neck and I turn around and kiss him on his lips. After we part I say good night and get under the covers of our bed. He joins me and rests his arm on my waist. I come closer and drift into a dreamless sleep.
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Post by suzanne on Feb 7, 2009 19:54:47 GMT 10
Nice update!! Looking forward to when Abby starts in the hospital, how long can they keep it a secret?? How long will it take the nurses to figure it out??, especially if they like to gossip like county!! Update soon!!
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
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Post by CharmedOne on Feb 7, 2009 20:51:45 GMT 10
Here is the next chapter and it's longer than the two before. Hope you like it. I think it's ok.
Chapter 3:
Abby: The two weeks are over now and tomorrow I start working at the Massachusetts General Hospital. I enjoyed the time with Joe so much and I can feel I’m going to miss him during my shifts.
Fortunately we could arrange it that when I have nightshift Luka has off and the other way round but most of the time we are working day shifts together.
Now Luka and I are about to leave after Betty, the nanny came to take care of Joe. “Bye, Honey!” I say to him and kiss him on his forehead. “See you tonight and have fun with Betty!”
We’re entering the ER and first thing I have to do is to close my eyes and open them again. Wohoouu, this place is HUGE! The first thing Luka shows me is the Lounge and my locker. This locker is bigger than my old! Why didn’t I start workin here? Well, then I wouldn’t have met Luka.
After I put on my lab coat on and left the Lounge, we go to the admin desk, where he introduces me to my new colleagues. “This is Dr. Lockhart and as said when I came here she is our new attending. I’ll show her everything and after that we are in my office.”
I can’t hold back a smile and look to the floor.
“Look, how she behaves, looks like she already has a crush on him. But she can’t get him, he belongs to me!”
I can hear the nurses talk quietly to each other and my grin grows even bigger. I look up to Luka who seems to about to burst because of trying not to laugh.
“Did you see her gaze when she looked at him? It makes me jealous.”
The nurses don’t stop chatting and so I just say that I look forward of working with them and that I have get my stuff into my locker. I leave admin and go to the Lounge.
After I made sure I’m alone, I can’t hold it any longer and burst into a laugh. Oh man, Luka was right. They are gossiping as much as County’s nurses.
I stopped laughing as I hear the door open and see that one of my colleagues, Dr. Grey, an resident, comes in. “What’s so funny?” she asks me.
“Nothing, it’s just the nurses. They are chatting like hell and don’t even notice that everyone can here them.” I answer her while I open my locker.
“Oh, yeah, you noticed already? It took me two weeks to find out that they started the rumor mill about me and a resident from OR. But it was nothing and after that they were disappointed.”
I’m picturing their faces and a smile creeps over my face. “I can imagine. They are like the nurses in the ER I worked before.”
I pin a picture of Joe on the metal door of my locker. “Is this your son?” she asks me. “Well, maybe he looks like me but it’s my nephew.” Oh, please forgive me Joe. You could never be my nephew.
“Oh, I didn’t want to bother you but my break is over. See you later.”
Before she can leave the Lounge I ask her “Hey, maybe we could drink coffee some time, and I don’t want to be impolite but what’s your name?”
“Well, first, that would be great and second it’s not impolite. My name is Jordan.”
I smile “Okay, see you then Jordan. My name is Abby.” I say while she leaves the Lounge. That sounded like a kids talk in kindergarten ‘What’s your name, my is Abby’ Very embarassing!
Now that Jordan left I pin the rest of my photographs on my locker door and get left in thoughts. This one shows me and Luka when I’m pregnant. The next one is from our wedding with me, Luka and Joe. The next shows the whole ER staff with Susan, Carter, Chen, Pratt, Kerry, Luka, Elisabeth, Neela, Sam, Morris, Jerry, Frank, Chuny, Haleh and me. The next two are one with Luka and Joe and the other with me and Joe.
I get out of my thoughts when I remind myself that I still have a tour trough the ER.
I close my locker and leave the Lounge.
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Post by suzanne on Feb 7, 2009 21:11:18 GMT 10
Another update so quick, very nice!! The nurse talking about Luka and Abby like that, very funny!! Wait til they find out their married with a baby!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 7, 2009 23:12:53 GMT 10
great start !
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CharmedOne
Luby Lover
The definition of insanity is doing something over again and expecting a different outcome
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Post by CharmedOne on Feb 8, 2009 0:28:23 GMT 10
I know I'm fast but other way I would forget everything before I can write it down. Hope you like it.
Note: My medical knowledge is not very good.
Chapter 4:
Now I’m sitting infront of Luka in his office, signing some paperwork. I look through the pages, checking if my signature is everywhere it’s supposed to be.
I hand the paper to him and sit on his lap. “Thank you for the nice tour. It was very interesting.” I say with a smile. “You’re welcome. Anytime again.” he says before he kisses me passionately but gentle on my lips. We hear a knock on the door and we part. I quickly sit in front of him again and he shouts “Yes, you can come in.”
A nurse with the name Jessica looks in “Sorry, I don’t want to interrupt you but we are getting two GSWs in and Dr. Hamilton and Dr. Grey are MIA and Dave is still on vacation. You have to come and help us.” We stand up and Luka says “ Dr. Lockhart, this would be a great chance to show us how you work.”
We leave the office and just a second later the patients roll in. “What’d we got?” I ask the paramedic. “18 year old male, got shot in the left side of his thorax and in his abdomen. Intubated, crashed twice while we were driving here.” “I take it” I say while I head to the trauma room.
Now it’s an hour later, my patient didn’t make it and I feel terrible. First day and one lost patient. Well, he was DOA but still... The bullet went in his heart I couldn’t have done any difference, it’s not my fault. That’s all I can think. I stand in front of my locker and stare at my pictures and suddenly I can feel Lukas arms wrap around me. I turn around and see that he has a woried look on his face.
“What’s going on?” he asks me “I know your patient died but it was not your fault, you don’t have to feel guilty.”
I smile a bit and say “Thank you for being so supportive. I know that it’s not my fault but it seems to be a bad start of working here, doesn’t it?”
Now tears are gathering in my eyes and I can’t hold them back.
“Hey, shhh, it’s ok, I’m here. Shh” He pulls me even closer and I can hear his heart beating at my ear. Its rythm is soothing me and after a while I stop crying. “Thank you” I say again “Thank you for being here.” Now I smile and he bends down and kisses my forehead protectively. “Let’s take a break and get coffee.”
We walk out of the Lounge and I can hear the nurses again “Why is she always with him? I mean she doesn’t have any chance on him. I don’t know why but they seem so close.”
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Post by shelby on Feb 8, 2009 1:30:52 GMT 10
Great updates! If only the nurses knew that they were married...... I really like this fic! Update soon!
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Post by suzanne on Feb 8, 2009 3:29:43 GMT 10
Poor Abby getting so upset!! Glad Luka was there for her!! The poor nurses, wait til they find out why their always together!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 9, 2009 0:48:10 GMT 10
The nurses are a jalous person of Abby ! nice udapte !
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