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Post by LindsayMonroe on Nov 5, 2009 1:23:42 GMT 10
Hey everybody this is my first fic so please tell me what you think
It starts in season 11. Luka and Abby are best friends. It's very short Samka but not for long you'll see...
Hope you like it
Chapter 1
‘Where is she?’ Luka yelled at Frank when he stormed into the ER. ‘She’s in Trauma 1, Lewis is checking on her.’ Frank told Luka who calmed down a little bit.
‘Did she have any injuries?’ ‘I couldn’t see any.’ Luka headed to Trauma 1 when Frank stopped him. ‘You can’t go in there now.’
Luka looked at him with a deadly glare aand cotinued to walk. He opened the door and there he saw her crying in Susan’s arms.
‘Abby’ he said as he entered the room. She looked up and he could swear he saw a small smile on her face which disappeared as fast as it came.
Luka walked to the gurney and gave his best frien a warm hug. ‘How are you?’ he asked.
‘I’m fine well physically at least.’ Luka looked at her with an anxious gaze and hugged her again.
Susan excused herself and went out of the room. ‘What happened?’ he asked.
‘I was waiting for a trauma coming in when a black car stopped in the yard. A boy told me his brother was hurt. I wanted to help but they just dragged me into that car.’
She looked like she would start to cry and Luka took her hand. ‘You don’t have to tell me.’ he whispered.
‘No it’s okay. So they dragged me into that car and in the trunk there was a boy who was shot. The told me to fix him but he died. I tried everything really.’ Abby sighed and continued.
‘And they pointed at me with that gun all the time. I thought they’d kill me.’ ‘It’s okay’ Luka said and looked deep into her eyes.
‘I want to get out of here, Luka. They are all staring at me as if I was an alien. I just want to sleep in my bed.’
‘Ok I’ll just talk to Susan and then I’ll drive you home.’ He squeezed her hand and left the room.
As soon as Abby was alone she closed her eyes but all she could think of was that gun...
my english is not the best
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Post by lubyfan4ever on Nov 5, 2009 1:28:17 GMT 10
Good ! keep going ! Let's have an update soon !
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Post by CharmedOne on Nov 5, 2009 3:45:46 GMT 10
You already know what I think abou it! *thumbs up*
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Post by suus on Nov 5, 2009 7:14:06 GMT 10
Good job!
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Post by suzanne on Nov 5, 2009 8:51:18 GMT 10
Very nice start!! Looking forward to the next update!! ;D And your English is fine!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Nov 6, 2009 0:26:20 GMT 10
I really like it !!!!
Keep going !
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Post by LindsayMonroe on Nov 6, 2009 4:56:03 GMT 10
Hey guys thanks for your comments here's the next chapter enjoy it
Chapter 2:
During the car ride nobody spoke a word. Luka looked at Abby who watched the streets of Chicago go by. As they reached Abby’s apartment she didn’t evev recognize it.
Luka cleered his throat and Abby looked up ‘Thanks for bringing me home, Luka.’ She said and was about to open the door when Luka asked ‘Shall I bring you to your apartment.’ ‘No it’s okay. I’ll be fine and isn’t Sam waiting for you.’
‘Oh shit I totally forgott about Sam’ Luka thought but he noticed that he didn’t really care about that.
‘Ok, call me if you need something.’ Luka said as Abby opened the door. ‘Yeah thanks:’ she answered and walked to the house. Luka watched her going through the door and started the car.
He didn’t really feel like going home and talking with Sam but sooner or later he’d have to.
Abby’s apartment:
Abby sighed and closed the door. She locked it three times and headed to her bedroom. There she changed into some more comfortable clothes and put the with blood sprinkeled scrubs into the bin.
She walked into the bath and ran some hot water into the ath tub...
Luka’s apartment:
Luka opened his door and tiptoed in. He thought about Abby and didn’t even notice Sam who was sitting on the couch, waiting for him. She looked very pissed and as Luka came into the living room she yelled ‘Where have you been.’
‘Hello to you too.’ ‘Where have you been’ ‘Abby called...’ ‘Oh sure Abby calls and you put everything down and jump.’ ‘No it’s not like that she’s been kidnapped.’
‘Yeah sure and I’m the queen of england.’ Now Luka began to yell too. ‘It’s true and if you don’t trust me you can call the hospital. They’ll confirm that. I’ll sleep on the couch tonight.’
He said with an angry glare in his eyes and went to the bedroom to grab a blanket and a pillow...
Abby’s apartment:
3:16...3:17...3:18...3:19...
Every minute seemed like an hour. Abby couldn’t sleep so all she could do was to stare at the clock next to her bed.
After three hours which seemed like eternity she decided to call Luka. She began to search for the phone and found it under a bunch of Neela’s clothes.
Abby dialed his number and heard it ringing.
Luka’s apartment:
Luka couldn’t sleep. He kept thinking aout Abby and how sad she looked and about his argument with sam just one of many they had in the last time.
Suddenly his cell began to ring. He picked it up immediately so Sam wouldn’t wake up and comlain about everything and anybody.
‘Hello’ he whispered. ‘It’s me. Did I wake you?’ a small smile appeared on his face. ‘No I was awake. Are you allright?’
‘Yes...No not really could you come over? Neela is at work and I need to talk with somebody. I know it’s late but please.’ ‘It’s okay I’ll be right there’
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Post by Martine on Nov 6, 2009 6:31:32 GMT 10
Cool, finally an alternative ending to 'Skin'. Although it was one of my favorites, I never liked how that episode ended. I look forward to your next update Karma to you for starting a new fanfic.
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Nov 6, 2009 6:32:30 GMT 10
love it !!!
Keep going ;D ;D ;D
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Post by suus on Nov 6, 2009 7:30:28 GMT 10
Cool, finally an alternative ending to 'Skin'. Although it was one of my favorites, I never liked how that episode ended. I look forward to your next update You're right, it's like something was missing at the end of the episode, like there had to be a little bit after the '40 minutes' to end the episode completely... So me too, I really like it that you can 'finish' the episode for us You're doing good, keep going!
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Post by suzanne on Nov 6, 2009 11:18:32 GMT 10
Nice update!! Looking forward to what happens next!! ;D Update soon!!
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Post by LindsayMonroe on Nov 7, 2009 9:17:57 GMT 10
hey guys this is chapter three I hope you like it
Chapter 3:
Abby heard a knock. She went to the door and opened it. There he was beautiful as always even if it wsa 3:30 in the morning.
‘Hey’ she smiled and let him in ‘Hey. I brought something with me.’ He got some Ben and Jerry’s cookie ice cream from behind his back. ‘I thought you could need that.’
Abby’s face lit up a little bit and she got two spoons from the kitchen. ‘This is exactly what I need now.’
Luka sat down on the couch and studied his best friend’s face. ‘What’ she asked wath a mouth full of ice-cream. ‘I just wonder what’s bothering you.’
‘Nothing’ ‘Oh come on Abby I know you for five years now.’
‘It’s just...’ ‘What’ ‘I’m scared Luka. Scared that they come her to finish what they started.’ She sighed and Luka got up and sat down next to her.
‘Abby they don’t know where you live and why would they come back.’ ‘I know...It’s just...could we talk about something else. I don’t want to think about this anymore.’ ‘Sure’
‘So how is it going with you and Sam’ ‘Any topic just not that one.’ ‘So bad,huh’ ‘Not bad, it’s worse. Everything we ddo is arguing.’
‘I’m sorry to hear that’ Abby said and looked at Luka
‘You don’t need to. I think I always knew she’s not the one. She’d propably get furious if she knew I was here.’ ‘She doesn’know you are here’ ‘No’
Abby began to laugh ‘Did you climb out of your window like a teenage boy?’ ‘No I walked out of the front door like a real man.’ ‘A real man who is afraid of his own girlfriend.’
Abby laughed harder and Luka couldn’t help and had to laugh with her. As they were finished both had red faces and gasped for air.
Abby who fell off the couch during her laughing attack got up and told Luka ‘Thank you for everything.’ Luka squeezed her hand and said ‘I'll always be there for you...’
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Post by suzanne on Nov 7, 2009 10:23:30 GMT 10
Very nice update!! The friendship is so good between them!! Samka needs to end soon so they can get together!! Hope you update again soon!! ;D
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Post by suus on Nov 7, 2009 19:26:48 GMT 10
I like it, keep going!
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Post by niknik on Nov 8, 2009 1:40:02 GMT 10
its a great story! i like the idea of filling the gap of what happened after "Skin" ! just keep writing
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