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Feb 23, 2010 4:25:09 GMT 10
Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Feb 23, 2010 4:25:09 GMT 10
What!!! ? Update soon!!!
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Feb 23, 2010 11:23:43 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Feb 23, 2010 11:23:43 GMT 10
Hey... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 25: Wakening 2... ‘I don’t think he is listening…’ said Dra. Kelly. Abby looked at the other doctor, fear evident in her face… ‘What?’ she asked. ‘Abby, you knew this could happen…’ said Dra. Kelly. ‘Bacterial Meningitis can cause this…’ Abby closed her eyes when she felt the tears appear… Luka passed his hand on Abby’s hand to call her attention… he knew she was sad… Abby looked at him as a tear rolled down her face… but soon she dried her face and smiled at him… ‘Very well, Abby…’ said Dra. Kelly, turning of the machines… ‘I’m going to take the tube out…’ Abby nodded. Dra. Kelly proceeds to take the tube out from Luka’s throat, making him he cough for a few seconds… ‘A - Abby?’ he called her. It was a difficult moment… she knew he wasn’t going to hear her… sighing she pointed at him, then to her ears and shook her head in negative… Luka looked at her and seconds later, put his hands on his ears and noticed he couldn’t her anything… ‘I - I can’t he – hear?’ he asked, scared. When she didn’t do anything, he looked to the other doctor and saw that her expression wasn’t one of the bests… He tried to seat, but couldn’t… ‘My le- legs…’ he said. ‘Abby…’ Abby, afraid helped him quickly while the neurologist arranged his pillow… ‘Abby, I’m going to write down to explain what is going on to him…’ said Dra. Kelly. Abby nodded and turned back to look at Luka, seeing that he was scared… she hugged him… Luka closed her eyes and hide his face on her belly, as she passed her hand on his hair… X ~ X ~ X A few minutes later, after reading the explanation Dra. Kelly did about the meningitis and all, Luka was calmer… as a doctor, he knew he had to wait… Dra. Kelly wrote more: ‘We are going to do exams to see what’s going on… and this dormancy at your legs is normal… it will be back to normal after a while…’ He read it and looked at her… ‘Don’t worry…’ Dra. Kelly said slowly, so he could read her lips. Luka doubted, but he trusted her… he nodded… ‘Abby, I’ll let you alone now…’ said the neurologist. ‘Can I call his family or yours in?’ ‘Not yet…’ said Abby. ‘Ok…’ said Dra. Kelly. ‘I’ll go order the exams ASAP…’ Abby nodded. When the doctor left, Abby tuned back to Luka and resolved to sit on his bed… Luka was looking down… she put her hand on his jaw and gently made him look at her… ‘I love you…’ she said slowly. Luka looked at her. ‘I – I love you - you too…’ he said. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX dani
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
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Djed
Feb 23, 2010 11:39:34 GMT 10
Post by jehkovac on Feb 23, 2010 11:39:34 GMT 10
OOOOhhhhhhhhh So beautiful and sad!!! Loving the whole thing!! Great update Dani!
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Feb 23, 2010 22:11:17 GMT 10
Post by baboune51 on Feb 23, 2010 22:11:17 GMT 10
it's so sad for Luka nice udapte
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Feb 24, 2010 1:29:47 GMT 10
Post by suzanne on Feb 24, 2010 1:29:47 GMT 10
Ah poor Luka!! Update soon!! ;D
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Feb 24, 2010 7:31:17 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Feb 24, 2010 7:31:17 GMT 10
Hey... I just thought and did another small change... instead of two days, I changed for three... it took three days to Luka wake up... the changes are in chapters seven and eight... Now, I already did the next update, just need to put into English... Just wait a little...
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Feb 24, 2010 9:19:48 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Feb 24, 2010 9:19:48 GMT 10
Chapter 26: Writting down...
After being a time alone, Abby kissed him and got up to call his family…
She went to the door and before opening it, looked back at him and smiled, before exiting the room…
She walked to the area where the group of people was reunited…
Her mother was the first to look at her…
‘Abby?’ she asked.
’Hey, mom…’ Abby said, crossing her arms on her chest.
‘How is he?’ asked Susan.
Abby just looked at his father.
‘Mr. Kovac… Luka is wake…’ she said...
Josef got up from his seat quickly… Niko and he approached Abby.
‘How… is… he?’ asked Josef.
Abby sighed and looked down, before answer:
‘He isn’t hearing…’ she said.
Josef just stared her…
‘I knew that the treatment you gave him was inefficient…’ said Anija
‘Hey, calm down…’ said Susan, looking at her. ‘Bacterial Meningitis can cause this… we knew he could have sequelae, even if the tomography showed us that everything was ok with his brain…’
Anija looked at her.
‘If you could get to him sooner…’ she started, but Abby cut her off.
‘Even so, he could have developed this…’ she said, making her stop with her hand.
Anija looked at her, but Abby ignored her, looking back at Josef and Niko.
‘We are going to do tests in a short while to see what’s going on with him…’ Abby said. ‘Dra. Kelly is arranging them right now…’
‘Do you think we ‘could’ see ‘he’? asked Niko.
‘Yes…’ Abby said. ‘But just the two of you… he’s still in isolation…’
They nodded… Niko walked to his wife and talked to her in Croatian… then, kissed her forehead and walked back to where Abby and Josef were…
‘Come with me…’ Abby said.
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The door of the room opened… Luka looked at his father and brother and was alleviated…
‘Dad?’ he asked.
At least he thought it was the right word, because not hearing is making him confused…
Josef walked to him… Niko and he were using masks…
Abby, on the other side of the bed, handed Josef some paper and pen…
‘What for?’ Niko asked.
‘I think it’s better to write down for him to read…’ she said.
‘He can read?’ asked Niko.
Abby nodded, picking up Luka’s hand… he looked at her…
Niko looked at his father… then started to write something down…
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Dani
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Feb 24, 2010 10:21:59 GMT 10
Post by suzanne on Feb 24, 2010 10:21:59 GMT 10
Ah poor Luka!! Glad Abby is there!! Update soon!! ;D
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Feb 25, 2010 11:20:45 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Feb 25, 2010 11:20:45 GMT 10
Hey... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 27: Discovery... Ten minutes later, Dra. Kelly returned to Luka’s room… she was like everyone, with a mask… everyone, but Abby… ‘The neck and head services are expecting us…’ Dra. Kelly said. Abby nodded and turned to Luka, speaking slowly: 'We are going to do the exams now… don’t worry...’ He nodded and they kissed… ‘See you later…’ she said, passing a hand on his face. Luka nodded again as two male nurses entered the room, using masks too and unlocking the bed, started to go out with Luka… ‘Josef, Niko… go with him…’ Abby said. ‘You?’ asked Josef… ‘I’ll let you alone for a while…’ she said. Josef and Niko nodded and thanked her… X ~ X ~ X It was almost noon, when Maggie appeared to talk with Abby… she was with her eyes closed, sitting outside Luka’s room… ‘Abby?’ asked Maggie. ‘Are you ok?’ ‘Yeah… just a little nauseated…’ she said, turning to look at her mother… Maggie lifted an eyebrow. ‘It’s now two days that you’re with a small nausea…’ her mother started. ‘And that fainting on the other day…’ ‘Almost… fainting, mom…’Abby said, getting up and crossing her arms on her chest. ‘I know that you think I’m pregnant, but Luka and I were careful…’ ‘Did you?’ asked Maggie. ‘Well… most of the time, yeah…’ said Abby. ‘It’s enough…’ said Maggie. Abby sighed. ‘What did you want, Maggie?’ asked Abby, changing the subject… she didn’t want to hear sermons from her mother… ‘Let’s take a walk…’ Maggie said. ‘Everyone is going to the cafeteria…’ ‘I don’t know if it is a great idea…’said Abby. ‘At least, don’t be standing there alone… come, distract yourself…’ said Maggie. Abby thought a little and she nodded… X ~ X ~ X Abby, Susan, Maggie, Eddy, Carter and Eric walked into the cafeteria… but as soon as they arrived, the smell made Abby sick… putting a hand over her mouth, she said. ‘Excuse me…’ she asked, making space between them and going into the bathroom. Everyone looked at her. ‘What’s wrong with her?’ he asked. ‘She’s pregnant…’ said Susan, as the waked into the cafeteria… ‘Yep…’ said Maggie, nodding. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Djed
Feb 25, 2010 17:37:21 GMT 10
Post by kia on Feb 25, 2010 17:37:21 GMT 10
Pregnant? That's great news! ;D But I'm so worried about Luka...
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Feb 25, 2010 20:05:44 GMT 10
Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Feb 25, 2010 20:05:44 GMT 10
Pregnant?? hihihi Love it !! ;D ;D ;D Update soon!!
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Feb 25, 2010 22:11:26 GMT 10
Post by baboune51 on Feb 25, 2010 22:11:26 GMT 10
yeah she's pregnant great udapte
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Feb 25, 2010 23:13:39 GMT 10
Post by suzanne on Feb 25, 2010 23:13:39 GMT 10
Yay a baby!! Looking forward to more!! ;D
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
Posts: 281
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Djed
Feb 26, 2010 2:15:10 GMT 10
Post by jehkovac on Feb 26, 2010 2:15:10 GMT 10
a Kovac baby!!! OOOOHHHHH =D
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Feb 26, 2010 20:29:35 GMT 10
Post by daniella on Feb 26, 2010 20:29:35 GMT 10
Hey... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Chapter 28: Results 1 Half an hour later after the incident on Cafeteria, Susan convinced Abby to do a blood test... this was almost four hours ago… She didn’t want to believe that she was pregnant, despite of what her family and friends told her… now, she was waiting for the result on the lounge… Abby laid down on the sofa and looked at the ceiling… at least, she had time… Luka would be doing tests for the rest of the day… Now she was waiting… she thought about the medicines she 'd taken… did they harm the baby in any way? She couldn’t bare Luka’s face if it did… that is, if she was pregnant … The door opened and she turned to it… Susan was walking towards her with a sheet of paper on her hands… Abby saw she was smiling and sat back on the sofa, to give ser friend some space… ‘I know…’ ’Abby said as Susan sat beside her. ‘I can see for you expression, that the test showed I’m pregnant, right?’ ‘Ah, Abby… cheer up…’ said Susan. ‘I know the moment isn’t right but maybe this happen for the good…’ ‘I…’ Abby started, looking down. ‘… have to tell Luka, but… I don’t know if I want to…’ ‘Because of his family?’ Susan asked. ‘In a way…’ said Abby. ‘I'm sure he is going to love the news…’ Susan said, putting her hand on Abby’s shoulder. 'But, what if the medicines I took because of the risk of meningitis harmed the baby in any way?’ Abby asked. ‘I can’t bare the hurt on his face…’ ‘In any way, Luka needs to know…’ said Susan. Abby sighed and reclined to the front. She held her head in her folded hand. ‘And now, what am I going to do?’ she asked, her eyes wet with unshed tears. ‘I’m going to ask Coburn to do an ultrasound and she can exam you better…’ said Susan. ‘The situation is hard, but Abby… you don’t need to decided right now…’ ‘I don’t want to pass for it alone…’ said Abby. Susan hugged her. ‘You won’t… I’m here for you and Luka…’ XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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