Post by Lubby on Jan 31, 2011 18:53:09 GMT 10
Yesterday I decided to try to write Luby fanfiction.. It's a bit hard,because my english isn't very well yet, so please look out for my mistakes. ;D
You have to know, that:
-Luka never met with Danijela, so he hasn't girlfriend right now.
-Abby is only 26 yrs old, and Luka is 28 yrs old.
-I used the real infos for example Luka's home in Croatia etc.
I think that's all..
Location: Croatia, Sibenik
Time: 11 a.m.
Kovac's Home
- Tata, I want to go to work in America..-said Luka after 10 minutes thinking.
-What did you say? Luka, you know that I don't understand english very well..
-Yes, I know..And I'm sorry, but I must talk in english, because I don't want to live here anymore.. After this terrible war I don't feel very well between these burnt houses and streets.. And of course in my mind there always is grandpa.. and his last words for me..
- I know that's hard for you,Luka.. and not only for you,but for us too. You're young,beautiful,intelligent and I think a great doctor, so can do whatever you want. I love you as much as a father could love his son.
- I love you too, Tata! - said Luka as a little kid, and hugged his father. - I will call you in all hours of the day, I promise!
- I hope so.. Now, let's go and talk with mama,too.
-OK. - said Luka smiling.
- Mama, mamaa, I want to say something important for you..It's about my future and my life..Please do not be frightened or worried because of this..
- All right, Luka. Tell me, what is it.- said his mother a little surprised, because she didn't see him as happy for a while.
- OK.. Soo.. I wan to work in America as a doctor.
- What? Whyy? I'll miss you so much! - said his mother sadly.
- I know. I'll miss you all so much, but I have to change my life. Tata said it's okay..So may I go? Please, mama, pleaseee..-asked Luka,standing on his knees.
- All right, all right..If you really want to..you can go..
- When? Can I go tomorrow morning? - asked Luka fast.
- Tomorrow? As soon?
- Yes, yes, yees.. It sounds soo interesting.
- All right.. Hmm..how fast you grow up!
- Okay, then I'm going to pack my clothes, books and some pictures and everythiiing. Hey America, I'M COMING! - shouted Luka happily.
At the same time..
L: Chicago, California, USA
Abby Lockhart's apartament
After Abby saw Richard with an another woman kissing in the park, she realized that she can't live with him anymore. Even if she loved him or not, she must take a next step in her life. She decided to go to the living-room(where Richard was) and ask him for a divorce.
- Richard... Richaard! Please do not watch the soccer match as loud! I wanna talk with you..
- Aaaand GOAAL!!!! - shouted Richard, didn't even listen to Abby.
- RICHARD WILLIAM LOCKHART! - shouted Abby very angrily.
- What? What's the problem again? - asked Richard surprised.
- You're killing me, Richard! You never listen to me, when I want to talk to you, you never ask me what was my horrible day in the university, you are the worst husband in the world! That's my problem! And the 'best' in our relationship is, that we aren't only two, but we're THREE! Did you really think that I'm as idiot as I don't see that you're in love with someone?
- Hey.. Abby..let's talk about it..
- I don't wanna talk with you! NEVER EVER AGAIN! You hear me? That WAS our relationship and now is THE END! No more lies, no more stress and of course no more b*tches..I hate you! Now go and pack your clothes fast! If you aren't going to leave, I promise I'll call the police!
- But.. baby.. please.. is it because of the soccer match?
- SHUT UP! Go and do what I ordered to you!
Abby thought that finally she did a great job, because Richard was packing his clothes without words. For a second Abby thought that perhaps he changed..but she forgot it very fast. When Richard left the apartament, Abby felt fantastic.
" Finally alone.."- she whispered and fell in the bed happily. " It's like a dream! I can do what I want again.. hmm.. Bye-bye Lord Devil!" - she smiled.
You have to know, that:
-Luka never met with Danijela, so he hasn't girlfriend right now.
-Abby is only 26 yrs old, and Luka is 28 yrs old.
-I used the real infos for example Luka's home in Croatia etc.
I think that's all..
Chapter 1.
The Leaving
[/u]The Leaving
Location: Croatia, Sibenik
Time: 11 a.m.
Kovac's Home
- Tata, I want to go to work in America..-said Luka after 10 minutes thinking.
-What did you say? Luka, you know that I don't understand english very well..
-Yes, I know..And I'm sorry, but I must talk in english, because I don't want to live here anymore.. After this terrible war I don't feel very well between these burnt houses and streets.. And of course in my mind there always is grandpa.. and his last words for me..
- I know that's hard for you,Luka.. and not only for you,but for us too. You're young,beautiful,intelligent and I think a great doctor, so can do whatever you want. I love you as much as a father could love his son.
- I love you too, Tata! - said Luka as a little kid, and hugged his father. - I will call you in all hours of the day, I promise!
- I hope so.. Now, let's go and talk with mama,too.
-OK. - said Luka smiling.
- Mama, mamaa, I want to say something important for you..It's about my future and my life..Please do not be frightened or worried because of this..
- All right, Luka. Tell me, what is it.- said his mother a little surprised, because she didn't see him as happy for a while.
- OK.. Soo.. I wan to work in America as a doctor.
- What? Whyy? I'll miss you so much! - said his mother sadly.
- I know. I'll miss you all so much, but I have to change my life. Tata said it's okay..So may I go? Please, mama, pleaseee..-asked Luka,standing on his knees.
- All right, all right..If you really want to..you can go..
- When? Can I go tomorrow morning? - asked Luka fast.
- Tomorrow? As soon?
- Yes, yes, yees.. It sounds soo interesting.
- All right.. Hmm..how fast you grow up!
- Okay, then I'm going to pack my clothes, books and some pictures and everythiiing. Hey America, I'M COMING! - shouted Luka happily.
At the same time..
L: Chicago, California, USA
Abby Lockhart's apartament
After Abby saw Richard with an another woman kissing in the park, she realized that she can't live with him anymore. Even if she loved him or not, she must take a next step in her life. She decided to go to the living-room(where Richard was) and ask him for a divorce.
- Richard... Richaard! Please do not watch the soccer match as loud! I wanna talk with you..
- Aaaand GOAAL!!!! - shouted Richard, didn't even listen to Abby.
- RICHARD WILLIAM LOCKHART! - shouted Abby very angrily.
- What? What's the problem again? - asked Richard surprised.
- You're killing me, Richard! You never listen to me, when I want to talk to you, you never ask me what was my horrible day in the university, you are the worst husband in the world! That's my problem! And the 'best' in our relationship is, that we aren't only two, but we're THREE! Did you really think that I'm as idiot as I don't see that you're in love with someone?
- Hey.. Abby..let's talk about it..
- I don't wanna talk with you! NEVER EVER AGAIN! You hear me? That WAS our relationship and now is THE END! No more lies, no more stress and of course no more b*tches..I hate you! Now go and pack your clothes fast! If you aren't going to leave, I promise I'll call the police!
- But.. baby.. please.. is it because of the soccer match?
- SHUT UP! Go and do what I ordered to you!
Abby thought that finally she did a great job, because Richard was packing his clothes without words. For a second Abby thought that perhaps he changed..but she forgot it very fast. When Richard left the apartament, Abby felt fantastic.
" Finally alone.."- she whispered and fell in the bed happily. " It's like a dream! I can do what I want again.. hmm.. Bye-bye Lord Devil!" - she smiled.