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Post by amandarose414 on May 23, 2006 9:33:23 GMT 10
This is a Luka/Abby and Ray/Neela story. It is the first fan fiction that I have ever done so I hope you guys enjoy it! here goes!!... Stuck On You It had been raining all night and all morning as Abby lay in bed. Luka had gotten up to make them breakfast. You could hear the rain splashing the windows and the thunder and lightening that were slowly fading in the background. Abby lay in bed wide awake thinking about what a great life she had. she wanted to wake up every morning in Luka's apartment. "Good morning," said a voice from the door. "I made you breakfast." Abby turned around to see Luka carrying a tray full of food toward the bed. "You did this for me? Oh Luka you shouldn't have," said Abby trying to sound surprised sice she knew he was making it for her the moment he got out of bed. "Thank you." "It was my pleasure," said Luka, placing the tray on the bed while Abby sat up straight. "This is delicious Luka," Abby said piling the food in her mouth. When she was done, Luka picked up the tray and took it into the kitchen to be washed. Abby decided that she was better get up and get in the shower because she had to work a shift at County at eight. Slowly, she got out of bed and walked into the bathroom. she got into the shower and just stood there so she could let the warmth of the water massage her body. A couple of minutes later a pair of arms wrapped around her waist. She turned around knowing who she would find. Luka bent down and kissed Abby deeply. Abby returned the kiss and the two fo them played around in the shower together. After many minutes of messing around and bathing each other, they got out and got dressed. "I have to work a shift at eight," Abby called out to Luka who was getting dressed in the other room. "Oh, ok, I'll walk you to the El," Luka replied. Perfect! This would be the perfect time he could go and buy her a ring for tonight. When they were dressed and ready to go they headed to the El. It had finally stopped raining. "So, what do you want to do for dinner tonight?" Luka asked Abby. "Well, I was thinking that maybe we could go to that new Sushi resturant that you have been suggesting," she replied. "Oh, yes that sounds great. I have been wanting to go there again," Luka said smiling. "Ok, so I guess I will see you tonight," Abby said. They had approached the El. Luka pulled Abby into a passionate kiss. "Volim te," said Luka pulling away from the excitement from going to get her ring. "I love you to Luka," said Abby starting toward the El. Great! she thought to herself. Tonight will be the perfect night to tell him the big news! She turned around one last time and waved goodbye to Luka.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 23, 2006 10:01:09 GMT 10
Great start can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Lady_K on May 24, 2006 3:32:09 GMT 10
Lovely!! next update please
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Post by amandarose414 on May 24, 2006 5:42:41 GMT 10
Luka turned around immediately and headed toward Tiffany's. I think I'll call Neela, he thought to himself. She will know Abby's ring size. "Neela? Hey it's Luka," he said. "Oh, hey Dr. Kovac, how are you?" she asked. "I'm fine thanks. Listen I called to ask you something." "Mmhm, ok what?" Neela asked curiously. "Do you know Abby's ring size?" Luka asked. "Yeah, it's a size six, why? Oh my god you are going to propose!" Neela said excitedly. "Yeah, are you sure her size is six?" he asked again. "Yeah, it's the same size as her shoes," Neela replied. "Oh, ok, great thanks Neela." "Anytime Dr. Kovac. Congratulations!" Luka hung up the phone. He was halfway there when a voice behind him said "Hey Kovac." He turned around to see Ray walking toward him. "Where are you headed too?" Ray asked. "To Tiffany's just down the street," Luka replied. "Ah, is tonight the night?" "I'm hoping so," Luka replied with a smile. "I'll see you later Ray, Oh and do me a favor and try not to say anything at work. Gossip travels there faster than you can say go." "Yeah, I know. I'll keep it on the down low," said Ray laughing. "Thanks Ray," Luka said. "Oh and Neela already knows." "Neela? So how many people have you told already?" "Just you and her. I had to call her for Abby's ring size." "Oh, I see. Well good luck." Luka turned back around and started for Tiffany's again. Meanwhile, back at County, things were moving slowly. "I don't think we've had this slow of a day since this place opened," Abby said to Kerry. "Yeah I know, isn't it great," Kerry replied. "It's really nice. But I better shut up or I'll jinx it," Abby said. "Do you know when Neela gets in?" "She should be here anytime now." Abby turned around and headed toward the lounge. She walked into the lounge and went to her locker to find her purse. She grabbed a couple of dollars and headed to the vending machine to grab herself a soda. Not two seconds later she found Neela walking in. "Hey Neela," Abby said. "Hey Abby," Neela replied grinning. Neela gave Abby a quick smile. she knew what was going to be happening to her tonight. "So what are you doing tonight?" Neela asked Abby trying not to look to guilty. "Oh, me and Luka are going to that Sushi place," Abby told her looking suspicious. "Why?" "Oh nothing, just wondering. I've heard good things about their food," Neela said trying to change the subject. "Uh huh," said Abby cautiously. "So anyways, have you talked to Ray lately?" "No, why," Neela asked. "Oh, I was just wondering how he was feeling about you moving out." "Oh, yeah, right. Well I am sure he will be just fine without me," Neela said looking a little sad. "Is something wrong?" Abby asked watching her. "No, I'm fine," Neela said perking back up. "So what are you doing tonight?" Abby asked. "Oh nothing really. I might do a bit of shopping," Neela replied. "I am going to need a whole bunch of new stuff since I am moving out. Most of the time if I didn't have something, Ray would." "Yeah that's the fun thing about being someone's roomy. So have you told Michael that you are moving out yet?" "Yeah I talked to him last night actually," Neela said. Abby could tell that something was wrong. Ever since she had brought up her moving out she seemed to get even more depressed. "Would you like to come to dinner with me and Luka tonight?" Abby asked trying to cheer her up. "Oh no, no, no," Neela said. "I don't want to intrude on your guys plans." "Are you sure?" "Yes, I am positive, Abby." They finally reached the vending machine. "I am going to go put this stuff in my locker, I'll see you later," Neela said and she set off to the lounge. Abby deposited her money in the money slot and punched in the numbers 114 for a Dr. Pepper soda. "Oh, come on. You've gotta be kidding me!" Abby yelled as her soda got stuck. "Damn." "Having a little trouble?" said a voice walking toward her. She turned around and saw Ray. He walked up to the vending machine and kicked it's side. The soda fell down with a thump. "Thanks," Abby said bending down to grab her soda. "Yep, no problem. So, what are you doing tonight?" he asked with a smile. Abby turned around and gave I'm suspicious look. "Why is everyone asking me that?" "Oh, sorry, I was just wondering." "Neela asked me the same thing earlier! Do you guys know something that I don't?" Abby said tapping her soda before she opened it. "No, at least I don't," Ray lied. "But Neela might." "Abby, we have a GSW to the shoulder that we just brought in. We could use your help!" Pratt shouted running after the paramedics. They turned the corner into the trauma room. "OK!" Abby yelled back. "I'll talk to you later Ray," she said running over to the trauma room.
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Post by *Natalie* on May 24, 2006 6:49:58 GMT 10
Great fic!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 24, 2006 7:18:41 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by Tannii on May 24, 2006 8:22:26 GMT 10
Great ! UPDATE!
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Post by lubyforever518 on May 24, 2006 8:49:31 GMT 10
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Post by Natalie on May 24, 2006 11:06:44 GMT 10
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Post by lubyforever518 on May 24, 2006 12:03:26 GMT 10
ummm yeah i did notice! its like the exact same thing but the only difference is that it is by a different person.... weird? i think so!
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Post by megan on May 24, 2006 12:16:54 GMT 10
i think we have a fanfic bandit in our midst! shall i retrieve the pitchforks?
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Post by lubyforever518 on May 24, 2006 13:25:52 GMT 10
i think we have a fanfic bandit in our midst! shall i retrieve the pitchforks? :)hahahaha lol!!!! I'm right behind you!
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Post by amandarose414 on May 24, 2006 13:49:55 GMT 10
Hmm...I don't think I put it on erheadquarters.com. The only other site that I have put it on is www.xanga.com/ERfanfic hmmm...weird..well, I didn't steal it if that's what you guys are saying cuz I just made this stuff up off the top of my head cuz I was bored...hmmm...oh well lol -amanda Glad you guys like it though!
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Post by Natalie on May 25, 2006 4:49:12 GMT 10
Exactly...the FanFic that is almost EXACTLY like in places is mine, A Twist of Fate, which is posted here, on Xanga at www.xanga.com/a_twist_of_fate_er, and where it originated, the ERHQ. Amanda, honey, I don't know if you got my PM, but you've subscribed to and commented on my fic on Xanga, and so I know you've read it. I didn't want to make the confrontation public, but that seems to be what it's coming down to. There are a LOT of similarities between your fic and mine, which I noticed the first time I read the first part. For example: "A Twist of Fate" Completely overwhelmed, Luka didn't know what to do. The only thing he knew was that Abby's ring size was 6. Like her shoes. He had no idea what kind of diamond she'd want, or in what type of setting. At a loss, Luka pulled out his cell phone and called the only person who he thought he could trust. "Hi, Neela?" "Dr. Kovac? Did Weaver put you up to this, because--" "No. She already got Abby. Which is why I need your help. Can you meet me at the Tiffany's on North Michigan in 20 minutes?" "Why? Oh my gosh, you're going to propose! Just a minute. I can't believe this! Yes, yes, I'll be there." "Thank you so much, Neela. I don't know what I'd do without you." "Stuck On You" "Yeah, it's a size six, why? Oh my god you are going to propose!" Neela said excitedly. "Yeah, are you sure her size is six?" he asked again. "Yeah, it's the same size as her shoes," Neela replied. "Oh, ok, great thanks Neela." "Anytime Dr. Kovac. Congratulations!" The bit about the same shoe and ring size I used first. That, and Neela's response to figuring out that Luka's going to propose is nearly identical. I know I didn't copyright the scenario or anything, but I did use it in my fic first. I myself have seen many things in FanFics that I would have liked to have used myself, but I don't because that would be rude to take another author's work like that.
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Post by zelda on May 25, 2006 8:45:29 GMT 10
I hadn't been on this forum for acouple of days and I wanted to do some catching up! I always start with fanfics, that's my fav. part, because I really admire what you,guys are writing! The fan fics are all very different and original, and you finally recognise the style of the writers! I am really surprised to see this plagia!( sorry,it is!) We have, pretty near all of us, read lubyfanforever fic and it is definitely the same stuff! I am feeling a bit disappointed, because this board is great, we all respect eachother and have never practised the bashing which is the disgrace of some er forums! Please keep the fun and frienship we have found here, and which attract fans from all over the world, like me! So I hope it is a simple misunderstanding and no big deal, and lubyfanforever, I think you react with tact and sensibility. Thx for your fics that most people here enjoy so much! The fun and complicity we have developped along this season is precious, and I'd really like to keep the same spirit! So, all talented people, keep on writing all this summer to make our awful waiting nearly acceptable before September! And, of course, there is a warm welcome to all the guys,who are ready to share with us the product of your overactive imagination!
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