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Post by luby2534 on Jun 27, 2006 7:33:29 GMT 10
Great update !!
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Post by lubyfan on Jun 27, 2006 7:56:13 GMT 10
Update soon
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Post by josefine on Jun 27, 2006 8:08:17 GMT 10
Update
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Post by zelda on Jun 27, 2006 8:47:59 GMT 10
A new and talented writer, how nice! Your fic is very original. I always hated Luka's and Abby's nasty break-up, and their ugly words to each other. I couldn't accept that TPTB wanted to cut off everything between them and let them become strangers. It never FIT. So thank you so much, Luka's hangover is both funny and moving and Abby's reaction is just perfect. ( Go, girl!You lead the dance!! The bantering between these two is so natural and realistic. Waiting for the next part which should be kinda hot!( you promise! P. S: are you kidding? your english is amazing! Great work!
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Post by anna982 on Jun 28, 2006 15:55:01 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]UPDATE THIS PLEASE[/glow]
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Post by hollygirl on Jun 28, 2006 23:51:29 GMT 10
please update soon!!!!
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Post by Little Amy on Jun 29, 2006 12:33:12 GMT 10
;)loving it! keep the good job!
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Post by Noora on Jun 29, 2006 23:18:40 GMT 10
WOW. Awesome fic, I really do enjoy reading this. I love drunken Luka ^^ Maybe.. Maybe Luka would like Abby to come with him to Croatia...?
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Post by Andie on Jun 30, 2006 7:08:36 GMT 10
UPDATE PLEEEEEAAASE!!!!
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Post by starbuck on Jun 30, 2006 7:48:33 GMT 10
*************************************************** "I´m doing this my way, so everything that happend in chronological order in the series may not be the case here, I wanna do my own thing" ;D ***************************************************
Abby walked into the Doctor's Lounge and put her belongings in her locker. She shook her hair free of the snowflakes that had covered her head. There was a fierce snowstorm outside, and she knew it was going to be a long shift. Just then, Susan came trough the door.
"Hey" Abby said with a smile on her lips.
"Hi"
"Nasty storm huh?" Abby continued while putting on her lab coat.
"Yeah, no kidding" Susan said smiling back. "We got a guy coming in who slipped and fell with a bad gash to his head"
'Okay, be right out."
Abby placed her stethoscope around her neck and along side Susan she walked out into the ER.
The young mans injury wasn’t that bad, and didn’t take long to attend. It was a pretty calm day so far, so Abby took a break. She thought about trying to find Luka, but then remembered that he wasn’t on today. Kerry had given him the weekend of.
“We got a young women, who’s been assaulted coming in a few”, Carter shouted while running past Abby towards the door.
Abby grabbed her gloves and went right back to work alongside Haleh and Carter. A young woman was brought in covered in blue and swollen wounds around her face and neck.
“Hi, My name’s Haleh, everything is going to be alright. You’re in good hands, I promise" Haleh insured while leering at Carter.
“What’s your name sweetheart?", asked Haleh, taking the woman’s blood pressure.
“Joyce”, the girl answered quietly.
Abby was right her shift had started slow, but was now building up to being anything but calm. Carter wasn’t to happy about the fact that she’d been spending forty five minutes talking to, what turned out to be her her neighbour Joyce, that was brought in after being beaten up by her husband. Abby felt great sympathy for the girl and had promised to help her, but right now she was more stressed over the fact that she had fifteen other patients to help, and that Carter was watching her like a hawk. Abby knew that this wasn’t just a stressed Carter that were pissed because she decided to care a little extra for a patient. He had been acting like this for a while now and it was getting on her nervs. Abby didn’t know what she’d done wrong, but she assumed it had to do with the fact that she´d been given Carter the cold shoulder the last couple of months. He probably thought the two of them were going to date now when Luka was out if the pictures (if he really was?)
Later...
Abby’s shift was ending and she was in a hurry trying to catch the El, when she bumped in to Luka outside Doc Moogo's.
“Oh, hi”, Luka said reaching Abby’s shoulders trying to steady her from the collision.
“Hi, what are doing here?”
“ I came looking for you actually. You’re off, right?"
“Yeah”
“ You seem to be in a hurry, going somewhere?” Luka asked smiling.
“Actually I’m trying to catch the El, I’m in a hurry home, because I’ve promised this girl living next door to find her a place she can stay. She was brought in today; her husband is beating her. “
Luka felt a little knot building in his stomach. Had she changed her mind? Maybe Abby didn’t want to spend the evening with him after all. No, she that could be, she’s just busy. She’s just being Abby; who want to help people, Luka thought.
“Okay, I just thought we could hang out”, Luka tried.
“ Ooh, off course I’d love that, I just need to do this girl a favour” Abby said smiling. God, he looks so cute in that cap. What am I thinking, don’t go there Abby. Our relationship ended for a reason (a stupid one though), he just want support from friend right now, he’s hurting.
“Okey, maybe you could stop by my place tonight then, I’ll order some Thai or something”
“Yeah, I’ll definitely do that, see you then" Abby said rushing by him. Oh, there is no way I can deny it, he’s cute with or without that cap, Abby thought smiling to herself.
Luka remained standing on the street, looking at Abby while she hurried down the street.
God, I can’t wait for tonight. I’m going to test her tonight, to see if I can get any sort of indication of her feelings towards me. God, I prey they changed these last few weeks. I hope she feels like I do, I just have to wait and see, Luka thought to himself while turning around and heading home.
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Post by luby2534 on Jun 30, 2006 7:54:06 GMT 10
Loving your fanfic !!
Please update !!
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Post by hollygirl on Jun 30, 2006 13:12:25 GMT 10
Update soon!!
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Post by anna982 on Jun 30, 2006 14:55:15 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Update reallly soooon[/glow]
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Post by charlieluby on Jul 1, 2006 1:15:01 GMT 10
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Post by charlieluby on Jul 1, 2006 1:15:50 GMT 10
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