Post by inga on Oct 12, 2006 4:20:42 GMT 10
Hi everyone,
I thought I could start my time at this board with a bit of Fanfiction. I have written fanfic before but I never have been brave enough to post it somewhere. So please be nice
This is very spoilerish (including references to 13.1 to 13.10 and beyond) if you don't want to be spoiled don't read any further
First chapter:
Hours of fear
“Luka!!” he heard her shaking voice over the phone and immediately knew that something was awfully wrong. “He has Joe!” Abby was able to say in between sobs and then completely broke up crying. “I am on my way!” the young doctor whispered into the phone hardly loosing his voice from the shook that was running through his veins. “Pratt you got to cover for me, Ames has Joe!” he yelled into one directing. He turned to Jerry to tell him that he should call the police but saw that the clerk was already at it. Before anyone else recognized what was going on Luka was out of the door and on his way to search for Abby. He knew that she wanted to go to the Park with their son and that was probably where this ill man had kidnapped the little boy. “Boze moj, molim te pomoæi nas“ he was praying in Croatian. It wasn’t long before he had found Abby sitting on a park bench. She was shaking and couldn’t stop crying. He covered the last meters between them running as if his life was depending on it. “God Abby! Are you hurt?” was the first he was able to say after he had catched his breath. She just nodded a faint yes and cuddled into his strong arms, crying. “We have to find him Abby. Can you tell me what happened?” he asked softly stroking her hair. He knew that pushing her right now wouldn’t help. While patently waiting for her reply he called Jerry. “Jerry it’s Luka. I have found Abby but I don’t know what happened yet. Have you been able to contact the police?” Luka asked. “They said that you should come to the station house.” Jerry replied. “I, I wasn’t paying attention for a moment and when I wanted to check on him he was gone!” Abby suddenly stammered, the tears still running down her eyes. It was then that Luka recognized a piece of paper in her hand. He carefully took it from her and started to read it to himself his eyes starting to sparkle with anger. “Jerry are you still there? He said into his cell phone after reading the letter. “Yes!” came the voice of the big clerk. Can you send someone to the big fountain to pick up Abby? I need to see the police now. We really have to act fast!”
“Neela is already on her way. She should be with you any minute now.” Jerry said hanging up the phone. “OK Abby, Neela will be here in a second I want you to go with her to the ER!” Luka whispered, hugging Abby tight. She was still apathetic not able to comprehend what just happened. He knew that she needed help now but he also had to go and find their baby. He was glad when he finally saw Neela approaching them. “Please Neela, take her to the ER and get her a psychologist. I need to go to the police and find Joe!” Luka said jumping up. Before he left he took Abby’s face in his hands and looked deep into her eyes. “I promise you, I will find him!”
I thought I could start my time at this board with a bit of Fanfiction. I have written fanfic before but I never have been brave enough to post it somewhere. So please be nice
This is very spoilerish (including references to 13.1 to 13.10 and beyond) if you don't want to be spoiled don't read any further
First chapter:
Hours of fear
“Luka!!” he heard her shaking voice over the phone and immediately knew that something was awfully wrong. “He has Joe!” Abby was able to say in between sobs and then completely broke up crying. “I am on my way!” the young doctor whispered into the phone hardly loosing his voice from the shook that was running through his veins. “Pratt you got to cover for me, Ames has Joe!” he yelled into one directing. He turned to Jerry to tell him that he should call the police but saw that the clerk was already at it. Before anyone else recognized what was going on Luka was out of the door and on his way to search for Abby. He knew that she wanted to go to the Park with their son and that was probably where this ill man had kidnapped the little boy. “Boze moj, molim te pomoæi nas“ he was praying in Croatian. It wasn’t long before he had found Abby sitting on a park bench. She was shaking and couldn’t stop crying. He covered the last meters between them running as if his life was depending on it. “God Abby! Are you hurt?” was the first he was able to say after he had catched his breath. She just nodded a faint yes and cuddled into his strong arms, crying. “We have to find him Abby. Can you tell me what happened?” he asked softly stroking her hair. He knew that pushing her right now wouldn’t help. While patently waiting for her reply he called Jerry. “Jerry it’s Luka. I have found Abby but I don’t know what happened yet. Have you been able to contact the police?” Luka asked. “They said that you should come to the station house.” Jerry replied. “I, I wasn’t paying attention for a moment and when I wanted to check on him he was gone!” Abby suddenly stammered, the tears still running down her eyes. It was then that Luka recognized a piece of paper in her hand. He carefully took it from her and started to read it to himself his eyes starting to sparkle with anger. “Jerry are you still there? He said into his cell phone after reading the letter. “Yes!” came the voice of the big clerk. Can you send someone to the big fountain to pick up Abby? I need to see the police now. We really have to act fast!”
“Neela is already on her way. She should be with you any minute now.” Jerry said hanging up the phone. “OK Abby, Neela will be here in a second I want you to go with her to the ER!” Luka whispered, hugging Abby tight. She was still apathetic not able to comprehend what just happened. He knew that she needed help now but he also had to go and find their baby. He was glad when he finally saw Neela approaching them. “Please Neela, take her to the ER and get her a psychologist. I need to go to the police and find Joe!” Luka said jumping up. Before he left he took Abby’s face in his hands and looked deep into her eyes. “I promise you, I will find him!”