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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 28, 2006 0:05:44 GMT 10
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Post by zacefron4life on Dec 28, 2006 4:54:19 GMT 10
The long awaited.... Chapter 3!Abby stepped into the doorway and was immediately swept away by the crowd. She stood on her Tipp toes to try and see over everybody’s heads, but she was too small. Suddenly a hand touched her shoulder and she screamed. “Sorry I didn’t mean to scare you.” The boy said a little embarrassed. “Oh, that’s okay. I’m uh, Abigail by the way, but you can call me Abby.” She said, sticking out her hand. “I’m Luka. Nice to meet you.” He said, shaking her hand. Abby smiled shyly and looked down at the floor. “So um, how do you know Leo?” She asked, breaking the silence. “We actually just moved here from Croatia. Yeah, and he came down and said hi to us while we were moving in.” Luka answered. “Oh, well welcome to Minnesota. Do you uh, wanna go somewhere else and talk?” Abby said, scratching her nose. “Um, oka-” He replied, before being cut off by screaming.
“Abigail Wyczenski! Where are you! I know you are at this party! I called Leo! Abigail!” Maggie screamed, pushing her way through the crowd. Abby grabbed Luka’s hand and bolted towards the door. “Where are we- whoa!” He yelled, following Abby. “Just run!” She screamed. Everybody was of course looking at them by now, but they were already out the door. Together the two of them ran down the hall, jumped a flight of stairs, exploded through the doors and hauled ass down the street.
“Where are we going?” Luka asked, still running with Abby. “I don’t know,” She said, “But running calms me down.” And with that, Abby took off ahead of Luka. He smiled and ran to catch up with her. At a nearby park, Abby collapsed onto the ground out of breath. Panting for air, Luka laid down next to her. “Jesus you can run Abby.” He said, still winded. “Practice.” She said, breathing in the crisp winter air. Luka was amazed by this beautiful yet mysterious girl lying in front of him. Once Abby caught her breath, she rolled over and smiled at him. His heart jumped. God her smile was amazing.
Wanting to know more about her, he asked “So, who um was that?” Abby looked down at the ground. Picking at the dead grass she replied softly, “My mother. But you wouldn’t want to know about her.” Luka blushed. “Sorry I didn’t mean to..” Abby waved her hand at him. “That’s okay. It’s just that I uh, I never talk about her.” He moved closer to her and lifted her chin with his finger. “You can talk to me. I promise I’m a good listener.” She laughed. “I wouldn’t want to burden you with my problems. And I assure you, I have many.” He shook his head. “No more than anyone else.” Abby tilted her head and looked at him. “Okay, but if you want me to stop, just say the word.”
So she opened up and told him everything. About Maggie and her manic episodes, how she has to take care of her brother, about her father and how he left when she was little, and of course how her mother tried to kill her once. Luka just sat there and listened. When she finally finished, he pulled her into his arms and comforted her while she cried. He appeared calm and understanding on the outside, but inside he was wondering how exactly she deals with all of this.
After a little while he told her a little bit about himself. How they moved to the US because his mother died in Croatia, how he and his brother fight constantly, and how he wants to be a doctor when he grows up. Abby paid attention to all he had to say. When he was finished she looked up at him and stared into his eyes. All of a sudden Luka bent down and kissed her sweetly on the lips. She returned the kiss and moved her hands to his hair. When she pulled back, his face turned red and he apologized. “Don’t be…” She whispered into his ear before kissing him again.
In one swift motion Luka pushed Abby onto her back and got on top of her. He rested his weight on his elbows so he wouldn’t hurt her. After all she was, well, tiny. His hands were in her hair and her hands were on his back. Suddenly a group of girls walked by and stopped when they saw them. “Abby. Is that you?” One of the girls asked. Luka quickly got off of Abby and turned bright red as she tried to fix her shirt. “It is her.” All the girls started to whisper. “Just when I think you have no game…you surprise me Abby.” The girl says, looking at Luka and smiling. All the other girls start to laugh.
“And just when I think you can’t be any more of a bitch. You surprise me too Bridget.” Abby replied clenching her fists. “Oh, ouch. No need to get rude Abby. See you at school.” Bridget said, blowing Luka a kiss and striding off with her followers. “Who were they?” Luka asked, glancing at Abby. “Bridget the Midget and her bitch clique. Stay far far away from them at school.” She replied, standing up. “Well I should be getting home.” Luka nodded in agreement, a little disappointed.
“But I can call you tomorrow.” He smiled and nodded his head again. “Definitely. Um, I just got a new cell phone. You can be my first number in.” Luka said, handing her his cell. “I’ll give you my number if you give me yours.” Abby said, handing him hers. When they were finished, Luka walked Abby into the building and gave her a kiss goodbye. “I’ll see you tomorrow.” She said, walking away. “I’ll be counting the seconds.” Abby smiled to herself and sighed. “I think I’m in love…” She thought, walking into her apartment. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------Hope you liked!
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 28, 2006 5:19:06 GMT 10
like? I LOVED IT!!! Update soon!!!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 28, 2006 5:42:48 GMT 10
Love it! It was so good!!!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 28, 2006 7:00:26 GMT 10
wow this is really great and sooo cute please update soon
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Post by Noora on Dec 28, 2006 7:00:49 GMT 10
First when I saw there was an update I did a little whine and put my hands in front of my mouth and had this big smile spreading on my face. That's how desperately I waited for the update. (pathetic..need to get a l ife..) Anyways, about the update. It was so great! God I had this smile all the time reading this. Loved the awkwardness between them. And since I'm the same age as her, I know all about it. Teen-Abby and Luka, could it be more cuter?? The connection between them, in such sort knowing..Perfect. Aw the whole cell thing, she being his first number in..lovelyyy. Gotta read the present chapters, while waiting the new ones! This is one of my favourite fics and I can't wait where this is gonna lead into!
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 28, 2006 9:58:15 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by zacefron4life on Dec 28, 2006 16:18:31 GMT 10
Alright kids, since I have gotten all these wonderful replies from all ya'll I have decided to update twice in one day! (I know it's not really wednesday anymore but you know what I mean) Do not laugh because this is an accomplishment for me...usually I am sitting at my computer for 4 hours writing an update. Keep the replies coming, I love reading what you girls have to say! BTW sorry it's so short! Chapter 4
Abby walked into the apartment quietly, making sure not to disturb anyone, especially Maggie who was sleeping on a nearby couch. After she got to her room and closed the door, Abby burst out laughing. For once in her life she had done something a normal teen was supposed to experience. "Am I really in love?" She whispered to herself, falling down onto the bed.
Suddenly, Maggie burst through the door and started screaming at Abby. "How dare you just leave the house without telling me! And you knew I was looking for you at that party! And then you run off with some, some boy! How could you be so stupid!?!" She yelled, pointing a finger at Abby.
"I have to deal with your crap every day of my life! For once, for once, would it kill you to let me have some fun!?!" She yelled back, putting her headphones on and turning the volume on high. "I forbid you to see him." Maggie said, walking out the door. "So now you want to be the mother!?!" Abby shouted over her music. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Back at Luka's apartment, he and his father were making dinner in the kitchen together. Josef Kovac looked over at his son and noticed he was more jumpy than usual. "Why so excited today Luka?" He asked, laying a hand on his shoulder.
"I met this amazing girl today Tata. She is beautiful, smart, and is soo mysterious. They don't make them like that in Croatia." Luka replied, smiling from ear to ear. "Invite her over for dinner tomorrow. I want to meet this djevojka (girl). Josef said, happy that his son had finally found some happiness. "Yes Tata. I think I will." ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Abby awoke to a loud tapping on her window. "What the hell?" She said aloud, glancing at the clock. "It's 2:11 in the morning. Go away." She whispered, pulling the blankets over her head. Still the tapping continued. After about 10 minutes Abby flung off the covers and walked to her window. "What?!?" She yelled, sticking her head out the window.
Luka walked up to her and kissed her quickly. "I'm sorry to wake you so early, but I just couldn't wait until tomorrow to see you." He whispered. "Luka you look freezing, come on in here." She said, helping him through the window.
Abby closed the window and turned back to him. "Luka you shouldn't be here." She said, closing her door. "I know it's early but-" He started. "No it's not that. If my mother catches you here she'll kill you." Luka looked down at the floor. "I've been thinking a lot and I know this is quick but um, I uh, I love you Abby." She looked into his eyes, surprised by his statement.
"Luka..I...but we...for...1day...and...we don't even really...know each other." She blurted out. Luka put a finger to her lips. "You don't have to say a word." ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ All I can tell you guys is that there is a Very Big twist coming up... [/size]
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 28, 2006 20:26:55 GMT 10
LOVE IT IT WAS GREAT
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Post by Noora on Dec 28, 2006 20:30:59 GMT 10
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Post by zelda on Dec 29, 2006 11:01:54 GMT 10
hi, miss zacefron4life, ( have you got a shorter name for us, who don't want to mispronounce it??? ) I really love the huge gap between Luka's and Abby's family background. Yellings, shoutings, screamings....and a shy teenage girl, with lots of insecurities... (hopefully brave Leo is here!) And a quiet, loving family for Luka who communicates so well with his father. Really enjoyed the first chapters. So cute to have Abby open her window in the middle of the night! I personally have lovely memories like that , and am smiling nicely to my computer! THX for letting me be 16 again!
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Post by jadestar on Jan 2, 2007 12:48:00 GMT 10
aww very cute story... love teenage Luka and Abby can't wait for an update
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Post by Noora on Jan 2, 2007 22:16:43 GMT 10
When are you updating?
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Post by strizzy on Jan 2, 2007 22:48:11 GMT 10
Nice! Really like it!!
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Post by charlieluby on Jan 3, 2007 5:33:59 GMT 10
Awww! Mega sweet! x x
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