Post by Noora on Feb 11, 2007 8:06:40 GMT 10
Okies, I got an idea (little from my own life, actually) and tried to write it down.. And here's what I got.
There's only gonna be one chapter after this, I think, so it's a short fic.
Feedback, good or bad, is highly appreciated.
Note: Abby and Luka are both 10 years old.
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First Sight, First Moment, First Love
It was yet another beginning of a boring year at school. Abby looked out of the window tiredly.
The weather was getting colder and the leaves were falling from the trees.
They let the wind lift them up in the air, and bend around til they fell to the ground. Autumn was here.
She closed her eyes and thought about last summer. The salty ocean, warm breeze in her hair...
The trip to their relatives had been perfect, Maggie had been tolerable.
Lovely, even. But when they came back to Minnesota, everything went back to normal.
It was one of the "What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas" -things.
Abby yawned and woke up from her daydream. It was time to listen.
"Okey, silence please! I know you have lots of things to tell to your friends after the long summer break"
Mrs. Orson said looking at the gossiping girls in the back resentfully,
"But I have an announcement to make. Class, we're gonna have a new student this year."
Everybody stopped talking. If not stopped, lowered their voices at least.
"I knew you would be interested" she laughed softly.
Then, there was a silent knock on the door, that was loud enough to hear, but not that loud it would disturb anyone.
A perfect knock.
Mrs. Orson walked, opened the door, and let the new student step in. Abby gulped.
In front of her eyes was the most handsome boy she had ever seen. He was amazing.
Something so nice about him came across.. something so direct and adorable.
And she didn't even know his name yet.
"Everyone, this is Luka Kovash" Mrs. Orson said.
"Kovac" the boy corrected and grinned. Abby couldn't help without smiling to herself.
"I am so sorry" Mrs. Orson said with ashamed tone.
Luka nodded in understanding.
Probably wasn't the first time someone misspelled his name.
"Luka, there are few seats, just pick one and sit, please, so we can get this school year started!"
Mrs. Orson said and sat behind her desk.
Luka took a look at the class in front of him and with determined steps walked to Abby's direction.
"Is this seat taken?" he asked politely and pointed at the seat next to her.
Abby just shook her head and stared right into boy's green eyes. They were beautiful.
Luka sat to the chair, dropped his backpack to the floor and flashed a shy smile at her.
"Hi"
"Hi" Abby replied.
"I am Luka" he said and offered his pinky under the desk.
"Abby" she said and wrapped her pinky around his.
"Nice to meet you" he replied and they shook their pinkies.
Abby chuckled. Luka looked at her little seriously and smiled.
From that very moment it was period.
She was in love.
There's only gonna be one chapter after this, I think, so it's a short fic.
Feedback, good or bad, is highly appreciated.
Note: Abby and Luka are both 10 years old.
--
First Sight, First Moment, First Love
It was yet another beginning of a boring year at school. Abby looked out of the window tiredly.
The weather was getting colder and the leaves were falling from the trees.
They let the wind lift them up in the air, and bend around til they fell to the ground. Autumn was here.
She closed her eyes and thought about last summer. The salty ocean, warm breeze in her hair...
The trip to their relatives had been perfect, Maggie had been tolerable.
Lovely, even. But when they came back to Minnesota, everything went back to normal.
It was one of the "What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas" -things.
Abby yawned and woke up from her daydream. It was time to listen.
"Okey, silence please! I know you have lots of things to tell to your friends after the long summer break"
Mrs. Orson said looking at the gossiping girls in the back resentfully,
"But I have an announcement to make. Class, we're gonna have a new student this year."
Everybody stopped talking. If not stopped, lowered their voices at least.
"I knew you would be interested" she laughed softly.
Then, there was a silent knock on the door, that was loud enough to hear, but not that loud it would disturb anyone.
A perfect knock.
Mrs. Orson walked, opened the door, and let the new student step in. Abby gulped.
In front of her eyes was the most handsome boy she had ever seen. He was amazing.
Something so nice about him came across.. something so direct and adorable.
And she didn't even know his name yet.
"Everyone, this is Luka Kovash" Mrs. Orson said.
"Kovac" the boy corrected and grinned. Abby couldn't help without smiling to herself.
"I am so sorry" Mrs. Orson said with ashamed tone.
Luka nodded in understanding.
Probably wasn't the first time someone misspelled his name.
"Luka, there are few seats, just pick one and sit, please, so we can get this school year started!"
Mrs. Orson said and sat behind her desk.
Luka took a look at the class in front of him and with determined steps walked to Abby's direction.
"Is this seat taken?" he asked politely and pointed at the seat next to her.
Abby just shook her head and stared right into boy's green eyes. They were beautiful.
Luka sat to the chair, dropped his backpack to the floor and flashed a shy smile at her.
"Hi"
"Hi" Abby replied.
"I am Luka" he said and offered his pinky under the desk.
"Abby" she said and wrapped her pinky around his.
"Nice to meet you" he replied and they shook their pinkies.
Abby chuckled. Luka looked at her little seriously and smiled.
From that very moment it was period.
She was in love.
