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Post by smile90 on Mar 7, 2007 0:31:05 GMT 10
great!!! update soon!!
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Post by strizzy on Mar 7, 2007 4:03:24 GMT 10
Nice update!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Mar 11, 2007 20:13:07 GMT 10
Moments in time. Luka.“What?” I snap out of my daze “nothing sweetie just watching you is that ok?” I smile leaning down and planting a kiss on her forehead. “Stop watching me I’m fine really Luka!” I know she is fine but he is still out there somewhere and she doesn’t know I don’t have the heart to tell her she is been so brave coming back to work “I know I’m sorry you shouldn’t be so beautiful” I take her chart and walk towards the trauma area. “Crawler, you’re still cooking tonight mister!” She laughs and then spins on her toes heading towards the lounge so I quickly rush back over to the main desk to Frank “hey Frank do me a favour and just keep an eye on Abby?” I ask him. “Do I look like a child minder Kovac?” I switch the computer off where he is playing a card game “just do it Frank see how is watching her who talks to her please…without her knowing would be good too!” I turn the screen back on “or I take this out forever!” I warn him grabbing my charts again and heading to my first destination before she comes out of the lounge and sees me. Abby.He takes me chart then heads to the trauma rooms “Crawler your still cooking tonight mister!” he isn’t getting out of cooking it’s his turn. I smile watching him for a few seconds before spinning around and heading to the lounge I need a coffee fix this morning I don’t know what’s wrong with me I can’t get myself moving. “Hey Ab’s that’s for you.” I see Ray coming out as I’m going in “what is it Ray?” I ask seeing a red box sitting on top of the table. “I dunno must be from lover doc you lucky bugger.” Luka“Hey your such a crawler your make us all look weak.” I’m confused “huh?” what on earth is he talking about this morning “you had your coffee fix?” I laugh. “The lounge the big red present on the table for Abby…” I don’t let him finish my charts drop to the floor and I run towards the lounge as quickly as possible. “I was joking Luka I think it’s sweet you guys are in love…” I slam my hand into the door “no Abby…” I shout as the door opens I see her pulling on the ribbon.” “What, why?” I walk in and grab her from the waist pulling her back into my chest I move her away from the box “it’s not from me” I whisper in her ear. “Then who?” She spins around and crawls into my chest she doesn’t need me to answer she already knows “it’s ok I need you to go outside ok?” I lift her chin making her look into my eyes. “But?” I rub her cheek “please sweetie?” she nods her head and walks towards the door still trying to hold onto my hand, I wait for her to go and the door slam shut before moving closer to the box I gently tug on the ribbon stopping for a second to think. BANG!
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Post by marioh on Mar 11, 2007 21:10:13 GMT 10
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Post by smile90 on Mar 11, 2007 23:58:04 GMT 10
BANG?? What does this mean??
I wanna know... NOW!!! so.. UPDATE!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Mar 12, 2007 1:31:18 GMT 10
NOO!!!! You can't end on a BANG!!
Update soon natalie x
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Post by luby2534 on Mar 12, 2007 3:19:17 GMT 10
BANG ??
What the hell ??
Get back here right now...we need to know !
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Post by ERFanRach on Mar 12, 2007 4:47:23 GMT 10
UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Post by strizzy on Mar 12, 2007 5:01:00 GMT 10
BANG? What does BANG mean here? ;D Please update soon!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Mar 14, 2007 1:04:28 GMT 10
Moments in time. Luka.“I was joking Luka I think it’s sweet you guys are in love…” I slam my hand into the door “no Abby…” I shout as the door opens I see her pulling on the ribbon.” “What, why?” I walk in and grab her from the waist pulling her back into my chest I move her away from the box “it’s not from me” I whisper in her ear. “Then who?” She spins around and crawls into my chest she doesn’t need me to answer she already knows “it’s ok I need you to go outside ok?” I lift her chin making her look into my eyes. “But?” I rub her cheek “please sweetie?” she nods her head and walks towards the door still trying to hold onto my hand, I wait for her to go and the door slam shut before moving closer to the box I gently tug on the ribbon stopping for a second to think. BANG!Abby.BANG!The sound ring in my ears I lose a breath then quickly make a run for the lounge door only to be held back I can’t move someone is stopping me from moving “please let me go please” I turn around and see Greg holding me “please Greg” I slam my fists into his chest finally breaking down into tears I cave resting my head on his shoulder “Luka…” I whisper. “Shhh Abby I can’t let you go shhh.” I push away from his chest the need to see Luka to make sure he is ok over comes me and I find the force to pull away from him “Luka” I run into the lounge and see him laid flat on the floor “Luka, baby can you hear me?” I run to his side kneels down I turn him over. “Ouch that f**king hurt!” I let a breath of air slip my lips “oh god” I look up and see the window in the lounge is broken he must have thrown it out as it went off. “Is anyone hurt outside?” I shake my head crawling closer to him I pull him into my arms “no nobody” I whisper as the door slams open. “I’m a doctor I need to get past move.” I turn and look that’s when I see Greg pushing past the fireman “he’s ok Greg” I shout standing up. “Yeah you know me to anything for a bit of attention!” Luka.I hold my head wrapping my arm around her shoulder getting her out of the lounge “hey I told ya we would get a new lounge this year” I pat Greg’s shoulder walking past. “Hey boss I tried to keep her out I had hold of her I swear!” I laugh limping to the desk “I believe ya Greg hundreds wouldn’t” he pulls the gurney closer so I can sit down “Frank!” I shout laying down “what happened to watching? I’m so taking that f**king computer!” I hear him rushing around. “You side watch her not watch the guy bringing boxes in.” I sit up quickly “did you see him frank?” he nods his head looking at Abby then me. “I think it was Brian but I’m not sure.”
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Post by ERFanRach on Mar 14, 2007 4:47:04 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by smile90 on Mar 14, 2007 4:56:04 GMT 10
great update...
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Post by *Natalie* on Mar 14, 2007 7:18:24 GMT 10
Great update Glad that bang didn't turn out too bad natalie x
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Post by luby2534 on Mar 15, 2007 6:02:57 GMT 10
Phew...you really had us going there .
Pleased everyone is ok.
Update again real soon !
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Mar 16, 2007 5:13:50 GMT 10
Moments in time. Luka.I hold my head wrapping my arm around her shoulder getting her out of the lounge “hey I told ya we would get a new lounge this year” I pat Greg’s shoulder walking past. “Hey boss I tried to keep her out I had hold of her I swear!” I laugh limping to the desk “I believe ya Greg hundreds wouldn’t” he pulls the gurney closer so I can sit down “Frank!” I shout laying down “what happened to watching? I’m so taking that f**king computer!” I hear him rushing around. “You side watch her not watch the guy bringing boxes in.” I sit up quickly “did you see him frank?” he nods his head looking at Abby then me. “I think it was Brian but I’m not sure.” Abby.“I think it was Brian but I’m not sure.” Brian no way he is “he’s in…” I begin to say looking at Luka but his face is saying other wise “he isn’t in Jail?” I ask him swallowing hard as he shakes his head no gently. “He got away.” I bite down on my bottom lip shaking my head I look at him in disbelieve “you knew and kept that from me?” I ask him pushing hi back down as he starts to get up “I can’t believe you Luka!” I spin on my heels and storm away heading to the lounge I remember what happened then slamming my hand into my head I jog outside. “Abby I’m sorry Ab’s?” Running outside the fresh air hits me hard and I reach for the trash can to empty my lunch into it. “That’s just wrong lady.” Wiping my mouth I brush my hair back away from my eyes “Just go away I swear to god if…” I spin around and see Luka standing near the doors “just leave me alone” I knew he was there before he knew I knew. “I can looking after you I didn’t want you to be scared.” I try walking away but I have far too much to say, “looking after me? Ha yeah you mean you had every f**ker watching me how am I meant to look after myself if I don’t know Luka!” I can’t believe him. “I’m sorry I really thought I was looking after you I thought if you didn’t know he couldn’t hurt you I didn’t want to upset you.” Luka.“Looking after me? Ha yeah you mean you had every f**ker watching me how am I meant to look after myself if I don’t know Luka!” She has a point “I’m sorry I really thought I was looking after you I thought if you didn’t know he couldn’t hurt you I didn’t want to upset you” she doesn’t look happy or that impressed so I decide to walk away and let her calm down “I’m sorry” I tell her. “Sorry isn’t enough.” She says before storming past me leaving me in a daze watching people coming and going from the ER.
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