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Post by debsxx2006xx on Jan 11, 2007 4:40:13 GMT 10
Moments in time. LukaChristmas 2002I watch her walk into Susan’s bedroom and decide it’s now or never “hi” I say edging into the room finding her looking for her coat. “Hi.” Short and sweet “you going?” oh way to go Luka now you look dumb as well as drunk. “Yeah it’s getting late…oh somebody knows you pretty well.” She points at the fluffy dice hanging over my shoulder “what did you get?” I ask playing dumb once again. She turns away from me for a few seconds spinning back around with her present which I take from her and turn the clicker watch me she waits with the cutest smile a cross her face. “Are you alright?” She asks me as the music starts to play from the snow globe “we don’t talk much any more” I get right to the point “like we don’t know what to say” she stars into my eyes. “We should fix that.” She says as she nods her head turning back away from me leaving my staring helplessly at her. “We could get a cup of coffee or something or you could come over for dinner carter orders up a mean pizza.” I ignore her words as she shuffles throw the coast I reach out and rub the back of my hand up and down her arm “I miss you Abby” I bare all. “Em ok I’m going to have a wild guess and say you have been drinking.” I back away slightly I didn’t come in here to fight “so” I back away and head towards the door. “So? Maybe we should talk about this some other time.” I stand near the door “you don’t look happy” her head flies up meeting my eye line. “I’m happy.” He crosses her arms getting defensive “that’s good I want you to be happy I’m just saying if your not” I want you back I’ll look after you this time ok so that doesn’t come out. “I should go.” She storms towards me holding her coat but she stops in front of me taking the snow globe from me “I made mistakes a lot of mistakes” she grips the globe. “Don’t make another one.”Christmas 2005“Ahhhhh” I burst out laughing watching as she slams the phone down “what’s up good looking?” I ask lean against the desk. “Good looking? What you after?” I don’t answer I just lay my hand out for her to carry on “come on what’s the Ahhhhh for” I try to copy her. “Ray won’t work for me so it’s looks like I’m stuck in this hell hole tonight.” I hand her a chart “you and me both” she tilts her head and smiles at me “hell it’s better then been home alone” I smile walking away. “I suppose your company is better then nothing.” I laugh walking towards the trauma area “cheers Abby I love you too” god I wish I could say that without it been a joke.
Hey guys hope you like?? Leave me feed back Juat to let you know when it's like this i'm a memory and when it's not it's the present day.
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Post by <3 Luby II 2 <3 on Jan 11, 2007 4:43:40 GMT 10
Nice start!
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Post by Real Dream on Jan 11, 2007 5:07:21 GMT 10
I love it so far!! And was the last scene from season 11??
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Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Jan 11, 2007 5:07:45 GMT 10
i like the start! go on!
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Post by Lady_K on Jan 11, 2007 5:30:29 GMT 10
I like it a lot!!! Keep on writing
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 11, 2007 6:03:05 GMT 10
Like it very much!!! Keep going!
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Post by daniella on Jan 11, 2007 6:06:24 GMT 10
good start... Keep going... Dani
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Post by *Natalie* on Jan 11, 2007 7:19:06 GMT 10
Great start debs Always love your stuff natalie x
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Post by luby2534 on Jan 11, 2007 7:23:29 GMT 10
I cant believe i nearly missed this !!
I like it already !!
Please update really soon !!
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 11, 2007 7:57:02 GMT 10
this is really good please kee it going
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Jan 12, 2007 4:29:36 GMT 10
Moments in time. AbbyI walk into the lounge and head straight to my locker I can’t believe he didn’t remember not that I wanted him to but well he should right I mean we dated and were good friends “Hey you off.” I turn around from my locker and I’m faced with Luka “no I’m just standing here putting my coat on for the crack” I smile at his stupidity. “Oh well just I was wondering if you wanted to grab a coffee.” Is he asking me out on a date? No he got over me, we got over each other along time ago I mean were friends really good friends or maybe he has remembered…no your being stupid quickly answer him “sorry I have a date with my couch” I smile walking towards the door. “Oh well I wouldn’t want to come between you and the couch see ya later I guess.” He walks to his locker no guess he hasn’t remembered “I’ll wait you can walk me out” I stand holding the door handle as he quickly grabs his coat. “My pleasure.” He takes the door holding it open for me before following me out “Night guys” I shout back I know people are watching us. “Good night Abby…Luka.” Summer 2003I finally make it up stairs to see Luka but when I get to his room it’s empty and a suddenly get a feeling of sadness but why I don’t know why I’m feeling like this. “He left…” His voice it’s him I spin around seeing him a stupid smile spreads across me face as I walk towards him “what are you doing?” I ask. “I just need to stretch my legs…it’s good to see you, you look great.” I look him up and down and I know what to see I always have with him “you look like hell” I laugh.Early January 2006. We walk out the main doors with a word I don’t know what to say “so how are you?” I ask finding my voice. “Good…you?” I tilt my head to face him as we walk “I’m good” I smile god I hope I didn’t upset him by turning him down. “That’s good.” Were at the end of the street “OK well I’ll see you tomorrow” he’s about to go one way and me the other all I have to do is say something but I smile and start to walk away. “Good night.” He calls out making me turn back once last time “good night Luka” I cross my arms and speed up a little. “Oh Hey…Happy birthday by the way.” I turn back and smile holding my arms up in the air “you remembered?” I ask playfully. “When it comes to you I never forget.” My smile grows bigger as I spin back around and head towards the EL “thanks see you tomorrow” I huff at myself then climb one step at a time.
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Post by <3 Luby II 2 <3 on Jan 12, 2007 4:39:39 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by luby2534 on Jan 12, 2007 4:42:24 GMT 10
Yahooo!! My 1000th post and i saved it just for you !!
You know i love all your fanfics and this one is no different.
Please update soon !!
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 12, 2007 5:02:19 GMT 10
that was sweet, I hope they come together soon please update soon and btw congrats to your 1,000th post luby2534
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Post by *Natalie* on Jan 12, 2007 5:48:03 GMT 10
aww great update Glad he remembered natalie x
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