~Bel Vezer~
Countess of Luby
Guru of Sluttiness
Posts: 166
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Post by ~Bel Vezer~ on Oct 4, 2006 4:46:47 GMT 10
It's not awful but that last chapter especially, was very choppy and hard to follow. Is English your first language?
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 4, 2006 5:11:12 GMT 10
Yeah!!! I have changed it I don't like people not liking my fanfictions so i have changed it around I hope it's up to your standards and you can read more.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 4, 2006 5:26:34 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 4, 2006 6:47:48 GMT 10
Great update as always natalie x
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Post by maggie on Oct 4, 2006 6:49:32 GMT 10
Yeah!!! I have changed it I don't like people not liking my fanfictions so i have changed it around I hope it's up to your standards and you can read more. hey, i think it's good and i'm enjoying it a lot, so go easy on yourself. i've had to give up on reading some fics before because i'm a grammar stickler and it'll drive me crazy, but i'm still reading, so you're safe. trust me, i am the most anal-retentive person about grammar, so i wouldn't lie.
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 4, 2006 8:03:51 GMT 10
Love it!!
Update Soon!!
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Post by luby2534 on Oct 4, 2006 21:48:56 GMT 10
Please update more im hooked already !!
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Post by strizzy on Oct 4, 2006 23:01:29 GMT 10
Nice start! Looking forward to reading more!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 4, 2006 23:10:59 GMT 10
"hey, i think it's good and i'm enjoying it a lot, so go easy on yourself. i've had to give up on reading some fics before because i'm a grammar stickler and it'll drive me crazy, but i'm still reading, so you're safe. trust me, i am the most anal-retentive person about grammar, so i wouldn't lie. "Thanks Maggie The comments have put me off a bit i can't seem to do another chapter i keep trashing it
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Lady_K
Marquise of Luby
Posts: 235
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Post by Lady_K on Oct 4, 2006 23:33:12 GMT 10
Oooh I love it, so what if u make a grammar mistake! It's a luby fanfiction not a grammar test Keep writing
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Post by jaana on Oct 5, 2006 0:22:49 GMT 10
Great update! Another soon.
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 5, 2006 5:12:08 GMT 10
yeah I love it too and it's really great and sweet so please update soon
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Post by luby2534 on Oct 5, 2006 18:57:48 GMT 10
Dont be so hard on yourself. You know how i feel about your fanfics. I'm already hooked. You have to keep going. Please please please update soon !!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 6, 2006 5:14:12 GMT 10
yeah please keep going
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Post by jadestar on Oct 7, 2006 2:53:02 GMT 10
great update - and it is easy to read - so don't worry and go on!!!!
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