Post by xbostonxbabyx on Sept 2, 2006 13:56:24 GMT 10
Hey guys it's xBoStOnxbAbYx! I got an idea for a fic and I decided to post it! Please reply and tell me what you think! Hope you like it!
x Girls Just Wanna Have Fun x
In this fic Abby has a 16 year old daughter, Jacqui, who she had when she was 20. Abby and Richard got married at the age of 18. Abby caught Richard cheating and filed for divorce a month before she found out she was pregnant. She told him about Jacqui and hasn't heard from him since. She is a 4th year resident at County. (Don't worry, Luka plays into this eventually!)
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Abby awoke to banging outside her apartment. "Damn construction! I'm gonna kill who ever the hell that is!" She got out of bed and walked into the kitchen. To her surprise Jacqui was already out there. "Hey, what are you doing up?" Abby asked pouring herself a cup of coffee. "Take a wild guess." Abby cocked her head to the side and raised an eyebrow at her daughter.
"Want to go kill him with me?"
Jacqui smiled and replied, "I'd love to, but my PopTarts are ready and I'm hungry."
"We have PopTarts? Since when do we have PopTarts?"
Abby started looking through all the cabinets. Ever since she started eating PopTarts when she was pregnant, there was no stopping Abby once she heard the word. Jacqui rolled her eyes and gave Abby one of hers. "I bought a pack yesterday on the way home from cheerleading." "Oh." She said taking a bite out of the warm pastry. Abby sat down on the couch in the living room and flipped on the TV. Jacqui joined her, and they curled up on the couch with a blanket.
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"Hey kid, how bout we go get some real food?" Abby yelled to Jacqui from the kitchen.
"Great! I'm starved. I mean you ate half of my breakfast."
"Hey you gave that to me!"
"Only because you were going psycho looking for them!"
"Fine, let's get outta here." Abby said grabbing her keys.
10 minutes later they arrived at Doc Magoos. They were quickly seated by a smiling hostess. "Your server should be right with you." She said handing them two menus and walking away.
"So what are we going to do today?" Jacqui asked while looking at her menu.
"Um, Susan and I were going to go shopping for her wedding today. You can come if you want."
"Yea that sounds good."
They were interrupted by their waiter. "Hi my name is Tripp and I'll be your server today. What can I get you ladies?" He asked, taking out a pad of paper and a pen.
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Two hours later Susan Lewis arrived at Abby's apartment. "Suze be right out!" Abby called from the bathroom where she was blow drying her hair. "Yup!" Susan called back. Jacqui came out a minute later closing her cell phone.
"Hey Susan." Jacqui said giving her a hug.
"Hey Jaq. You look great."
"Thank you. As do you!"
"Well I try my best!"
Abby walked out and greeted Susan before all 3 of them got into Abby's car and drove away.
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So what do you guys think? Should I keep going?
x Girls Just Wanna Have Fun x
In this fic Abby has a 16 year old daughter, Jacqui, who she had when she was 20. Abby and Richard got married at the age of 18. Abby caught Richard cheating and filed for divorce a month before she found out she was pregnant. She told him about Jacqui and hasn't heard from him since. She is a 4th year resident at County. (Don't worry, Luka plays into this eventually!)
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Abby awoke to banging outside her apartment. "Damn construction! I'm gonna kill who ever the hell that is!" She got out of bed and walked into the kitchen. To her surprise Jacqui was already out there. "Hey, what are you doing up?" Abby asked pouring herself a cup of coffee. "Take a wild guess." Abby cocked her head to the side and raised an eyebrow at her daughter.
"Want to go kill him with me?"
Jacqui smiled and replied, "I'd love to, but my PopTarts are ready and I'm hungry."
"We have PopTarts? Since when do we have PopTarts?"
Abby started looking through all the cabinets. Ever since she started eating PopTarts when she was pregnant, there was no stopping Abby once she heard the word. Jacqui rolled her eyes and gave Abby one of hers. "I bought a pack yesterday on the way home from cheerleading." "Oh." She said taking a bite out of the warm pastry. Abby sat down on the couch in the living room and flipped on the TV. Jacqui joined her, and they curled up on the couch with a blanket.
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"Hey kid, how bout we go get some real food?" Abby yelled to Jacqui from the kitchen.
"Great! I'm starved. I mean you ate half of my breakfast."
"Hey you gave that to me!"
"Only because you were going psycho looking for them!"
"Fine, let's get outta here." Abby said grabbing her keys.
10 minutes later they arrived at Doc Magoos. They were quickly seated by a smiling hostess. "Your server should be right with you." She said handing them two menus and walking away.
"So what are we going to do today?" Jacqui asked while looking at her menu.
"Um, Susan and I were going to go shopping for her wedding today. You can come if you want."
"Yea that sounds good."
They were interrupted by their waiter. "Hi my name is Tripp and I'll be your server today. What can I get you ladies?" He asked, taking out a pad of paper and a pen.
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Two hours later Susan Lewis arrived at Abby's apartment. "Suze be right out!" Abby called from the bathroom where she was blow drying her hair. "Yup!" Susan called back. Jacqui came out a minute later closing her cell phone.
"Hey Susan." Jacqui said giving her a hug.
"Hey Jaq. You look great."
"Thank you. As do you!"
"Well I try my best!"
Abby walked out and greeted Susan before all 3 of them got into Abby's car and drove away.
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So what do you guys think? Should I keep going?