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Post by megan on Jun 5, 2006 2:46:24 GMT 10
i really truly love this fanfic! its different and that makes it great!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 5, 2006 4:53:15 GMT 10
Thanks! I'll try and update tonight!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 5, 2006 12:23:01 GMT 10
Luka put his last chart in the holder. He sighed heavily and took off his lab coat. He looked over at Addy who was still sleeping soundly on the couch. He put his coat in his locker. He walked over to the couch and slowly picked Addy up. He grabbed her blanket from the couch and wrapped it around her. As he was carrying her out Abby walked in through the ambulance bay entrance. "Hey." She said surprised to see him. "Hi." "What are you doing here?" "Kerry called me in." Abby put her hand on Addy's back. "How was she?" "She was fine. We had cheeseburgers and fries for dinner." "Luka?" Abby said making a face. "She gave me 'the' look." He said with a smile. Addy lifted her head up and opened her eyes. "Hi mommy." She said half asleep. "Hi, baby." Abby gave her a smile. Addy put her head back down on Luka's shoulder and fell back asleep. "I better get her home." "Yeah." "I'll see you Sunday." "Bye." "Bye." Abby leaned over and kissed Addy. Luka unlocked the door to the apartment with his free hand. He carried Addy to his bedroom and placed her on the bed. He took off his shoes and fell back against his pillow. The next morning Luka woke up to Addy sitting on top of him. Luka lifted his head up and looked at her. "Morning, daddy." "Good morning." "I'm hungry." "You are?" Luka said lifting her up as he sat up. "Yeah." "How bout I make you some breakfast?" "Yeah." "Okay. Let's go." "So what do you want to do today?" Luka said placing a plate of pancakes down in front of Addy. "Can we go zoo?" "The Zoo." "Yeah. I want to see the monkeys." "I guess we can go to the zoo." "Can mommy come?" "I think mommy's still at work." "Oh." Addy said lowering her head. "Do you want to call her?" "Yeah." She lifted her head up and smiled. "Okay. Eat your breakfast then we can call her."
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 5, 2006 12:44:49 GMT 10
Love the update! Can't wait for the next one.
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Post by Abbie on Jun 5, 2006 14:11:38 GMT 10
I just read this whole fic, and I think it's great!! Please update soon, and I hope Luka and Abby get together...
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Post by ERFanRach on Jun 6, 2006 2:59:38 GMT 10
I Love this fic.
Please get Abby and Luka back together again.
One of them could have an accident that makes the other realize how much they need each other.
Update Soon.
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Post by rorygilmore on Jun 6, 2006 4:48:26 GMT 10
One of them could have an accident that makes the other realize how much they need each other. Oh, the dramatic touch, I like this idea ...
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 6, 2006 6:38:59 GMT 10
I'll keep that in mind while I'm writing. I'm glad you all like it so much. I'll try and update later tonight.
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Post by *Natalie* on Jun 6, 2006 6:39:19 GMT 10
Great update! Hope Abby can go to the Zoo with them lol
natalie x
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Post by crazyday on Jun 6, 2006 7:58:16 GMT 10
I love this story!!! I love how you portray Luka as a father.
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Post by lubyluver on Jun 6, 2006 8:15:35 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=red,left,300]Great update![/shadow][/glow]
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 6, 2006 13:06:12 GMT 10
Here's the update!
Abby walked over to the phone and picked it up. "Hello?" "Hi, mommy." "Hi, sweetie. What's up?" "Do you want to come to the zoo with me and daddy." "The Zoo?" "Yeah." "I would love to go to the zoo with you." "She said she would love to go." Abby could her Addy telling Luka. "Abby?" Luka came onto the line. "Hi." "Do you want me to pick you up?" "Actually I have to stop and get somethings I'll meet you there." "Alright. Say a half hour?" "Sure." "Bye." "Bye." Luka hung up the phone. Addy was jumping up and down in front of him. "Mommy's going to meet us there. Go grab your coat and teddy." Luka pointed towards her room. Addy ran out and came back a minute later holding teddy in one hand and her coat in the other. Luka helped her put her coat on. He grabbed his keys from the counter and they were off. Luka and Addy stood by the entrance watching for Abby. Addy spotted her car and started jumping up and down in excitement. Luka took her hand and she stopped jumping. When Abby got close enough, Addy ran over to her. Abby picked her up and gave her a hug. "I'm glad you could make it." Luka said with a smile. He pulled his wallet out of his pocket and paid the lady behind the glass. Abby put Addy down and took her hand. "Where do you want to go first?" "The monkeys." "The monkeys are that way." Abby pointed to a sign. "Daddy, can we go in there?" Addy pointed towards the gift shop. "Sure." He gave her a smile. They walked inside and Addy just stood there staring at all the different things to buy. "Look daddy a monkey." She said running over to the stuffed animal display. She picked it up and squeezed it. Abby and Luka walked over to her. Abby looked at the price tag. "Do you want that one?" Luka asked Addy. "Yeah." "Luka, it's thirty dollars." Abby said almost in a whisper. "So what." "Addy what do you say to daddy?" "Thank you daddy." Addy wrapped her arms around his legs. "You're welcome sweetie." They walked over to the check out. "Did you want to go out for some coffee?" Luka asked as they walked over to the car. "Um...yeah, sure." "There's a coffee shop about a half a mile away." "I'll follow you." "Okay." Luka helped Addy into her seat. He pulled out and waited for Abby. When she was behind him he drove off in the direction of the coffee shop. Luka and Abby sat talking. Addy sat next to Luka eating a sprinkled donut. Abby looked down at her watch. "Crap." "What?" "It's almost four. I have to be into work at 5." Luka pulled out his wallet. "I've got this one." Abby said pulling a twenty out of her pocket. She placed it on the table and took a last sip of her coffee. She looked over at Addy and smiled. She had fallen asleep with her head on the table. Luka picked her up and carried her out to the car. "I'll see you tomorrow?" "Yeah." "What time?" "Three." "Alright." They hugged. And Luka watched as Abby walked to her car. "Addy come on." Luka shouted in Croatian. Addy ran into the room, her wheeled suitcase rolling behind her. Luka grabbed it and took her hand. Abby was waiting but the admit desk. He watched the door for Luka and Addy. Luka came in carrying Addy in his arms. Abby met them at the door. "Hi." "Hi." "Her suitcase is in the car." Abby followed him out the car. He opened the back door and she reached in and grabbed it. "Okay, Addy say by to daddy." "I don't want to go." Addy started to cry. "You'll see daddy soon." Abby said trying to pull her off of Luka. "Addy, come on." She managed to get one arm off. "I want to stay with daddy." "Adaline." Abby got her off of him. She held her as she cried. "Say bye to daddy." "Bye daddy." Tears rolled down her face. Luka leaned over and gave her a kiss. He whispered something to her in Croatian. She nodded her head. She stopped crying. Abby wiped her face with her free hand. "I'll call you later." Abby said. Luka shook her head. Addy waved as Abby walked away. Luka stood there watching them.
I send the money down do my best to do my part but it can't compare with what I've paid with my heart there's still one unanswered question that weighs heavy on my mind will she ever understand the reasons why
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 6, 2006 14:13:11 GMT 10
Nice update!
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Post by PiperxoxLeo on Jun 7, 2006 2:02:16 GMT 10
I love this. I am downloading the song...just so I can hear it! haha I love how he talks to her in Croatian. That's a nice touch.
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Post by *Natalie* on Jun 7, 2006 2:47:44 GMT 10
Great update! More soon please cause i'm loving this natalie x
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