Post by Luby14 on Mar 22, 2006 22:13:15 GMT 10
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Abby's POV[/glow]
Put Kojim Podjemo = The way we take[glow=blue,3,300]
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We were in the plane. Luka was sittind in his seat next to me and he played with Lena who was wearing a cute pink dress like a princess.
_ Hey...
I stared into space.
_ Abby? ... Abby?
I reacted.
_Yup?
_ Are you ok?
_ Yup.
He kissed my cheek, sweety. He seemed to be so happy.
My mind was concentrated on this little thing which grew in me. I was surprised when Luka took my hand. He bent and whispered me in the ear:
_ I love you.
I didn't answer him, I smiled then put my glance on this sky of clouds.
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We arrived in front of a house. Luka smiled. He payed the taxidriver and he took my hand.
_ Are you ready?
_ Yeah...
_ Abby...
_ What?
_ Are you sure that you're ok?
_ Why this question?
_ No... Nothing.
He led me to the door. He knocked. A few secondes after, the door opened. A young man who looked like strangely Luka.
_ hey! Luka!!
They took each other in arms. I deduced that he was his brother...
_ Come in.
_ Abby, I present my brother, Dmitri.
Dmitri said to me :
_ Charmed... to meet you...
_ same.
_ Where is tata?
_ In the living room. We entered in the livingroom. I never imagined that Luka's house was like that : big but poor... I imagined that it was small and lost in the country... He took my hand again.
_ Tata?
The old man returned and looked at us. In his eyes, I could see Luka, exactly the same person but more old...
I could see his kindness, his generosity and his beauty.
He avanced to us with a big smiled.
_ I'm happy to see you, my son.
_ Me too, dad.
_ And to meet your...
_ My...
I prayed. Yes, I prayed inside me. What was he going to say?
_ My fiancée.
My heart exploded like a fireworks. I was shared between the desire to kiss him and the desire to hide me in a hole of mouse. Luka looked at me like he wanted to escuse him that he had just said. I smiled.
Luka's father took my hand.
_ I'm Laurentis, please call me Lauren.
_ Like you want, sir.
_ Lauren...
_ Sorry, Lauren.
_ What is your name?
_ Abby.
He smiled. Luka was taking Lena. He avenced to his father.
_ Dad, I present my daughter, Lena.
I noticed that Dmitri was in the corner of the room and that he didn't move. Maybe... he was shy... but not! Me I was shy... He, he was at his home... He looked at me, strangely, like a stranger. Of course, I didn't know me but why he looked at me in this way?
I was in Luka's bedroom. There were a croatian flat and a lot of photos of his family... I was sitting on the bed. I was admirating this world... his world. Lena moved sweety in her little bed. Luka appeared.
_ Hey...
_ Hey...
_ Are you okay?
_ Yup. I'm tired.
_ Same...
_ Your father is very kind.
_ The best. He adores you.
_ Right?
_ Right.
He sat close to me and put his head on my shoulder.
_ Abby?
_ Yup...
_ Hoces lise udat zamene?
I understood. I didn't speak croatian and I didn't understand it, but this... this, I understood. I remained immovable. My spirit was invaded by thousands of questions. My heart beat. Luka looked at me in eyes.
My heart talked :
_ Yes.
He looked at me, surprised.
_ What?
_ Yes, I want to marry you.
I smiled. He smiled and he kissed me.
_ Oh... Abby... I love you.
_ Me too...
He kissed me again and again. He whispered in my ear the three words which made me shiver.
I would never have thought that I would remarry one day. Especially with Luka … Maybe that we had separated to meet ourselves better … I was on a thing. I loved him and he loved me. We were happy with our daughter and I wished nothing else than that. Now, there was this small heart which beat in me and which added to this happiness. I walked on the edge of the water. Croatia was really a magnificent country. Lena was in the pushchair and smiled.
_ Abby!
Luka. I turned me and saw him to run in our direction. He surrounded me with his arm, I listened attentively to his heart beating quickly and its cut breath. He kissed me as never he had kissed me. The only fact of being in his arms got me the happiness and the security. He stopped me and looked at me in eyes.
_ Abby...
_ Yes?
_ Gledaj nedo [/i]…
I looked at the sky the sunset.
_ Do you marry me here and now?
I did not understand what he said to me, I already said yes
_ How?
_ I want that you say to me yes, at once. I don't want to wait that we are in Chicago.
I felt a smile being outlined on my lips. A single word went out of my mouth:
_ Da.
Luka went up Lena in the bedroom, me I stayed in the corridor. We had decided to get married same evening. Certain persons in the daytime of their marriage are taken of abominable one fear. I was serene. I smiled. I was going to enter the lounge when I heard Lauren and Dmitri to discuss by whispering. What they said, nevertheless, was very net.
_ Tata, we cannot let Luka make this.
_ Why not?
_ Think of Mama.
_ Your mother died and she was wrong to lie to Luka and me, at the same opportunity.
_ It is not to Luka that it is going to hurt, but also this woman.
_ This woman, she has a first name.
_ Luka had sworn that he would love nobody else than Dajniela.
_ Your brother has the right to live again. He so suffered, he needed to do again his life.
_ It is necessary to say it to him...
_ Why?
_ Dajniela always loves Luka and he, he asked for Abigail in marriage.
_ That's fine! This woman is really very kind
and she loves him.
_ If you doesn't say to him, I would say to him, I do not want to see Dajniela suffering.
Luka began to go down stairs; my heart beat more and more. In the excitement, I brought down something with my bag. Dmitri and Lauren noticed my presence, Luka looked at me, surprised then he looked at his father and at his brother.
_ What happen? Luka asked.
Dmitri shot me of the glance.
_ Your future wife has bad manias, she listens to in doors.
I felt the anger of Luka rising in him against his brother. Taken by panic, I don't know how my hand opened the door and I went out by running. I did not know where I went but I walked more and more quickly. I heard the door to open again behind me. I hoped
whether it is Luka but a different voice called me:
_ Abigail.
I returned me and saw Dmitri.
_ Listen!
_ No, thank you, I would like to remain alone.
_ Say nothing to Luka.
_ Why? I am not of the kind to lie to him.
He still advanced closer from me and caught me the arm.
_ If you speak to him about what you heard, you go to hurt him and if you really love him, you would not like to make it to him.
I looked at him, full of hatred.
_ Keep silent, or you will have to deal with me.
He released me.
_ Now return with me, I promised to Luka to return you.
How could this man be the brother of Luka? They were so different …
Luka went out of the church.
_ Abby …
I looked at everything around me, the moon, the black sky, the noise of waves
_ Abby.
I looked at Luka. He took me the hands.
_ Are you ready?
My heart squeezed up.
_ No.
_ What?
_ Luka … I cannot and you cannot.
_ Why?
_ Your brother threatened me.
He squeezed the teeth of anger.
_ I don't believe it!
It is crazy! What did he say to you?
_ That if I admitted you what I had heard he...
Luka went down the stairs of the church and turned around towards me.
_ What did you hear?
_ Luka...
_ Abby.
He went back up some stairs to meet himself just at my height.
_ Abby, if somebody, whether it is my brother or a stranger, touch you, I kill him, say to me. Don't lie to me.
_ It is about Dajniela.
He looked me in eyes, his glance was full of dismay and surprise. Something said to me that he suspected it.
_ She's alive. You did not dream when you saw her in Chicago. It was her.
He shook his head as to remove a monstrous image of his memory.
He took me the hands.
_ I have to make something, please wait for me. I have to settle this story before being able to live completely my life with you.
He came down and went away in the village. I sat down on the square of the church by sighing.
Luka entered in the living room, angry.
_ Where is she?
His father and Dmitri looked at him, surprised.
_ Where is Dajniela? He asked again, losing his patience.
_ I believe that you don't like to know. Dmitri answered.
_ I had to get married this evening and you, you lied to me!
His father got up.
_ We did not know until we discovered a letter of your mother .
_ What letter?
_ She said that Dajniela was alive and that she had taken charge of her hanging during her coma. Dmitri looked for her. She wanted to earn her life, alone.
_ Where is she?
_ In "Noc Draga".
The glance of Luka froze. He turned around and went out, even angrier.
I sat on the chair, I began to write. I looked at Lena, of the corner of the eye. I put the pen, threaded my jacket, taken my suitcase, then Lena and and I went down stairs. I went out. A taxi waited for me. I rose and looked last time at this house... this house of the secrets.
Luka entered the small house. It was a bar. The room, small, was filled with smoke by the smoke of cigarettes. A man was behind the bar. Luka advanced on him and asked him in Croatian:
_ I would like to see Dajniela.
_ Dajniela who?
_ Dajniela Kovac.
_ She is already with a customer, you must wait.
Luka caught him by the collar of the shirt.
_ I want to see her, at once. The barman made sign to a girl, who went to another room. Some seconds later, Dajniela appeared in the frame of the door.
_ Luka...
He looked at her. He didn't know what to make.
She took him by the hand and drove him until the outside .
_ Why are you there?
_ Why didn't you call me?
_ I went to see you.
_ But you ran away.
_ Yes because I saw that you were happy .
_ Happy? Now, yes, since 1 year? Yes. But during almost 14 years? I wasn't happy.
_ I know... Your mother told me everything.
_ How did the two women of my life can to lie to me?
_ I'm sorry...
They stayed like that, without any words to say.
Luka entered the house, Dajniela followed him. Nobody was in the lounge. His father appeared. He tightened the letter to Luka.
_ I am sorry …
_ What?
Luka read the letter:
" Luka, I cannot stay. I don't want to influence your choice. It is your decision, like that was my decision of keep or not keep Lena and today, of keep or not keep the baby who grown up inside me. I can never imagine that, one day, we will be again together and that I will be yes. Please, Luka, listen to your heart and not your family. Your heart is the only way you must take. The way we take, Lena and me, is in direction to Chicago, where our life is and where there are the most beautiful memories that I have with you. Volim te, Abigail".
He went out and sat on the stairs. He looked at the sky and closed his eyes.
tata : dad
hoces lise udat zamene : will you marry me?
Gledaj Nedo = Look up at the sky
- Not abby's POV
Abby's POV[/glow]
Put Kojim Podjemo = The way we take[glow=blue,3,300]
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We were in the plane. Luka was sittind in his seat next to me and he played with Lena who was wearing a cute pink dress like a princess.
_ Hey...
I stared into space.
_ Abby? ... Abby?
I reacted.
_Yup?
_ Are you ok?
_ Yup.
He kissed my cheek, sweety. He seemed to be so happy.
My mind was concentrated on this little thing which grew in me. I was surprised when Luka took my hand. He bent and whispered me in the ear:
_ I love you.
I didn't answer him, I smiled then put my glance on this sky of clouds.
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CREDITS
[/glow]We arrived in front of a house. Luka smiled. He payed the taxidriver and he took my hand.
_ Are you ready?
_ Yeah...
_ Abby...
_ What?
_ Are you sure that you're ok?
_ Why this question?
_ No... Nothing.
He led me to the door. He knocked. A few secondes after, the door opened. A young man who looked like strangely Luka.
_ hey! Luka!!
They took each other in arms. I deduced that he was his brother...
_ Come in.
_ Abby, I present my brother, Dmitri.
Dmitri said to me :
_ Charmed... to meet you...
_ same.
_ Where is tata?
_ In the living room. We entered in the livingroom. I never imagined that Luka's house was like that : big but poor... I imagined that it was small and lost in the country... He took my hand again.
_ Tata?
The old man returned and looked at us. In his eyes, I could see Luka, exactly the same person but more old...
I could see his kindness, his generosity and his beauty.
He avanced to us with a big smiled.
_ I'm happy to see you, my son.
_ Me too, dad.
_ And to meet your...
_ My...
I prayed. Yes, I prayed inside me. What was he going to say?
_ My fiancée.
My heart exploded like a fireworks. I was shared between the desire to kiss him and the desire to hide me in a hole of mouse. Luka looked at me like he wanted to escuse him that he had just said. I smiled.
Luka's father took my hand.
_ I'm Laurentis, please call me Lauren.
_ Like you want, sir.
_ Lauren...
_ Sorry, Lauren.
_ What is your name?
_ Abby.
He smiled. Luka was taking Lena. He avenced to his father.
_ Dad, I present my daughter, Lena.
I noticed that Dmitri was in the corner of the room and that he didn't move. Maybe... he was shy... but not! Me I was shy... He, he was at his home... He looked at me, strangely, like a stranger. Of course, I didn't know me but why he looked at me in this way?
I was in Luka's bedroom. There were a croatian flat and a lot of photos of his family... I was sitting on the bed. I was admirating this world... his world. Lena moved sweety in her little bed. Luka appeared.
_ Hey...
_ Hey...
_ Are you okay?
_ Yup. I'm tired.
_ Same...
_ Your father is very kind.
_ The best. He adores you.
_ Right?
_ Right.
He sat close to me and put his head on my shoulder.
_ Abby?
_ Yup...
_ Hoces lise udat zamene?
I understood. I didn't speak croatian and I didn't understand it, but this... this, I understood. I remained immovable. My spirit was invaded by thousands of questions. My heart beat. Luka looked at me in eyes.
My heart talked :
_ Yes.
He looked at me, surprised.
_ What?
_ Yes, I want to marry you.
I smiled. He smiled and he kissed me.
_ Oh... Abby... I love you.
_ Me too...
He kissed me again and again. He whispered in my ear the three words which made me shiver.
I would never have thought that I would remarry one day. Especially with Luka … Maybe that we had separated to meet ourselves better … I was on a thing. I loved him and he loved me. We were happy with our daughter and I wished nothing else than that. Now, there was this small heart which beat in me and which added to this happiness. I walked on the edge of the water. Croatia was really a magnificent country. Lena was in the pushchair and smiled.
_ Abby!
Luka. I turned me and saw him to run in our direction. He surrounded me with his arm, I listened attentively to his heart beating quickly and its cut breath. He kissed me as never he had kissed me. The only fact of being in his arms got me the happiness and the security. He stopped me and looked at me in eyes.
_ Abby...
_ Yes?
_ Gledaj nedo [/i]…
I looked at the sky the sunset.
_ Do you marry me here and now?
I did not understand what he said to me, I already said yes
_ How?
_ I want that you say to me yes, at once. I don't want to wait that we are in Chicago.
I felt a smile being outlined on my lips. A single word went out of my mouth:
_ Da.
Luka went up Lena in the bedroom, me I stayed in the corridor. We had decided to get married same evening. Certain persons in the daytime of their marriage are taken of abominable one fear. I was serene. I smiled. I was going to enter the lounge when I heard Lauren and Dmitri to discuss by whispering. What they said, nevertheless, was very net.
_ Tata, we cannot let Luka make this.
_ Why not?
_ Think of Mama.
_ Your mother died and she was wrong to lie to Luka and me, at the same opportunity.
_ It is not to Luka that it is going to hurt, but also this woman.
_ This woman, she has a first name.
_ Luka had sworn that he would love nobody else than Dajniela.
_ Your brother has the right to live again. He so suffered, he needed to do again his life.
_ It is necessary to say it to him...
_ Why?
_ Dajniela always loves Luka and he, he asked for Abigail in marriage.
_ That's fine! This woman is really very kind
and she loves him.
_ If you doesn't say to him, I would say to him, I do not want to see Dajniela suffering.
Luka began to go down stairs; my heart beat more and more. In the excitement, I brought down something with my bag. Dmitri and Lauren noticed my presence, Luka looked at me, surprised then he looked at his father and at his brother.
_ What happen? Luka asked.
Dmitri shot me of the glance.
_ Your future wife has bad manias, she listens to in doors.
I felt the anger of Luka rising in him against his brother. Taken by panic, I don't know how my hand opened the door and I went out by running. I did not know where I went but I walked more and more quickly. I heard the door to open again behind me. I hoped
whether it is Luka but a different voice called me:
_ Abigail.
I returned me and saw Dmitri.
_ Listen!
_ No, thank you, I would like to remain alone.
_ Say nothing to Luka.
_ Why? I am not of the kind to lie to him.
He still advanced closer from me and caught me the arm.
_ If you speak to him about what you heard, you go to hurt him and if you really love him, you would not like to make it to him.
I looked at him, full of hatred.
_ Keep silent, or you will have to deal with me.
He released me.
_ Now return with me, I promised to Luka to return you.
How could this man be the brother of Luka? They were so different …
Luka went out of the church.
_ Abby …
I looked at everything around me, the moon, the black sky, the noise of waves
_ Abby.
I looked at Luka. He took me the hands.
_ Are you ready?
My heart squeezed up.
_ No.
_ What?
_ Luka … I cannot and you cannot.
_ Why?
_ Your brother threatened me.
He squeezed the teeth of anger.
_ I don't believe it!
It is crazy! What did he say to you?
_ That if I admitted you what I had heard he...
Luka went down the stairs of the church and turned around towards me.
_ What did you hear?
_ Luka...
_ Abby.
He went back up some stairs to meet himself just at my height.
_ Abby, if somebody, whether it is my brother or a stranger, touch you, I kill him, say to me. Don't lie to me.
_ It is about Dajniela.
He looked me in eyes, his glance was full of dismay and surprise. Something said to me that he suspected it.
_ She's alive. You did not dream when you saw her in Chicago. It was her.
He shook his head as to remove a monstrous image of his memory.
He took me the hands.
_ I have to make something, please wait for me. I have to settle this story before being able to live completely my life with you.
He came down and went away in the village. I sat down on the square of the church by sighing.
Luka entered in the living room, angry.
_ Where is she?
His father and Dmitri looked at him, surprised.
_ Where is Dajniela? He asked again, losing his patience.
_ I believe that you don't like to know. Dmitri answered.
_ I had to get married this evening and you, you lied to me!
His father got up.
_ We did not know until we discovered a letter of your mother .
_ What letter?
_ She said that Dajniela was alive and that she had taken charge of her hanging during her coma. Dmitri looked for her. She wanted to earn her life, alone.
_ Where is she?
_ In "Noc Draga".
The glance of Luka froze. He turned around and went out, even angrier.
I sat on the chair, I began to write. I looked at Lena, of the corner of the eye. I put the pen, threaded my jacket, taken my suitcase, then Lena and and I went down stairs. I went out. A taxi waited for me. I rose and looked last time at this house... this house of the secrets.
Luka entered the small house. It was a bar. The room, small, was filled with smoke by the smoke of cigarettes. A man was behind the bar. Luka advanced on him and asked him in Croatian:
_ I would like to see Dajniela.
_ Dajniela who?
_ Dajniela Kovac.
_ She is already with a customer, you must wait.
Luka caught him by the collar of the shirt.
_ I want to see her, at once. The barman made sign to a girl, who went to another room. Some seconds later, Dajniela appeared in the frame of the door.
_ Luka...
He looked at her. He didn't know what to make.
She took him by the hand and drove him until the outside .
_ Why are you there?
_ Why didn't you call me?
_ I went to see you.
_ But you ran away.
_ Yes because I saw that you were happy .
_ Happy? Now, yes, since 1 year? Yes. But during almost 14 years? I wasn't happy.
_ I know... Your mother told me everything.
_ How did the two women of my life can to lie to me?
_ I'm sorry...
They stayed like that, without any words to say.
Luka entered the house, Dajniela followed him. Nobody was in the lounge. His father appeared. He tightened the letter to Luka.
_ I am sorry …
_ What?
Luka read the letter:
" Luka, I cannot stay. I don't want to influence your choice. It is your decision, like that was my decision of keep or not keep Lena and today, of keep or not keep the baby who grown up inside me. I can never imagine that, one day, we will be again together and that I will be yes. Please, Luka, listen to your heart and not your family. Your heart is the only way you must take. The way we take, Lena and me, is in direction to Chicago, where our life is and where there are the most beautiful memories that I have with you. Volim te, Abigail".
He went out and sat on the stairs. He looked at the sky and closed his eyes.
tata : dad
hoces lise udat zamene : will you marry me?
Gledaj Nedo = Look up at the sky
- Not abby's POV
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