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Post by jaana on May 24, 2006 22:01:13 GMT 10
Love the new update.
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Post by Luby14 on May 25, 2006 5:38:15 GMT 10
I walked in the long corridor to go out of the plan. I carried my bag. I arrived in a big hall where there were a lot of people. I heard they were speaking a foreign tongue. I shrugged and breathed deeply. Suddenly, I felt a rumbling in my stomach. I put my hand on and automatically I looked for the toilets. I saw them. I ran to there. I bolted my door and knelt to vomit. I brought back my hair behind and wiped my mouth with a tissue. Oh my god... I loved it even if I was sick. I loved it because it was the pregnancy's joy. I went out and looked at my watch. Oh my gosh! My plan went to leave in 10 minutes. I went to my gate. 1 hour yet and I would see Luka. I couldn't define my happiness. I was so happy, so exciting to break him the news. The time to install myself in the plan, I began to fall asleep, the head against the port-hole.
One hour later. I arrived outside the airport. I had the impression to be in another world... but a wonderful world. The sky was blue, there weren't any clouds, a softy wind caressed my face and the sun brighted in the sky. I saw a taxi. It stopped next to me. The taxi driver went out and began to talk to me in croatian. "Sorry... do you speak english?" He looked at me with a odd glance. "Okay" I think in loud voice. I took the english-croatian book I had bought and said, proudly to find the sentence. "Odvezite ne u Spita, molim vas." He smiled and answered. "Da!" I got into the car during the taxi driver put my bag in the trunck. During the trip, I look through the window. I was amazing by the wonderful landscape. I could see the blue water of the sea, the seagulls which flew above the water. The waves crashed into the rocks. The man looked at me by the rear-view mirror. I smiled to him and continued to admire the landscape.
We arrived in Split. The man said something but I didn't understand anything. I said to him. "Želio bih ici u bolnica, molim vas." "Da." He nodded. Five minutes later, he stopped the car in front of the hospital. He opened the door to me and held out my bags. "Hvala." I said, smiling. I payed and he added. "Nema na cenu, doviðejna." "Doviðejna." I came in the hospital. I hoped, all with my heart, I would see Luka, but nobody. I looked around me. Suddenly, I heard a familiar voice which spoke croatian. I turned and Luka appeared at the bottom of the corridor. He made big gestures during he talked to another man. I smiled. He didn't see me yet. A old man arrived next to them with his stick. I move to them, slowly. Luka didn't still notice me. I was freezing. "Hi!" I managed to prounonce. Luka's head turned in my voice's direction. He opened big eyes full of surprise. Luka stammered. "Ab..Abby.." I smiled. I saw a tear in his eyes. He made a step towards me and cupped my head. He bent over me and kissed me. "Oh...my love... Wot are you doing here?" "I wanted to see to you." "I'm glad. Thank you, baby." He caressed my cheek with his right hand and slid his left hand on my hip. "Abby, I present to you my father, Laurentis." "Nice to meet you." I said to him, squeezing his hand. "Me too, i'm very happy to meet Luka's wife. He talked to me about you, but he forgot to say you're so beautiful." I felt my cheeks became red. Luka was smiling and continued. "And this is my brother, Dmitri." I smiled and took his hand. "Same." I said. He didn't talk, I felt he was icy with me. Luka turned to me and took me by the waist. "Hey, darling... How was your journey?" "Good, Luka...I've something to say to you..." He looked at me, surprised.
We would go home, Luka invited me to go out and to walk on the beach. He held me by the hand. A gently scent of the sea was in the air. "So...what did you say to me?" I stopped and wad tiptoe in front of him, he was holding me by the waist. "Luka... no try to guess." "I dunno. C'mon... say it." "No try..." He thought, but I whispered in his ear. "We've havin' a baby..." He plunged his glance into mine.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 25, 2006 6:47:58 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Lady_K on May 25, 2006 7:03:26 GMT 10
Lovin' it! Update asap please !!
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Post by dosia on May 25, 2006 19:08:00 GMT 10
great
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Post by Noora on May 26, 2006 21:45:31 GMT 10
Awesome! <3
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Post by jaana on May 26, 2006 22:17:29 GMT 10
Love it.
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Post by Luby14 on May 26, 2006 22:23:26 GMT 10
I'll update tonight or tomorrow. I've a french homework and another fanfic in building... Thanks for all your comments.
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Post by dosia on May 28, 2006 0:31:10 GMT 10
So.. whre is the update?
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Post by Luby14 on May 28, 2006 4:44:41 GMT 10
sorry... but I'm building a luby site, I'm writin' another fic and I have some fanart to do to somebody... but here is the update. Forgive me...
A wonderful smile appeared on Luka's face. I knew I was happy. His eyes couldn't wander from mine. He took me by the waist and carried me, squeezed me against him. He deposited his lips on mine. "You're pregnant..." I smiled to him. "Yes." He kissed me again. His eyes were sparkling as if there were a million of stars in. I saw a tear sank slowly on his cheek. I wiped it gently. He bent over me and whispered in my ears: "Volim Te, ljubavi moja." "I love you too..." He surrounded me with his strong arms. I was well in his arms. Nothing around us could disturb our complicity at this moment, we were together and we were an only person, two in a same body... We were just one.
I was right. I was in front of the mirror. I was observing my belly. I was right to come here. I jumped when Luka came in the bathroom. "The dinner is making, you come?" "Yes, i'm coming." He smiled, guessing what I did. He moved to me and put his hands on my shoulders. "You're beautiful..." I nodded. "I'm so... happy... We've having a baby... it was so long..." "I know." "When did you know it?" Oh my god! I didn't think about this... I couldn't say to him I had a car crash... "I must... did...some exams..." "Why? You said me anything by phone." "I know... I didn't want to worry you." "Worry me?" "Yeah..." He lowered his head and cleared his throat. "Really...?" I guessed I couldn't lie to him. My eyes were betraying me. "Ok ok. I had a little tiny very tiny accident." "What?" "Luka... please. I'm really fine and it's thanks to this accident we know about the baby." He was calm and collected... but I knew it was temporary. "Okay... an accident. What accident?" "Car crash... talking about this... our car is in a very sorry state." Here... He become to be worry. He looked at me with a surprise, a interrogative glance. And then, a ironical smile was drawing on his face. "Okay... we'll talk about this... all of this...more later. Now, I'm very hungry." At the first listening, I believed that he said " I'm very angry", but when I saw him went out of the room, I guessed it was "hungry". I sighed and rolled my eyes. I went down the stairs and came in the dining room. Laurentis was sitting at the table next to Dmitri, still icy. Luka looked like his father: same eyes, same mouth, same face's expressions... Dmitri was handsome but in a different way that Luka, I couldn't explain it. I sat next to Luka. Laurentis began to talk. "So... Abigail, I made just for you my favorite croatian speciality. I hope you'll like..." "Luka cooked sometimes croatian food. I like it." "Tell about you. Luka said a lot of things... (He paused and thought) That you were beautiful and only. I access without any doubts." "Thank you. There're not a lot of things to tell about me." "Your family?" "It's very quickly... My father left home when I was 7 and left me with a bipolar mother and a little bipolar brother, who was 4." This only sentence cast a chill over the room. I felt that Laurentis was embarrassed. "It doesn't matter, don't worry. Look now I'm 39 and i'm still alive. Really, it was difficult but I overcame all of this." "It was certainly very difficult..." He said. "Yes. Can you change the subject..." "Of course (He ate a mouthful.)" Luka smiled and threw a glance to me. "Tata, Abby and I have something to say to you... (Luka took my hand) We've having a baby." Laurentis smiled, he wiped his mouth and took my hand to kiss it. "I'm glad to you, it was the better it could happen." I smiled to thank him. Luka put a kiss on my temple, still this smile on his lips. But, in spite of Laurentis and Luka's happiness, my look deposited on Dmitri. He said anything, he didn't move. I was the impression he didn't like me... at all... He didn't look at me but I guessed he was angry... but what about? Me? Luka and me? It was something I couldn't know...
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 28, 2006 5:02:31 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Luby14 on May 28, 2006 7:05:44 GMT 10
I was lying down on the bed. I still had my eyes closed. Suddenly, I felt something on my belly. I opened my eyes and I saw Luka who was drawing hearts with his finger. "Luka..." "Yes?" He replied without looked at me. "What are you doing?" "I'm thinking." "Can you think without draw on my belly, please. I want to sleep..." "I'm thinking about the baby... We should probably go home." "And you father? He needs you." "But you, you need to be home, to rest and..." "Luka..." I sat and crossed my fingers in my hair. "Please... if I want to go home, i'll go, but I want to stay with you, here." Luka nodded and smiled. He bent over my belly and kissed it. He continued his way, kissing my chest, my neck, my chin, my mouth. "Luka...please...stop it..." "I can't... you attract me..." I laughed, he kissed me. I welcomed his tongue in my mouth. His hand slid on my hip and continued to slide on my leg, caressing it. Just his contact burnt me, inside and outside me. He stretched out me and laid down on me. I felt his legs against mine, his chest against mine, I felt his breathe on my skin. Suddenly, I saw the photograph on the nightstand. I looked at it while Luka kissed me. It was five children next to each other. I guessed it was Luka, his other brother and his two sisters, and then Dmitri. I didn't know how but his name went out of my mouth. "Dmitri..." Ouch! Luka stopped to kiss me and glance to me, interrogatively. "Escuse me? I'm making love to you and you call me with my brother's name?" I bit my lip. "No..." "Yes." I winced. "I saw the photograph, and I thought I should talk to you about Dmitri." Luka seemed to not understand me. "I tried to have sex with you and you prefer to talk about my brother..." He sat next to me, straight, with a disappointed face. "Luka... since I'm arrived here, your brother is...odd...with me... he's icy, indifferent... something's wrong, I see." "My brother is strange, but not... icy." "It's opinion...not mine. He doesn't talk to me, he says anything. And when you broke the news about the baby, he had no reaction." Luka nodded. "I'll tell you." He replied, finally. "Maybe I should..." Yes... it wasn't about Luka. It was me. I'll talk to him.
As soon as, I had preparing myself. I took the decision to go to see Dmitri. He was reading the newspaper. "Dmitri...?" He didn't move as you didn't hear me. Not icy, isn't he? "Dmitri?" I arrived in front of him. He glanced up at me. "Yeah?" "I would like to talk... to you." "Fine. It's done." He began again to read. Wow! Long Live to the Europeans! I shrugged and sat next to him. "Why do you react like that towards me? You hate me? I didn't hurt you... I don't understand." "It's not necessary to explain." "Oh...really? I need you explain, I'm you brother's wife... and I felt there's a problem..." "It's maybe this... the problem." "What?" "His wife, maybe it's the problem." "Oh... why?" "You talked to me. Now it's done." He stood up and went out of the room. Laurentis came in. "Something's wrong with him?" "I don't know..." Laurentis sat on the couch and opened a box where there were a thousand of photographies. "My wife, Ivana put away in this box, before her death..." He took one, looked at it a instant, nostalgic and stretched it to me. I took it and observed. There was Luka on rocks. He was probably 7 years old, he was wearing shorts and he was bare chest. I nodded, smiling. Laurentis gave me another. There were still Luka but with his brother next to. "It's his brother, Ante. He lives in Zagreb with his wife and his two children." I gave me another photo. I had suddenly a heavy heart. On the picture, there were Luka with Dajniela. I guessed it was her, because she was beautiful, long dark hair and a pretty smile. "It was his wife." "Yeah..." "I'm happy Luka made his life again. He couldn't live like that... with this memories all the long of his life. He needed and he needs a woman like you..." He smiled and took my hand."Thank you, Abigail." "Why?" "For Luka." I nodded, lowering my eyes. Luka was exactly like his father... "Please, call me Abby, not Abigail." "Fine, if you call me Tata." I grinned and put a kiss on his cheek. "I would have liked a father like you..."
Luka and I spent three days to visit the region. Luka drove me to Sibenik, to the isles. I had never seen so wonderful landscapes. This night, Luka was leading me on the beach. It was the sunset. The sky was made by a milion of colors, there was the sweet sound of the sea and the birds' song. Luka was lying down on the sand. I was too, but with my head on his chest. He surrounded me with his arms. I was falling to sleep. I was so fine. "Abby..." "Yes..." "I need you so much... I love you so much... I had never felt this. Peaceful, love..." I was losing in my toughts. It was his world. While so long, the women who shared his life tried to understand him... but for that, it was simply necessary to enter in his world, to come here and to discover this landscapes, this country. It was simply necessary to smell this scent, to breathe this atmosphere, to walk on this sand and to feel what Luka lived while all his childhood. Just all of this could explain what he was, what he is. Now I could understand him, I could share his memories. And I could definitely feel we was the same and the only person.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 28, 2006 10:57:25 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Noora on May 29, 2006 23:00:20 GMT 10
Loved the updates, they we're very beautiful!
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Post by rorygilmore on May 31, 2006 1:12:14 GMT 10
What's wrong with Dmitri? I don't trust him very much...kinda freak...
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