Lady_K
Marquise of Luby
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Post by Lady_K on Jun 7, 2006 5:08:12 GMT 10
Update please!!!
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Post by lubyluver on Jun 7, 2006 6:12:19 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=red,left,300]Great Update![/shadow][/glow]
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Post by Luby14 on Jun 10, 2006 4:30:45 GMT 10
His glance went through me like bullets. I made a step behind. I was like a member of the audience who was watching a play and who was obliged to stay to the end to understand what was happening and to know how all of this would finish. I wanted to runaway but I was frozen. Luka noticed his brother' s look on me as he threw a glance to see my reaction and he turned to Dmitri to hit him again. Lauren cried. "Someone can explain me..." Luka raised his hand to stop his father. Luka caught Dmitri by his shirt. "How could you do that?" Dmitri stayed unmoved. I felt Luka was losing his patience. Luka grabbed his brother by his neck and stucking him against the wall. "How could you do that?" Luka chopped his words like a butcher did with a cut of meat. Dmitri still said anything. "If you touch her again..." Suddenly, I grabbed the table to stabilize me. My sight got blurred. I didn't know what was happening, I just felt I was stretching out on the floor. I felt Luka's hand under my neck, trying to raise my head and I heard his voice. "Abby! Abby!" I saw just a shadow then I closed my eyes.
Sorry, I know it's short...
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Post by Maité on Jun 10, 2006 4:41:18 GMT 10
great update!!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 10, 2006 12:50:08 GMT 10
I like the update!
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Post by rorygilmore on Jun 10, 2006 17:04:56 GMT 10
Noooo!!!!....you can't stop there!!! now what'sgoing to happen to Abby??!!
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Post by Noora on Jun 10, 2006 21:29:32 GMT 10
Oh my, what's happening?! Cannot wait for the next update!
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Post by Luby14 on Jun 11, 2006 20:02:32 GMT 10
I heard people around me talking another language. I realized I was still in Croatia. I opened my eyes, everything was blurred then I felt a hand putting on mine. Luka's face appeared. My lips were dry like my throat. Luka bent over me and put a kiss on my forehead. "Hey, Sleeping Beauty." "What happen?" "Nothing important." "The baby?" "Alright, don't worry." Luka was smiling. I fainted and he was smiling. Something would happened to the baby and he was smiling! He irritated me. "What's funny?" "I have a big news." "Which one?" "There isn't a baby..." I sat up. "What??" "There are two babies." My heart bounced in my chest. "Two?" "Yeah... we've having twins." I was sharing between surprise and fear. Twins? We've having twins... I felt a smile on my lips. Luka bent over me and kissed me. Suddenly, the doctor arrived. He said something in croatian to Luka. I tried to understand a word...but nothing. The doctor smiled and went away. Luka turned to me. "We should return at home." "What did the doctor say?" "He adviced us to return to Chicago before your third trimester, that's all." "Something's wrong, I feel it." "Nothing's wrong." "I'm sure." Luka glanced at me. "Why do you worry about..." "Luka believe me." "I believe you, but I don't see what could be ... wrong." I sighed and turned away my glance. I saw Lauren who was arriving towards us. "How are you better?" "Yes, thank you." "I'm sorry about my son. He's... a fool." "I understand." I didn't want to talk about that. Dmitri was Dmitri and in barely one week, I learnt to know him... but I wanted to know how he was like that. And I was sure it was in keeping with his visit in the graveyard.
Luka opened the door of the car for me. He smiled and got into the vehicule. I did the same then he looked at me. "When do you want to return to Chicago?" "I want to stay here... one week..." "Abby... Why.." "Luka, you said to me there aren't troubles with the babies, so why do you want absoluty go to Chicago? It's your home here." Luka cleared his throat. "Luka! Say to the truth!" "There's nothing!" "Why do you want to leave? It's about your brother..." "No. I don't want to talk about him." I felt he began to be furious. I lowered the head. He sighed. "Abby, you already took some risks coming here. Please..." "No." I was categorical. I wanted to know what happened with Dmitri. I was hurting Luka and it was also hurting me. But I wanted the truth. "I don't want to leave." He glared at me. Then, he started up.
Luka was very angry and he didn't want to talk to me. I was behind him, following him into the bedroom. He threw his coat on the bed and walked into the bathroom, closing the door. I sighed, looking at the door. I put my hand on the door. "Luka..." No answer. "Luka... please." I begged him. I couldn't explain him why I wanted to stay, if no I would be obliged to tell him I saw Dmitri in the graveyard. That's stupid!! Why couldn't I to tell him?! "Luka, go out. I'll explain you everything." He opened the door. Just his head appeared. "I"m listening to you." "Go out." "No." He was playing my game. He was categorical. "Okay. I saw your brother in the graveyard." "What did you do in the graveyard?" He put on my HIS interrogative glance. "I wanted to... understant why your brother didn't appreciate me. So... I followed him there." I sat on the bed. Luka went out, and leant back against the wall. "And... what did he do in the graveyard?" "He was in front of your wife's grave." Luka frowned. "I don't understand." "He was standing in silence in front of Danjiela's grave." "That's...normal... he appreciated her very much... like his own sister." "Yeah... It explains why he cried. But it doesn't explain why he hurt me." Luka sat next to me. "Why did he do that...? I can't explain him. I know Dmitri, he's not... violent." "He wasn't..." "Abby... You want to stay just to understand why he did this?" "I want to understand why he doesn't appreciate me..." I shrugged, standing up. "I know it's stupid. But I need it to feel good in your family." Luka lowered his eyes. "I'm your family. Our babies and I are your family." He stood up, kissed my forehead and whispered. "I want to go home, at OUR home."
Please, say to me if I should continue...
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Post by anna982 on Jun 11, 2006 22:33:36 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Hey. I'm new to this but please update this again!!![/glow]
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 12, 2006 9:19:26 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by lubyluver on Jun 12, 2006 10:43:48 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by crazylubyfan on Jun 17, 2006 14:51:06 GMT 10
update soon! i cant wait for the next part!
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Post by kirstin on Jun 18, 2006 6:58:27 GMT 10
C'est vraiment bien, Elodie!
Update soon!
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Post by lubyluver on Jun 18, 2006 12:26:24 GMT 10
Keep going! Hurry up! Update!
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Post by lubyfanalways on Jun 19, 2006 6:23:56 GMT 10
I love this story so much. It is very good. I was reading it a few weeks ago and then my computer had problems and had to be fixed and I couldn't use my computer for 2 weeks.
Now that my computer is working again it is wonderful to be able to read all of the updates that I missed. I like it that Luka and Abby are having twins. I hope that you continue to explore why Dimitri doesn't like Abby very much.
I look forward to your next update.
Lubfanalways
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