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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 28, 2006 1:38:54 GMT 10
Great update!
Very well written
natalie x
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Post by Maryna on Aug 28, 2006 2:21:07 GMT 10
love it! update again soon!
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Post by Little Amy on Aug 28, 2006 3:18:46 GMT 10
 just caught up with the updates!! Awesome!! I wonder why Maddie doesn't like Abby.. 
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Post by strizzy on Aug 28, 2006 4:41:31 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by ninabrasil (Marina) on Aug 28, 2006 8:00:43 GMT 10
awwww...so sad  great update though my little sister used to cry a lot too...it was awful Great story!! Nina xx  |
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Post by dice8us on Aug 28, 2006 19:34:34 GMT 10
Great updates.......I read them all!!!   Finally I changed my mind and I like the name Maddie!! Keep going and update soon my dear!!!! Kisses!!  |
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Post by Luby14 on Aug 30, 2006 3:22:53 GMT 10
Here is my update... it's short sorry but I'm working on the next part. Good reading, Hope you'll like it.
Cook County: Abby was sitting on the bed. Luka was standing in front of her. His arms were crossed against his chest. Abby could read his anxiety in his eyes. Abby didn’t know what to say. They remained silent, each of them hoping that the other should start talking. Abby remembered what happened today when she had begun to become crazy. Crazy? This word echoed in her mind. Crazy… like Maggie… “Abby…” Luka began. “I tried… I tried to understand what is happening but… I…” Abby stood up. “You can’t. You can’t understand.” “If you explain me… maybe I’ll. “ “Never you’ll be able to understand. You didn’t live what I lived. I understand now, what happens with Maddie it’s because of… my childhood.” “Don’t be silly. I know you suffered because of your mom but…” “It’s easy for you!” Abby yelled. “You had a perfect life! Perfect parents, perfect childhood. Then you had a perfect wife, two perfect children, and a perfect family. But me, I have never had all this! You can’t understand me! You have never could understand me, first of all when Maggie came back when we were together, and now with my father. You weren’t here. You never saw what happen!” “Abby, why don’t you talk?! Why don’t you explain me all of this??” “It would be useless, Luka! You want always to make everything good, even perfect. But you can’t, Luka! You can’t. I’m not perfect! I’m not the perfect woman you want me to be! I’m not the perfect mother you’d like me to be for your daughter. I’m not and you can change it.” Luka was still looking at her in eyes. He stayed calm but Abby knew something increased inside him. Abby rolled her eyes. “I tried to understand you… I tried… I would like to understand, to tell you something, to help you. But you don’t allow me to do all of this. You don’t allow me.” He repeated. He shook his head and went out, without looking at her anymore. Abby bit her lip and turned her gaze away of the place where Luka was. Luka arrived at the admit desk. Jerry was on the phone. He made a sign to Luka and gave him a letter. “What is it?” “A letter to Abby.” Luka looked at the envelope it was written Abigail. Apparently, it wasn’t an official letter. Luka turned it to see the sender. His heart bounced when he saw, written, Jim Wyczenski. Luka walked in the corridor like he was lost, still looking at the envelope. What happened with Abby tortured him; he needed to scream, to explode. He wanted to help her so much… He arrived in front of the window of the room where Abby was. She was standing, turning her back to him. His eyes travelled from her to the letter. He loved her so much... what would he be able to do to help her? To save her... Luka folded the envelope and plunged it in his back pocket. He knew, now, what he would do. |
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Post by J£nan!s on Aug 30, 2006 4:15:07 GMT 10
Génial !!!! Je suis ta fanfic avec beaucoup d'intérêt, alors... ne t'arrêtes pas !!! You speak very well english ! Congrat' ! Bisous ! |
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Post by steffi1986 on Aug 30, 2006 4:30:41 GMT 10
OMG this is so sad please update soon |
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Post by Luby14 on Aug 30, 2006 4:31:25 GMT 10
Thank you Jenanis!!  I'll update soon, I swear. |
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Post by jadestar on Aug 30, 2006 17:49:33 GMT 10
whoa just heartbreaking...  it's a great update, can't wait to hear more |
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Post by Luby14 on Aug 31, 2006 4:54:31 GMT 10
Sorry, but I'll not be able to update today... I've some troubles this days..., so... sorry.
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 31, 2006 7:13:10 GMT 10
Great update!
natalie x
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Post by zelda on Aug 31, 2006 7:34:41 GMT 10
Elo, believe me and Jenanis, we are your best french supporters. There is a lot of suspense in this chapter, and it's thrilling because we don't know how all these charactres will be reacting in the end. And you finish your fic with a real cliffhanger, which can bring a lot of surprises and changes in all these people's life. This is a great story. And your english is amazing, BELIEVE what Jenanis said. Keep writing for the pleasure of all of us. |
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Post by rorygilmore on Aug 31, 2006 14:09:03 GMT 10
OMG!!! WHOA!!! What is going to happen now? I agree with Zelda, there's a lot of suspense It's SO THRILLING !!!! |
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just caught up with the updates!!
