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Post by crazylubyfan on Sept 17, 2006 16:47:39 GMT 10
great start!....now please update!!!
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Post by Cornflake Girl on Sept 17, 2006 17:47:02 GMT 10
Excellent start...
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Post by larue on Sept 17, 2006 22:38:25 GMT 10
Yes! I would have to add that this story is off to a very good start. You have me hooked already. Take your time and build those characterizations!
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Post by lubyfan on Sept 27, 2006 0:08:03 GMT 10
Great start Keep going!!!
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