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Post by anna982 on Jul 5, 2006 6:30:40 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Update soon please[/glow]
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Post by Caffy on Jul 5, 2006 6:47:51 GMT 10
Have done on the other page
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Post by zelda on Jul 5, 2006 8:13:08 GMT 10
Thank you for your update. I have always tried to imagine what Carter would have said to Abby after they left Susan's place, as I was pretty sure he had noticed the little interlude between Luka and Abby. You write beautifully, it's exactly what I imagined. And to forget the angst, Luka moving on DANCING QUEEN is priceless .OMG, I love it!
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Post by elsj on Jul 5, 2006 8:41:49 GMT 10
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 5, 2006 23:12:06 GMT 10
love it!!!! this is definitely one of my favorites!!!!!
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Post by Caffy on Jul 6, 2006 5:28:00 GMT 10
It was nearing the end of a long shift, Carter was still on a couple more hours but Abby felt like pushing off and was just telling Carter as Luka walked through the door, her stomach tightened and her mind was going a million miles an hour wondering what he was going to say and, more to the point why was he here when he wasn’t on? Luckily Carter had gone to look at another patient or else he might have asked some more questions. Abby wondered over to Luka, her arms folded.
“Hey… Thought you weren’t on today?” she asked him, she knew why he was here though and this was confirmed with his reply.
“We need to talk.”
Oh god, she thought. ‘We need to talk’ the four words everyone in the world dreads in a sentence. Ok talking. Talking, where can you go that we can talk? The sane part of my brain thankfully stepped in to save me. “Um... Yeah. I think we do… Want to grab a coffee or something?” he nodded shifting uncomfortably. He could feel himself reddening, “Yeah, that would be great.”
They made their way out of the glass double doors both dreading what the other had to say, to add to Abby’s troubles, Carter had been standing watching for the past couple of minutes and looked a little past mad, she was in for an earful tonight…
But in the meantime she was growing slightly less nervous about her talk with Luka, I mean, why have any nerves? It was only Luka, it wasn’t as if he was going to lunge at her or bite, you wish… her brain started, shuddup brain! She spoke silently. But she was glad he had come in, they seriously needed to talk about it.
“Well… “ they both started at the same time, and smiled at each other slightly “What I meant to say…” they both started again then grinned at each other, “Stop stealing my words!” they both said and began laughing. Stop laughing! I said to myself inwardly they ended their laughing with a sigh. Abby’s grip tightened round her coffee as if it was some kind of support and looked out of the window, Luka looked the other way over to the bar and breathed out loudly drumming his fingers on the table, Abby was chewing her bottom lip.
“Soo…” she started. “About.. Last night?” she posed this as a question, not quite sure if she wanted an answer. Luka looked a little pink and smiled sheepishly. “I am so, so sorry about that, I, well, it was just, I felt.. And then I thought, and then I said…” he paused tripping over his words and turning quite an alarming shade of red. Abby tried hiding her smile from him but was failing miserably, Luka noted this and felt a little better, at least he could cover himself by joking. “Oi!” he said in mock hurt. “I’m trying to be serious!” he could not contain him smiles either and they were both laughing again. They both knew they were just dodging round the truth and this brought them both back down to earth. Luka started again drawing in a long breath and looking straight at Abby trying to collect what may hopefully turn into a sentence rather than word vomit.
“I never meant to confuse you like that, or even put you in that situation… I know I was slightly… well… VERY drunk but I don’t see that as an excuse. I just… I don’t want what I said to, affect our friendship.” Abby smiled and breathed out relief, that was much easier than the answer she had been dreading, but, then why did she feel slightly disappointed? Ooo.. This was bad. She thought. She looked at Luka again and realised through his smile he looked… Down. His smile seemed to lack the quirky fun it had a few months ago, maybe she was just imagining things. “Well.. You did bring up one good point.. We DON’T talk all that much anymore, and we used to have such good fun, we should definitely start seeing more of each other.” She wanted to keep it all sounding light, and she was confused as to why she felt such heavy atmosphere in the air, why, with so few words and the way they were said?
Luka couldn’t resist grinning, so maybe he hadn’t completely alienated her. Now just wasn’t the right time to say anything about his feeling and after all, that wasn’t the way he played it, he didn’t steal other guys girlfriends and although he was jealous he didn’t want Abby to have to squirm in his presence, and besides, he would see more of her if he kept his mouth shut. Abby smiled back and then drew a long breath and paused before “Well… I’d better get going, Carter will probably be off by now and you know how I am with cooking…” she grinned at him as she got up and he smiled and chuckled a little. As he got up to pay the bill and follow her out each going on their separate journey’s home.
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 6, 2006 5:44:38 GMT 10
Love it please update !!
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Post by Caffy on Jul 6, 2006 7:33:04 GMT 10
Abby shut the front door and jumped, holding her hand to her heart and exclaiming “Jesus!” at Carter who was standing, arms folded, frowning “You scared the crap out of me!” Abby was very giddy for some reason and just wasn’t in the right mood for a serious talk and the look on his face just made her laugh “Sorry, it’s just, you look like a bouncer or something stood there” his face remained serious and still so Abby held her lips tight together to stop her smiling or giggling. She wasn’t even sure what was wrong with her, like she was on some kind of sugar high. Carter was seething, he was very jealous of Abby ever being with Luka and he couldn’t bring himself to trust her, just the fact that she had left with him. Abby noted the look on his face and knew what this would be about, she rolled her eyes.
“Ok Carter, don’t even bother starting ok? I’m really not in the mood…” she trailed off as Carter immediately cut in, “So there must be something to start about right? Or else you wouldn’t have said anything…” Oh hoorah here we go again she thought, why is it when I’m with Carter we both seem to act like stroppy teenagers?
Abby sighed and rolled her eyes. “So… You’re insisting on having your little tantrum right now?” Carter was very annoyed, over tired and most certainly over reacting but he merely wanted to make himself feel better for the time being and it seemed to him that venting his anger towards Abby was a good idea for the moment. “Well your treating me like a kid I might as well act that way” he knew what he was saying was stupid he just wanted to provoke a reaction from her.
Abby could feel herself getting more and more pissed off with Carter but didn’t want to say anything she’d regret so just said this “You know what, I am allowed to talk to my friends, go out having fun with my friends, despite what you might think, a little trust wouldn’t hurt you, and you know what? Right now I really, REALLY don’t care and I am about to fall asleep standing up. So excuse me but I’m going to bed but I swear to God if you keep this up I will NOT carry on being so patient.”
Carter just stood there glaring at her as she walked off before he had chance to say anything too her. Abby climbed into bed and switched off the light holding her head in the dark. She hated this part of Carter, the possessive, jealous guy. She was exhausted by now though and decided to stew on it more in the morning when she’d half a little more energy for a shouting match with her boyfriend. Carter too was totally fed up and feeling extremely immature, he thought if he was in this kind of mood he would make damn sure Abby and Luka knew about it, he didn’t mean to get like this, but just tonight his emotions got the better of him and he was acting like a spoiled 14 year old.
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Post by Andie on Jul 6, 2006 7:53:31 GMT 10
Great update... I'm loving this fic!!!! Just hoping u get Luka and Abby together.... UPDATE ASAP!!!!!
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Post by Caffy on Jul 6, 2006 8:46:13 GMT 10
“Beep, beep, beep, beep” Abby woke with a start and stretched over to hit the alarm. She sat up sleepily and sighed a bad feeling churning in her stomach. Then she remembered what it was and still didn’t want to deal with it, so she decided to wake a little more with a shower, Carter must already have gotten up without waking her. She quickly shower got dressed and moved into the kitchen where she started making a cup of coffee. Carter was sat at the table and said nothing, the silent treatment, she thought, thank God. She smiled to herself and was still pissed at him so said “Cold shoulder right?” Carter said nothing and just turned to look at her, he knew he handled this situation badly but was so damned stubborn he refused to back down. “Maybe you could just talk to Luka instead?” he suggested moodily. Abby merely shook her head in exasperation and rolled her eyes at him.
“Morning it’s a quarter to 7 and way below 10, wear your coats outside toda…”- The radio alarm was cut short by Luka’s fist shutting it off. He rolled over and stretched and yawned loudly throwing his legs out from under the covers he sat up rubbing his face and scratching the back of his shoulder. He smiled at the memories of the night before; Abby had a way of making everything seem ok again by just laughing with him. Thinking back on it they had barely exchanged words at all. He was definitely going to take her up on that offer to spend more time together; he hadn’t properly enjoyed himself for a while and he had expected that to be an extremely awkward conversation. It was odd, they hardly spoke yet the whole experience seemed... Tiring… Maybe that wasn’t the right word. He pondered this for a while as he shrugged it off and grabbed a piece of toast that was popping out before getting ready for work.
Abby and Carter both got on the crowded EL together. There was no room to sit so they stood side by side. Carter said to her in a hushed tone.
“So what he just came in to work on his day off to see you?” Abby gave him a withering look.
“Yes, he’s my friend, he is allowed.” Carter smiled sarcastically and took on a very pompous tone
“Yeah sure. So you say, you know as well as I do what he’s been getting up to recently…”
Abby threw a glare at him as he looked pleased with himself at finding a sore spot. “Carter you know you can be such a pig sometimes. He’s had some issues to go through at the moment, why don’t you just admit you’re jealous and stop trying to act like we were trying to seduce each other behind your back.”
Carter glared back at her. “I’m not jealous, but I’d rather you not go out with a guy who is obviously still in love with you..-“ Abby cut in with an indignant laugh. “I’m sorry you would PREFER I not talk to my friends, I’m sorry but you are talking shit this morning Carter.”
They stormed through into the admit together where Luka was already there talking to Frank, he was interrupted by Carter strolling up to him with an arrogant smile “Luka, you still fancy Abby right?” Luka looked at Carter completely baffled. “Well?” Carter pushed “Do you?” Abby glared at Carter and turned to Luka “Ignore him Luka, today my boyfriend has decided to become a class A prick!” with that she stormed off into the lounge to get her things from her locker. Carter stared after her looking angry but with that same annoying smile. A few seconds later he too stormed off in the other direction. Luka looked at Frank who looked blank. “Don’t ask me!” he said and Luka just stood there looking extremely confused.
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Post by megan on Jul 6, 2006 8:56:47 GMT 10
that was funny but in a very wrong way...haha i love this fic keep it coming!
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Post by Caffy on Jul 6, 2006 9:04:51 GMT 10
[glow=purple,1,200]I would write more now but my brain has turned all mushy and I really should go to sleep as I have work first thing *groan* it's horrible working on a horse yard when it's hot -.-#! Oh well. Good night for now and thankyou for your nice comments [/glow]
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 6, 2006 14:57:58 GMT 10
how I said before, one of my fovorites fics, You fill the blanks that the show have missed and this make us want more! sleep well, and update soon!!!!!!
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Post by Caffy on Jul 6, 2006 18:44:16 GMT 10
[glow=purple,2,300] Will update after work. So I'll have time to think of the story and write it out uber quick [/glow]
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Post by zelda on Jul 6, 2006 22:26:54 GMT 10
Very good update! The spoilt brat Carter can go to the beach and build sandcastles, he is way too immature to have a relationship with a woman. And I hope the best is coming soon....Luka seems ready to have some happiness!!!
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