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Post by megan on Jul 8, 2006 7:36:39 GMT 10
haha nice! i loved it!
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Lady_K
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Post by Lady_K on Jul 8, 2006 8:08:46 GMT 10
Love it!
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Post by Caffy on Jul 8, 2006 9:59:02 GMT 10
Luka smiled as Abby wondered over too him after their shift had finished.
“You look nice.” He said politely. Abby laughed a raised an eyebrow slightly
“I’m wearing a cream sweater and jeans, I hardly think that qualifies as ‘nice’” He grinned.
“You never can take a compliment can you?” she smiled
“Nope. I usually think people are taking the piss” he looked to the ceiling and shook his head.
“Let’s be off then.”
Susan and Chuny were standing nearby and when they knew Abby was looking started imitating them together Abby smiled sarcastically and pulled a face as Susan and Chuny giggled whilst they left.
They got to the entrance of the bar where a pink poster was up stating ‘Karaoke Tonight’ Abby stated shaking her head and grinning.
“Oooh no, no, noooo. I see what you’re trying to do here Kovac and it is so not going to work.”
He laughed innocently. “What? I actually didn’t know… Besides after my Dancing Queen episode I don’t think so.”
Abby eyed his suspiciously folding her arms. “Hmmmm…” she said.
Luka shook his head and smiled. “Come on I’m bloody freezing!” They wondered into the bar ordering their drinks. Abby smiled but she was still distracted. Thoughts were rushing round her mind and Luka looked up at her and smiled slightly. “
“Are you ok?” he asked slightly concerned.
“Mmm. Yeah.” She replied shortly, staring fixedly at the wall and chewing her bottom lip.
“Mmm. Good. I was just wondering because although I know the wall is great to talk to but I was kinda thinking you might talk to me?”
She smiled a little and looked up at him. “Oh I’m just a bit down about Carter. You know, I really thought he was gonna last. I think perhaps I am cursed to bring out the worst in people.” She smiled sadly.
“Ahh well, who were we kidding?” she asked. Luka smiled gently at her.
“Sorry Abby, about Carter, I’d hoped it had turned out better… You don’t bring out the worst in people, people just really suck.”
She grinned. “Mmm I’ll drink to that!”
He smiled and nodded. “Well Ms Lockheart it is my mission for this evening to make you forget your troubles and woes and have a good time.”
She grinned. “Well then that IS a challenge… Good luck with that.” He laughed
“I can only do my best.”
With that the music started and people began to dance. The first song was ‘Build me up Buttercup’ and Luka gave Abby a pleading look.
“Ohhoo noooo way, your meant to be cheering me up not making me look like an idiot!”
Luka laughed, “Don’t worry about it I’ll just throw in a few Croatian moves of my own and no one will even notice!” he grinned and grabbed her hand pulling her up and then started up with some crazy style dance moves which got some very odd looks from fellow dancers and made Abby crack up with laughter.
“Your such an idiot!” she said through gasps of laughter.
“Try it, it’s fuuuun!” he cried and to his great surprise she joined in and no amount of strange looks could stop the hilarity of that moment.
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 8, 2006 10:59:17 GMT 10
Awesome update!!! Luka is always there to cheer Abby up! Update again sooooooon!
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 8, 2006 11:49:16 GMT 10
love it! update soon!
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 8, 2006 16:14:13 GMT 10
Please update soon.
Great fanfic !!
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Post by strizzy on Jul 8, 2006 19:25:39 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Noora on Jul 8, 2006 21:14:30 GMT 10
Aww so much fun!
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Post by zelda on Jul 8, 2006 23:16:22 GMT 10
This passage cracked me up. I like awkward Luka: it's so unusual and sweet. I thought that when he collided with Abby, all the people at Admit would give them a standing ovation!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 9, 2006 3:46:41 GMT 10
Loving this!!!
Hope you do more soon
natalie x
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Post by Caffy on Jul 9, 2006 5:06:34 GMT 10
Abby and Luka stumbled back over too the bar, drunk with hilarity. She clung onto his waist laughing to the floor her knee’s bent, he had his arm draped over her to support them both as they both fought to keep straight faces then looked back up at each other, eyes watering and sides aching from the laugher and Luka stated snorting a little and that set them off again.
“Oh my GOD!” Abby exclaimed through laughing fits
“I have seriously not laughed that hard in years.”
Luka nodded fighting back too keep a straight face.
“Well, I am quite obviously the best friend ever and you are so lucky to have me.”
She laughed and smiled. “Now there you do have a point.” They both laughed and paused for a moment.
“Thanks Luka.”
She said seriously, looking at Luka sadly. He felt his world was on fire and the look she gave him now just made him want to sweep her up in his arms. He wanted to tell her that nothing would hurt her, and that she had to promise never to look at him like that again, but he had learned a promise is often more like a curse. He sighed and nodded toward Abby, he simply replied
“Anytime, I mean, you’re not too bad to hang round with… For a girl.” She smiled and shoved him, a little harder than she intended too as his bar stool toppled and he came crashing to the floor, a few people turned round looking a little scared. Luka was lying on the floor shaking with laughter.
“I am so sorry Luka!” Abby cried attempting to keep a straight face.
“Just so long as YOU don’t accuse me of bullying anymore, alright shorty?” he grinned as she hit his arm a little.
“I’m a perfectly normal height for a woman. You just have some kind of abnormal Croatian growing hormone.”
He grinned. “Right. Just for that.” He lunged toward her legs before she had chance to run away
“Luka, what are you? Wait! Noo! No no nooo! Stop, PUT ME DOWN!!” He had lifted her with ease over his shoulder like a fireman.
“You are doing the karaoke!” he exclaimed
Abby tried to wriggle round but this just made Luka’s grip tighter. “No. No I REFUSE, Luka, put me DOWN, no, no Luka PUT ME DOWN!” she yelled beating her fists on his back. He laughed. “Never!” he cried as he started running from the bar to the karaoke lists Abby screaming all the way, the other customers no longer looking surprised although vaguely amused. “Make it a duet right?” he said with a mischievous grin.
“I’m not doing it.” Abby said from behind him, the guy in charge of the songs looked up at him for the first time and gave him a strange look.
“It’s ok. Ignore her. She’s just cranky because she knows I’m a better singer.”
“Pfft! Neither of us can sing for shit Luka!” Luka grinned and threw her up a little making her squeak.
“ARGH!” she exclaimed. “DON’T do that again or I’ll puke on you!”
The guy smiled and nodded. “Great. So, you want this one yes?” Luka grinned and nodded. “Yep. That’s the one.”
Luka put Abby down and she made a run for it, although it was completely useless as he had hold of both her arms. She turned round and narrowed her eyes at him.
“I hate you.” She said sweetly. He grinned.
“Good, I did tell you we were going to take the world by storm right?”
“You are so evil! You knew all along.” She said getting annoyed. He laughed and grinned sweetly at her.
“You love me really.” He said pouting a little. She laughed.
“You are the biggest fool I’ve ever met Luka. In height and all!” he grinned.
“Yeah but what you gonna do?”
The music started up and Abby recognized the song. It was Marvin Gaye and Tammi Terril’s ‘Ain’t no Mountain High enough” she laughed. “Oh my God… She said shaking her head at Luka. He winked and grabbed the microphone
“Listen baby, Ain't no mountain high, Ain't no vally low, Ain't no river wide enough, baby”
By this point people had started clapping them on. Abby rolled her eyes with a repressed smile and grabbed the other microphone “If you need me, call me, No matter where you are, No matter how far, Just call my name, I'll be there in a hurry, You don't have to worry ‘cos…”
They both grinned and started the Chorus together “'Cause baby, There ain't no mountain high enough, Ain't no valley low enough, Ain't no river wide enough, To keep me from getting to you!”
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 9, 2006 5:18:20 GMT 10
love it! Update soon!!! reeeaaaallllllyyyyy soon!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 9, 2006 5:35:09 GMT 10
That was great!! Hope theres more to come
natalie x
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Lady_K
Marquise of Luby
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Post by Lady_K on Jul 9, 2006 5:51:15 GMT 10
Update Update !!Love love love love it!!
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 9, 2006 6:28:18 GMT 10
Please update really soon. I'm loving it....
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