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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 4, 2006 2:09:51 GMT 10
Great update  very tender and sweet between Luka and Abby natalie x |
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Post by strizzy on Dec 4, 2006 4:09:31 GMT 10
Beautiful updates! Really sweet!  |
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Post by bostongirl on Dec 4, 2006 7:08:45 GMT 10
Glad you all loved the last three updates!!  Nobody noticed the day of their flight!! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 9/11. It was 7.30 in the morning when Abby heard the alarm clock. “God.” She sighed and opened her eyes which felt heavy, last night Chuck and Susan stopped by to share some holiday pictures and today Luka and Abby were going on their holiday. “Luka, wake up.” Abby said to him when she opened the window sheets. “Why so early?” He asked blinking his eyes against the light. “We’ve got a plain to catch.” Abby smiled and crawled next to him. She felt his warmth and didn’t want to make him scare but she had to. Abby placed her cold hands on his side and he shivered. “That’s nasty.” Luka said and looked at her. “I know. Come on, take a shower, get dressed and come down. Than I’ll make breakfast.” She said and left him in the room. Entering the kitchen, she turned on the radio. ‘Good morning Chicago.’ She changed the channel to one that played music and starting singing along with it, never been as happy as she felt the past couple of months. She starts making pancakes and place two plates on the table along with syrup, coffee and sugar. She hears Luka coming down. “Morning” He said and kissed her cheek. “Morning.” She said back. Sitting at the table they both looked tired. “Luka check the gas will you?” Abby yelled from upstairs were she was laying the last touch at her suitcase. “Sure.” Luka yelled back. “Abby come on we need to go now.” Luka yelled upstairs. He heard her walking the stairs and waited for her at the front door. “Where’s your suitcase?” He asked her. “Don’t bother Luka. All the airports are closed down.” Abby said looking at the floor. “What? Why?” Luka asked her. “A plane has been high jacked and flew into one of the towers.” Abby said and started walking to the living room were she switched on the television. ‘..This will be a black day in American history.’ The reporter said. Horrible images were brought into their house and Luka took her hand. He had been trough a war and seeing these movements made him scare that it might be able to happen again. He looked at the one he loved and saw the fear in her eyes, she never had been scared of any thing but now her eyes carried fear instead of pride. “Abby, the phone is ringing.” Luka said to her. “I know.” Abby stood up and grabbed the phone from the side-table at the end of the couch. “Abby.” She answered. “Thank god.” She heard Susan say. “What?” Abby said. “Why aren’t you on the plain?” Susan asks her. “How do you mean. All the airports are closed.” Abby said back. “No, Chicago was still open but is closed as well. God Abby your flight has flown into the other tower.” Susan said. Abby heard her friend and felt a shiver going down her body. “Suz. Come over will you.” Abby said and put the phone down. Her eyes were stir. “Abby what’s wrong?” Luka asked her as she took place next to him. “Luka, our flight has crashed into the other tower, Chicago was still open. We could have been in that airplane and could have died today.” Abby said. He grabbed her as tight as he could and they cried together knowing they have been very lucky. They saw people jumping out of the towers, people running down the streets, they heard sirens and screaming. Abby felt a teardrop falling from Luka his face on her hand and she knew what was in his mind. She looked up, saw the anger and fear in Luka his eyes, he lost his family during a war and now with those images every thing came back. She cupped his head into her hands and looked deeply into his eyes before she spoke. “Luka, I know what you are thinking of but I promise I’ll never leave your side. Luka look at me.” She said. Luka shook his head. “Luka, please.” Abby said now with tears on her face as she felt in how much pain he was. “You can’t promise me something like that Abby. I was the one who left them. I was the one who wasn’t there to safe them.” Luka cried. “Don’t Luka. Please don’t.” Abby cried as Luka stood up and left her on the couch. His minds drifted off to the day were he lost his family, with images on the tv-screen he saw every thing coming back. He felt a tear leaving his face. He saw her looking up at him with those strong and powerful eyes. He felt her hands cupping his face and he saw she swallowed before she spoke. “Luka, I know what you are thinking of but I promise I’ll never leave your side. Luka look at me.” He heard her say. He shook his head, knowing she couldn’t promise something like that, you’ll never know. “Luka please.” She said and he saw her tears. “You can’t promise something like that Abby. I was the one who left them. I was the one who wasn’t there to safe them.” He cried as she was still holding his head. He needed fresh air. “Don’t Luka. Please don’t.” He heard her cry as he left her behind on the couch. Luka was gone for 10 minutes when the doorbell rang and made Abby realize that she needed to find him. Again the doorbell rand and Abby walked over to the door to open it. “Abby.” Susan exclaimed as she hold her friend close. “Sorry.” Abby said. “What’s wrong?” Susan asked her as she saw the look in Abby her eyes. “It’s Luka. He took of. I’m worried. Although he’s only gone for 10 minutes I’m worried sick.” Abby said to Susan. “Why?” Susan asked as they both took place on the couch. “The images of New-York made him think of the war in Croatia and I wanted to be there for him but he, he’s just so closed about that.” Abby sighed. “He will be fine. He just needs some fresh air Abs. I’m so glad you thought the airport was already closed.” Susan told her while she wipes away a tear on Abby her face. “Me too.” Abby whispered. |
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 4, 2006 7:22:30 GMT 10
Great update  Glad they weren't on the plane natalie x |
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Post by jaana on Dec 4, 2006 22:34:00 GMT 10
Very good update! |
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Post by strizzy on Dec 5, 2006 3:10:28 GMT 10
Nice update! Very creative, Glad they didn't get on the plane |
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Post by jadestar on Dec 5, 2006 4:58:04 GMT 10
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 5, 2006 5:31:30 GMT 10
OMG this update was sooo great and touching  it just showed your creativity of writing  so please do it again soon  |
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Dec 5, 2006 8:25:23 GMT 10
ohh great update!!! |
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Post by bostongirl on Dec 6, 2006 6:17:41 GMT 10
Time frame. 9/11 22.30 Luka stood there were once was their bench. That moment when they shared their first kiss reached his mind and he know it was meant to be. He heard her talking in his mind, ‘Don’t Luka. Please don’t.’ were her last words before he left her. Again he left the one he loved most. He turned around to walk back but his eyes caught Chuck. “Chuck?” Luka said to him. “Luka.” Chuck said back. “Why are you here?” Luka asked him. “Susan called me and asked if I could look if you were our here.” Chuck told him. “Ok.” Luka said and turned back and looked at what was once a hospital. “Luka, It’s time to go home. It’s getting dark.” Chuck said as he walked up to Luka. “I hurt her Chuck. She will hate me for leaving her.” Luka said and turned around. “She won’t. She’s worried.” Chuck said and placed one hand on Luka his shoulder. “Can you drive? I had too much beer.” Luka said and handed over the car keys. 9/11 22.45 “Susan, he’s not coming back. I can feel it.” Abby said when she shook her head. “He will be back Abby.” Susan said to her friend. The phone rang but Abby wasn’t in the mood for answering it. “Will you get it?” She asked Susan. “Susan Lewis, house of Dr. Kovac.” Susan said as she answered the phone. “Luka?” She heard a men say. “No. Luka is not here.” Susan said. “Luka plain crash?” She heard the man asking her. “Abby you need to take this. It’s Luka his family.” She whispered to Abby. “Luka?” The man asked again. Susan handed the phone over to Abby. “Abby. Luka isn’t at home right now can I take a message?” Abby said. “Abby. Luka plain crash?” The man asked her. “No. No plain crash. Missed the flight.” Abby said knowing this was Luka his dad. “Good. Your not coming today. Maybe other day. Need to meet you Abby.” Luka his father said to her. “It’s ok. We will visit you as soon as possible. I will ask Luka to call you when he gets home.” Abby says while she looks at Susan. “Ok. Abby, Luka needs to protect you. Bye.” His father said and put down the phone. “His dad.” Abby said and fell back on the couch. “Ok.” Susan said looking at Abby. “He said Luka needs to protect me.” Abby said and whipped away a tear. “He will Abby. I’m sure he will.” Susan said and wrapped her arms around her friend. 9/11 23.00 Chuck drove throughout Chicago while Luka was sitting silent. “Call her.” Chuck said knowing Abby was worried. “Why, what point has it to call her.” Luka said to Chuck. “You could tell her you love her and that were on our way.” Chuck said instructed by Susan. “Just drive Chuck.” Luka said and let his head rest. 9/11 23.15 Abby cried herself to sleep when Susan hold her. Susan heard a car pull up in front of the apartment. She let go of Abby and looked outside the window. Her heard made a little jump when she saw Luka stepping out of the car. She walked back to Abby not to wake her. That was something he must do. She heard his keys in the door. “Susan. I’m sorry.” Luka said he took place on the other side of Abby and took her over from Susan. She didn’t wake she just slept trough. “It’s ok. She’s out Luka. Your dad called.” Susan told him. “Thanks.” Luka said to her. And in all the years she knew him this was the first time she saw him crying. 10/11 1.30 Luka carried Abby upstairs, undressed her and laid her down in the bed, covered her up and placed a kiss on her fore-head. He walked back downstairs to the kitchen were he left Susan and Chuck. They had talked about his pain, talked about what he felt at the moment the bombs were shouted into his house, what he felt when he held his wife and daughter close to him fighting for their lives while he knew they weren’t coming back to him. They talked about why he came to America. Talked about what he had been through before he could let Abby enter his heart. And she, she slept through the whole conversation, safe in his arms. “Go home Susan.” He said when he came back into the kitchen and saw her yawn. “No. Chuck had beer and I’m too tired to drive. We’ll stay.” Susan said. “Take my spot in the bed Susan. I’ll sleep on the other couch.” He said and placed his hands on her shoulders. “But.” Susan said. “No but. Just go. If she wakes up send her down and she will find me.” He said knowing Abby wouldn’t wake until he waked her. 10/11 11.30 Abby opened her eyes and felt a hand surrounding hers. She looked aside to find Susan. “Suz?” Abby whispered. Susan opened her eyes and saw her looking at her. “Abs. He’s downstairs waiting for you.” Susan said. Abby let go of Susan her hand and got out of bed. She opened the door of the living room to let the smell of beer, aftershave and un brushed teeth enter her nose. There he was, curled up on a way too small couch sleeping. She walked over to him and sat down on the floor. Her hand held his and he opened his eyes. “Abby.” He sighed. “Luka.” She said. He cupped her head with both his hand and gently pushed his lips against her, slipping into her mouth meeting her tongue. As he kissed her he felt he mouth curling into a smile. He pulled back out of their kiss and looked at her, still holding her head into his hands. “I’ll never leave you again.” He said. Abby saw tears coming up in his eyes and wrapped her arms around his body. In a hug she whispered his name and how much she loved him. |
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 6, 2006 6:44:21 GMT 10
What a touching update Glad Luka made his way home natalie x |
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Post by strizzy on Dec 6, 2006 7:34:21 GMT 10
Brilliant update!!! Really like - very nice! |
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 6, 2006 7:45:34 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 6, 2006 8:26:29 GMT 10
OMG what a touching update I'm so glad that luka is back and I hope he will never leave abby again so please update soon |
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Nobody noticed the day of their flight!! 
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