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Post by britneyluby on Mar 12, 2006 7:26:21 GMT 10
hi all. This is a fanfic of me and ERCookie... hope you like it (it is also posted on ERHQ)
Chapter 1
Britney sat next to her mother and told her about everything that happened today at school. It was the first school day in 2nd class. Ever since she learned to speak she loved to spend hours in her mother's hospital room. Even though her mother wouldn't reply any of her answers, she still felt like they had a close bond.
But deep inside she knew that if her mother ever would wake up she wouldn’t remember any of what she had said and what hurted most was that she probably wouldn't even remember her. She spend hour late at night wondering how her life had been if her mother wasn't in a coma, if her father didn't miss her mother that much and sometimes she even blamed herself for what had happened to her.
Just then her father walked in to the room. He looked very tired. "Hey Britney. Sorry, I know how much you like being here by your mother's side but I just pulled of a 16 hour shift. I really need to get home and get some rest. Britney gave her mother a kiss on her forehead and whispered in to her ear "I love you mom. Please wake up soon. I'll be back tomorrow."
She pulled a painting she had made in school out of her backpack and hung it on the wall before giving her father a big hug and walk with him out through the doors.
When they got home they started to help each other cooking dinner "Daddy can I ask you a Question?"
"Of course sweetie"
"If mom woke up would you still love her?"
Luka sat down on his knees so he was in eye level with his 7 year old daughter. He touched her long brown hair and looked her deep into the eyes.
"Britney Emily Kovac. Look into my eyes okay: I love your mother and I always will. And I would be so happy if she woke up!" Britney just nodded and Luka put his arms around her. "I just hope so much that she wakes up. So I could have a mother like every other child in my school! And if you really love her dad, then how come you aren't married?" Britney said sobbing a little tear.
"Do you know what honey? Let's make a deal okay. When mommy wakes up I have to propose to her within a week. Or else you will have the master bedroom and 5 dogs!" Luka said trying to cheer things up a little.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 12, 2006 14:41:37 GMT 10
can't wait to read more!
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Post by lulu on Mar 12, 2006 20:00:48 GMT 10
Awww how cute but poor abby. Please let her be ok
~Abi*Lulu~
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Post by britneyluby on Mar 12, 2006 21:15:54 GMT 10
so everyone... Here's 2. chapter
Hope you enjoy it
and thanks for the replies  Chapter 2Some days later Britney came in to the ER. One of her friends lived right next to the hospital, and they always dropped her of after school. In the ambulance bay she was met by a big chaos. After what she heard there had been a gun fight and many victims. "Hi there little one!" Neela said as Britney walked over to the admit. "Hi Neela. Have you seen my dad? Is he with some of the traumas?" Neela told her that he was in a meeting and would be down any minute. "Neela we need you over here NOW" Pratt shouted when he ran into trauma one. "Gotta go. Later Brit!” And with that Neela ran of to the trauma room. Just when Britney was about to play a game with Jerry, Luka grabbed her from behind. "BOO!" he said tickling her all over. Britney just laughed and gave him a hug. "So big girl, how was school today?" "Ohh the usual you know. But I made a painting I wanna give mommy. Is it okay I go up and talk to her?" Luka nodded to the question. "Of Course it is sweetie. You know that. I'll pick you up in half an hour. Then we can go eat. I'm dying of hunger. What do you say about that?" Britney began laugh and almost jumping of happiness. "Yeah me too. Can we go to McDonalds?" she asked on her way to the elevator. She didn't even hear Luka answering her question before the doors opened and she stepped inside. Luka felt bad for Britney. That girl had lived her entire life with a mom in coma. But she still loved her like every other child loves their mom. If not even more. Luka knew that Abby might never wake, and to be honest, he actually didn't believe that she would. But somehow that little girl made him keep hoping. And another thing was that he just didn't have the courage or the will to tell his daughter that her mom probably would never wake up from her coma. At the same time Britney entered Abby's room. She took her new painting out of her backpack and threw it into the corner. She then walked over to the wall with all her paintings. There were at least 2 for every week from the last 5 years, so they hung upon each other, and it had at least been years since you could see the wall. Then she walked over to sit by her mother’s side. But she only had the time to say: "Hi mom. There just came a huge trauma in to the ER. Nothing really happened today in school. Except from that I made you a new picture which is already on the wall." Then Abby slowly opened her eyes.
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Post by lulu on Mar 13, 2006 6:08:39 GMT 10
OMG i can't believe you stopped there!!! I want more and soon!  Abi*Lulu |
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 13, 2006 16:23:26 GMT 10
Love the update! I can't wait for more!
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Post by britneyluby on Mar 14, 2006 0:04:58 GMT 10
So!! Want another udpate??
Here it comes.. enjoy!
Chapter 4
Abby was looking over at Britney. She couldn’t believe it. The last thing she remembered was going in to labour. It felt like it was only a few minutes ago, but here in front of her stood a beautiful 7 years old girl. Her daughter. For Abby it felt like time stood still. She could only think of that she made this wonderful human being. Her long dark brown hair which almost hit the elbows. Abby laughed a little. She would never have let it grow that long. “Come over here Sweetie. You don’t have to be shy!” Abby let out holding her arms out for the little girl. This beautiful girl - her girl - gave her mother a big hug "So sweetie... Tell me what happened today at school" Abby said making room for her daughter to curl up next to her in the hospital bed "well...” Britney said "today nothing really happened... but yesterday my best friend told Max that she liked him and then Max threw a pencil after her and now she doesn't like him any more and Mrs. Markuson "My best friend told Max that she liked him and then Max threw a pencil after her and now she doesn't like him any more and Mrs. Markuson - - that's my teacher" she added "got so mad at Hilda that she almost gave her a note and Stina and Clara was really mean to me and Casper kept pulling out my ponytail and.. no wait that was the day before yesterday but today I also got an A- for a paper I wrote about my biggest dream, my teacher said that it was really well writing and that she hoped that my wish came true!" Abby listened interested to Britney. She didn’t understand much of it, but right now she just wanted to make her daughter happy and not, not wanted. Abby nodded "Can I see your paper?" "Sure mom" Britney said jumping of the bed to find the paper in her backpack "Here you go" she said handing the paper to her mother. Abby started to read "Normal kids at my age would probably wish for a pony or a doll or to become the Queen of England. But I could be poor and live in an old forest as long as my mother would be there" tears felt Abby's eyes "My mother is in coma, she has been as long as I can remember. My father doesn't really like to talk about what happened... I think it's too painful for him. But when I ask him if he loves my mother his answer is always yes, that's probably why he never dated another girl after my mother went into the coma. I know that he would never tell me but his hope is fading away. He is afraid that she will never wake up! But I keep hoping that she wakes up... Keep wishing that she will wake up, and I know deep inside that someday she will, because there is nothing in this world that can take my mother away from me..... THE END"
"Dr. Augustus!" Luka yelled "Abby... is... Abby ha ha ha has" Luka struggled to breathe after running trough half of the hospital. When he finally could breathe again he said "Abby just woke up!"
Abby’s POV
Dr. Augustus just left. Britney is spending the night at Angela's place. She’s her nanny. She wanted to stay, but I convinced her that she should go... I mean it's not like I’m going into a coma again, I will be here tomorrow too! So... it's just me and Luka now. I know what I read in Britney's paper, about he never dated any other girl after I went into coma, but that doesn't mean that he still want to be with me, perhaps he did date other girls, he just didn't tell her.
"Luka...” I say "hmm could you do me a favour?" he nods "could you bring me some pictures of her... I mean from when she was little and stuff" "of course Abby" I smile at him.
I wonder if he has told anyone yet. "Luka. Does anybody know? That I'm awake!" I ask him. "No. That would mean that I have to leave you. And I would never do that.” At least not now that is. I can feel that he knows I'm insecure. He holds my hand tight. "Do you want me to tell anyone? Anyone at all?" I look at him and shake my head. "No. Not right now. I'm so tired. I need some sleep, and then tomorrow we can speak before Britney gets here." I say almost in sleep.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 14, 2006 6:54:51 GMT 10
Great update! I loved it!
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Post by lulu on Mar 14, 2006 20:59:15 GMT 10
Awww I'm happy now Really great update Abi*Lulu |
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Post by britneyluby on Mar 15, 2006 3:09:55 GMT 10
Oops.. sorry.. I forgot to put in chapter 3 between 2 and 4.. do you want it anyway?
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 15, 2006 6:28:20 GMT 10
Yeah!
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Post by britneyluby on Mar 16, 2006 0:00:11 GMT 10
So here's chapter 3.. (that means that this is BEFORE chapter 4..)
enjoy
Chapter 3
"Mom! MOM!" Britney yelled excited and gave her mom a big hug.
Abby could only manage to say "Mom?” She was confused. Who was that little girl? And what was she doing in a hospital bed? "I'm sorry. Who are you? You must be wrong. What am I doing here?"
Britney’s POV
She didn't remember me, a tear rolled down my face "excuse me" I say quietly leaving the room. In the hallway I see that dad is walking towards me "DAD... Dad" I yell running into his arms sobbing with my head buried in his chest. "Easy... Easy Brit. What's going on? Why are you so upset?" "She doesn't remember me" I say still sobbing "who doesn't remember you sweetie?" "Mom" I get out "she's awake?" He nods silently "come on honey let's go see her. You know that she wouldn't remember you. She never even got the chance to see you before she went into a coma... You see right after you were born something happened and your mother lost a lot of blood and that made her go into a coma, so she never got the chance to see you" I nod "do you think she loves me dad?" "When she finds out who you are she will love you like crazy!" I smile as we walk towards Abby's room.
Abby’s POV
Who was that girl? And what was she doing here calling me mom? I mean I’m pregnant right? I put a hand on my stomach no it's flat, but that also makes sense since the last thing I remember was that I was in labour but it feels like I have been sleeping in a hundred years... just like the 'Sleeping Beauty'
Just then Luka walked in "Hey honey...” "Luka what happened?" "There were some complications in Britneys birth and you went into a coma... do you know what year it is?” Yeah it's 2001 isn't it?" I ask. He shakes his head. "No Abby we are in 2008". Oh god. "You’re kidding me right?” He shakes his head. "Does that mean that...?” I nod towards the little girl. "Yes Abby this is your daughter Britney Emily Kovac" I can't believe I was in a coma for 7 years! "Come here sweetie" I say "I’m sorry that I didn't know who you were... Okay? I’m so sorry!" Oh no I have tears in my eyes, and I know that I have to tell her. Otherwise it might break her heart... I have to let her know "I love you sweetie... I’m so sorry" "I love you too mom" those words make me melt
Luka’s POV
That’s my girls. I can't believe that she actually woke up....
Slowly I felt tears growing in my eyes. What else did I expect? The woman I loved more than anything in this world just woke up after being in a coma for 7 years.
Letting a tear fall, I walk over to her and give her the biggest hug I have ever given her. "I love you so much Abby." I whisper into her ear, and I feel a tear on her cheek too. Then I look over at my beautiful daughter. I have never seen her this happy. Her eyes have this special glow, that I can't remember ever seeing in them. I pull away from Abby, but I'm not happy for it. "I'll better go get the doctor honey." I say to her and then I go over to Britney and whisper to her. "Now you can be alone with your mommy for a couple of minutes." I kiss her and walk out the room to find a doctor.
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 16, 2006 2:26:26 GMT 10
Love it!
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Post by lulu on Mar 17, 2006 1:49:37 GMT 10
I thought it was strange that she started talking straight after waking up. I though she should be more confused! lol! But great part Abi*Lulu |
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Post by britneyluby on Mar 18, 2006 2:58:54 GMT 10
Well... Here comes chapter 5.. enjoy
Chapter 5
"Yeah. Mommy is fine sweet heart. She misses you too." Luka told Britney on the phone. "Angela will bring you over in a couple of hour’s okay sweetie?" "But dad. Remember our deal. You propose to her or I get the big bedroom and 5 dogs. And you only have 5 days left" Luka had forgotten all about the deal. After all, when he made it he didn't thought he would ever need to stick to it. But then again, what was so bad about it? He loved this woman more than anything, AND they had a wonderful daughter together. "Of course I remember sweetie. I would never break a promise to you. You know that. Now, I'll see you when you get here." Then he hung up the phone.
When Luka entered the room again Abby was awake "Look Luka... We need to talk!" Nothing good follows a 'we need to talk', I mean everybody knows that Kovac... Stop hoping! Luka thought to himself. "Look... I know that I have been in a coma for a VERY long time... And I understand if you have moved on with your life... look what I’m trying to say is that I understand if you don't love me any more... I understand if have been dating or is married or engaged to a wonderful woman... because you deserve these things Luka... You really do! And I -" "Abby... ABBY” a little louder second time because Abby wouldn't stop blabbering "I haven't dated... I’m not engaged and I’m DEFINETLY not married! I want to tell you that I still love you, and I want to be with you if you want to be with me I love you Abby.. i really do!" Abby couldn't speak... she couldn't believe what she just heard "I love you too Luka" was every thing she could say and with that they shared the first real kiss in 7 years.
Luka then slowly pulled away and kneeled down in front of her. "Abby you are my everything. I know what a big shock it must have been for you waking up after 7 years in a come. A lot of things have changed, but one thing definitely hasn’t. And that is my love for you. I bought this for you a long time ago.. 7 years actually, but I never got the chance to ask you" Luka said taking out a little box from his jacket” I never left the house without it for 7 years... because somehow this and our daughter was the only thing that kept up my hope... He looked Abby in the eyes. But he couldn't read them. Somehow they were all mixed up with happiness, confusion and shock.
"Abby I know this is sudden... But I need to ask you something I only have asked one woman before...
"Luka..." Abby caught him of. ”Before you say anything I need to ask you a question." Abby said. Luka looked confused at her but nodded. ”I love you. And you have just proved to me that you love me to. So I'm asking you. Luka Kovac. Will you make me Abigail Kovac?"
"Honey... you know that was actually my line" Luka said smiling at her "Abby... I Love you and I would be hounered to make you Abigail Kovac!"
With that Luka opened the little box and placed the beautiful diamond ring on Abby's finger.
They were so caught up in each other that they didn't even notice when Britney walked inside the room "BUUH" she said causing them to fly apart like a bomb had been dropped. ”what were you two doing? Hey... Wait a second mom. What’s that on your finger?" she asked "Oh I’m sorry sweetie... You're not getting 5 dogs" Luka said smiling "5 dogs?" Abby asked. Britney ran over to hug her parents. First Luka, and then she jumped op into the bed and gave Abby a huge hug. "I love you mom. Can I be the bridesmaid?" "Or the flower girl" Abby said "that's you decision! And now back to the 5 dogs thing" "Well... You see, dad and I made this deal a week ago. Before you woke up. Either he had to propose to you, or I would get the master bedroom and 5 dogs. Because I had to be sure that he loved you." "Oh I see. So the only reason you want to marry me is because you wanna keep the master bedroom?" Abby teased looking over at Luka. "Well I’m sorry to disappoint you honey... But I can't risk loosing my lovely bed" Luka teased back "And me who thought I was so special!" Abby said making a fake disappointed smile.
Then Luka looked over at Britney. "Sweetie I know I let you stay home from school today. But remember, you have to go tomorrow." "But I wanna stay with mommy!" Britney protested "Look honey... I’m going too be out of the hospital any minute. So in a couple of months you can't wait to get away from me, I’m not going anywhere I promise!" Abby told her daughter. "By the way I'm sorry dad. I know you told me not to tell anyone, but I ran into Neela in the elevator, and I just couldn't keep my mouth shut." Britney said with a low tone looking down. "Oh sweetheart... don't be sorry it's perfectly okay... I mean they are gonna find out at some point anyway!" Abby smiled "as a matter of fact i would like to give them a surprise... Could you take me down to the E.R?" "I want to take her down daddy!" Britney said. "And I told Neela she couldn't tell anyone, so they don't know. Daddy please." She had now folded her hands in front of her and made those big dog eyes, which she knew her father could never say no to. Luka looked first at Abby and then at Britney. "I would normally say that it was too soon. Being a doctor and all. But this time I can't say no. On one condition." "What daddy?" " That we dress her up so that they don't know that it's her and then says that it's a VERY interesting patient and that it would be a good idea if everybody took a look at her at the same time.. that way they are gonna have the CHOK of their lives.. AND you...” he says pointing at Abby. “You have to be in a wheel chair okay?" he asked "okay" both the girls agreed. Then Abby says "Hey... If I just wear a patients gown and make my hair, which is now very long, obvious because it haven't been cut for 7 years, hang down in front of my face and I sit in a wheel chair... Then no one will recognize me. And besides... I've also grown a lot thinner and it's probably long since some of them have seen me. What do you say about that huh?" "You’re wrong about one thing Abby" Luka says "it's not a long time since they have seen you... They come and say hello to you a least once a week" But yes let’s do like you said"
10 minutes later all 3 of them were in the elevator on there way down to the ER. Fortunately they were alone in the elevator when Abby suddenly asked nervous "OMG. It's been seven years. I don't know who works here or if it has changed or..." "Abby it'll be just fine. Relax." Luka cut her off and assured her.
When the elevator doors opened Luka pushed Abby towards the desk "Hey everybody" he yells "I have a very interesting patient here so... if everybody would like to come over here... and you can decide who should take a look at her first... I think it could be a great teaching case" Luka smiled. When everybody had arrived at the desk Luka asked "so who wants to take a look?" nobody said anything "oh great Susan... How lovely of you to pick your self. Even though you don’t need teaching” Luka said smiling when Susan was on her way to leave. "Come on, this could be good for you too.” Susan walked toward Abby and bend down so she was on eyes level whit her "HOLY SHIT" she yelled. "Is that really?.. I think I'm about to get a heart attack!" Susan said holding her hand to the forehead. "Hey. What kind of disease can that patient have to make Dr. Lewis scream like that?" Morris said with a confused look at his face. Abby then took her hand and removed the hair from her face. "BOOH." she said. "I'm the kind of disease that can make her scream like that. Or should I say miracle?"
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