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Post by rorygilmore on Aug 31, 2006 13:32:40 GMT 10
AAAAAAHHH, SOOOO SWEET!! KEEP GOING!!  Yeah, it was so sweet, loved it! |
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Post by Maryna on Aug 31, 2006 17:20:28 GMT 10
you know, nina, i oftenly think how would be abby as a mother for luka's children (if they would be still alive)...so i would say to give it a try...but don't stop writing that because is very interesting too!
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Post by jadestar on Aug 31, 2006 17:38:15 GMT 10
sure hun give it a try! I'd love to read that story - but please go on with this one!  |
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Post by steffi1986 on Sept 1, 2006 6:44:28 GMT 10
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Post by ninabrasil (Marina) on Sept 1, 2006 10:11:27 GMT 10
I’ve decided to write another chapter on this fic and since I’ve always wanted to write a girl talk scene between Susan and Abby, I thought I would do it here. So here it goes.
PS: in my story, Susan never left the hospital and is still Chief.
Abby and Luka walked into the hospital, hand in hand, with big grins on their faces. Morris, who was at the desk and as usual not getting any work done spotted them and said:
- What’s up, boss? Did you get her pregnant again?
This got him a death glare from Luka and slap on the head from Abby.
- Shut up, Morris. – They said at the same time.
They walked into the lounge, took off their coats and hung their stethoscopes around their necks. Before they went off to begin another hectic shift at the ER, Luka bent down and talked to the baby in Croatian then stood up and kissed Abby.
- Be careful out there, ok?? Take care of yourself and our little one. I love you.
- I love you too. And you worry too much.
Luka walked out into the ER and Abby went to the fridge to get a bottle of water.
- Whoa!! When did that happen?? – Abby jumped startled at Susan Lewis’ voice.
- When did what happen, Sus?
- The whole ‘three word exchange’?
- Huh? – Abby was still clueless as to what Susan was talking about.
- ‘I love you’. ‘I love you too’ – she said mimicking Luka and Abby’s voice.
- First of all, great impression – Abby said with a thumbs-up gesture – and second of all, yesterday – she completed with a satisfied little smile.
- WOW!!! How come you didn’t tell me?? And how did the subject come up? Who said it first? WH—Wait. Come on let’s go out for a hot chocolate and you can tell me all about it.
- Susan, what’s with all the questions? And my shift started like 10 minutes ago, I have to get to work.
- No you don’t, I’ll deal with it. Now, come on, that chocolate is waiting for us. – Susan said practically dragging Abby out of the door.
- Okay, okay. No need for ripping of my shirt.
AT IKE’S
- Sooo, spill.
- There’s nothing to spill, really. We just said we loved each other. That’s it, Susan, I really don’t understand what the fuss is all about.
- Abby, come on, you finally said it!!! It was way overdue but you said it!! And I wanna know all about it!
- Fine, Susan. What do you want to know?
- When was it? How did it come up?
- Okay, we were vegetating on the couch last night and he had this thoughtful look on his face, so I asked what he was thinking about and he started apologizing.
- Apologizing? For what?
- For yesterday, for almost going to Darfur, for the night we broke up years ago. I didn’t catch all he said, because he was kind of rambling, but that was pretty much it. It was really sweet and amidst the rambling he said that he’d never leave me or the baby again and that he loved me.
- Oh, Abby. That’s adorable. Who knew Luka could be so sensitive?
- I did. – She answered, smiling. – Anyways, I asked if he was finished and when he said he was I said “We love you too”.
- We??
- Yes, Susan, “We”. Did you know that this bump on my belly is not just ice cream, it’s a baby!!! – Abby responded with as much sarcasm as she could.
- Oh, yeah. Stupid me, huh?
- Yeah.
- Shut up.
- You shut up.
They left Ike’s and went back to the ER laughing and talking.
I don't really know if there's going to be another installment to this fic, maybe there will. Tell me what you think and check out my other story if you want. It's called "Fresh Start"
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Post by Maryna on Sept 1, 2006 16:38:37 GMT 10
i think this fict is great, so you should update soon!!!
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Post by jadestar on Sept 1, 2006 18:13:45 GMT 10
I demand an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  |
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Post by strizzy on Sept 1, 2006 21:06:03 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by lubyfan on Sept 1, 2006 21:31:44 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by ERFanRach on Sept 1, 2006 23:27:09 GMT 10
Please update it is a great story.
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Post by *Natalie* on Sept 2, 2006 6:35:30 GMT 10
Great update!
natalie x
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Post by hollygirl on Sept 2, 2006 6:40:19 GMT 10
Please keep going with this one also! update soon!
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Post by steffi1986 on Sept 2, 2006 6:58:22 GMT 10
yeah please update this too, it's really great and sweet and to my mine it should be a very happy luby-story |
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