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Post by lubyrules on Oct 25, 2006 14:43:08 GMT 10
I was in maths today and I decided to try writing another fanfic Here is wot I got so far:
This is my 2nd fanfic (please be nice) my first is called buzz but I have run out of ideas so I have decided to start a new fanfic
Note: I don’t own any of the characters and it is loosely based on season 13
Title As time goes past
Information Abby and Luka are married Abby Kovac – resident Luka Kovac – chief of ER Joe Kovac – 10 months old Carter is in Darfur Susan is in Chicago Gates is an intern Weaver is head of department Neela is a surgeon Morris and Albright are dating – 3 months Neela and Ray are dating – 7 months Frank and Timmy are now the admit staff Abby and Luka’s nanny is called Miriam Maggie is on her meds and visits once a month Abby and Luka now own a 3-bedroom house with a pool Abby, Luka and Joe go to Croatia for their holidays and stay with Luka’s family Luka sometimes talks to Abby and Joe in Croatian coz he wants Joe to know Croatian Joe’s fav toy is his stuffed frog and his fav song is should I stay or should I go now (it is his bedtime song)
Wot do you guys think of this idea? Should I write part1???
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nandafm
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Post by nandafm on Oct 25, 2006 14:52:56 GMT 10
I really liked the topics of the fic. I think you should write it. But why don't you post it in here too? I had some problems with the link.
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Post by lubyrules on Oct 26, 2006 14:37:55 GMT 10
Part1
Abby woke up early on her day off with her head resting on Luka’s chest. She lay there motionlessly enjoying the silence, listening intently to the beat of Luka’s heart. After awhile she decided it was time to go and check on Joe. She slowly and carefully moved Luka’s hand from around her waist and got out of bed. She glanced over at the alarm clock on the bedside table next to Luka’s side of the bed. It was 7.30am Luka had work at 9. She contemplated waking Luka up but she decided against it because he sleeping like a baby.
She walked down the corridor towards Joe room. She stood outside the door for a few minutes not wanting to break the silence. When she entered Joe’s room he was lying peacefully in his crib sucking his left thumb. His stuffed frog that Abby and Luka brought him when he left the hospital was clenched in his right hand. In the night he pushed his blanket to the bottom of the crib and it was now just covering his feet. Abby walked over to the changing table and picked up his blue dummy. She uncovered his feet and tickled the bottom of them making Joe laugh. Not long after, Joe was wide awake and staring up at Abby with his blue sparkling eyes. As Abby picked him up he started to cry "what are all these tears about?" she said as she put the dummy into his mouth and he instantly stopped crying. She leaned over and picked up his stuffed frog and headed toward her bedroom to wake up her other sleeping baby.
Part2
She put Joe down on her side of the bed and sat next to him looking at Luka, who was still sleeping. Joe took his dummy out and crawled over to Luka and gave him a big, wet kiss on the cheek, Luka said without opening his eyes “hey buddy” and Joe laughed. It took Luka a few minutes to wake up. When Luka opened his eyes Joe was sitting in Abby’s lap, he sat up and kissed Abby softly on the lips. “How long have you guys been up for?” said Luka. “Not long” Abby replied. Luka looked over at the alarm clock, it was now 8.15. “I’m going to go have a shower and get ready for work” Luka said kissing Joe on the head. “Ok, me and Joe will make you some breakfast, what do you want?” Abby said standing up. “I dunno, surprise me” Luka said standing up, holding Joe in his arms. He passed Joe over to Abby and went into the bathroom. Abby gave Joe his stuffed frog, put his dummy back into his mouth and they walked downstairs.
When Abby entered the kitchen she put Joe into his highchair and walked into the lounge to get something for Joe to play with. Abby found some toy cars in the middle of the floor and them on front of Joe. “Which one do you wanna play with, baby” she asked. He picked up the ambulance, Abby smiled and put the other toy cars on the kitchen counter so that he wouldn’t knock or throw them on the floor. She opened the fridge and decided to make bacon and eggs for her and Luka and cornflakes for Joe. Joe was now 10months and liked playing with his food. Abby looked over at Joe who was happily with his ambulance with his stuffed frog in his lap and his dummy in his mouth.
About 15 minutes later Luka came into the kitchen to find Abby making coffee and Joe playing in his highchair. Luka walked over to Joe “was you a good boy for mummy?”, Joe looked up at Luka and smiled. Abby walked over to the table holding two coffees. “Breakfast is ready” Abby said, Luka walked over to the table, where there was two plates of bacon and eggs. “Did you give Joe his ambulance” Luka asked. “No, he choose it” Abby replied. “I bet you ten dollars that Joe is gonna be a doctor” Luka said smiling. “Just like his mummy and daddy” Abby said smiling.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 26, 2006 22:21:38 GMT 10
Great start!
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Post by lubyrules on Oct 30, 2006 13:23:48 GMT 10
Part3
Luka walked through the triage doors to find 3 people waiting to be seen. A guy who most probably got in a fight and broke his nose and a woman cradling a young child. He made a mental note to have someone attend to them and walked towards the automatic doors and entered the ER. He headed towards the admin desk where Frank and Ray were playing a game on the computer and Sam and Neela were talking to Clemente, Pratt and Morris. “Hey big daddy” said Morris. Ray looked up from the computer “is Abby looking after Joe today?” asked Ray. “Yup, she isn’t working today.” Frank hadn’t realized Luka was there, a he was too engrossed in playing counter strike “have I got any messages Frank” said Luka “oh hi Dr. Kovac, you don’t have any messages” Frank said not even looking at him. Luka glanced over at the board, it was nearly empty and they all know that a quiet ER was bad. “Has it been like this all day?” said Luka “no for about an hour now” replied Pratt. “Ok guys it may be quiet but there are still people waiting in triage” said Luka. “I should really go back to surgery, are we still good for dinner this evening?” said Neela walking away from admin “yup, see you at the apartment at 7” replied Ray replied following Neela. Neela stopped by the lift, pressed the button, turn around and kissed Ray on the lips. Neela and Ray had now been dating for about 7 months, since Gallants death they had become closer and there was nothing stopping them from showing there true feelings anymore. Neela went into the lift and Ray walked back over to admin. Luka was giving orders “Morris, Pratt and Clemente treat the guy in triage with a possible broken nose, Ray and Sam follow me” Luka said walking towards triage.
Abby was sitting on the couch watching day of our lives, when she heard crying over the baby monitor. She turned off the TV and went upstairs to comfort Joe. When she entered Joe’s room he had settled down and was jumping up and down holding onto the edge of the crib. Abby walked over and picked him up “did you have a good nap, baby” Joe nodded his head. Abby got to the top of the stairs when she realized Joe didn’t have his stuffed frog. She went back into his room and picked it up from inside the crib, she handed it to Joe and headed downstairs. She put him on the floor and sat back down on the couch. Joe crawled over to a pile of toys in the corner of the room. Abby looked over at the clock, it is 5 o’clock and Luka would be home soon.
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 30, 2006 19:32:13 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 30, 2006 22:57:15 GMT 10
sweet story!
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Lady_K
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Post by Lady_K on Oct 31, 2006 1:13:54 GMT 10
Like the beginning, so please continue
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 31, 2006 7:45:24 GMT 10
Cute update natalie x
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Post by ivettita on Oct 31, 2006 8:48:20 GMT 10
the story looks very cute so please continue !!!
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Post by lubyrules on Nov 1, 2006 16:26:58 GMT 10
Part 4
“Abby, Abby”, Luka shouted closing the front door and walking down the hall. He put his jacket on the coat rack in the hall and kicked his shoes off. He entered the lounge to find Joe sitting at his feet staring up at him with his glistening ocean blue eyes. “Hey buddy, where is mummy?” Luka said picking up Joe. Luka looked around to find Abby lying on the couch, fast asleep. He put Joe back down on the floor and walked towards Abby. Luka kissed Abby on the lips and stroked her cheek. Abby stirred “hey, I must have fallen asleep”, Abby said confused and disoriented. Abby picked up Joe and sat him on her lap. “How was your day” asked Luka “nice and peaceful, Joe has been very good today” Abby said smiling at Joe. “My day was mostly quiet too, I treated a 2 year old boy with internal bleeding, an elderly lady with a broken hip and a few MVA’s” said Luka “did the little boy survive?”, asked Abby “yes, it was touch and go for awhile, but he is out the woods now” Luka replied. “I’m going to get Joe ready and take him to the duck park for awhile, you wanna come with us?” said Abby “sounds good to me, I’ll just get changed” said Luka standing up. He went into the master bedroom, opened the closet and picked up a dark jumper, put it on and walked into Joe’s room where he could hear Abby asking him what he wanted to wear “ blue camouflage or boats, Joe” Luka answered for Joe “boats, mummy” Abby laughed and dressed Joe in a white t-shirt with a boat on the front, a white jumper with a boat on the pocket, trousers with little boats all over them, white socks and a white hat with a boat on it. Luka picked up Joe and walked downstairs and put him in his stroller and stood in the hall putting his shoes and coat on while he waited Abby. A few minutes later Abby came into the hall ready to go. Luka walked out of the house pushing the stroller and Abby followed locking the door behind her.
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 1, 2006 19:52:14 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Nov 2, 2006 6:33:49 GMT 10
Cute update natalie x
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Post by Rach :) on Nov 2, 2006 7:02:42 GMT 10
wow this is suuch a good fic keep it up update soon
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Post by nandafm on Nov 2, 2006 8:12:43 GMT 10
Counter Strike??? I love that game!!!
I enjoin your fic, keep going
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