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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 11, 2007 6:09:28 GMT 10
Wooohooo... i don't like her so much.. I MUST SAY THAT I LOVE THIS STORY
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Post by lubylover123 on Jan 11, 2007 6:24:13 GMT 10
Oh, good, I don't like Danijela. Great update, post more soon!
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Post by Bah on Jan 11, 2007 6:29:46 GMT 10
I really love this story. please update very soon. =]
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 11, 2007 7:46:07 GMT 10
wow this is really great please update soon
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 11, 2007 7:59:28 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 11, 2007 12:25:35 GMT 10
Updating tomorrow... or rather today...
dani
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 12, 2007 1:14:33 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on Jan 12, 2007 10:27:32 GMT 10
Update is coming later tonight...
Dani
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Post by daniella on Jan 12, 2007 12:39:00 GMT 10
Update... it's Pg - 13...
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That night, they went to a disco in the center of the city. Abby was happy to see the city. It was beautiful. And the lights made it appear from gold.
' I'm going to the bar... 'Abby announced. ' Do you want something ? ' Luka shook his head.
' Okay, I'll be right back... ' she said kissing him quickly.
He nodded., watching her go, so he didn't see Danijela on the disco, with her friends. X ~ X ~ X
When Abby was coming back, she saw that Luka was arguing with a girl, Danijela probably. Then she kissed him. Luka tried to put her off him, but she was insistent. Abby raised her eyebrow's and resolved to stop this for all
She walked to them. Danijela was trying to push Luka in a table, while kissing him. He was trying to pull away.
' What's going on here ? ' she asked, with her arms crossed over her chest.
Danijela and Luka looked at her, surprised. Danijela smiled.
' Oh, look who's here... ' she said.
Abby saw that Luka was cleaning his mouth with the back of his hand and turning to Danijela, saw that she was tipsy.
Abby raised an eyebrow.
' I was just showing Luka what he's missing... ' she said, smiling at him and putting one finger over his chest.
' Abby, she's crazy... 'Luka tried to say, pushing away Danijela's finger. ' She just appeared and tried to kiss me... '
' Well, she did kiss you... ' Abby said. Then she turned to Danijela. ' Danijela, I know this is hard to you, but I think that you should let him be... '
' And who are you to tell me what to do ? 'Danijela asked.
' I'm his fianceé...' Abby said, showing Danijela her left hand, where there was a beautiful ring.
Danijela looked at Luka.. Her eyes asking ' how could you ? '
Luka didn't say anything.
' You say that you love him... so let him be... ' Abby continued.
With that, Abby picked Luka's hand and they both left Danijela with a lost look on her face. Luka looked at her and shook his head, before following Abby.
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Abby closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Luka and she were outside, sitting on the little wall that divided the street from the beach. Luka looked down, with his hands on his pockets.
' I'm sorry... ' he said. ' She came from nowhere and... '
She cut him off.
' Luka, I saw... ' Abby said. ' If it were someone else, you would be in a big trouble... but since it was her and... I know what she's capable of doing, you're forgiven... '
He nodded and sat besides her.
' Still, I'm sorry... ' he said.
Abby looked at him. He was truly sorry. She smiled and said, picking his arm with her hand.
' Want to show me how sorry you are ? ' she asked him.
He looked at her.
' Sure... ' he said, smiling
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Dani
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Post by Bah on Jan 12, 2007 14:02:38 GMT 10
good update. Danijela is sucks.. please, update soon!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 12, 2007 19:01:39 GMT 10
Will update later... as i said this is the last appearance of Danijela...
Dani
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Post by daniella on Jan 12, 2007 22:05:58 GMT 10
Hey... update !!!
PG - 13...
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The next day, Abby was with Luka sleeping when Vuk called him.
' Luka, probuditi se... ' he said, opening the tent. ( Luka, wake up... )
Luka and Abby tired to hide their faces from the light.
' Što su te dogaðaj Vuk? ' Luka asked, trying to cover himself and Abby. ( What are you doing Vuk ? )
Vuk saw that he was pissed.
' Zalostan , ali ima je detektiv oblièje ako on može biti te... ' said Vuk ( sorry, but there is a detective looking for you... )
Luka looked at him surprised
' A detektiv? 'asked Luka. ( a detective? )
Vuk nodded.
'On je èekivanje ako on može biti te.... ' he said. ( He is waiting for you... )
Luka nodded.
' Popuštanje mene minuta... ' Luka said sighing. ( give me a minute... )
Vuk nodded and left him. Luka closed the tent again and sighed.
' Luka, what is it ? ' Abby asked.
' Nothing... go back to sleep... ' he said, smiling.
Abby nodded and closed her eyes again. Luka looked at her for a few seconds, them looked at hs things. He put the same clothes his was yesterday. He would take a bath later.
When he was ready, he kissed Abby cheek and got out of the tem, closing it afterwards.
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Luka walked towards the dective. He was leaning on his car.
' Detective ? he asked.
'You're Luka Kovac ? ' the dectetive asked.
Luka nodded.
' I have some bad news... ' the dective said. ' I think there was an accident... '
' What ? ' Luka asked. 'Whith whom ?
' Uhn, her name was... Danijela Mihric.. ' the dective said..
Luka's blood froze. He couldn't believe that.
' She left a letter to you... ' the detective said, giving him a letter.
Luka looked at the letter.
' Ho... how ? ' he asked, looking at the man in front of him.
' She fell from the balcony of her room... ' the detective said. ' We think that she wrotte the letter, got drunk and when talking with her friends on the balcony, she somewhat fell... or she killed herself... '
Luka had to seat on the side walk. It was too much for him. He could feel the tears on his eyes. At that moment, he saw Abby coming close.
' Is everything allright ? 'she asked when she saw the state that was Luka. She looked at the detective. ' What happened ? '
' Danijela... ' Luka said. ' She's dead... '
Abby put her hand on her mouth. She couldn't believe that...
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Post by eriluby on Jan 12, 2007 22:41:33 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 13, 2007 0:19:06 GMT 10
great update !!!! and i´m a little bit sad that she died but whatever
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Post by lubylover123 on Jan 13, 2007 0:22:00 GMT 10
ITA Miss Ebay! Great update! Post more sooooon
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