Post by daniella on Jan 4, 2007 13:20:53 GMT 10
I didn't want to post before i finished The Trip... but i got anxious... so you have to be patience with me fot doing three stories at once...
It's kind of different...
- Abby is 17 and Luka is 18...
- This story takes place in 1989...
- This story takes place both in Croatia, Franklin and Chicago...
- There is a little of Danijela and no Jasna or Marko or Richard ( for that matter.. )...
PS: There's some parts talking about the war... Luka will be the center in tese parts, but I don't mean that the Serbians are bad or this or that or it's they're fault that the real war happened ( here, it's all fiction... ).I don't want to pass this kind of thing... They aren't bad people... in a war both sides are hostiles...
Now, hope you liked it... for now, it's PG...
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Abby:
Today, Eric and I went to live with our uncles in Franklin, near Milwalkee... Maggie tryed to kill herself and was addimited to the University Hospital... I was so angry with her... I just want to get away from here the fast as I can...away from her and her problems... I knew that i would have to leave Eric, but this time he would be safe... Aunt Sarah was going to go to the judge tomorrow and ask for our temporary guard...
X ~ X ~ X
Luka:
Me and my brother were at home, having dinner when our father arrived home. He was tired, I could see that and my brother could see that. It was the problems at work. He wasn't recieving well and was afraid that our gains would drop... mother looked at him from the sink where she was washing the dishes... and their eyes locked on each other... I knew that he was preocupied... very preocupied...
X - X - X
Franklin, Minnesota
September 04, 1989
07:49 PM
Abby get down to have diner with his unles, cousin and little brother. They were having pizza to celebrate the decision of the
judge, about them staying with their uncles. But Abby knew it wasn't enough. She had to be very away of Maggie and her ilness.
'Uncle, can I speak with you and Sarah, in particular ? 'she asked looking at her uncle.
Both of her uncles looked at her. This is serious.
'After diner, Abby... ' her uncle Mark said.
She nodded. They continued to eat in silence.
X ~ X ~ X
Zagreb, Croatia
September 05, 1989
03:49 AM
Luka got downstairs and saw that the kitchen light were on, He sighed, knowing that his father was awake. He walked to the table and picking some paper up, he walked to the kitchen.
' Tata , ja znati kako to izraditi više novac.... ' Luka said, walking to his father. His father was making some counts to see what they would have to cute. ( Dad, I know how to make more money... )
' Kako ? ' he asked, without looking at his son. ( How ? )
' Sa ovaj... ' he put the paper on the table. His father looked at it. ' JA ubran taj gore našto sam bio hodanje sa Andro jutrošnji.oni preterit od be davanje Internet na njegov škole' ( I picked that up when I was walking with Andro this morning... they were giving it on his school... )
It was a paper about the interchage program with the US.
'Oni htijenje pays nas recieve student... 'said Luka. ( The will pay us to recieve the student... )
Josef looked at his son. It was a good idea...
' Je te prièati u vaš majka o ovaj? ' Josef asked. Luka nodded. ( Did you talked to your mother about this ?)
' Rekla je taj to je bio tvoj odluka... Luka said. ( She said it was your decision... )
Josef nodded. It was a good idea, but he needed to think about it.
' Ja htijenje misliti o ovaj, Luka... ' Josef said. ( I need to think about this, Luka.. )
Luka nodded and picking some water in the glass that was near the sink, left the room. Josef sighed and looked at the paper again...
X ~ X ~ X
what did you think ?
Dani
It's kind of different...
- Abby is 17 and Luka is 18...
- This story takes place in 1989...
- This story takes place both in Croatia, Franklin and Chicago...
- There is a little of Danijela and no Jasna or Marko or Richard ( for that matter.. )...
PS: There's some parts talking about the war... Luka will be the center in tese parts, but I don't mean that the Serbians are bad or this or that or it's they're fault that the real war happened ( here, it's all fiction... ).I don't want to pass this kind of thing... They aren't bad people... in a war both sides are hostiles...
Now, hope you liked it... for now, it's PG...
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Abby:
Today, Eric and I went to live with our uncles in Franklin, near Milwalkee... Maggie tryed to kill herself and was addimited to the University Hospital... I was so angry with her... I just want to get away from here the fast as I can...away from her and her problems... I knew that i would have to leave Eric, but this time he would be safe... Aunt Sarah was going to go to the judge tomorrow and ask for our temporary guard...
X ~ X ~ X
Luka:
Me and my brother were at home, having dinner when our father arrived home. He was tired, I could see that and my brother could see that. It was the problems at work. He wasn't recieving well and was afraid that our gains would drop... mother looked at him from the sink where she was washing the dishes... and their eyes locked on each other... I knew that he was preocupied... very preocupied...
X - X - X
Franklin, Minnesota
September 04, 1989
07:49 PM
Abby get down to have diner with his unles, cousin and little brother. They were having pizza to celebrate the decision of the
judge, about them staying with their uncles. But Abby knew it wasn't enough. She had to be very away of Maggie and her ilness.
'Uncle, can I speak with you and Sarah, in particular ? 'she asked looking at her uncle.
Both of her uncles looked at her. This is serious.
'After diner, Abby... ' her uncle Mark said.
She nodded. They continued to eat in silence.
X ~ X ~ X
Zagreb, Croatia
September 05, 1989
03:49 AM
Luka got downstairs and saw that the kitchen light were on, He sighed, knowing that his father was awake. He walked to the table and picking some paper up, he walked to the kitchen.
' Tata , ja znati kako to izraditi više novac.... ' Luka said, walking to his father. His father was making some counts to see what they would have to cute. ( Dad, I know how to make more money... )
' Kako ? ' he asked, without looking at his son. ( How ? )
' Sa ovaj... ' he put the paper on the table. His father looked at it. ' JA ubran taj gore našto sam bio hodanje sa Andro jutrošnji.oni preterit od be davanje Internet na njegov škole' ( I picked that up when I was walking with Andro this morning... they were giving it on his school... )
It was a paper about the interchage program with the US.
'Oni htijenje pays nas recieve student... 'said Luka. ( The will pay us to recieve the student... )
Josef looked at his son. It was a good idea...
' Je te prièati u vaš majka o ovaj? ' Josef asked. Luka nodded. ( Did you talked to your mother about this ?)
' Rekla je taj to je bio tvoj odluka... Luka said. ( She said it was your decision... )
Josef nodded. It was a good idea, but he needed to think about it.
' Ja htijenje misliti o ovaj, Luka... ' Josef said. ( I need to think about this, Luka.. )
Luka nodded and picking some water in the glass that was near the sink, left the room. Josef sighed and looked at the paper again...
X ~ X ~ X
what did you think ?
Dani