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Post by daniella on Jan 19, 2007 17:49:35 GMT 10
New story, hope you like it... it's from Joe perspective...
PG...
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Hey, my name is Joseph Kovac. I'm five and half months old. My first memory was before I was born, when my daddy spoke to me in Croatian. That's what my mommy says when he says something we don't understand in another language... well, as I was saying... my first memory was from that time... he spoke and probably kissed mommy's belly, so I kicked to show that I listened...
But I don't think he was surprised... mommy says I did it a lot, so...
I heard them talking and he asked her to marry him... what is it to marry ?
She didn't say anything for an instant... then...
' Luka, can we talk about this another time ? ' she asked.
Daddy didn't say anything, so mommy continued...
' I think that we are happy like this... '
I felt the seat next to mommy shifts and know that daddy isn't there anymore... what happened ?
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Post by eriluby on Jan 19, 2007 20:19:28 GMT 10
Ow, that's a new perspective! So cute!
Keep going, please!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 19, 2007 21:20:09 GMT 10
Great Idea!!!
Kepp going on!
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Post by daniella on Jan 19, 2007 23:47:26 GMT 10
Ow, that's a new perspective! So cute! Keep going, please! Yeah, I just wanted to see Luka ans Abby's relationship from anothe point of view, but from a person who it in the middle of it... so Joe... And, at the same time, a view in the present, not in the future... Dani |
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Post by daniella on Jan 20, 2007 5:26:06 GMT 10
Update...
It pass during 21 guns... PG...
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Another one of my memories, it wasn't very happy... I felt my mommy running and falling and hitting her belly, hitting me... what happened ?
I closed my eyes and I feel a little breathless. Then, I opened my eyes again and feel the world trying to stop moving around me... this isn't a sensation that I liked...
After a few moments... I don't know how to read the time yet... I felt my mommy getting up from the floor and than, putting a hand on her belly... a hand on me... while she walked... I wanted to say: I'm okay mommy... I really am...but i didn't like it... I don't want to do it again....
Then she was sitting again on the floor, telling to call someone, because there was somebody hurt...
Then everything was normal against me again I fell asleep... in a beautiful stupor...
The next thing I remember is my mommy falling on the ground and I saw something near me... like blood... her blood...
Mommy ?
I kicked, but she didn't answer me...
Where's daddy ? Daddy, help mommy... help me...
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Dani
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Post by Rach :) on Jan 20, 2007 6:55:01 GMT 10
ooo i little different i like it  |
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Post by daniella on Jan 20, 2007 8:38:58 GMT 10
Update... PG...
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I heard a lady talking to mommy and helping her to lay down. I don't know what's happening or what the lady is saying. The she screamed.
Sometime later, I felt mommy being pulled of the ground and being laid on anther thing... maybe a matress...
Then the next thing I know is that daddy is with us... I'm so happy that I let them know that I'm a little boy...
Daddy is with us and this is the most important thing...
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The next thing I remember it's a funny thing and a terrifying thing... daddy said to mommy that he would like to name me Mongo...
I think that my mommy was so surprised.... I put my little hand on my mouth, hiding a little smile when I heard his laughing...
Then, mommy and I felt pain. I started to suffer. I wasn't breathing enough and i could feel my chest hurting...
It was the last thing I remember before walking up in a crib, with my mommy and daddy looking expectant to me...
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Post by Rach :) on Jan 20, 2007 9:03:29 GMT 10
awww  |
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Post by Abbie on Jan 20, 2007 10:32:26 GMT 10
This is great!! I like how it's different from most of the other fics!! Keep going! |
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Post by daniella on Jan 20, 2007 10:54:05 GMT 10
I will...  Dani |
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Post by daniella on Jan 20, 2007 20:41:14 GMT 10
Update... PG...
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' He's awake... ' I say my mommy says out aloud. Mommy and daddy are hugging each other. I could hear that they were happy.
Then, I felt something cold into my chest. There was an old black lady looking to my.
' Everything is right with this little guy... the operation is fine and the cut is healing... ' she says. ' Abby, Luka... Joe is okay... soon you can take him home... '
Joe ? that's my name... see, mommy ? Daddy was just joking about calling me Mongo...
I feel mommy hands on mine and she is picking me... this is nice... she put me on her arms and kiss my head... I smiled to her...
' He's ours, Luka... ' mommy says, looking away from me.
' Finally... ' daddy says, kissing my head. ' I love you, Joe... '
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Post by Rach :) on Jan 20, 2007 20:46:03 GMT 10
awww so cute!  |
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Post by marioh on Jan 20, 2007 20:48:00 GMT 10
Interesting fic, different from the other... I love it Bravo Update please ! |
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 21, 2007 3:15:45 GMT 10
wow, this is really great  please update soon  |
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 21, 2007 6:54:21 GMT 10
Love it!!!
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please update soon 