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Post by jadestar on Dec 3, 2006 7:32:37 GMT 10
we will keep on reading very good job, you create a very tense atmosphere in your updates and still let some hope shine through
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Dec 3, 2006 8:22:45 GMT 10
Dani... ahh... vo escrever em port.. aproveitando q vc eh do brasil.. pq eu escrevendo em ingles sou uma negação.. eu entendo, sei falar.. mas escrever...............vixii..xD~
Puuxxa... mt boua sua fic... comecei ler agora e to adorando!!... olhaa naum para naum q ela ta otima!!!!!!!!
Otimo update!!!.......... espero q poste logo... =)
bjoxx... =**
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Post by daniella on Dec 3, 2006 11:42:45 GMT 10
Valeu!!!
Dani
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Post by daniella on Dec 4, 2006 21:15:56 GMT 10
sorry to keep you waiting... had to go out yesterday ( Christmas presents... the family reunited on 24th December... we have the comemoration and the presents on 24th at night... so diferently from americans and other parts of the world ) so, I wriitting the next part today and tnigt translate it and post it... But, I'm afraid that I'm finishing it... just two more parts... Dani
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Post by jadestar on Dec 5, 2006 4:41:16 GMT 10
uh sorry to hear that you have only 2 more parts for us... but I'm looking forward to them BTW we celebrate Christams and give presents on December 24 as well here in Germany... so we have sth. in ommon
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Post by daniella on Dec 5, 2006 7:48:40 GMT 10
Cool... Christmas is the best day of the year, along with Easter and my birthday... ( well, for me anyway... ) Well, you guys will be tense a little... but i have three more stories to tell, so hold on... Dani
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Post by daniella on Dec 5, 2006 9:27:16 GMT 10
The next part... hope you like...
It's PG - 15...
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The thieves let them have some minutes to take care of each other. In exam 4, Luka was putting the last false stitch on Abby's chin. When he finished, he said, smiling a little. Jerry was with them, sitting in a chair, while Carter was sitting in a gurney, thinking and Susan, laid in another gurney, trying to sleep a little, after taking a sedative..
' How long I'm going to be immobilized ? ' she asked, putting her other hand in hurt arm.
' Well, without X - rays is difficult to say.... but may be six to seven weeks... '
' Damn...' she whispered, looking down.
Luka put his hand on her chin, making her look at him. He slowly kissed her a little.
' I'll be with you... ' he said after wards.
' It's a promise ? 'she asked with a small smile.
' It's a promisse... he said, taking her unhurt hand and kissing it.
' Do you think Weaver is going to let us have some time off ? ' Abby asked.
' Maybe... ' he said. ' But after what happened... '
Abby nodded.
' It will be months to me to feel safe here... ' she said.
' You're going to be fine Abby... Luka assured her.
They staid silence for a few seconds. Looking down again, she asked softly:
' Do you think they are going to be okay ? '
Luka knew she was talking about Carter and Susan.
' I don't know... ' he said simply. ' Carter will after a few days, but Susan... '
' He knows what happened to her, Luka... ' Abby said, looking at him.
' I know... it's the worst feeling in the world... ' he said. And I don't want to know what it feels like. .. ever... he thought
They had another few seconds of silence again. But when Luka was going to ask her if she wanted some medicine for the pain, they heard shouts, shots being fired and noises of all kinds.
' What is that ? ' asked Carter, finally off of his stupor. ----------
A few minutes before, men with masks from the ATF group were making their way down the elevators cable. They enter the elevators by the entrance of service in the roof of them. When the first of each group was inside, they opened the door and threw gas grenades on the floor. The gas stared to raise in the air, forming a very good shelter for them to enter in the ER.
The ran inside, with guns ready to fire. The leader of one group made a signal for the other, that nodded and went to the other way, behind the traumas rooms. The first group walked quickly, without making noises. When they reached the first trauma room, the leader made a sign for them to stop. He looked inside the room. There were two thieves inside and another guy in a gurney. There were monitors and IVs on him.
The ATF leader knew it was a thief and made sign for three to go to the other trauma room, while they took care of the first one. In a few seconds they were ready and shots were despaired. The thieves that were in the reception heard them and went to see what was happening. The other groups of ATF arrived on the reception, making the thieves rounded.
-- Freeze... the ATFs said, but the thieves haven't anything to loose.
Shots were despaired and was chaos everywhere: ATF's and thieves were shouting, some got wounded, some dead. There was glass everywhere. greats spots of blood on the walls and mess everywhere. They try to see after, if the leader of the thieves were there, but he wasn't... at least he was wounded. ----------
Luka put his hands away when the shooting stooped. He slowly at on his feet and look at Abby. He put her on the ground when the soothing started.
' Are you okay ? ' he asked gently, putting her hair away from her face. Abby nodded. Luka looked at Carter, with Susan and at Jerry. ' You guys okay ? 'he asked.
' Yeah... 'said Carter and Jerry nodded.
Luka got up and helped Abby to her feet. He helped Carter with Susan too. Jerry got up alone.
When they were going to make sure that it was safe to go outside, the door opened and the leader of the thieves ran inside. He took Abby as a shelter by the throat again and pointed his gun at her head.
' Nobody moves... ' he said.
Some ATFs ran to the room with theirs guns pointed. The Thief turned around with Abby in front of him. Luka was stand near the wall with Carter and Susan. He was tired of having this guy threatening his girlfriend. He walked slowly behind the thief and tried to take his gun.
The thief released Abby when he was fighting with Luka. The ATFs took Jerry and a screaming Abby away.
' Luka... ' screamed Abby. ' No... '
After a few seconds, they heard a shot. The thief got up with difficult. When a ATF saw that Luka was on the ground, holding his side and blood in his hands, he shot the thief in the head. Dillan, the Leader of the Star of Tomorrow and The Chosen group was dead when he hit the ground. Carter and Susan, looked at Luka worried, and Abby was at his side. Touching his head and face, she said:
' It's going to be oaky... you're going to be okay... '
Luka saw that she was crying. He smiled a little. The ATF leader was calling for help on his radio.
' Luka, please... don't leave me... ' Abby said, through her tears. ' I love you... please don't leave me... '
' Volim Te, Abby... '
Luka whispered and closed his eyes.
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 5, 2006 9:30:37 GMT 10
Update!!!!!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Dec 5, 2006 16:10:21 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by jadestar on Dec 6, 2006 0:11:25 GMT 10
oh no, you can't leave us like that... UPDATE PLEASE!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Dec 6, 2006 6:09:11 GMT 10
Aww what a touching update Hope Luka is going to be ok natalie x
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Post by daniella on Dec 6, 2006 6:25:08 GMT 10
Well, I'm tralslating the last part of the story now... But I'm sure you want to know about Luka... so, I'm update tonight, okay ? Dani
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Post by daniella on Dec 6, 2006 7:50:15 GMT 10
The last part... hope will like...
It's PG...
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When Luka woke up, he blinked twice, before find where he was. He discovered that he was in an hospital room, with a respirator on. It appeared to ICU. But what happened with him ? Why he was here ? what happened to Abby... Abby... he looked around and saw her, sitting in a chair, near his bed, reading am magazine.
He tried to smile, but the tube in his mouth prevented him for doing that. Abby saw movement on the bed and looked from the magazine. He was awake. Thank God... she thought, getting up.
' Hi...' she said, walking to the side of the bed.
Luka looked at her and when he saw that she was smiling, he knew that she was alright. He closed his eyes for a few seconds, but opened when he felt her hand in his hair.
'You give us... me a big scarry... ' she continued. ' But everything is okay now... you woke up and that's important... '
Luka nodded slowly. He looked down at the tube in his mouth and Abby followed his eyes.
' Do you want to take this off ? ' Abby asked.
Luka nodded. He want to speak with her so badly.
' I'm going to call Dra. Corday, okay ? '
He nodded slowly again and she kissed him on the cheek. He saw her walking to the door and heard her talking to nurse.
' Can you call dra. Corday ? Luka woke up...
The nurse said something that he couldn't understand and in a few seconds, Abby returned to her place, beside the bed. Luka looked at her and pick her hand. Abby smiled again and a few tears appeared in her eyes.
' I thought that I'd had lost you, Luka... ' she whispered.
He wanted to say something but he couldn't, so he squeezed her hand
In this moment there was a knock on the door. Both looked at it and saw Dra.Corday walking in and put her hands on her hips, but was not impatient.
' Hey, how is my patient today ? ' Elizabeth asked Luka and then Abby.
'He just woke up, but want to turn off the respirator already... ' said Abby, turning her head towards him and smiling.
Elizabeth looked at Luka.
' Oh... very well... ' she said.
She neared Luka and disconnected the machine from the tube and turned off the machine.
' Now, I want you to blow when I count 3... ready ? she asked and Luka nodded. ' One... two... three... '
Luka blew and coughed a little when she took of the tube.
' How are you feeling ? ' Elizabeth asked.
' Sore... ' he said with a rough voice and coughed again.
' This is to be expected... ' said Elizabeth.
' What happened ? ' he asked.
' We had to hurry you to the OR to stop the bleeding... ' said Elizabeth. ' The bullet was in your spleen and you started to have a hemorhage... but we repaired it and saved the spleen... '
Luka nodded.
' I'll let you alone now... "Elizabeth said looked to Abby. ' Excuse - me... '
Elizabeth was almost at the door, he asked.
' When are you going to release me ? "
' If there is no complications, in two days... '
Luka nodded.
' Thanks Dra. Corday... ' Luka and Abby said at the same time.
Elizabeth smiled and walk out of the room. Abby turned to Luka and gave him a kiss on the lips for a few seconds.After, she looked at him.
' What happened, Abby ? ' he asked before she could say anything.
' What do you remember ? ' she asked.
' There was a shooting and... we' ve ducked... ' he said, trying to remember.
Abby nodded.
' Then Dillan, the guy who you fought with, came on the room and held me hostage... '
' So I defended you... ' he completed.
Abby nodded again.
' How is your arm ? ' he asked, after a few seconds.
' Well... they gave me something for the pain... but I'll have to immobilized for about eight weeks... and with this cast for about six... ' she said. Luka nodded.
' And Carter and Susan ? Luka asked again. 'Jerry ? '
' Carter and Jerry were treated for small lacerations and bruises.. ' she said. ' Susan is talking with a psicologist... or trying... she is going to have a lot of treatment ahead...'
Luka looked at the ceiling above him and sighed. They were silent for a few seconds, until Abby said.
' You really scared me, Luka... I thought I was going to loose you... ' she said. ' Please, don't do this ever again... '
Luka looked at her.
'I won't... ' he said.' I love you.. '.
' I love you too... ' Abby said, passing her hand on his face.
They kissed again.
' So, how long we're going to be on vacation ? he asked.
' They have to do a reformation on the ER... so I'd say, three months... maybe... ' she said, still passing her hand on his face.
Luka kissed her hand.
' So after a while, we can be alone... ? '
' Not exactly... ' she said. 'We will have some company for the next few weeks... '
' Who ? ' he asked.
' Maggie... ' she said, quietly.
Maggie ? he wondered. Oh, no... this will be a long year...
The End
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 6, 2006 8:14:49 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on Dec 6, 2006 8:37:41 GMT 10
thanks... there is two that I want to write first... maybe today , ( when i decide wich one ) I start to write or tomorrow... but both will be stand alone... Luby, of course, but stand alone...
Dani
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