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Post by Real Dream on Sept 10, 2006 5:24:43 GMT 10
so sensitive!! I need an update now!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Sept 10, 2006 5:57:00 GMT 10
OMG you have to update, this was so heartbreaking
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Post by jadestar on Sept 10, 2006 6:45:04 GMT 10
OMG sooooooo wonderful and touching! please update soon
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Post by sofia on Sept 10, 2006 23:12:29 GMT 10
Wow, Jaana! You have said me your english isn't very good, but I see that it's not true! I love your story! Update soon!
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Post by lubyfan on Sept 11, 2006 3:57:23 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by larue on Sept 11, 2006 4:14:17 GMT 10
Oh man....where is this going to go??? It's breaking my heart already.
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Post by jaana on Sept 11, 2006 4:38:59 GMT 10
Thanks! Here's an update.
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2 weeks later
Abby heard a doorbell ringing and stand up. She was watching a TV alone and she thought she could be for a moment in peace. Danica was sleeping upstairs and Abby endowed herself to take a break. This week was acute. Danica was ill and Abby needed to take care of her. She didn't go to work. She doesn't want to state to herself that she missed Luka. This is so childish. I'm like a teen. She was so in knot and in confusion. She didn't know what to believe and what not. Luka hurted her and at the same time she forgave him. Abby saw exactly right. He cares of me. Not like a friend, like a lover. But why he lies then? Abby want so much be with him again and Luka wants too. Or not? Uh, this is so complicated. I wanna go somewhere where nobody can see me. Away from this situation. Abby walked into the lobby and opened the door rubbing her back. She almost exclaim alound. Luka was standing there. Countrary her will she felt pity. Luka looked so tired. "Hey, can i come in?" He asked quietly. "Yes, of course." Abby answered, wondering why he came. They walked inside the livingroom where TV was on and at the floor were Danica's toys. On the table was Abby's lunch. "Sorry, here's filthy." "It's okay. It has been long time when i last was here. Where's Danica?" "She's sleeping. She's almost healthy." In the room was silence. Abby winded her arms around herself. "Why you came here?" She asked directly. Luka watched her and sighted. "I really need to talk with you. You think i'm idiot but i'm wholly in confusion." Oh Luka, i'm too. She sat on the sofa and patted a place next to her. "Tell me." Luka sat and pressed his fingers on his eyes. Something bad and unsuspected gonna happen now. I feel it. "Can we talk all things through?" "Sure. I want that too." "Good. Look Abby, i thought i could get over this but i was wrong-" "So, now you say you aren't?" Abby pulled him up. I can't believe i just say that. Why am i so angry now? Abby felt herself disappointed, hurted and all the emotions she keeped inside. She wanna throw them all away and Luka was right there for her. "Abby-" "No Luka, i've keeped this inside for long time and i can't keep it anymore. You always say to me that we are friends and nothing else but how can't you understand that i can't be your friend? I'm trying to get over this but i can't. I always see you at work and when you seek Danica. It's really hard for me. When i go sleep, i can't get you ot of my mind. These 2 years were so hard, for Danica too. I can't watch how she miss you. She miss the time when we were together. Sometimes i just think about our happy moments that we had. And i-" "Can you just for the one second be quiet!" Luka shouted. Abby stopped her talkflood. She was shaking and crying. She felt herself so terrible. "What!?" He looks so moving and he's smiling. Luka grabbed her hands and Abby raised her glance into his eyes. His eyes were shining. Abby was wondering why he smiles. What he gonna say? "I love you."
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chaos1982
Marquise of Luby
I want so much to open your eyes `cause I need you to look into mine
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Post by chaos1982 on Sept 11, 2006 4:50:07 GMT 10
I hope the next update comesfast! ;D I wanna know how Abby reacts!
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Post by sofia on Sept 11, 2006 5:15:41 GMT 10
OMG. ;D Great update! That was so exciting! Good job, Jaana!
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Post by jadestar on Sept 11, 2006 5:31:53 GMT 10
OMG UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.... WANNA SEE ABBY'S REACTION
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Post by ninabrasil (Marina) on Sept 11, 2006 9:12:13 GMT 10
don't leave us like that.... what will Abby say? ? I really like your story! Update soon Nina xx
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Post by steffi1986 on Sept 11, 2006 20:55:18 GMT 10
hey you can't leave us hanging like this what will abby say??? you have to update soon
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Andrea
Marquise of Luby
LUBY Forever and Ever
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Post by Andrea on Sept 11, 2006 23:17:43 GMT 10
Please Jaana updtae soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait so see what happens... i love this fic so much
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Post by Maryna on Sept 12, 2006 0:28:04 GMT 10
can't wait to see abby's reaction!
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Post by Noora on Sept 12, 2006 1:24:17 GMT 10
I love this. In the update 2, that Pink's song was perfect! I love the newest update, it's awesome!! you write so well! Vitsi tää on nii hyvä ficci ^_^ The ending was .. unexpected, for me at least. WOW. I need new update. Now.
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