Post by jaana on Sept 7, 2006 3:58:29 GMT 10
So, this is my first fic ever i write in english. My english sucks so in the text might be some mistakes. Hope you like it and here it goes! And please, tell me if there's any mistakes.
Prologue
Abby opened Danica's room and just watched her daughter's sleep. Abby smiled a little and give her a flightkiss. In the room was dark, it was morning and Danica was in fast asleep. Abby didn't want to wake her up but it was compulsion to do. She quitly walked inside the room and sat on Danica's bed. A small light came in the room from window and illuminated Danica's faces. Her blanket was falling and her right hand was around the teddybear. Abby admire once again how beautiful her daughter was. Mine and Luka's. Remember that. She plunged a bad thoughs away from her head and touched Danica's back. Abby swinged her brown hair away from her face.
"Danica sweetie. It's time to wake up. Your daddy come to seek you soon." Abby said gently. It was Luka's weekend to be with Danica. Since the day when Abby and Luka broke up - they broke up 2 years ago when Danica was 2 years old - every second weekend was Luka's. Abby hurted to see Danica's happy face when she saw Luka. A split was hard to Danica too. She miss him. My beautiful little girl miss her dad and i can't do nothing. Abby felt the tears in her eyes and wiped them away. She concentrate her attention at her daughter and touched her back again.
"Danica."
Danica mumbleded something and slowly opened her eyes. Abby smiled.
"Good girl." She gived a laugh. Danica made a sulky look.
"I don't want to wake up. I want sleep!" Danica called out.
"Even if your daddy's coming?"
"Is he coming?" Danica asked enthusiastic.
"Yea." Abby nodded.
"Yay!" Danica said and bounced up. She jumped on her bed and her beautiful, black hair swinged. Abby laughed.
"Calm down miss." She said. Danica sat down and looked into Abby's eyes. Abby get nervous. Why she look at me like that?
"Are you happy about daddy's coming?" Danica asked. Abby didn't know what to say. She was confused.
"Of course i am. Why did you asked?"
"You don't even talk with daddy anymore." Oh my God Danica. Mommy don't talk with daddy 'cause she loves him. And daddy do not love mommy though mommy wants to. Abby can't tell her that.
"Mommy talks with daddy at the work."
"So you're friends?"
"Yes." Abby lied. It seems Danica was pleased of the answer. Abby clap her hands.
"So, get your clothes on and we can go eat breakfast."
"Okay." Danica said. Abby helped her dress, She dressed a cute blue skirt and a red t-shirt where reads "Mommy's little princess." She combed her hair and put an necklace.
"Look how cute you are." Abby said kissing her cheek. Danica looks like Luka, only eyes were Abby's. Everything in Danica remind her about Luka. Abby loved her daughter so much and won't never loose her, never. She picked her up and Danica winded her small hands around Abby's neck. She placed her head on Abby's shoulder. Abby carryed her into the kitchen and placed her at the table.
"So, what do you want for breakfast?" Abby asked opening the fridge.
"Cornflakes please." Danica asked. Abby nodded. They ate in silence and Abby was nervous. She was getting nervous always when she knew Luka was coming. She didn't noticed that Danica was already done with breakfast and was now jumping. She looked happy.
"What is it?" Abby asked.
"Daddy's here!" Danica shouted and run into the hall. Abby's heart jumped. Why i didn't noticed that? She didn't heard Luka's car. She get up and touched her hair. Uh, this stupid manner is killing me. She always touched her hair when Luka was near. Just to be sure her hair was okay and she looked good. She was breathing deep when she waked into the hall. Danica opened the door and Luka pick her up and hugged her tight. Abby smiled when she saw that.
"Hey my morning star!" Luka whispered in her ear making her laugh. Abby quivered when she heard Luka's voice. Oh, stop that Abby! You see him and hear his voice almost every day, why you always react like this? Luka raised his gaze at Abby.
"Hi." Abby said and smiled a little.
" Hey." Luka said. They didn't know what to say.
"Um, Danica sweetie, go get your bag and you can go." She finally said. Luka let her go and Danica run away. It was silence again. Man, this is so bothered. Luka's eyes wandered along the walls.
"So, how are you?" He asked.
"I'm fine thanks. Like usually, busy with work and..." Her voice faded. "And you? How are you?"
"I'm fine thanks. Have work today?"
"Yes." Abby answered. Luka nodded. Suddenly they heard a feeble sound came from the corridor, Danica appeared and Abby picked her up.
"Be good girl for daddy. I'll seek you at Sunday." Abby said kissing and huging her.
"Okay mommy. Luv you." Danica said.
"I love you too." Abby said softly and handed her to Luka.
"Bye. Say bye to mommy." Luka said.
"Bye!" Danica said waving. Luka nodded and smiled. Abby watched how Luka put Danica in her carseat and then sat themselves in the car. Abby watched how they drive away and sighted. She felt herself so lonely. I just want feel his lips on my and hear him say i love you for the one last time.
Prologue
Abby opened Danica's room and just watched her daughter's sleep. Abby smiled a little and give her a flightkiss. In the room was dark, it was morning and Danica was in fast asleep. Abby didn't want to wake her up but it was compulsion to do. She quitly walked inside the room and sat on Danica's bed. A small light came in the room from window and illuminated Danica's faces. Her blanket was falling and her right hand was around the teddybear. Abby admire once again how beautiful her daughter was. Mine and Luka's. Remember that. She plunged a bad thoughs away from her head and touched Danica's back. Abby swinged her brown hair away from her face.
"Danica sweetie. It's time to wake up. Your daddy come to seek you soon." Abby said gently. It was Luka's weekend to be with Danica. Since the day when Abby and Luka broke up - they broke up 2 years ago when Danica was 2 years old - every second weekend was Luka's. Abby hurted to see Danica's happy face when she saw Luka. A split was hard to Danica too. She miss him. My beautiful little girl miss her dad and i can't do nothing. Abby felt the tears in her eyes and wiped them away. She concentrate her attention at her daughter and touched her back again.
"Danica."
Danica mumbleded something and slowly opened her eyes. Abby smiled.
"Good girl." She gived a laugh. Danica made a sulky look.
"I don't want to wake up. I want sleep!" Danica called out.
"Even if your daddy's coming?"
"Is he coming?" Danica asked enthusiastic.
"Yea." Abby nodded.
"Yay!" Danica said and bounced up. She jumped on her bed and her beautiful, black hair swinged. Abby laughed.
"Calm down miss." She said. Danica sat down and looked into Abby's eyes. Abby get nervous. Why she look at me like that?
"Are you happy about daddy's coming?" Danica asked. Abby didn't know what to say. She was confused.
"Of course i am. Why did you asked?"
"You don't even talk with daddy anymore." Oh my God Danica. Mommy don't talk with daddy 'cause she loves him. And daddy do not love mommy though mommy wants to. Abby can't tell her that.
"Mommy talks with daddy at the work."
"So you're friends?"
"Yes." Abby lied. It seems Danica was pleased of the answer. Abby clap her hands.
"So, get your clothes on and we can go eat breakfast."
"Okay." Danica said. Abby helped her dress, She dressed a cute blue skirt and a red t-shirt where reads "Mommy's little princess." She combed her hair and put an necklace.
"Look how cute you are." Abby said kissing her cheek. Danica looks like Luka, only eyes were Abby's. Everything in Danica remind her about Luka. Abby loved her daughter so much and won't never loose her, never. She picked her up and Danica winded her small hands around Abby's neck. She placed her head on Abby's shoulder. Abby carryed her into the kitchen and placed her at the table.
"So, what do you want for breakfast?" Abby asked opening the fridge.
"Cornflakes please." Danica asked. Abby nodded. They ate in silence and Abby was nervous. She was getting nervous always when she knew Luka was coming. She didn't noticed that Danica was already done with breakfast and was now jumping. She looked happy.
"What is it?" Abby asked.
"Daddy's here!" Danica shouted and run into the hall. Abby's heart jumped. Why i didn't noticed that? She didn't heard Luka's car. She get up and touched her hair. Uh, this stupid manner is killing me. She always touched her hair when Luka was near. Just to be sure her hair was okay and she looked good. She was breathing deep when she waked into the hall. Danica opened the door and Luka pick her up and hugged her tight. Abby smiled when she saw that.
"Hey my morning star!" Luka whispered in her ear making her laugh. Abby quivered when she heard Luka's voice. Oh, stop that Abby! You see him and hear his voice almost every day, why you always react like this? Luka raised his gaze at Abby.
"Hi." Abby said and smiled a little.
" Hey." Luka said. They didn't know what to say.
"Um, Danica sweetie, go get your bag and you can go." She finally said. Luka let her go and Danica run away. It was silence again. Man, this is so bothered. Luka's eyes wandered along the walls.
"So, how are you?" He asked.
"I'm fine thanks. Like usually, busy with work and..." Her voice faded. "And you? How are you?"
"I'm fine thanks. Have work today?"
"Yes." Abby answered. Luka nodded. Suddenly they heard a feeble sound came from the corridor, Danica appeared and Abby picked her up.
"Be good girl for daddy. I'll seek you at Sunday." Abby said kissing and huging her.
"Okay mommy. Luv you." Danica said.
"I love you too." Abby said softly and handed her to Luka.
"Bye. Say bye to mommy." Luka said.
"Bye!" Danica said waving. Luka nodded and smiled. Abby watched how Luka put Danica in her carseat and then sat themselves in the car. Abby watched how they drive away and sighted. She felt herself so lonely. I just want feel his lips on my and hear him say i love you for the one last time.