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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 21, 2007 16:58:00 GMT 10
I am back everybody. I resolved my personal issues, and now I am back. I am updating my stories. Please continue to read them. I missed everybody. Here is the next chapter.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 20 We arrive home, and my sister Jeneri has hung a huge sign out in the yard. WELCOME HOME JOSEPH. It reads. I get out of the car, and into my wheelchair. I then roll myself up the ramp, and into the house. When I get in the house. There a big suprise for me. Aunt Susan, Uncle Chuck, Cosmso, Aunt Kerry, and Henry are there waiting for me. They throw me the best party a person could ask for. Dad comes in carrying my bags. Chuck goes out and helps him bring my stuff in. I wheel myself around the house. Not much has changed since my time in the hospital. I go to my room. Henry and Cosmo come in, they on the foot of my bed, and tell me that it is great to be home. I tell them that Ella has woke up. Cosmo is excited, and wants to go see her right away. I tell them, that she needs to spend time with her mom right now. We will go see her a couple of days. They both agree.
Cosmos Pov: It is great to have Joseph back home again. I am hoping that he will be able to start school again real soon. I hear that he is going to be home schooled for awhile, just so he can catch up with his classes, and then he will come back to school. As we sit talking in his room, my mom walks in and tells that dinner is going to be pretty soon, just as soon as your Uncle Luka figures out how to light the barbecuer. I turn to Cosmo, and tell him that it will be Aunt Abby to the rescue again. We all start to laugh. A few minutes later we can hear Uncle Luka yelling at the barbecuer in Croatian. Joseph sits there and shakes his head. What is he saying? I ask Joseph. You do not want to know, mom does not like the word used around the house. I just sit there, and try not to laugh.
Henrys Pov: Listening to Luka using foul language in his native Croatian is getting better and better by the minute. Pretty soon, we hear foot steps coming up the hall. The door opens, and Jeneri walks in. Dad is really mad at the barbecuer again, replies Jeneri,. Yeah we know we can hear him all the way in here. I look at Joseph and Cosmo, and ask them if they want to go outside and try to help him out. Lets go and see what we can do replies Joseph.
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Post by rorygilmore on Jan 23, 2007 17:50:21 GMT 10
Hahaha!!! Luka, yelling in croatian at the barbacuer was really funny! I pictured the entire scene in my head and I began to smile and end up laughing like crazy (they're gonna kick me out of the house, I'm making too much noise and it's like 3:00 am here) Love when Luka curses in croatian...it's funny and hot!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 23, 2007 19:53:58 GMT 10
Chapter 21 Abbys Pov: I head outside and help Luka with the barbecuer. We then start grilling hamburgers, hot dogs, and steaks. After they are done, we call the kids for dinner. Henry, Joseph, and Cosmo take their dinner up to Joseph's room. I tell them not to make a mess. Ok mom yells Joseph. Jeneri has invited a couple of her friends over. They will stay the night, and then Luka will take them home on his way to the hospital. After dinner everybody is sitting around the living room, talking and trying not to think about our day at work tomorrow. At 10:00 we decide to call it quits. Everybody says good bye and all except for Jeneri's friends we are alone in the house a family again.
Lukas Pov: It has been a trying four months for both Abby and myself. I take Abby in my arms and carry her upstairs. I lay her down on the bed, and we make love. After we finish. We both fall asleep in each others arms. The next morning we wake up to the alarm, and start getting ready for work. I am going ahead of Abby today, she needs to take Joseph to his doctors appointment today. I head down stairs to get the coffee ready. When I get downstairs I see Joseph sitting in a regular chair, without his wheelchair. I ask him where his wheelchair is. It is in my room. I walked out here, very slowly. It took me about 20 minutes to do it, but I did it. I give Joseph a big and hug, and yell up to Abby to come down here.
Abbys Pov: I hear Luka calling for me. I head downstairs to see what he wants. As I enter the kitchen I see Joseph sitting in a regular chair. Don't you have something to tell your mother, replies Luka. Joseph tells me that he walked out in the kitchen. He told me that it took him 20 minutes to get out here, but he is bound and determined to be walking again soon. Joseph also tells us, that he is ready to go back to a regular school. I want to start school again next week, replies Joseph. Luka and I agree on it. MIght do him some good, for him to go back to school and be around his own peers. Luka finishes getting ready for work, and heads out the door with Jeneri's friends in tow. He is dropping them off at their homes. I take Joseph to the doctor, and then we head to the hospital. When we arrive at the hospital, I ask Joseph what he is going to do for the day. He tells me that he is going to up and see how Ella is getting along. Ok have a good day I tell him, I will mom as he slowly walks towards the elevator
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 24, 2007 18:00:29 GMT 10
Chapter 22 Josephs Pov: I arrive at Ella's room, and notice that she is not there. I ask the nurse where Ella is, she tells me that Ella is down at therapy, and should be coming back shortly. I wait in the room for her. A few minutes later Grant pushes Ella's wheelchair back into the room. He tells her good bye, and comes over and sees that I am not using my chair anymore. He congratulates me, and tells me good luck in the future. I give a hug, and Grant walks out the door. I go over and help Ella get back into bed, she is very exhausted from her therapy. Once she gets settled, she asks me when I was planning on going back to school. I tell her that I was going back next week. I can't wait to get back to school, I have missed so much this year already. Ella tells me that she is not sure if wants to stay here in Chicago, and finish out her Senior Year in high school here, or go back to London with my mom, and finish school over there. She tells me that she misses going to school in America. I walk over to the bed, and tell her that I would support her in what ever she decided to do. I give her a hug, and head out the door. When I reach the elevator, I start thinking to myself. Am I starting to have feelings for Ella, was that hug, just a hug of friendship, or is this the start of something even more.
Ellas Pov: I am sitting here thinking. Oh wow, I really do like Joseph. I have never felt this way about anybody before. Sure I have had a few boy friends, but nothing quite like this. Most of my boy friends, I will call them crushes. I am in my own little world, when my mom walks in. She walks over to the bed, and gives me a hug. I tell her that I want to talk with her about school. I tell her that I have decided to stay in America, and finish school. Mom asks me where I plan on staying. I had planned on staying with Rachel and Kai, that way I could help out with my niece and nephew. Rachel wouldn't have to hire a babysitter. Is there something that you are not telling me. My mother asks. I tell her that I have serious feelings for Joseph. She tells me that I need to take things more slowly. I tell her that we are just friends, but who knows what can happen. Mom give me another hug, and tells me that she has to get going, so she can get some shopping done. She also tells me that my grandmother from England is coming to Chicago for a medical conference, and would like to come and see me. Sounds great I tell her. After mom leaves I lay my head on the pillow and fall alseep.
Abbys Pov: I come out of tramua one, after dealing with a screaming child, and another child kicking me in the shins. I spot Joseph sitting at the recpition desk talking with Jerry. Hey kiddo I tell him, as soon as I am done with my patients, we can go up to the cafeteria, and get a bite to eat. Great he tells me, I have to talk you about something, he tells me. I go back to my patients. After about a half hour, I am finally finished with demon children, and Joseph and I are on our way up to the cafeteria. We get our lunch, and find a table next to a window. You wanted to talk to me about something, I ask Joseph. He tells me that he has serious feelings for Ella. I look at him, and tell him that I am happy for him, but he has to remember that both him and Ella have been through a lot these past few months. You are both recovering from your injuries, and you both have a lot of emitional issues to deal with also. Joseph looks at me, and tells me that him and Ella are taking it slow. We are just great friends right now. He also tells me that he is going to finish school first, and become a doctor. I tell him that I am very proud of him. A few minutes later I hear my name being paged over the intercom. I tell Joseph that I need to get back to work.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 25, 2007 16:31:03 GMT 10
Chapter 23 Kerrys Pov: It is my day to drive the boys to school. I yell at Henry to hurry up and get ready for school. We need to go and pick up Joseph today, he is starting school today. Ok mom replies Henry. Henry and I get in the car, and start heading out the drive way. On our way to pick up Cosmo and Joseph I have a blow out. I pull over to the side of the road, and check the tire. Henry will you give Susan and Abby a call and tell them that we are going to be a little late getting the boys. Henry calls Abby and Susan and relays the message. I finish fixing the tire, and we are on our way again. We pick up the boys, and now it is off to school. Joseph looks nervous. I ask him what is wrong, he tells me that he is a little nervous about going back to school. I tell him that he will do great. I drop the three boys off, at the drop off point. I sit there in my car watching the Three Muskateers walk into the school
Josephs Pov: I enter the front doors of the high school. I feel so all alone in such a big building. Henry and Cosmo take me to the office so that I can get my schedule for my classes. Welcome Mr. Kovac. I am the principal Mr. Young. I hope your first day here, is going to be a great day. I'm sure it will be I tell him. I get my schedule and look at it. I have: Advanced Math, Advanced English, English Lit, Geography, Business Applications. I look at my schedule and head off to home room. Cosmo and Henry go their home rooms, we agree to meet at lunchtime I walk into my home room. Everybody starts staring at me. Class this Joseph Kovac, he is joining us for the first time today, please make him feel at home. I sit down next to a couple of girls, they start giggling. I ask them what is so funny. Your dad is so cute, says one of the girls. How do you know my dad, I ask them. He took care of my mom last year, when she my baby brother at the hospital. Oh I say. The teacher steps to the front of the room, to take roll.
Cosmos Pov: Henry and I are in our home room. The teacher has just taken roll, and now we are listening to the boring annoucements of the intercom. After home room, I head for my first class. Advanced Math. I notice that Joseph is in my class. I go over and sit next to him. The next thing I know Ms. Andrew is telling me that we cannot sit together. She tells us that since we are good friends, she is afraid we may not concentrate on our studies. I look at her harshly, and move to the seat she is pointing to. I sit down, and class is about ready to begin. After class I talk with Joseph outside the room, don't worry about her, I tell Joseph. Joseph and I walk off to our next classes.
Henrys Pov: It is so good to have Joseph in high school, with Cosmo and myself. I have American History next. Then after that Joseph and I have Business Applications. I really hate the class. I asked my mom why I had to take the class, she told me that being a doctor in my own clinic, I have to learn the Business aspect of the job also. I go to my computer, and start working on business reports for the week. Joseph walks in the class. The teacher calls my name, Henry will you please come here, and show Mr. Kovac to a computer please. Sure I will. I show him the basics of the computer, and get him started on the project we are working on for the week. After the bell rings it is lunch time. Joseph, Cosmo, and myself head to the dining hall. I wonder what the lunch will be today. We sit down and eat our lunch, talking about our day at school so far. I ask Joseph and Cosmo if they are going to go to the basketball game, and then to the dance on Friday night. They say sure. The bell rings again, and it is back to classes.
Josephs Pov: Henry, Cosmo, and I take the El to the hospital. The hospital is very busy. Cosmo heads to the staff lounge, Henry goes up to the childrens ward. It is his day to read to the children, and I head up to Ella's room. We start talking. She tells me that she has decided to stay here in Chicago, and finish her Senior year here. She is going to be living with Rachel and Kai. I give her a kiss on the lips. I tell her that I am so excited for her. Ella then tells me that she is getting to go home either tomorrow or Monday. That is great I tell her. I have seem to have lost track of the time, because my dad has come up to the room, and has been looking for me over an hour. There you are. Are you ready to go home. We still have to pick up Jeneri from her ballet class, and then we need to go to the store and pick up something for dinner. I give Ella another kiss on the lips. As dad and I are walking out the door. He gives me a pop on the arm. Just like your old man. Yeah right I tell him.
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Post by rorygilmore on Jan 25, 2007 17:33:13 GMT 10
Aww! Ella and Joseph They're meant to be together...so sweet! Liked when Luka said, Just like your old man . Oh! and I'm glad Ella decided to stay!!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 25, 2007 18:21:24 GMT 10
Thought I would have some fun with this story. I am going to be adding a twist in the story. My other favorite tv show is Law and Order SVU. I am going to incorporate a couple of the characters from that show into my story. The two characters I will be using in the story will be Detectives; Olivia Benson, and Odafin Tutuola. This may sound confusing at first, but you will catch on. I hope you enjoy.
Chapter 24 Abbys Pov: I am sitting here on the couch. My family has just come through the door. We have been through so much this past year. The kids are growing up so fast. Joseph is in his freshman year in high school. Jeneri is in the 5th grade this year. After the kids are out of school for the summer, we plan on taking them to Hawaii. Luka looks at Joseph, well young man don't you have something to tell your mother? asks Luka. I am thinking to myself, oh great what has he done? Mom I gave Ella her real first kiss today. My little man is growing up, but I tell him to take it slowly. I will mom says Joseph. Well I had better get going on my homework. I give Joseph a hug, and he is on his way to do his home work. Jeneri tells me about her day. I have to a report on another country. I think I am going to do mine on Croatia says Jeneri. That is great I tell her. Your dad will help you out in any way that he can. Jeneri tells me that she is going to go over to her friends house, so they can get started on their reports. Ok I tell, just be home in time for dinner. I will she tells me. Luka comes in from the kitchen and sits down by me. He wraps his arms around me, and asks me if I could change anything about our lives, what would it be? I tell him that everything is perfect, I would not change anything.
Susans Pov: Cosmo is just finishing up his home work, and Chuck is making dinner tonight. Cosmo comes from his room. He wants to know if he can go over Aunt Abby's for dinner tonight. I ask him, if he wanted to stay home for his fathers meat loaf. He looks at me with his mouth wrinkled up, I think I will pass and have dinner at Joseph's tonight. Ok I tell him, just make sure you are home around 11:00, you have school in the morning. Ok I will, Cosmo tells me. I go into the kitchen to see if Chuck needs any help. He tells me no, ok I tell him, and walk outside to get some fresh air.
Josephs Pov: I am sitting here doing my home work, about 15 minutes later the door bell rings, and I hear my dad telling Cosmo to come in. Cosmo comes up to my room and we do our homework together. We talk about school, and girls. I tell Cosmo that I gave Ella her real first kiss today. Cosmo slaps me on the back. Way to go Romeo. Oh ha ha, I tell him. No really I want this to work out. Cosmo asks me if Ella is going to stay here in Chicago, or go back over to England with her mother. I tell him that she is going to stay here in Chicago, and live with her step sister Rachel. As we are talking, my dad comes up to my room, and asks me if I could please call over to Sarah's house, and tell Jeneri that it is time to come home for dinne. Ok dad I will. I get on the phone with Sarah's mother. Oh hi Joseph she tells me. No Jeneri is not here. Her and Sarah left an hour ago to go over to your house. Sarah came back, about 10 minutes ago. She told me that your parents gave Jeneri permission to go over to Neela's house. Oh ok I tell her, and I hang up. I find my mom and dad in the kitchen, hey mom did you give Jeneri permission to go over to Neela's house. My mom sets down her towel, no she never asked to go over to Neela's house, my mom tells me.
Abbys Pov: After talking with Joseph, I get on the phone with Neela. Hey Neela, has Jeneri come by your house in the past hour. No Neela tells me, she has not been here today. Why what is going on? Neela asks. I tell her that Jeneri went to her friend Sarah's house to do her homework, and she was suppose to be home for dinner, and she did not show up. Neela tells me that she will keep her ear and eyes open for us. Ok I tell her and hang the phone up. I tell Luka what is going on. He tells me that him and the boys are going to go out, and look for her. You stay here in case she comes home. Ok I tell him, and then he is out the door. Where could she be? I begin to wonder.
Jeneri's Pov: I Was walking back home from my friends home, when I thought I had heard what sounded like foot steps behind me. I didn't think much of it. I dropped my book bag, I bent down to pick it up. When I stood back up, I felt a gloved hand cover my mouth. I tried to scream out, and to kick and claw my way out of his grasp, but he is to strong for me. He puts me in the back of a van, closes and locks the door, and speeds out of there. I wonder where he plans on taking me. A while later, the van stops. He comes into the back, and puts a blindfold over my eyes. He then puts me into another vechile, and we are off again. I start to cry. I want to go home, I want to be with my family. I tell him. Shut up he tells me. When I won't shut up, he punches me in the face, so I will shut up. A while later the vechile stops, and the man grabs me out of the van. I can hear him talking to another person. I am not sure what they are saying. He takes me into a small room, and I feel myself being layed down on a bed, I feel the ropes tightening around my arms and legs. He leaves the blindfold on. He tells me the blind fold is so I would not be able to identify my captor, he also tells me it is so I cannot see what he is going to do to me. I start to cry, and praying that my family will find me soon. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Like I said at the beginning of this thread, this is a different twist to the story. I hope you all enjoy. I am off to bed now. Have a good day tomorrow. Donna
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 27, 2007 8:56:11 GMT 10
Ok before I post the next chapter. I need to know if you want me to continue on or just give up on this fan fic. I am not getting very many responses, so just wanted to know what I should do? Give me smiley if you want me to continue this one. Give me frown if you do not want me to continue this fic. Your response will be greatly appreciated it. I will be writing my last chapter in I loved her first on Saturday night. Thanks again everybody. Jacobsmommy
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Post by rorygilmore on Jan 30, 2007 15:46:43 GMT 10
OMG!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 30, 2007 16:34:44 GMT 10
This section is rate PG-13. Chapter 25 Abby's Pov: I am sitting here waiting for Luka and the boys to get back from looking for Jeneri. I decide to call Neela. She tells me that she would be right over. When Neela gets here. I meet her on the porch. She gives me a hug. Have you heard anything yet. asks Neela. No we haven't. The phone rings. I answer it. It is Luka, he tells me that they have not found her yet. He tells me that we may have to call the police. I tell him ok, please hurry home. Iam coming home in about a hour. Ok I tell him. Neela and I sit waiting. A hour later Luka comes through the door with the boys. I ask him if there has been any word of Jeneri. Luka tells me no. He picks up the phone and calls the police. After he is done on the phone, he tells that the police are coming right over. I start to cry, and Luka takes me in his arms.
Jeneri's Pov: I lay here tied up, blindfolded, and scared. Who would want to take me away from my mommy and daddy? What did I do to anybody? The door opens up. I hear my captors voice. Well sweet thing, I hear say. You don't even know who I am. I tell him no. You may not know me, but your mommy and daddy do, as he rubs his hands up and down my leg. Everybody at that damn hospital called me crazy, but I am not crazy, just because I stabbed two doctors there, he tells me. I tell him if he lets me go, I promise not to tell anybody about you. He starts laughing. Are you kidding, you are not going anywhere. He starts rubbing me down in the crotch area. I tell him to please quit, but he tells me that it is time for me to become a woman. I beg and plead with him to stop, but he keeps going. All I think about is my mommy and daddy.
Luka's Pov: The police have arrived at our house. We hand them picturs of Jeneri. One of the officers, tells us that this may be a kidnapping. Oh god who would want to kidnap Jeneri? I wonder. The officer wants to bring in a couple of detectives from New York. I tell him ok, lets do it. I will call their captain right away, and have them on the next avaible flight. Ok I tell him. I go to Abby, and tell her that we are going to have some outside help. She asks who it is. A couple of detectives from New York, by the names of Olivia Benson, and Odafin Tutuola.
Olivia's Pov: I am Olivia Benson, I am a detective for the Special Victims Unit. My life has been pretty messed up. My mother was raped, and I was the product of that rape. When I was growing up, my mother was an alcholic. I decided to become a police officer, so I could help people out. I am here at the precint with my partner Elliot Stabler, Odafin Tutuola, John Munch, we are sitting around talking about the latest case, when our captain Donald Craigen calls Fin and I into the office. He tells us that we have an assignment in Chicago. A 10 year old girl has been kidnapped. Her parents are both doctors in Chicago. The little girls name is Jeneri Kovac. Her parents are Abby and Luka Kovac. You are on the next flight out, so you two had better get going. Both Fin and I go back to our own homes, to pack for our trip. We meet at the airport, and take the next flight out.
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Post by rorygilmore on Jan 31, 2007 15:23:51 GMT 10
Oh no!!! Poor Jeneri!!!
If that bastard touches her again, I swear I'm going to...well, I'm not sure what I'm I going to do! But that man makes me so sick!!!
PLEASE DON'T HURT HER!!! SHE'S SUCH A SWEET LITTLE GIRL!!!
Hope Olivia will get to kick his butt SOON!!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 31, 2007 18:31:03 GMT 10
This section is PG-13
Chapter 26 Olivia's Pov: We arrive in Chicago, we are met at the airport by Detective Prince of the Chicago P.D. I ask him why he brought us down here. He tells us that we are the best in finding missing children. We get in his car, and head for the police station, where we will be briefed, and then we will meeting with the parents. We arrive at the police station, and are taken to a briefing room. Detective Prince introduces us to his collegues. Then we get the scoop on the kidnapping victim. Her name is Jeneri Kovac, she is 10 years old, born in Croatia. She was adopted when she was two years old, by Luka and Abby Kovack. She has an older brother Joseph, who is 15 years old. He is Luka and Abby's biological son. She was last seen by her brother going to her friends house for a study date. When she did not show up at home for dinner, her father and brother went out looking for her. a picture is passed around. Detective Prince informs us that this family has a very strong support system. He also tells us that the family has already been through enough this year. Their son was involved in car accident, and almost died. Now their daughter has been kidnapped, let's try and get her back to her family safe and sound. Ok I tell him. 30 minutes later we show up at the house. Detective Prince introduces us to the parents. Abby and Luka this is Olivia Benson, and Odafin Tutuola of the Special Victims Unit in New York. They are very pleased to meet us, as we shake hands. We are brought in the living room, where we introduced to their son Joseph, and their friends; Susan Lewis, Kerry Weaver, and Neela. We all sit down, and start talking about the last time anyone had seen Jeneri. Abby and Luka tell us they had last seen her here in the house, then she went to her friend Sahra's house that was the last time that they saw her. Joseph tells us the last time he saw her was here in the house also. The last time anyone else saw her, was a couple a days ago, when she came into the ER. A routine she followed everyday. As we sit here and talk with the parents. I feel we have a tough case on our hands.
Jeneri's Pov: I lay here, my wrists and ankles hurt very badly. I hear foot steps, they are his foot steps. I hear him speak to me. He asks me if I am hungry. I tell him yes. He then tells me I will need to work for my food, he says this as his hands slide up my leg. I want to kick him in the face, but I can't since I am tied up to the bed. His hands move up to my crotch area, he tells me tht today is the day he will make me a woman. His hands move up to the button on my pants, and he unbuttons my pants. I tell him to please stop, but he is not listening to me. He then removes my pants, next he starts taking down my panties, as he is doing this his other hand is rubbing the inside of my thighs. I pray to God he will stop soon. I hear him unbuttoning his pants. He then gets on top of me, and has his fun with me. It hurts so bad I tell him, but he tells me to shut up, and enjoy the moment. When he is done he gets up, and puts his pants back on. He tells me I did good a job, and now I can eat. He leaves me tied to the bed and feeds me a butter sandwich, with a glass of water. He tells me that he is going to leave my pants off, so he can have better access. I feel him get up off of the bed and walk out of the room.
Abby's Pov: It has been nearly 48 hours since Jeneri went missing. We are told by the detectives that we will start looking in the morning. I go over and talk with Olivia. I ask her what brought her into this line of work. She tells me that her mother was raped, and that she the product of that rape, I also like helping people, she tells me. We sit and talk for awhile. About an hour later the phone rings. Olivia tells us to answer the phone, and Fin will start running a trace on it. I pick up the phone, hello I say. The voice on the other end of the phone sounds low and burly. He tells me that he has my daughter, I scream at him to give her back. Oh I will when I get what I want. What do you want? I ask him. I will tell you that in a couple of days. He tells us. Your daughter is a sweety. I have already made her a woman. He laughs in the phone. What hve you done to her?, you God Damn Bastard. He tells me to wait for his next call in two days. Oh by the way when I call do not have the police there. I want to talk to my daughter now, I demand. He tells me to say hi quickly. I hear Jeneri's voice calling me mommy. He is on the phone, are you got to hear her voice, he laughs. Then he hangs up. I feel so help less. I want to find my daughter now. Fin tells us that he had a trace, but then he lost it. I wonder how he could know that the police were at the house. Olivia starts looking around the house, and finds the small camera, tucked away nicely in Jeneri's teddy bear
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Post by rorygilmore on Feb 1, 2007 18:15:06 GMT 10
OMG!!! THAT SICK BASTARD!!! WHEN THEY FIND HIM, MAY I SHOOT HIM??...hey, maybe I can use a big 'monster truck' to run over him! Poor Jeneri, she didn't deserve that WOW! I still can't believe all of this! ...and how brilliantly you've gave your story that big promised turn. It's all such a big drama now, and the subject you're touching is so difficult and heartbreaking...just like the real cases they present in the show. GREAT work Jacobsmommy! I haven't read something SO moving in a very long time.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Feb 2, 2007 2:33:02 GMT 10
Chapter 27 Luka's Pov: We were all shocked when Olivia found the camera hidden within the teddy bear. Who would break into our home, and do such a thing? There is a small tape within the bears stuffings. Olivia takes the tape out, and hands it over to Fin. He puts it into our vcr, and we start watching. We are totally shocked at what we see. There is a small room, with a bed in the middle. Off to the right we see a chair. The room is dimly lit. Our biggest shock comes, when we actually see our daughter tied to the bed. Abby sees this and starts to cry. Next we see a man enter the room. Come on show us your face, says Fin. The guys face turns towards the screen, I am in total shock as I see who it is. The man is none other than Paul Sobricki. Olivia asks us if we knew who the man was. We tell her yes. We explain to her that Paul had come into the hospital a few years back complaining of severe headaches, and seeing things. To make a long story short, he went crazy, and stabbed to of our doctors. One was an intern, Lucy Knight, and John Carter. John survived his attack, but Lucy died. What does he want with Jeneri, she does not even know this man. A few minutes later the phone rings. I answer the phone. It is Paul. He tells me that he wants to speak with Abby. I nervously put Abby on the phone.
Abby's Pov: Hello I say. I am going to tell you today, what I want. He tells me that he has some unfinished business with John Carter. He wants John to meet him at the corner of 25th and Broadway, down by the old subway station. I tell him that I want our daughter back. He tells me that if we cooperate, and do as we say, then we will have Jeneri back. He also tells us to remember no cops. I tell him ok, and the phone goes dead. I look at everybody, and tell them that he wants a one on one meeting with John Carter. Luka looks at me in suprise. Olivia tells us to go ahead and call John up, and have him come over here. I get on the phone and call John. The phone rings four times before he answers. Hello says John. Hi John this is Abby. Luka and I want to know if you could come over for a bit, we need to talk with you. This is very important, we will explain everything when you get here. Ok I am on my way says John. Ok bye. He is on his way I tell everybody. We are all looking at the tape again. As we are watching the tape, we notice Joseph is studying the tape as well. He wants Fin to back the tape up for a minute. Fin backs the tape up, and Joseph notices that Paul had gone outside for a minute. Hey mom, dad I know where that place is. Henry, Cosmo, and I use to ride our bikes down there, it is by the old subway stations. You use to get mad us mom, when we would go down there and play. Olivia asks Joseph, if he could show them exactly where they were. Yes I will show you. I want to get my sister back he tells Olivia. A few minutes later the door bell rings. It is John.
John's Pov: Abby answers the door, and gives me a great big hug. I see that she has been crying, are you ok? I ask her. Is Luka and the kids alright? Abby leads me into the living room. She tells me that Jeneri has been kidnapped. I turn pale and sit down on the couch. Abby introduces me to the two detectives Olivia Benson, and Odafin Tutuola. I shake hand with them. The female detective tells me what is going on. She also shows me the tape. As I am watching the tape, I notice a man entering the room. When he turns around, I just about throw up on the floor. I cannot believe that I am seeing Paul Sobricki. Luka tells me that Paul wants a one on one with me. I ask him why? He would not say, you are suppose to meet him at the old subway stations on 25th and Broadway. Luka tells me. Ok I will do everything I can to help get Jeneri back. I tell them.
Olivia's Pov: I call up detective Prince at the Chicago P.D., and tell him to get a swat team together, we have found where she is being held. I tell him to meet us at the location. Next we get John ready for his meeting with Paul. I put a wire on him. I want to know everything they are talking about. John tells me that he is very nervous about doing this. Don't worry, we will have your back I tell him. Luka and Abby want to come along, I tell them ok, but they will have to stay out of sight, while the meeting is going on. Remember what he told you? No cops just Carter. A hour later we show up at the site. There are three buildings. All of them the same size and color. We park behind the building, so we are not seen. The swat team has postioned themselves around the building. John gets out of the car, and slowly starts walking towards the buildings. A few minutes later we see a man coming out of the building. As we are listening, the man starts speaking. Well look here, It is the rich young doctor John Carter, he laughs at him. John asks him what the hell do you want? I wanted to make your life miserable, just like you made mine. How did I make your life misrable? You are the one that stabbed me. John tells him. Paul tells him that he had to spend all of his time at a State hospital. John tells him that he will have to live with night mare of being stabbed over and over everyday in his mind. As they are talking, we decide it is time to take Paul. I give the signal, and five police officers walk in around surround John, and Paul. I thought I told you no cops here, as Paul draws a gun. The police tell Paul to drop his gun, he tells them no. Again he is asked to drop his gun. Paul puts the gun up to his head, he tells everybody, I guess you will never find out where Jeneri is, and he pulls the trigger. Everybody gets out of the car, and we all run over to see what is going on. I tell everybody that we have a little girl to find now. We are going to split into groups. Three people on each team. I want Abby and Luka on two of the teams. Abby is going with me, and Luka is going with Fin. We carefully enter the buildings.
Abby's Pov: We are walking around the old buildings. It is cold and damp in here. As we are walking we start hearing what sounds like a small voice calling. Help me. I stop Olivia and have her listen. She to hears the small voice. We start walking toward the sound. Again the voice calls out. Help me. We come to a couple of doors. Olivia bangs on one of the doors. Jeneri honey are you in there. Yes I her my sweet daughter voice, please somebody help me. I notice the door is bolted shut. Don't worry honey, help will be right here. I have your mommy with me. Olivia tells her. I go up to the door, and tell her that everything is going to be alright. Olivia radios her partner Fin. We found her. We need a good strong foot, to help kick in the door. She tells him. A few minutes later Fin and Luka come running into the building. Fin takes his foot and kicks down the door. In the room tied to the bed I see my sweet precious angel. I run over to her and take the blind fold off of her. She has tears in her eyes. Luka comes over, and cuts the ropes that have been digging in her flesh for the past five days. Olivia calls for a bus. I sit holding my daughter. She keeps telling us over and over that she is sorry. I tell her she has nothing to be sorry about. You did nothing wrong I tell her. A few minutes later the ambulance shows up. The paramedics start an IV, and assess the wounds. Luka tells the paramedics that the rope burns are deep. They load her onto the gurney. The paramedic tells him that they are going to take her to Mercy. I tell them no she will go to County. My husband and I are both doctors there. They tell us ok. A few minutes later we are on our way to County.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Feb 4, 2007 7:39:06 GMT 10
Chapter 28 Abby's Pov: The ambulance pulls into County. Luka and the detectives are right behind us. We get out of the ambulance. Kerry, Susan, Haleah, and Morris are waiting for us. The paramedics unload Jeneri. Haleah walks over to her, and tells her welcome back. Thank you says Jeneri. We take her inside. They take her to trauma 1. They move over to the bed, and start working on her. Vitals are normal says Morris. When Morris goes to touch her arm, she screams at him, don't touch me, don't hurt me anymore. Morris jumps back out the way, and says he is sorry. I tell Jeneri that Morris is one of the good guys here, he is not out to hurt you. Jeneri tells Morris that she is sorry. Morris accepts her apologizes. A few minutes later Kerry pulls me off to the side. She tells me that there is significant bruising betweene Jeneri's legs. She wants to know if we should do a rape kit. Yes I tell her, no telling what he did to my little girl. After the rape kit is done. Jeneri starts complaining of pain in her stomach. An ultrasound is brought in, there is bleeding in the belly. Not sure what is going on unless we get her into exploratory surgery, says Susan. I go out and talk with Luka. Looks like she will need surgery I tell him. She has bleeding in the stomach, the stomach is very tender to the touch. Luka tells me ok, as he turns around walks away. I go back in the room. I tell Jeneri that she is going to need surgery. Do I have to mommy, can't you fix me? I tell that mommy is not a surgeon, but Aunt Neela is, lets see if she will help with your surgery. Ok she tells me. Susan phones up to have a surgery consult come down. 20 minutes later Dr. Dubenko, and Neela enter the room. Glad to have you home says Neela to Jeneri. Dr. Dubenko tells Jeneri that they are going for a little ride now, and when she wakes up, she will be feeling a lot better. We walk to the elevator with Jeneri. We say our good byes, and she is on her way to surgery. Sorry chapter is so short. I had to hurry and write it. We are on our way to into town, to pick up some stuff for the kids, and to do some grocery shopping.
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