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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 27, 2007 8:55:28 GMT 10
Ok before I post the next chapter. I need to know if you want me to continue on or just give up on this fan fic. I am not getting very many responses, so just wanted to know what I should do? Give me smiley if you want me to continue this one. Give me frown if you do not want me to continue this fic. Your response will be greatly appreciated it. I will be writing my last chapter in I loved her first on Saturday night. Thanks again everybody. Jacobsmommy
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 28, 2007 17:44:02 GMT 10
Chapter 11 A couple of months after christmas. Abby and Luka are getting ready for a wedding. Maggie and her boyfriend Mike have decided to go ahead and get married. They have decided to get married in May. Abby is taking her mom out to have her fitted for her dress. First they stop by and pick up Neela, who is going to join them for a ladies day out on the town. They pull up into Neela's driveway. She steps into the car and says to Abby. "Gosh you look like you are getting bigger everyday I see you." Abby rolls her eyes, and tells Neela that "she feels like a beached whale." Neela and Maggie laugh. They arrive at the local dress shop. Maggie has picked out something simple, not to frilly, but something nice. She goes into the dressing room, changes and comes out. Abby and Neela look at her and start to whistle at her. Looking good mom "replies Abby. After they pay for the dress, they go to the local diner and grab a bite to eat. After they are done for the day. Abby and Maggie drop off Neela at her house, and go home. Maggie looks at Abby and tells her that it will only be two weeks before the wedding. Abby looks at her mom, and hopes she can make it to more weeks, before the baby is born.
The night before the wedding, Abby yells down to Luka. "I think it is time to go to the hospital. Luka takes Abby to hospital, but they are back later that evening. "It was only false labor." Luka explains to Maggie, we will be at the wedding tomorrow. Maggie smiles at them. She knows that she is about to marry the man of her dreams, and is going to become a grandmother for the first time. The next morning everybody gets ready and heads for the church. Abby has been racked with pains all morning,but is bound and determined not miss her mothers wedding. Abby wishes that Eric could be here, to enjoy their mothers happiness. At noon time the wedding march starts, and Abby, Neela, and Susan march down the aisle. Cosmo, and Ella are so cute in their outfits, as they come down next. When they get to the front. The minister asks "You gives this woman to be wed." Abby replies "I do, her daughter Abby, and I think my water just broke." As Abby fall to her knees in pain. Neela gets to Abby first and asks her. "how far apart are the contractions?" Abby replies "that the contractions are about 3 minutes apart. Neela yells for Luka, who comes over and scoops up Abby, and starts rushing out the church door with her. Abby tells Luka "I have to push". Luka rushes Abby back inot the churh. He tells Neela, Kerry, Susan, and Maggie to follow him. They find a nice quiet little room. Luka starts to panic, he thinks to himself. "I have helped deliver a lot of babies, and now I feel so lost." Kerry tells him that everything is going to be ok. They go back over to Abby. "Ok Abby we are all here to help you." Explains Kerry. "I want you to take a deep breath, and on the count of three start pushing." Kerry tells Abby. Abby starts pushing, ok stop says Susan. "Good job honey." replies Luka as he wipes the sweat away from Abby's forehead. "Ok one more time" replies Kerry. Abby pushes again. "I see the head." replies Neela. "Ok Abby one more push and the baby should be out." Ok one more time. Abby pushes one more time, Congratulations mom and dad you have a healthy baby girl." Kerry tells the proud parents. Abby and Luka are gazing over their precious baby daughter. When Abby is again racked with pain. Susan looks down, and tells Kerry she had better get back over here again, "I think they are about to have another one. Luka is totally shocked, he was not expecting two babies. Abby pushes one more time, and this time a baby boy is born to the happy parents. Everybody leaves the room,after getting Abby and babies cleaned up. "You did great mom." replies Luka. He stands there holding his daughter Jana Marie,and Abby is holding their son Micheal Jovan. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Please comment.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Feb 6, 2007 16:45:21 GMT 10
Chapter 12 The ambulance has just arrived to pick to take Abby and the babies to the hospital. Luka meets the paramedics at the door of the church. Everybody who is waiting out side in the sanctuary are wondering what is going on. Finally Suan comes up to the front, and announces the wonderful news. Everybody stands up and starts clapping and praising Jesus. As Abby is being wheeled out, everybody stops, and gives Abby and Luka a round of applause. Then the pastor comes over and blesses the children and their parents. The paramedics tell them that they have to get to the hospital, It seems that Abby has lost a lot of blood. They put them in the ambulance and take off for County.
Morris is sitting at the desk, when Haleah looks at him, and tells him to get up, they are bringing in a 41 year old female. She just delivered twins. The babies are doing good, but the mother has lost a lot of blood. We will need to get some O negative blood down here. We also will need OB down here, when they arrive. Morris looks at Haleah and moans, probably some home less mother who just gave birth. Haleah looks at him, and tells him she does not care if it is an alien who just gave birth. Everybody who comes through these doors, are cared for here. Now get your ass to work. Morris goes over and immediately calls OB.
The ambulance pulls into the bay. Sam, Haleah, and Pratt go out to meet the ambulance. Then they see Kerrys car driving up also. Kerry gets out of the car, and rushes over to the ambulance. What is going on Haleah asks Kerry. Kerry tells them that Abby gave birth to twins in the church. The babies are doing ok, but Abby is not doing to good, she has lost quite a bit of blood. Kerry opens the doors to the ambulance. Luka gets out. The female paramedic hands him Michael, and Sam takes Jana. Luka then hands Micheal over to Pratt. Sam and Pratt rush the babies inside where doctor Coburn is waiting for them. Luka then helps with Abby. Kerry takes Luka to the side and tells him maybe he should sit this one out. She has lost a lot of blood, and is not doing well. Just as Luka steps away from the ambulance one of the paramedics yell. She does not have a pulse.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 13, 2007 3:20:59 GMT 10
Chapter 13 Luka turns his head towards the ambulance. "What do you mean she does not have a pulse." Luka replies. Luka pushes his way past the paramedics, he starts to do chest compressions, while Haleah bags Abby. They rush into the hospital. Luka gets her into tramua one. We need to intubate right away Luka says. Ray hearing the comotion comes running in. "Ray hand me an intubation tray right away." Yells Luka. Ray stands there confused. "Is that Abby?" questios Ray. Haleah tells him yes. Right away he gets the intubation tray, and Luka gets Abby intubated. Haleah keeps bagging. Ray looks at Luka and tells him that she has no pulse still. Luka grabs the paddles. "Charging to 200, everybody clear." Luka yells. Still no rythm says Haleah. "Charging to 250, everybody clear." Luka yells again. Haleah looks at the monitor, we have a sinus rythm. We have her back says Ray.
"ok everybody lets keep working, I cannot afford to lose her now." replies Luka. Kerry comes into the room. She is relieved that they were able to bring Abby back. She walks over to Abby, and shouts at her. "Abby open your eyes." No response from Abby. Luka stands there worried, why won't she wake up. Kerry shakes her head and tells Luka she is not sure why. Haleah hangs another bag of O negative blood, Sam calls up to the ICU unit. They have a bed ready for Abby, as soon as we can get her up there. Luka, Neela, Kerry, and Haleah all go up to the ICU unit with Abby. After she is settled in, and the repirator is hooked up to her. Kerry tells Luka that she is going to go up to the nursery, and look in on those precious babies. Luka tells her ok, and goes to sit down by his wife.
Luka takes Abby's hand, and tells her how much he loves her, and that she did great giving birth to the twins. They are very beautiful he tells her. Jana weighs 5 pounds and 2 ounces, and Micheal weighs in at 5 pounds 3 ounces. They look just like you. Please dear God, let her wake up soon. She has two beautiful children. Luka says as tears are flowing from his eyes.
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Post by ERFanRach on Mar 13, 2007 3:28:51 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 14, 2007 1:59:38 GMT 10
CHAPTER 14
Three months have passed, and Abby still has not woke up yet. Luka comes in every morning. He takes the kids up to day care, and go and works his shift. He then picks up the babies and brings them to Abby. He is hoping that maybe the sound of their coos, and cries will help Abby to come out of her coma. Luka then takes the kids home, where a nanny he has hired cares for the children, while Luka comes back to the hospital to be with Abby.
Luka is sitting with Abby, he is telling her what happened that day. He tells her about his day at work, and how everybody misses her, he tells her that he just came closer in wanting to punch Morris. Just then Lukas pager goes off, he goes to a phone and answers it. Luka, this is Neela, could you please come down stairs, we have a patient who is demanding to see you. I told him that you were off, but he only wants to see you. Ok I tell Neela,"give me five minutes to get down there", says Luka. Luka heads downstairs he goes to the front desk. Frank tells him that crazy Joe is back. I go into the room, and there sits a man around 50 years old. He was brought into the ER last Christmas, he was our patient that decided to amputate his own foot, because gangrene had gotten in his foot. He is thrashing around on the bed, and their is blood everywhere. Luka looks at Sam, and asks her what body part did he cut off today. Sam looks at him and tells Luka, that Crazy Joe has managed to lop off his manhood. Luka turns around and walks out of the room. "Frank please call surgery, tell them they have a body part they need to try and reattach. Then call Psych, tell them they need to come and take this man away." Luka then walks back into the room, and asks Crazy Joe why he dismembered himself. Crazy Joe looked at him, and shrugged his shoulders.
Luka tells Sam that he is going to go back upstairs and sit with Abby for awhile longer, before heading home for the night. Luka goes back upstairs. He sits down by Abby, and tells her that Crazy Joes was back. This time he managed to lop off his man hood. Still there is no response from Abby. Luka again says another prayer, and heads home for the evening.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 16, 2007 6:07:23 GMT 10
Chapter 15 The next morning Luka is going to the El, when he notices a familiar face in the crowd. "Well I'll be darned, John Carter. How are you?" replies Luka. John tells him that he is doing good. He has just returned from Africa. "I hear that you and Abby got married?" replies Carter. Yes we did, and we have twins, a little girl Jana, and a little boy Michael. They are 3 months old. How does Abby like being a mother? Asks John. Luka looks at John and tells him that Abby has not been able to enjoy being a mother. She has been in a coma, ever since the babies were born. John tells him that he is sorry. Maybe I will go up to the hospital later, and see her. Luka tells him that she would like for you to come and visit.
Luka gets off of the el, and heads towards the hospital. When he arrives the ER is hetic. There a screaming children, a man running around flashing everybody, and an elderly woman yelling at Pratt. She is accusing him of taking her husband away from her. She wants to know, where Pratt is hiding her husband. Luka goes into the staff lounge, gets his lab coat, and proceeds to help out the madness. First he helps out with the elderly lady, by telling her that Pratt has not done anything with her husband. She lets Luka take her back to her room. Next he helps out with the screaming children. The children are in with sore throats, and they do not want Morris to look at their throats. Luka walks over, talks to the children. They open their mouths, and Luka is able to get the throat swabs. He tells Morris that he gets to take care of the flasher. Morris starts moaning and groaning. Just do it says Luka.
After his shift is over, Luka walks into the staff lounge. Kerry is there, she asks how Abby is doing. Luka tells her that there is no change. Luka slams his locker shut, and heads upstairs. He gets to Abby's room, he goes over to her bed, sits down by her, and starts telling her about his day. He starts talking about how the children are doing. They are getting so big he tells her. Luka gives her a kiss, just as he is about ready to walk out the door, he hears Hello.
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Post by ERFanRach on Mar 16, 2007 8:02:56 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 16, 2007 18:58:58 GMT 10
Chapter 16 Luka is not sure if he is hearing things, or did he actually hear Abby tell him hello. He looks around the room. There laying in the other bed, is another female, but Luka has overheard the doctors tell her family, she will never wake up again. Luka goes rushing over to Abby's bed. He looks at her. She is still sleeping. Maybe it was all a dream, he kisses her on the lips, turns around and again begins to walk out the door when he hears the same familiar Hello. Luka rushes back over to the bed. This time when he gets there, Abby is awake.
Abby looks over the room, "Where am I." She asks Luka. Luka tells her that she is in the hospital. She starts to cry. "What day is it?" Abby wonders. Luka tells her that it is September 10th. "No it can't be." Abby starts to worry. I have to get up, I have to get ready for work. Abby tries getting out of bed. Luka tells her not to worry about anything. Luka then gets Abby to relax. Luka gives Abby another hug.
Luka rushes out to find the doctor. He finds Dr. Anspaugh, and tells him that Abby is awake. Dr. Anspaugh comes into the room, and sees that Abby is awake. "Glad to you back young lady." replies Dr. Anspaugh. After he is done with Abby, he looks at Luka, and asks him if he wants him to tell everybody down in the er that Abby is awake. Luka tells him no, that he would do it. ok Dr. Anspaugh replies before he walks out the door.
Luka then tells Abby about their children. She looks at him confusingly. "I have two children? Where did the other one come from?" wonders Abby. Luka asks her if she remembers giving birth to Michael. She tell him that she remembers being at a church. Then waking up here in the hospital. Abby begins to cry. "Why can't I remeber," She wonders.
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Post by ERFanRach on Mar 17, 2007 7:27:36 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 19, 2007 0:55:57 GMT 10
Chapter 17 Luka lets Abby cry on his shoulder. He tells her that it takes time. All Abby wants to do is to remember what happened. Luka tells her not to worry about the past, but to concentrate on the future. He shows her pictures of their twins. She holds the picture. "Those are my babies?" Abby asks. "Yes," replies Luka. "What are their names?" asks Abby. Their names are Michael Jovan, and Jana Marie. Luka tells her. Abby lays back on the bed holding the picture. Then she starts to cry again. Luka goes over to her, and holds her, and rocks her.
About an hour later, Luka walks down to the ER. He tells Susan and Kerry that Abby has woke up. Susan is very happy. Luka tells them that Abby is having problems remembering, "so she may or may not reconize you." Luka tells them. Susan tells Luka that she is going to go up and see Abby after work. Kerry gives Luka a hug, and tells him that if he needs anything, she will be there for him and Abby. Luka tells them both Thank You. Luka finishes his shift and heads home. He has decided to pick up the children and bring them to hospital.
Luka gets back to the hospital, he walks in the room with the babies, he hands Michael over to Abby to hold. She holds him, and starts singing to him. Luka then gives her Jana, and she starts rocking both babies. Luka comes over to the bed, and sits down with Abby and the babies. He puts his arms around his family, and all four fall asleep.
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Post by ERFanRach on Mar 19, 2007 8:02:52 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Post by lubylover08 on Mar 19, 2007 8:45:38 GMT 10
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 19, 2007 11:37:36 GMT 10
Chapter 18 When Luka wakes up, he realizes it is past mid night. He gives Abby a kiss, and tells her, that he needs to get the kids home, and into bed. He takes each of the kids out of Abby's arms, and leaves. When Luka arrives home, there is a message on his answering machine. It is Maggie, she is wondering how Abby is doing. Luka calls her, and tells her that Abby has woke up, but she does not remember anything that happened, or who people are. Could she come out right away. Luka tells Maggie. Maggie tells that she will take the next flight out. Luka has agreed to pick her up at the airport.
Luka arrives at work. Susan has gone up to see Abby. When she returns she takes Luka into the staff lounge, and tells him, what might work is brining Abby down here in familiar surroundings. She might start remembering in a familiar surrounding replies Susan. Luka tells her that it sounds like a great idea. He heads upstairs, and tells Abby that she is going to spend the day down in the ER. She tells Luka that she does not want to go down there. I will not remember anybody. Luka tells her that if she goes down, things that are familiar to her might help her to remember. Abby finally agrees to go.
When they arrive downstairs, everybody is there and they start applauding and cheering, when Abby enters the ER. Abby is scared, she does not remember any of their faces, she wonders who they are.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 21, 2007 4:05:38 GMT 10
Chapter 19 Abby looks at Luka with a very confused look on her face. Luka tells her that this is where she is a doctor, and these are their very dear friends. Abby gets out of her wheelchair, and starts walking around the ER. She goes from room to room, and looks into each room. So this is where I work? replies Abby. Out of nowhere Abby hears the crying of a small child. She goes towards the sound. In tramua three, a small boy about 4 years old, is sitting with his parents, he has his arm in a sling, and he is crying. Abby walks in the room, and kneels down at the child. She asks him what happened. The small boy tells her that he was playing on a swing and fell off. My arm really hurts. Abby looks at the parents, and asks them, if she can take him up to have the x-ray done. The parents agree. Just as Abby turns around, she notices that Luka, Susan, Kerry, Haleah, Morris, Ray, Neela, and Chuney standing there with tears in their eyes. Abby looks at them, tells them, "excuse me," I have work to do, and do not get in my way Morris. Luka gives everybody a hug. Abby is finally remembering.
Luka talks to Kerry in letting Abby stay down in the ER for the rest of the day. She won't do any tramuas, just take people to x-ray, ct scans, basically be there for the people who are scared and alone. Kerry agrees, it will do her some good. Luka runs off to find Abby some scrubs. About 20 minutes later Abby comes back down to the ER with the little boy, he tells her that his name is Jacob. Abby looks at him and tells him now he needs to pick a color for his cast. Jacob tells her that he a blue cast. "because it is my favorite color." Abby leads him to the casting room. After they are finished, and Jacob leaves the ER with his parents. Luka comes over to Abby, and tells her job well done. He also tells her that Kerry is letting her stay down in the ER, but she cannot do any tramuas yet. Abby tells him ok, and goes off to what she can do next.
When the day ends. Abby finds Luka, she asks him if she had to stay at the hospital He tells her that he will go and talk to Dr. Anspaugh, and find out. About a hour later, Luka walks back down to the ER and tells Abby that she can go home tonight. Abby is so relieved. They say good bye to everybody, and walk out into the night air. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is end of part 1. Please stay tuned for part 2. It takes place about 5 years later. I am glad everybody is enjoying this fan fic.
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