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Post by XxXnicoleXxX on Mar 21, 2007 8:36:38 GMT 10
i havent ever any commented on this fic but i must say its very good!
i hope you keep up the good work and update soon
XxXnicoleXxX
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 22, 2007 1:14:24 GMT 10
PART 2: This takes place about five years in the future. The twins Jana and Michael have entered Kindergarten. Abby and Luka are considering adopting a child from Croatia. Everything seems to be going smoothly with the family, until tradegy is going rock the ER.
Chapter 20 Abby, and Susan just dropped the kids off at school, then they started heading their way to work. When they get off the El they notice a man staring at them. Susan and Abby start walking a little faster, when they reach the ER, Abby tells Luka about the guy her and Susan had seen near the El. Luka tells the two ladies to be careful today. Susan asks Abby and Luka if they would like to join her and Chuck for dinner tonight. Abby accepts the invitation. Since my mom is in town, she will stay home and watch the twins for us. Just as Abby started to walk out of the room, the doors fly open, and a young mother with a baby about 5 months old come into the Er. The baby is lethergic, and Abby notices the babies ribs are sticking through his skin. Abby takes the baby from the mothers arms, and calls Luka, Susan, and Kerry to help her out.
They get the baby into tramua 1. Kerry starts an IV drip on the baby right away. "The baby is probably malnourished, and dehaydrated," replies Kerry. Susan goes to the phone and calls Social Services to come down right away. "This is a bad case of abuse." replies Luka. Social Services shows up to talk to the mother. "Where is she" replies the Social worker. "She should be out in chairs replies Susan. "She is gone." Replies the social worker. "What is going to happen to the baby," asks Luka. "The baby will be taken up to NICU, and then when she is better, then she will be going into a foster home, and hopefully will be adopted one day." The social worker tells Luka. Luka stands there and starts to sing to the baby. After NICU comes down, and takes the baby up. Luka stands there and cannot believe how people can do things like this to their children.
On their way home from work, Luka talks to Abby about becoming the babies foster parents when he gets better. Abby reminds Luka that they are in the process of adopting a little girl from Croatia. "Yeah I know" replies Luka, "but we could take care of this baby also." Abby tells him that she will think about it. When they arrive home. Abby looks at Luka and tells him yes, they will also be the baby's foster family. When they get home, they gather the family,and tell the twins the good news. "Mommy and Daddy, are going to be parents to a little baby." Luka tells them. "You mean mommy has a baby in her tummy?" asks Michael. "No sweetheart" replies Luka, we are going to be foster parents, and we are going to have a baby live with us for awhile. The twins are not sure what to think of the idea. Luka takes the children upstairs and gets them ready for bed. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART 2 CONTAINS ADULT THEMES SO THIS PART IS RATED MATURE. PLEASE ENJOY.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Mar 24, 2007 8:04:02 GMT 10
Chapter 21 The next morning Abby wakes up to the twins watching cartoons downstairs. She wonders if she has overslept. She slips on her bath robe and heads downstairs. Luka is sitting on the couch watching cartoons with the children. "Good morning." he tells Abby. The twins right away want pancakes for breakfast. Abby goes into the kitchen and starts fixing breakfast for her family. Just as she is fixing breakfast the phone rings. Luka answers the phone. "Hello," replies Luka. "Hey Luka this is Neela, is Abby there." Luka calls for Abby. It's Neela. Abby talks to Neela for a while and then hangs up. "She just wanted to know, if we were coming into work today. I told her yes. Abby then goes back into the kitchen and starts making breakfast.
Abby and Luka head out the door. When they arrive at County. Luka goes across the street and buys everybody coffee for the day. Abby heads into the ER. Everything is slow today, Pratt tells Abby as she walks in the door. Oh good she replies. How is the baby they brought in yesterday doing? asks Abby. She is doing great says Pratt, Social worker says she will be ready to go to a foster home maybe by next week. Abby looks at Pratt and tells him of her and Lukas plans to be the baby's foster parents. Pratt smiles at her. Just as Pratt and Abby are talking. Three guys walk into the ER. They stop by the triage station where Sam is working, they claim that one of them has a sprained hand, and would like for someone to look at his hand. Sam has them feel out all of the paper work, and starts taking the guys vitals. Just as Sam is getting ready to take the guy's blood pressure. The other two pull out guns, and over power Sam.
The three men drag Sam into the back of the ER. Susan looks up from behind the desk. Right away the three men start yelling. Everybody over here NOW!!! they demand. Everybody assembles at the desk. Ok everyody this is how it is going to work. I want all doctors over here, then I want all nurses over there. If you give us a hard time, we will start shooting. Is that clear? they demand. Everybody is scared to death. Neela, Susan, Abby, Pratt, Ray all go over to where they were told. Each are tied up and gagged. The nurses are also tied up. The three guys start going through the drugs. They stuff whatever they can into their pockets. Just as they are stuffing their pockets, Kerry walks into the ER.
One of the guys looks up, oh look it is another doctor. Over there with the rest. Kerry turns around and notices her doctors and nurses sitting on the floor tied up. One of the guys roughly shoves her down to the ground, and ties her up with the rest of doctors. The tallest man grabs Susan and asks her where there are any more drugs at. Susan tells him she does not know. He takes her into another room. Everybody is wondering what is going on? Neela and Abby have tears in their eyes, and everybody is scared to death. Just then a shot rings out in the ER.
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Post by shelby on Sept 1, 2008 0:25:41 GMT 10
OMG is this the end? If it isn't..... please update soon!!!
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Post by suzanne on Mar 18, 2009 0:47:32 GMT 10
OMG is this the end? If it isn't..... please update soon!!! I agree, you should update!!
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Post by Martine on Mar 20, 2009 7:19:40 GMT 10
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