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Post by charlieluby on Jun 29, 2006 6:53:52 GMT 10
“What would you say if I said that I had wanted to do that for a veeeery long time?” Abby asked as she laid her head on Luka’s naked torso. His laugh echoed through her body and filled her with warmth. He waited a moment before replying. “I guess I would say that I know how you feel?” he says genuinely. I can’t believe I just slept with Luka for the first time in…god knows how long. Not that I haven’t imagined it. I smile and look up at him. “Really?” Abby asks and gazes deep into his eyes, they glisten with passion and love. Luka nods. “Really.” He says so simply and honestly. Oh my god, I think I am back to that same place that I was the first time we dated. Love? I don’t know whether it is love but if it isn’t it sure as hell is a lot like love. Luka leans down and kisses her. He slowly glides his hands down her sides, which make her shiver with delight. In one swift movement he moves her on top of him, bringing their bodies evermore closer. Abby moans softly into Luka’s mouth, with that he slide his tongue over the top of Abby’s and massage it gently. Wow, he is so good at this. He definitely knows what he is doing. We are both moaning now. I don’t know how much more I can take of this before I need him closer to me. I moan into Abby’s mouth and delve my tongue deeper into her mouth but it’s not enough, I want more. I can’t believe I am about to have sex with Abby for the second time tonight. The many nights I have sat and thought about her, wanting to be with her. Not just for the amazing sex we share but for the warmth and happiness she brings to me. Slowly, Abby pulls away from his mouth and kisses his neck, then shoulders and chest. Circling her tongue around his nipples. Man, this feels great! She then moves down to his belly button- an inny. She pushes her tongue in and teases it. She really knows what buttons to push and I can’t believe it’s dear, sweet, gorgeous Abby pushing them. She slowly moves down his body, she so tortures him with her tongue. Right Abby, enough, it’s you turn. In one motion, he flips her over so he is on top.
“You are truly beautiful Abby” Luka whispers before planting a soft kiss on her lips. Abby smiles. “I love you Luka,” Abby whispers suddenly. Oh my god. I can’t believe I just said that. I didn’t even no I was in love with him, my heart is telling me I am. Oh my god! Luka say something. Luka stops abruptly and looks at her, a thousand thoughts rushing through his mind. “I…. I…. i can’t believe you just said that Abby!” he says, Well that makes two of us! “I love you too!” he says strongly with passion. With that he slides into her making her gasp. He looks down at her afraid that she is hurt. She smiles up at him and he beams back at her. I can feel myself going. I don’t think I can last much longer. Suddenly, they both burst with pleasure together as they call out each other’s names. Sweat dripping from their faces. Smiles spread across them. The happiest they have ever been. Wow! They both think in unison. Together as one. “I love you so much!” they whisper to each other.
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Jun 29, 2006 6:54:36 GMT 10
Post by charlieluby on Jun 29, 2006 6:54:36 GMT 10
Post ur comments! Just a rondom i dea i just had. Should i make this a one-shot or continue??
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Jun 29, 2006 7:03:01 GMT 10
Post by anna982 on Jun 29, 2006 7:03:01 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Great writing.[/glow]
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Jun 29, 2006 7:04:21 GMT 10
Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 29, 2006 7:04:21 GMT 10
Great start!
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Jun 29, 2006 14:58:03 GMT 10
Post by jaana on Jun 29, 2006 14:58:03 GMT 10
Nice start!
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Jun 29, 2006 17:32:07 GMT 10
Post by rorygilmore on Jun 29, 2006 17:32:07 GMT 10
charlieluby: This was really beautiful. So romantic (that's the most important . I love the way you've described their thoughts, the moment, very nice. Please continue your story, you've wrote a great beginning.
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Jun 30, 2006 2:53:13 GMT 10
Post by charlieluby on Jun 30, 2006 2:53:13 GMT 10
Thanks for all the fantastic feed back! i love reading it and i hope you enjoy this next part as much as i enjoy your comments!!
What is that fantastic feeling? That soft touch. Oh it’s Luka. He’s nuzzling my neck. Gosh I am so lucky. Lucky but tired. I didn’t really get much sleep last night. Luka softly nuzzles against Abby’s neck and plants delicate kisses on her neck and face, not realising she is awake. “Mmm” Abby murmurs in satisfaction. Luka smiles into her neck and softly sucks on it. Abby giggles like a little girl in 6th grade with pigtails. That tickles so badly! “Luka!” Abby says through fits of giggles, “That tickles! Plus I have to go to work soon and I cant have this huge hickey on my neck. It’ll give the patients the wrong impression!” Abby said trying to keep a straight face. Luka chuckled. “And what impression might that be? That you are sleeping with your, may I say incredibly gorgeous, boss who happens to be feeling in an incredibly romantic mood this particular morning” Luka said cheekily. So true, but I shouldn’t tell him that! Lets have some fun!“I don’t think romantic is the word you are looking for Luka?” Abby says, as if he has used a word in the wrong context. Luka looks up confused. “It’s not?“ Luka asks with a cute, confused look on his face. Oh this is too much fun! “No,” Abby says, “I think the word you are looking for is HORNY!” Luka’s expression changes from confused to laughter as Abby’s warm, giggle echoes through the bedroom.
This girl is so sexy in the morning. I could just kiss her. Oh yes, I keep forgetting I can and don’t have to feel the slightest bit concerned. Luka leans in and delves into her mouth catching her by surprise as she gasps. I love the power I have over her body. She quickly returns the kiss making noises of satisfaction as her hands run down my back and she strokes me with her feet. She wraps her legs around him, before pulling away to breathe. Christ! “I told you! You’re just horny!” she says and places a deep, but quick kiss on his soft, divine lips. “Plus, we have to go to work…” Abby leans over to the table to read the clock, “I’m on in an hour!” Oh no she is not going anywhere. I press my body into her letting her know this and she smirks Oh no, here comes the pout. There it is! .“Luka! Come on, let me go!” Abby protests rather unconvincingly. No way! Never! “ No!” he says firmly and Abby mocks horror, “Aren’t you forgetting something?” she looks at him confused… “We both have days off!” he says edging towards her with each word. He places a soft kiss on her lips. We fit so perfectly in everyway. She is just so gorgeous and I can’t seem to get enough of her lately. Oh the feeling of her tongue against mine is a feeling I have missed for long and now I have it I am never letting it go again. Any of it. Ever. “Hmmm…. I wonder what we should do today?” she says smirking before leaning into Luka. She wraps her legs around him as Luka with gentle passion kisses her with all he has.
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Jun 30, 2006 3:00:59 GMT 10
Post by luby2534 on Jun 30, 2006 3:00:59 GMT 10
Great story.
Please continue !!
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Jun 30, 2006 6:52:15 GMT 10
Post by *Natalie* on Jun 30, 2006 6:52:15 GMT 10
This is great!!
Update soon natalie x
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Jun 30, 2006 7:13:24 GMT 10
Post by lubyfan on Jun 30, 2006 7:13:24 GMT 10
Great start!
Update soon
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Jun 30, 2006 14:58:21 GMT 10
Post by anna982 on Jun 30, 2006 14:58:21 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Update soon[/glow]
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Jun 30, 2006 15:06:45 GMT 10
Post by jaana on Jun 30, 2006 15:06:45 GMT 10
Update soon.
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Jul 1, 2006 21:20:32 GMT 10
Post by Noora on Jul 1, 2006 21:20:32 GMT 10
Great!
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Jul 3, 2006 6:50:28 GMT 10
Post by charlieluby on Jul 3, 2006 6:50:28 GMT 10
“Hey Luka, as much as I would love to spend the whole of my day off in bed with you, don’t you think we should get outside? I mean it’s a lovely day and it just seems a bit of a waste, you know.” Said Abby as she stroked this chest. He chuckled. What is so funny? “What is it about you Abby, you just love to be outside don’t you?” Luka said kissing my head. What is he on about? How does he know that I love to be outside? “What do you mean?” she asks curiously. He chuckles again and thinks back to when they first dated, smiling all the while. “Don’t you remember? Our first date, disastrous as it was, I remember having a laugh with you about the football we played and I held your hands. They were freezing but you said that you didn’t want to get a taxi, you would rather walk. I remember being surprised. I remember using that as an opportunity to hold your hands to keep them warm. I felt so strongly about you even then and I just needed any excuse to touch you, be with you. You just love being outside!” he said, as he looks deep into Abby’s eyes. Wow, he sure has a way with words and I do remember loving the way he held so tightly onto my hands and I loved his touch and felt that there was a special connection between us even then. “That is true. So why don’t we go outside now. I promise you can hold my hand,” she says and he leans in to place a soft kiss on her lips before whispering ok.
Abby is a genius. It is lovely out here. When it is sunny in Chicago you realise how nice it can actually be. GSW’s aside. Luke held tightly to Abby’s hands as they walked down the strip by the lake. It was calm, silent and gorgeous and no one was about. It felt like they were the only people in the whole world. They walked side by side and hadn’t spoken in ages but no words were needed. Every so often they would glance up at each other and smile or kiss each other softly. Neither of them had felt at peace or so happy in such a long while. Suddenly, a figure could be made out in the distance. It was Neela. Oh look, it’s Neela. Shit! Neela! Luka needs to hide! NOW! No one knows about us yet and I so don’t want everyone knowing our business. “Shit Luka!” Abby says laughing, he looks down at her confused, “It’s Neela and I don’t want to explain us now. Just hide behind that tree or something. Quick!” she said laughing and pushed him away. He came back and kissed her deeply, she almost got lost in the moment but quickly remembered, pulled away and pushed him towards the large oak tree. Just act normal. Casual Abby. You are just going for a casual stroll. “Oh, hey Neela!” she said, trying to act surprised. They embraced and Neela looked at her with one eyebrow up. “What?” Abby said feeling her cheeks flaring up. Sugar. Act normal! “What are you doing around here?” Neela asked, “Don’t you live like a couple of miles away from here?” she asked curiously. ”Um…” stumbled Abby, Damn it Abby say something, “um…” she stumbled. “Doesn’t Luka live not far from here?” she said folding her arms. “Um…I don’t know…maybe?” Abby said trying to act inauspiciously. “Oh, I thought you would. I thought you dated him and I didn’t think he moved?” she said raising her eyebrows. “Oh right!” Abby said looking round, “yeah, I think he does…come to think of it. I was just um…visiting a um…friend.” Neela burst out laughing and Abby stood there dumbfounded. “Abby, you are a truly atrocious liar. Really bad!” Neela said giggling. “What…what do you mean?” Abby said. Oh god, why is she laughing. “Luka, come out from behind that tree. Come on I know you are there. Seriously you guys!” Neela says laughing. Luka comes out from behind the tree shrugging and they all burst out laughing. Luka comes over and wraps his arms around Abby from behind. They laugh. “Oh you guys! How long have you been an item?” she says, “Congratulations!” “Um, less than 24 hours. We haven’t really um, had a chance to talk much actually!” Luka says looking at Abby as she goes slightly pink. “Oh…. oh! I see. So you just kind of um…got together last night. I mean are you just going to leave it as that one night or start things up again?” she asks curiously. “I hope something more!” Abby says suddenly speaking for the first time. I hope it isn’t just a one night thing and a well this morning thing. Wow, that was fun! “Well, I think…I mean, I know we are going to give it another try. I mean now I know Abby feels the same!” he says smiling. “Well thank god, I mean Abby you have never admitted to me that you well have a thing for him but you certainly don’t stop talking about him, ever. I mean, you are always talking about him.” She says, Abby goes red and Luka chuckles, “Ahh Luka, don’t think you aren’t going to get away with embarrassing comments. Nope. Michael told me that you talk about Abby all the time. He said you even let on to him that you felt more for her than a friend. I mean you guys, it’s been like a year of nothing happening. Everyone has noticed the sexual tension between you two. They said it did help your work though, because you always wanted to work together and you are an amazing team.”
Hope you liked it. Add coments!
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Post by anna982 on Jul 3, 2006 7:05:42 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Loved it. Update again really really soon.[/glow]
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