My first fanfic!

[charlieluby]

This is my first fanfic! Tell me what you think!

I wake up smiling. I can feel his arms draped around my body; holding me tightly. I let out a happy sigh. Luka starts kissing my neck.
“Morning!” he says kissing my neck and face making me tingle all over. I turn round to face him. He looks so gorgeous in the morning. His eyes are all heavy and he looks so sleepy and yummy! He softly kisses me on the lips and I smile.
Suddenly, I feel my baby kicking. It feels so great; such a wonderful feeling. Something living inside of you. Luka’s baby and mine. Our baby.
“Sorry, I didn’t say good morning to you!” he says leaning down and kisses my stomach,“ Dobro jutro miljenik, volim Te!’ He places his head on my stomach and listens to our baby. He is so hot when he speaks Croatian but what the hell is he saying?
“Luka?” I ask looking down at him, he moves his face right up next to mine, “You are so fabulous when you speak Croatian, very sexy. But what are you saying?” I ask feeling like an idiot.
“I said good morning darling, I love you,” he said blushing. I lean in and kiss him passionately. I pull him closer to me, grabbing his face with my hands. Soon, his hands make his way underneath my nightdress. I giggle through his kisses.
“Why are you laughing?” he says looking confused. I just giggle even more.
“Well, it’s about 8:30 in the morning and we are already at it again! Come on, aren’t you tired from last night!” I say slightly out of breath. He smiles planting a feather light kiss on his lips.
“You are right, I’ll get up and make us some breakfast.” He says pulling away from me and sitting up. I grab him violently and pull him down next to me, cupping his face in my hands.
“Hey, I never said anything about stopping; I just asked if you were tired.” I say innocently, “I mean your not exactly a spring chicken anymore’. I say laughing. He laughs and looks at me confused.
“What do you mean spring chicken?” he says.
“You know, you’re not as young as you used to be!” I say laughing. Suddenly, he pulls me on top of him and pulls me tightly into his body.
“You are going to pay for that Miss Lockhart! Prepare for some serious payback!” he says with a mischievous look on his face. I giggle and raise my eyebrows leaning into him and whisper
“How exactly do suggest I do that?” up against his lips. Swiftly, he swings me off him and sits up.
“You can start by getting us some breakfast!” he says laughing and reaching for the newspaper on his nightstand! “You can’t be serious!” Damn you Luka and your mischievous ways! He nods opening it up.
“Luka!” I say in my whiniest voice. I remove the newspaper from his hands. I sit up next to him nuzzling his neck,” You cant get me all hot and bothered like this and then just leave me, come on finish what you started I say!” stealing a passionate kiss from his lips. I delve into his mouth with my tongue; at first this was just a payback technique but before I knew it I was lost completely in the moment and naked underneath him. What is it about him, he seems to have this power over me and this power always ends up getting me naked! Well, I’m not complaining. I lean in and kiss him passionately ready for any payback his is prepared to give me!

[Luby14]

Sincerely... I Love it! Please update!!

[Tannii]

Wow, that was really great ! Hope you update soon

[charlieluby]

Enjoy the second part!


Out of breath I lie down next to Luka. We are both breathing deeply. I place my hand on his chest, which is covered in beads of sweat from our most recent ‘workout’. I look up at his face and he is staring into space. Smiling. I look into his eyes and smile back at him.
“What’s making you smile then?” I ask curiously. He leans in and places a soft kiss on my lips.
“I was just remembering the first time we did this. You know made love. It was such a great night. I’ll never forget it.” He said looking deep into my eyes. Sometimes he can be so sweet. Well, actually, he is always sweet but he just always seems to know how to make me smile and make me tingle inside.
“I’ll never forget it either!” I say kissing him. Oh no, not again. I pull away.
“Ok, we need to learn how to stop ourselves getting into these situations!” I say smiling. He chuckles.
“I hate to say it, but I’m due into work in an hour and boy do I need a shower!” he says kissing me on the forehead and climbing out of bed. I sigh in happiness. I can’t remember the last time I felt this good, this secure. I watch him walk away. What a body! If this baby is half as good-looking as Luka then it will be very lucky! I place my hand on my stomach. Being pregnant is great but it’s hard to get used to all these cravings and urges I keep getting. Maybe I should succumb to just one more urge. I heave myself out of bed and climb into the shower with Luka. I think he is going to be just a little late for work.

“Dr Kovac, Dr Lockhart nice of you to join us!” says a worn out looking Kerry. I glance at the clock. Ooops, forty-five minutes late! “Well, any reason for you lateness!” she asks. I look at Luka and he looks at me.
“Um…we um, lost track of time!” Luka says quickly, I nod in agreement! Suddenly, Morris appears behind us.
“Man, I haven’t lost track of time with someone in ages!” he says laughing! I blush and look over for my next patient.

[elsj]

Well done!

[cheryl]

Ha ha ha what a great fic!!

[charlieluby]

Thanks for all the comments. Hope you enjoy the next part!

I rush around from patient to patient. Traumas have been feeding to the ER all day. From gunshot wounds, car crashes to child abuse. Man, i feel absolutely exhausted. I stop in the corridor and phase out watching people rush past me. Suddenly, i feel a pair of warm arms take hold of me from behind. It’s Luka. He spins me round and gently kisses my forehead.
“You look tired. Why don’t you go home and get some rest? I’ll cover for you.” He says, looking genuinely concerned for me. I smile at his sweet gesture.
“Luka, I am tired, sure, but there are patients coming in very few minutes with some emergency or another. The ER needs me.” I say forcing a small smile from the corners of my mouth,” Plus, I only have…” I glance down at my watch, “An hour left! Oh my god!” I lean into his arms and he hold me tightly placing his head on top of mine. Our special hug. He squeezes me.
“Come on, I’m taking you both home!” he says kissing the top of my head. I love the way he says ‘taking you both’ home, our baby and me. I give up and nod pulling away from him. He takes my hand and kisses it and puts him arm around me leading me home.

My body tingles and every muscle relaxes as I soak into a warm bath. I close my eyes sighing. Forgetting everything but Luka. I smile to myself as I remember all the times we have shared together. The first kiss we ever shared, although it was rushed it was beautiful. Just an instinct I had to kiss him. I sigh again giggling softly to myself. I don’t think I have ever been this happy. I have no doubt in my mind I will love this man until the day I die, forever more. I climb out of the bath, ring out my hair and slip on a nightdress. Opening the door I see Luka in front of the television, fast asleep. His head on his hand. Breathing deeply. Bless him. I walk over to the sofa and sit down next to him, hugging his body with mine. I kiss his cheek, suddenly he opens his eyes. Ooops, I’ve woken him up.
“I’m sorry,” I say looking guiltily at him.
“I’m not,” he says placing a kiss on my lips, “How was the bath? You seem more relaxed now,” he asks me.
“It was great and yes, I’m a lot more relaxed now. Rough day.” I say leaning into his chest. Feeling his touch is...pure bliss. No other feeling can compare to it. I look up at him and lean in for a kiss. It is so soft and gentle. He breaks the kiss and picks me up. He carries me to our room and kicks the door shut. He gently lays me down on the bed, he moves to climb on top of me but I sit up and stand on my knees, at eye level with him. He has a goofy, confused look on his face. It is such an adorable look.
“I love you Luka,” I say smiling like a little schoolgirl.
“Volim Te, Abby, I love you too.” He smiles. I giggle and he smiles at me. I begin to run my hands through his hair and lean in looking straight into his eyes the whole time. Within centimetres of his face I stop and rub my nose against his. Then finally, I look down at his lips and smiling all the while I close the distance. The kiss is nothing short of fantastic. My hands still in his hair, holding his face, I slip my tongue into his mouth, which he gladly accepts.

His hands travel down to my waist, lifting me up. I wrap my legs around his waist as he lowers me onto the bed. He kisses me neck as I pull his shirt up over his head, throwing it across the room. I make my way down to the pants and unbutton them. He watches me and giggles, knowing full well how much I want to get these pants off. He takes my hand and helps me, slipping out of his boxers. I look into his eyes and let him know it is his turn. He slides his hands down to the bottom of my shirt and very slowly lifts it off. This is torture. I plead with him through my eyes. I raise my hips trying to speed things along but he maintains his slow torturous pace, obviously loving how much he is torturing me. I make him move faster and he smiles. His strategy is working. After, pulling my shirt over my head, he pushes the strand of hair that is in my face behind my ear. He is so sweet, I smile at the gesture. He unbuttons my pants and I wiggle out of them, now just in my bra and panties. He looks at me and kisses my stomach and then the valley in between my breasts. I arch my back in pleasure. I am so hot right now and I can feel that he is too. I look up at him. No more wasting time. No more waiting. He unhooks my bra and tosses it aside and slides of my panties. Now completely naked underneath him I pull him in for a passionate kissing taking control of his mouth with my tongue, we both moan. He brakes the kiss and looks into my eyes and slides inside of me…. and now we are one.

[elsj]

wow, great

[Noora]

Great!

[Luby14]

Wow! Please update!!

[charlieluby]

Here is the next part. Hope you enjoy!





“Thank you so much! Ok, bye!” I hear Luka say and then he puts the phone down. He jumps as I come into the room. I walk towards him slowly.
“Luka, who was that?” I ask curious at his reaction when I walked in.
“Oh…. um no-one.” Said Luka, “Wow, is the sun out maybe we should go for a walk or something or maybe…” he tries to change the subject. I interrupt.
“Luka, that wasn’t just no-one,” I say curiously, why is he hiding something from me?
“Yes, it was a wrong number!” says Luka, “Why the nosiness anyway?” he asks. I know he is lying. I sigh loudly, getting more furious by the minute. I walk out towards the front door.
“You know what, I’m only nosy because I love you and I don’t want to be hurt again. I thought this would work. I thought you had changed. We had changed. No more lies, obviously I was wrong!” I run out of the door biting back the tears. It sounded like a woman’s voice on the end of the phone. Oh my god. He is having an affair. No stop it Abby. Luka would never do that. Then why won’t he tell me? We promised each other that this time there would be no more lies and secrets. We have only been back together for a short while and already the lies have started to pour in. I was kidding myself thinking that this would work out. I wipe a tear from my eye and sit down on a bench by the lake. Whenever something goes wrong I come and sit here to think and be alone.

I’ve been sitting here for ages just replaying our conversation. I sigh. Why did I overreact so badly? It was only a phone call. So, he didn’t want to tell me who it was, who cares? God, these hormones are driving me crazy. Poor Luka. I’m going to drive myself mad just sitting here. I should go back and be a normal human being and discuss this with him not sit on a bench and drive myself crazy with questions I know only he can answer. I get up and turn round. I find myself face to face with Luka. Suddenly, I burst into tears. He wraps his arms around me and kisses the top of my head. I pull away and look up at his face.
“I’m so sorry Luka. I don’t know what got into me. I just…I just heard this woman’s voice at the end of the phone and when you said it was no-one I jumped to conclusions.” I start speaking more quickly trying to tell him and trying to control my tears at the same time. “It’s just that I love you so much and I just I don’t know why I got so mad, I mean you would never cheat on me and I just…” He puts a finger to my lips to silence me.
“Abby, I’m the one who should be sorry. I shouldn’t try to keep things from you. You had every right to be cross and curious. Hormones during pregnancy do strange things to the body. I just wanted to surprise you that’s all…” he says trailing off. I look up at him.
“Surprise me? What do you mean?” I ask curiously.
“The woman at the end of the phone was Kerry. I asked her if we could both have a week off to relax because we have both been working over time lately and your pregnant and you need you rest. I was going to book us a holiday somewhere. I just wanted to surprise you,” he says smiling. He wipes the tears from my eyes. I lean in and kiss him softly. I pull away and brush my lips up against his. He leans back in and takes control of my mouth with his tongue with a strong kiss.
“Oh my god you two. Get a room!” we hear a voice say. We break apart suddenly. It’s Neela. We burst out laughing.
“Bloody hell guys, your like dogs in heat or something.” She says giggling. We laugh embarrassed at being caught and at Neela’s funny comments.
“So what’s going on with you guys then?” she asks sitting herself down on the bench. I sit next to her and Luka stands behind me placing his hand on my shoulder.
“Well, me and Luka had a fight this morning. I kind of heard him on the phone talking to this woman and jumped to conclusions,” I say explaining.
“Really, that’s not at all like you!” Neela says smiling. I push her arm jokingly.
“Shut up, anyway I kind of stormed off and Luka came and found me here and it turns out the woman on the phone was Kerry!” I say smiling.
“Kerry? Who would have though it? Luka and Kerry having an affair. I didn’t think she swung that way!” she says jokingly.
“Very funny Neela!” says Luka smirking.
“Well, it turns out Luka here was booking us some time off so we could go on holiday!” I kiss his hand.
“So, you leaving me in the ER for a whole week! Bollocks to you!” she says laughing, “No, that will nice. So where are you going any ideas?” she asks.
I look up at Luka and he looks down at me. That is a very good question.

[Lubyfanatic316]

Great story!

[megan]

wonerful! please update soon...

[charlieluby]

:)Thanks for all your comments!

“I suggest you stop now,” says Luka watching me fly about the bedroom throwing things into the suitcase. I shake my head and refer back to the list. Sun cream. Check. Vitamins. Check. My thoughts are suddenly interrupted. Luka stands up and walks towards me. I look at him confused. He takes my face in his hands and gently kisses my lips. He tilts his head forward and rests it against mine. I look into his deep, mesmerising eyes. It’s his eyes that first got me. They are the darkest of browns and full of mystery and passion. He wraps one of his arms around my waist and places the other on my massive belly. He strokes it so softly and I smile at him. “Come on sit down now. You have been packing for three hours solid. The whole idea of this time off is to relax and take care of yourself and the baby. Now…” he reaches down and takes my hand in his. “Come with me and sit on the sofa and we can watch something rubbish on T.V.” I smile at him. “But what if we forget…” I start to speak but get interrupted; he takes my face in his hands again. “If we forget something, then we forget it. It’s not as if Italy doesn’t have any shops. We can buy stuff out there if we forget it. Ok?” he kisses my forehead and pulls me down onto his lap on the sofa, gently stroking my hair. I close my eyes and enjoy his gentle touch. I am so warm and comforted as he hugs me like a bear and holds me so tight as if he wont let anything happen to me. Suddenly, Luka reaches for the remote and presses standby. He pulls the hair away from my neck and starts kissing my neck. I moan softly at his sudden touch. I get up from his lap and take hold of his hand. Not saying anything I lead him to the bedroom.
I am so nervous and shaky. I try to do up my seatbelt on the plane but my hands are so shaky. Luka reaches over and plants a kiss on my cheek. He then takes my seatbelt and fastens it for me. He takes my hand and squeezes it tightly. He leans over towards me “ne izgristi se, don’t worry!” he whispers. I nod and gulp trying to breathe deeply as the plane hurtles forward taking off.

[elsj]

sweet story