Lady_K
Marquise of Luby
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Post by Lady_K on May 21, 2006 6:13:17 GMT 10
Very nice story! Can't believe this is ur first fanfiction, keep on writing
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Post by *Natalie* on May 21, 2006 7:02:47 GMT 10
Loving this fic!! Hope you do more soon!!
Natalie x
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Post by charlieluby on May 21, 2006 23:58:39 GMT 10
Update! We should have hired a car. There is about a million of us trying to squeeze onto one coach to get to the hotel. Luka grabs my hand and kisses it. He helps me up the few steps onto the coach pushing my back. I heave myself on board and plonk myself down in one of the seats nearest the front. I sit down and let out a big sigh. I rest my head onto Luka’s shoulder and close my eyes; he puts his hand on my knee. “I think we’ll get a taxi on the way home!” he says chuckling. I nod smiling. What a nightmare. The coach finally pulls up to the front of the complex. The sun beats down on the back of my neck. It’s going to take a while to get used to these temperatures. We are first of the coach and make our way over to the front desk. “Bonjourno!” says a hyperactive woman at the front desk. She is immaculately dressed, incredibly thin and perfect looking. Luka tells her our name and she goes into the back room to get a key. “What a bitch!” I mumble. Luka laughs. “Ok, she’s a little over friendly but she’s not that bad.” He laughs, I sigh out loud. ”She is so thin! God, what a bitch!” I say. He smiles and leans down and hugs me. He kisses the top of my head. “You are a million times more beautiful than she ever will be!” I look up at him. “Even now, with this massive belly!” I say sighing looking down at myself. “Especially now!” he rubs my stomach and leans down to kiss me. I wrap my arms around his neck and pull him in even closer. Our tongues dance. Suddenly, there is a cough from the front desk and we pull apart. “Sorry, there is a long queue and big wait.” We turn round and look at the people behind us all staring. ‘Sorry’ I mumble and grab the key as we make our way to our room. We are in a small annex of our own just outside the complex. It has two floors. The ground floor has a kitchen/dining room; lounge and a small bathroom. The upstairs has a large bedroom with a massive double bed and big bathroom! We clamber up the stairs to the bedroom and Luka dumps the suitcase on the floor. He looks at the bed and then me. He moves towards me and sweeps me off my feet and we fall onto the bed in a heap. Now the fun can really begin!
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Post by *Natalie* on May 22, 2006 0:42:10 GMT 10
Hey!
Loving the update!! Can't wait to read what they get up too
Natalie x
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Post by Tannii on May 22, 2006 4:56:52 GMT 10
Wow, it's great ! Update
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Post by lubyfan on May 22, 2006 5:47:13 GMT 10
Great fanfic, I love it !
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 22, 2006 9:21:06 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Noora on May 23, 2006 0:19:31 GMT 10
Great!
Abby thinks the woman is so thin.. I think Abby is also normally so thin!
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Post by charlieluby on May 23, 2006 1:57:11 GMT 10
Here is the next part! Glad you are all enjoying it! I feel the covers rustling beside me. I move to get more comfortable and close my eyes again, trying to get back to sleep. The covers rustle again. “Luka!” I moan, “What are you doing?” I turn round to see him chuckling at me. He is sitting bolt upright with two cups of coffee in his hands. “I got us some breakfast!” he says passing me a cup of coffee. I shake my head; it’s way to early for coffee! I rub my eyes, mumbling and grumbling to myself. I shake my head at Luka and then close my eyes again. Suddenly, I feel his breathe against my face as he leans in to kiss my lips. I kiss him back opening my eyes to see his face. He pulls away and begins to kiss my neck. I moan, could this man be any more perfect? I grab my tankini and slip it on. I groan. I look like a giant whale! I take my face in my hands. Could this whole pregnancy thing be any worse…big belly, morning sickness? Suddenly, I hear Luka behind me; he wraps his arms around me and kisses my neck. Maybe it’s not so bad after all. ” You look gorgeous!” he says kissing my neck. I turn round and admire this physique. Tall, tanned, muscular, deep brown eyes. Yummy! He grabs my hand. “Where are we going?” I ask curiously? “Ahh, that’s for me to know and you to find out!” he says mysteriously. He puts a hand over my eyes and takes my waist with his hand. I hear a door open and I shuffle in. All my senses are more aware of the things around me now that I cannot see. I can hear running water. Where the hell are we? He takes his hands away from my face! Oh my gosh! I throw myself at him. He kisses my neck. I move towards the door and lock it while kissing his chest. He chuckles. “Eager are we?” he kisses my neck. I look up at him “Hey,” I playfully hit him, “By the looks of things I’m not the only one that is eager!” he picks me up and pulls me carries me towards the thing that is making us so excited. A Jacuzzi. I do hope he has booked us in for longer than an hour!
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Post by Tannii on May 23, 2006 3:26:42 GMT 10
excellent !!!!! UPDATE
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 23, 2006 3:47:39 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Noora on May 24, 2006 0:36:12 GMT 10
Fantastic!!
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Post by charlieluby on Jun 5, 2006 3:19:13 GMT 10
Sorry it took so long guyz!!!! Hope you enjoy!! We shuffle out of the Jacuzzi room. Everyone is looking at us. God, how many times has this happened? We put our heads down to the floor and walk past the people staring. After turning the next corner we both burst into fits of laughter. “Oh my god. How many times in a public place do you reckon we have had sex now?” I giggle lying with my back up against a wall to support myself, as I’m about to collapse from laughter. I think back…there was that time in the baby store, oh the looks we got from that woman, and then that time at work not so long ago…. my thoughts are interrupted. “Oh I dunno about 100!” Luka says laughing then he moves my shoulder out of the way of the wall and looks at something, “How would you like to make it 101?” he says placing one hand on my waist and another on the door behind me that up till now I didn’t even know was there! He pulls me close to him and pushes us both into the room taking control of my mouth. I stumble clumsily about the room feeling dizzy from his passionate kisses, his tongue exploring every part of my mouth. Suddenly, we fall backwards onto some kind of bench. He catches me before I hit myself on the hard bench. I smile. My hero. Suddenly I notice that is not the only thing that is hard. I open my mouth mocking shock. “Luka!” I gasp giggling, “I’m supposed to the one with all the urges here. I’m the one that’s pregnant! How can having sex in some janitors closet with some big pregnant woman turn you on?” I ask trying to hide my giggles. “For a start Abby, you are not just some big pregnant woman to me. You are beautiful, you make me laugh and I love you more than words can explain. You also happen to be carrying our child. One we made out of passion and love.” He softly kisses me on the lips, “Plus, you can’t tell me you’re not even a little bit turned on at the thought of having sex with your absolutely gorgeous boyfriend!” he chuckles and I shake my head claiming that I am not. He tilts his head to smiles at me. He sweeps in for another kiss and pulls away to kiss my neck. I love it when he does that. His right hand makes his way down to my trousers and undoes them. He slips his hand into my panties. I moan. He delves into my body with his fingers and it sends me into total bliss. “So you’re telling me you’re not even a little bit excited are you?” he asks cheekily. I try to catch my breath as he continues to play with me. “Shut up Luka!” I smirk and pull him in for a passionate kiss. We both moan into each others mouths. xXx
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 5, 2006 4:54:24 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jun 5, 2006 6:39:00 GMT 10
Great update! Hope you do more soon
Natalie x
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